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Jimmy Focus
07-02-2005, 04:28 PM
Enjoy it while it last cause theres only minutes left/
I can force the grim reaper experience death/
Mafia style, cement ya feet and drop ya in tha ocean/
Lyrical material its my own words Im quotin'/
Whos to say I'll fade away in tha night of day/
Its too early for me to leave so stear tha light away/
Physical being only seen at night chemically/
I'm drillin' more holes than the study of dentistry/
I'm dodgin' more bullets than neo in the matrix/
crushin all who dont like me usin all sorts of hate tricks/
Sicknin style fits well wit my profile/
theres no cure for the unknown poisnous vile/
That just happened to leak into ya blood stream/
Like a horror nightmare inside a sci-fi dream/
Reverse theory when satans gift becomes gods curse/
I consider myself as bein tha best of tha worst/

crastuf
07-02-2005, 04:36 PM
that's illness lyrics mixed wit a bit of skillness
but your lyrics are born wit a style of stillness
you feel this and this a just a comment, Crastuf so nice it's good when they say I'm nonsense
but then I look at your age and it's back to complements, I think say no more
my response has ended

good writing

jjh_38
07-03-2005, 04:25 AM
Good shit man.. nice layout, flowed well....lyrics were pretty good.. well done

GuardianOne
07-03-2005, 04:41 AM
Yah you guys continue improving of your styles. Nice verse i suppose you were busting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace