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Knok-A-Fella
07-02-2005, 02:51 PM
just a quik 16

something that was on my mind

u hear me on the mic but u dont understand it
buildin 7 detonated from inside i dont understand it
jus like september 11th the towers were built to withstand it
they crumbled like granite the greatest monument on the planet
illuminati planned it it was a conspiracy
so the nutcases were caught who believe in the sordid theories
turn there backs on reality but they still had there queries
but were afraid to ask questions cos the answers were eerie
now that they call it ground zero its a fukin tragedy
dismembered body parts plummetin wit the help of gravity
but obviously im infinte like sexual depravity
and hard hittin like the rules of relativity
at the beginnin of it all there was two supreme powers
that came to this world eruptin like volcanic showers
the cold blooded killers and the ones that devour
every single human soul who in there hearts are cowards

As always criticism appreciated

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SurreaL
07-02-2005, 03:08 PM
u hear me on the mic but u dont understand it
buildin 7 detonated from inside i dont understand it
jus like september 11th the towers were built to withstand it
they crumbled like granite the greatest monument on the planet
illuminati planned it it was a conspiracy
so the nutcases were caught who believe in the sordid theories

That was nice, alway's write what's on you're mind, you never know what you'll get, keep writin man, peace.

Knok-A-Fella
07-02-2005, 03:14 PM
aight kool
surreal

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ON POINT
07-02-2005, 04:07 PM
I Liked This Verse Too, It Made Some Sense To Me

BlaK FuRYaN
07-02-2005, 04:58 PM
decent from off tha top....keep em cummin......

GuardianOne
07-03-2005, 05:10 AM
Tight verse , quite some knowledge there, few would dare to express in such a manner, and well place also- not the general stereo type kind !!!

Peace

jjh_38
07-03-2005, 05:18 AM
Pretty Good, id say work on smoothin out the flow some.. some of the lines need more or less words... You did stay on topic tho.. not to bad overall

Knok-A-Fella
07-03-2005, 11:58 AM
it was just something that was in my head at that moment

Bless for the criticism

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