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Da Dishonourable Don
05-21-2006, 04:58 AM
2 rounds, 20 bars each
first to 5
3-0 is a k.o.
no voting method just opinions and a little comment why will do
feeding allowed

let's do battle!

J-Cee
05-21-2006, 06:31 AM
You kick it off 1st brotha.

Da Dishonourable Don
05-23-2006, 05:56 AM
aight, I'm a set it off first, ain't no need to spit second/
in a split second I can twist ya neck in 6 different directions/
stab your heart, piercing your arteries, ventricles pour/
then we celebrate by drinking blood at the end of the war/
render your whore, and run a 30 man train in her twot/
what the FUCK YA WANNO DO?!, I'll make you watch her give brain to a glock/
famous or not, you got money, you my next vic/
I'll spit an m-16 bars that'll leave your chest split/
I'm makin' money, you runnin' out of toilet paper, you bummy/
kid I'm the feeling of when you're hungry, I'm that ache in your tummy/
I'll eat your food and leave you starving like a 3rd world country/
I'm ravenous, dangerous on mischellaneous productions/
produce headbangers, you know how many craniums I've bludgeoned?/
I'll spit a verse that'll leave ya burnt like spotaneous combustion/
and if you want static, kid I'll place the hammer to ya head}:T /
the cops don't worry me at all, we got scanners for the feds/:cop:
but on another note, I'll have my dick up in your baby-mother's throat/
bust a nut harder harder than an uppercut and leave the rubber broke/
jc you couldn't match against my lyrical genious/
you wanna battle a grown man?, then grow some hair 'round your penis!

Da Dishonourable Don
05-23-2006, 06:18 AM
word kid your up!

J-Cee
05-23-2006, 12:26 PM
nice lol.Good luck 2 me.ill hit you up tomorrow after work.
peace.

J-Cee
05-25-2006, 12:36 PM
I feel the anger runnin through my vains to step it up a level/
While you be reppin angels I be representing Devils/
A Gory rapper that splatters ya face and Disgrace ya Tastes
U the type of Kid in Class that use to Eat the Glue Paste/
Its Creepy Follows/Leave ya Head Hollow/
Imma tie u to a Gay Club Naked Saying You Swallow/
So follow/But dont Try and Intercept My Intellect/
Leave yo on the steps of Ya Mums House with-a-see-through-neck/
laciryl suineg to put my words in place/
Thats My skills Backwards oR mY nICKNAME jUST IN cASE
Ravage ya face with Ticks Knives Pins and Mace/
This aint No Arny Film But u Will be Erased/
Determined your lifestyle by my words said/
Did u ever Think the Ocean would Become ya Water Bed/
Ya dead/Rhymes so simplistic arithmitic to me-
still-split-ya wig-break-ya-bones-like-weak-twigs/
U part of the Revolution of Geek Kids/u love pigs/Just tortured u with letters got ya life in my hands like pullys and jigs.

num2son
05-25-2006, 09:00 PM
Vocab - Don
Wordplay - Don
Punchlines - Don
Flow - Tie
Creativity - Don

Nice battle

Don gets my vote

Da Dishonourable Don
05-25-2006, 10:11 PM
respect on the vote, but the battle's not done yet, there's still round 2, so I'd appreciate it if you came back and voted when it's all said and done

num2son
05-25-2006, 10:20 PM
respect on the vote, but the battle's not done yet, there's still round 2, so I'd appreciate it if you came back and voted when it's all said and done

Oh sorry i didnt see that it was two rounds, I'll be back.

Da Dishonourable Don
05-25-2006, 11:34 PM
listen, you're not nice, whoever told you were is a liar/
my verses are fire, strong enough to make your furnace expire/
don't be surprised your girlfriend's trying to call my phone/:o :t
'cause the Dishonourable's a pimp kid, you small time holmes/
and all I know's you're whack, talk smack get your mouth slapped/
fuck a mouse-trap, I'll bury this house rat in the outbacks/
I doubt that you can even stunt on my strip/
you in a gay bar drunk from the liks, toungue on a dick/
SON OF A BITCH!, wrong move if you front on my click/
we known to crip-ple bloods, the snub'll draw blood from a crip/
Da Dishonourable Don's known to blaze the semi/
pussy, you're talk's cheap, change your name to JCpenny/
fuckin' devilick, you worship satan, suckin' on the devil's dick/})
I'll let the heavy metal rip, like asscheeks, you better split/
round 2, and I ain't even showing no effort/
defeating me is like trying to change the spots on a leopard/
the grimiest one, rhymin' for fun, grind in the slum/
takin' me out, you got a better chance out-shining the sun/
don't be mad 'cause I'm spending all my time with your hun/
besides, there's all kinds of cum you can find on her tongue!

I won't front, this verse was at the least of my abilities, I know I can do a whole lot better but FUCKIN' A!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

J-Cee
05-28-2006, 08:34 AM
Man im fucked up off drugs but ill still rip ya ego/
You the type of bitch Poppin Ecstacy Placebos/
I dont spit a bunch of shit just to prove i'll pull a clip/
Hopefully You'll recognise Realitys not a Acid Trip/
You be takin medication for ya Epeleptic fits/
empty out my bowels on ya face Couldn't hold the Shit/
Given handjobs to your Brother With your mothers Oven Mitts/
Got slits in ya Underwear from getting fucked by Gay Crips/

My impurity brings Impudence/past Tense ya Impotent/
No need for match ups Get a Job ya Immigrant/
Rapping is ya life And your Failure is so Imminent/
Talkin all the Gangsta shit but Kid You so Innocent/
Cause your souls Impeccable but i am Belligerent/
Postin pictures of ya puny Penis on the Internet/

Back to the Basics Embarassing your Features/
Childhood memories of Getting Gangraped by Preachers/
Exposed as the creature from Hell I'm the Demons Worst/
Think of a diss yaself I'm leaving you a Blank Verse
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num2son
05-28-2006, 03:16 PM
Vocab - J
Wordplay - Tie
Punchlines - J
Flow - Tie
Creativity - J

This round was better than the last....for the second round my vote goes to Jclyricalgenius

Overall.....Jclyricalgenius wins the battle

Da Dishonourable Don
05-28-2006, 07:17 PM
ok, 1-0 in JC's favour, kinda weird though how you completely voted for me in the first round, but now overall you think JC won, oh well!

J-Cee
05-31-2006, 02:17 AM
bump

J-Cee
05-31-2006, 02:23 AM
VOTES still needed ppl.

MathMatician
05-31-2006, 04:53 PM
whoodie hoooooooooooo! good shit


Rd 1 - Don

Rd 2- lyrical genius

J-Cee
05-31-2006, 06:36 PM
cheers bro,but who do you vote for?

Alesco
06-02-2006, 03:09 AM
This was 2 rounds, so ma vote gose to da don. He kept the flow going in both verses. I must admitt that jc 2cnd verse was far better than his first though. Its 2 rounds, and its 2 for a reason so once again, I vote da don. A good battle though.

J-Cee
06-02-2006, 05:00 PM
1-1 keep them votes comin ppl!

J-Cee
06-03-2006, 02:16 PM
bump

Aequitas X
06-06-2006, 11:29 AM
That was very close I must admit.

Round 1 = Don

Round 2 = JC

Overall = Jclyricalgenius the comeback effect was surprising and strong, won by a hair though

Goodwork.

J-Cee
06-06-2006, 11:34 AM
2-1.ty
Lets Finish These Votes off ay.

Aequitas X
06-06-2006, 11:34 AM
By the way I am open to battles too.....Someone take on a newb cmon

Definitive X
06-07-2006, 02:37 PM
Vocab - Don
Wordplay - jc
Punchlines - Don
Flow - jc
Creativity - Don

Gotta go with the Don on this one...PEACE.

Da Dishonourable Don
06-07-2006, 07:28 PM
yo bigups on the vote, 2-2, let's get some more votes in.

VernakuLa
06-21-2006, 03:15 PM
On the real, DDD won this, jc your shit was nice, but lacked the necessities of a battle, so i vote don

v- DA DISHONORABLE DON

Da Dishonourable Don
06-21-2006, 05:05 PM
nuff respect for the vote homie, it's now 3-2 in my favour

Da Dishonourable Don
06-24-2006, 06:14 PM
still uppin' for votes, what up peeps?, let's do this shit!

Da Dishonourable Don
06-26-2006, 03:30 AM
votes needed!

Da Dishonourable Don
07-05-2006, 05:59 PM
votes needed! 3-2 in my favour, let's go