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BlaK FuRYaN
07-02-2005, 01:58 PM
Call me an agitator for revolution of great thinkers
plantin a seed of benaficial fruit for tha infants
i'm a potential threat to tha stability of your system
as i alert tha mind-body and soul to its conviction
from a chaotic intelligence of scientific religion
flows a destructive impulse in mankind that tempts corruption - out of order
a radical reformer
from tha roots in my palm - dark wid my fathers carbon i slaughter
tha ghostly blue viens wid grey threads
my voice hot butane flames of hatred - but baggage is hate
lets say i pack maximum luggage wid action encouraged
i swing a sword of retribution on this intricate jigsaw i punish
namely an injured globe - let me remind my inner soul
fire & brimstone bun Babylons throne my spirit interfolds
a self appointed funtion as a path finder for my children
a redemptive figure my nigguh - i keeps it buildin
skyanties(jamican preacher) i preach fru niyabinghi(african drums) beats its deep
benieth tha garb of civilisation stands a man wid bronze feet
arrested and charge for utterin a seditiuos speach
section 18(criminal offence) ubducted from tha spik on tha streets
for intent to excite hatred anit-colonial freedom ridin
tha monsta is dying slaughtered by tha conkering lion
Abysinnian ripples in tha wind
currents run deep within tha oestrogen of mother earth
will we fall a sleep again?
a question - for shrouded are tha mysteries of African knowledge
our values mutated by tha persute of profit
Answer me dis nigga whut can you really do to stop it
when speakin wid wisdom in tha absence of knowledge -
i fashion a promise
Sun af Adam will meet tha creator um honest
ill put tha blanket of soul on it.................

SurreaL
07-02-2005, 02:11 PM
That was tight no doubt,

i swing a sword of retribution on this intricate jigsaw i punish
namely an injured globe - let me remind my inner soul
fire & brimstone bun Babylons throne my spirit interfolds
a self appointed funtion as a path finder for my children

very nice, peace.

BlaK FuRYaN
07-02-2005, 02:21 PM
That was tight no doubt,



very nice, peace.
good lookin out surreal......

peaCE

Knok-A-Fella
07-02-2005, 02:57 PM
keep comin out with hot verses after hot verses

i cant quote anytin cos each lines resembles greatness

tru hip hop head

Bless, 1

BlaK FuRYaN
07-02-2005, 04:56 PM
keep comin out with hot verses after hot verses

i cant quote anytin cos each lines resembles greatness

tru hip hop head

Bless, 1
peace bruh & good lookin out.....i do whut i do and keep doin it.......one

BlaK FuRYaN
07-02-2005, 06:39 PM
ups

GuardianOne
07-03-2005, 07:03 AM
Very complicated in the knowledgeable method. Its an intriguing verse!!!!!!!!!!!
Nicely placed in the word format and it flowed well, as usual!!!!

Peace

PsYkOsUs
07-03-2005, 10:56 AM
i can't read your work to to your atrocious spellin'... spellin' is important, so you just hang yourself every time you misspell on purpose, it makes you seem illiterate... and unfortunately, i try not to waste me time readin' illiterate text... and could you explain this line to me, 'cause you come off incredibly racist here:

"section 18 ubducted from tha spik on tha streets"

personally, i'd read more of your work if you'd just practice good writin' skills... i don't think blatant, purposefully bad grammar makes you look like your from the streets... if anythin', it just makes you look like your tryin' prove the stereotypes that cats from the streets are illterate... honest opinion... if you're gonna try to write intelligent verses, do it intelligently...

PEACE

PSY

BlaK FuRYaN
07-03-2005, 03:19 PM
i can't read your work to to your atrocious spellin'... spellin' is important, so you just hang yourself every time you misspell on purpose, it makes you seem illiterate... and unfortunately, i try not to waste me time readin' illiterate text... and could you explain this line to me, 'cause you come off incredibly racist here:

"section 18 ubducted from tha spik on tha streets"

personally, i'd read more of your work if you'd just practice good writin' skills... i don't think blatant, purposefully bad grammar makes you look like your from the streets... if anythin', it just makes you look like your tryin' prove the stereotypes that cats from the streets are illterate... honest opinion... if you're gonna try to write intelligent verses, do it intelligently...

PEACE

PSY
Does whut i wrote up there sound like im unintelligent....really?
I aint gonna fuel tha illiterate part of your feed back, but i hear whut you sayin on tha spellin....
I only wrote it like that so it would be easy for ppl like your self an others to read it.....

And theres know need to proove im from tha streets.....niggus who know me where um from know whut time it is.....purposely spellin my verses wrong aint gonna project that um from that streets to anyone....

As you can see, tha contenet of my verse ain nuin to do wid tha streets....

Section 18 is a crimminal offence many youths on road are commitin....relatin to causin harm to another by bussin tha skin on a victim.....stabbin...shootins....ect.....

Cats on tha street aint illiterate, at least those who i network wid.....they quite intelligent and read allot.....and cover allot of subject matter on there on tha mic.....

Any way...........psykosus.......keep droppin tha feed on my work.......my sword gets sharper every drop........


By tha way i aint Racist....i eat food of tha same plate as black, white asian.....my block is full of Irish ppl.....and we definately ku.....so dont get me twisted.......



one

PsYkOsUs
07-03-2005, 04:42 PM
i wasn't questionin' the section 18 part, just the 'spik' part, which i assume from your spellin' is "spic"... i hate racist comments, and it looks like you made a racist comment, so i asked you to explain it...

as far as the spellin' goes: it makes it very difficult to read! not easier... slang is one thing, i'm not tellin' you to use old english... it's just that bad spellin' is just bad spellin'... and if you can't spell, it makes you look illiterate...

which leads to my next point, which i think you missed: of course the streets are intelligent! we all support hip hop culture which came from the streets... but by purposely usin' bad spellin' doesn't make you look intelligent, it makes you look illiterate... which is misrepresentin' the intelligence found in the streets that we know exists... a lot of "netcees" use bad spellin' because they think it makes them look like they're from the streets, but in fact, it just makes them look stupid... and by usin' that same bad spellin' forces you into that "i'm from the streets, so i'm uneducated" stereotype i'm sure you don't want to be in...

BlaK FuRYaN
07-03-2005, 06:18 PM
i wasn't questionin' the section 18 part, just the 'spik' part, which i assume from your spellin' is "spic"... i hate racist comments, and it looks like you made a racist comment, so i asked you to explain it...

as far as the spellin' goes: it makes it very difficult to read! not easier... slang is one thing, i'm not tellin' you to use old english... it's just that bad spellin' is just bad spellin'... and if you can't spell, it makes you look illiterate...

which leads to my next point, which i think you missed: of course the streets are intelligent! we all support hip hop culture which came from the streets... but by purposely usin' bad spellin' doesn't make you look intelligent, it makes you look illiterate... which is misrepresentin' the intelligence found in the streets that we know exists... a lot of "netcees" use bad spellin' because they think it makes them look like they're from the streets, but in fact, it just makes them look stupid... and by usin' that same bad spellin' forces you into that "i'm from the streets, so i'm uneducated" stereotype i'm sure you don't want to be in...Listen bruh....my purpose for tha way i spell my words is not for an "im from tha streets title"......tha way i spell my words is how i write it on paper......and it jus happens to be how i type it...

I cuddnt care less who thinks um from tha streets....if the way i type shit up makes you think um from tha streets then so be it.....


Like i sed...you ain from my parts and i ain from yours...so only tha niggus i net work wid ned to know whuts good......

spic - isnt a rascist remark from where um from......so i guess its a miscommunication.....coz i aint rascist....i eat wid white folk who zone on tha same wave length as me......

enuf of this shit now.....about my spellin...it aint a big deal anyway...you too picky mayne.....definately a certisfied asshole......

peace

PsYkOsUs
07-03-2005, 06:40 PM
"Main Entry: spick
Variant(s): or spic or spik /'spik/
Function: noun
Etymology: by shortening & alteration from spiggoty, of unknown origin
Date: 1916
usually offensive : SPANISH AMERICAN (aol://4344:1708.D0065891.40173928.672606009/) "

but you still missed my point... it's okay... i wasn't tryin' to argue with you... everything i say here leads to an arguement... LOL... if i say: "Hi!", i get: "Fuck You, and leave me alone you arrogant bastard!" as a response...

PEACE

PSY

BlaK FuRYaN
07-03-2005, 06:43 PM
"Main Entry: spick
Variant(s): or spic or spik /'spik/
Function: noun
Etymology: by shortening & alteration from spiggoty, of unknown origin
Date: 1916
usually offensive : SPANISH AMERICAN (aol://4344:1708.D0065891.40173928.672606009/) "

but you still missed my point... it's okay... i wasn't tryin' to argue with you... everything i say here leads to an arguement... LOL... if i say: "Hi!", i get: "Fuck You, and leave me alone you arrogant bastard!" as a response...

PEACE

PSY



aight bruh....we gonna drop this one till tha nex verse.....

peace