View Full Version : check my rhyme style

Jimmy Focus
07-01-2005, 06:54 PM
All things that happen to me are never for the worst/
I can still get respect wit out havin to cusre/
never back for the first or last time ever/
you cant beat me cause ima better competitor/
Illmatic magnetic drug free creation/
I dodge the blows you throw wit a quik evasion/
Kick it evry style drop the beat and go acapella/
Im too dope for evry label even roc-a-fella/
skip superman this time im the hero/
of a world that counts startin wit negative zero/
tainted mind in a bind its so twisted/
so cross my path if you think you can risk it/
evry thought just pops into my head in like an instant/
Ya future will never happen cause its so distant/
purposly throwin off ya equalibrium/
creatin a language only known now as an idiom/

Jimmy Focus
07-01-2005, 06:56 PM
this is a dope verse aint it.

07-02-2005, 01:48 AM
at first, i was thinkin' this sounded like a 13 year old wrote this, and then i realized: a 13 year old did write this... so i guess you're where you should be... LOL



07-02-2005, 06:32 AM
Cool and simple, i suppose you were busting. Keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!!!With time you will find you style and improve on it