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G...
07-03-2005, 02:11 AM
Open Challenge

Rules:

*20 Lines each.

*First to 5 votes wins.

*No dick-riding/hater votes (All votes MUST be explained or will NOT be counted)

*No bitching if you lose, no accusing anyone of getting people to vote for them.

*No freeposting and no comments on either verse or MC until both verses have been submitted.

*Up to the challenger who goes first, I could care less.

Butter
07-03-2005, 09:06 AM
why not : ) you got first.

G...
07-03-2005, 11:41 AM
Butter's flow is experimental, but really it's just whack
Your 'ashamed of your idenity', like 'Michael Jackson not wanting to be black'
But you can't dye your rhymes white, so you best put up a fight
I'm 'not on stilts', but believe I'm fuckin' 'higher than a kite'
Aiiight, your is flow 'shaky like a child learning to ride a bike'
I saw this dudes moms with his sister, she a literal dike
And his mouths 'full of shit', check his breath for 'diarrhea'
Plus he's thick, the rap Foundation, me - I took the Higher Tier
Cause I'm intelligent, they calling me the rap Einstein
Yeh I 'got your back' duke, because I'm 'braking your spine'
I got 'punches' for days, you could call me a 'boxer'
You won't get in no rhythm so I won't need to stop-ya
Your fans won't cop-ya when you drop-a CD
You ain't got fans, they wouldn't pick it up if it was a freebie
You see me up in your hood, bitch, you betta fucking duck
'Cause I ain't 'no fucking fag', but believe I'll 'fuck you up'
Shit, this battles fuckin' over, 'cause I easily defeat you
I spread 'Butter on my sandwiches', so I'll 'literally eat you'
And cut up your fucking brain in this rhymin' biz
This dude carries '7 watches', but still ain't no what 'time it is' ~ It's my time muthafucka

G...
07-03-2005, 11:42 AM
No more red or bold punchlines for me now, since peeps where havin' trouble readin' them shits. Aight, holla back with your verse Butter. ONE

Butter
07-03-2005, 12:19 PM
Aight 'G' you only 15 so ima 'take this easy'/
you'd probably 'beat your own ass just to please me'/
by takin one look at your sig i can tell you on 'uncle howie's dick'/
im sure it was your voice i heard on that 'fiending for crack' skit/
take one spread and you'l see how sick 'butter can be'/
how many people beat you 'G', na im talkin about 'other than me'/
so many shots been fired, you should have a ' (taking) cover degree'
ill '[W]rap' up your mic, leave it tucked under the tree/
ill even leave some skills with a tag reading 'from butter, To G'/
when i slaughter you ill just plead innosence/
who care's its only 'G' it will make no difference/
the Thirteenth line will always make 'you feel unlucky'/
only reason you aint online, is cause of your 'jealous hubby'/
aiyo sorry i took so long but i actually have stuff to do in the 'real world'/
you know, real girls, not somthin you found on 'ebuamsworld'/
What you talking about no one wanna pick up my 'CD'/
almost threw a fit because you wanted a song that 'featured me'/
Yo man i didnt come to hard because you only 'Young'/
and yes like an elephant hangin off a Cliff im well 'Hung'/
If you had a real battle you'd probably Ask to use My tounge........


sorry for the Delay i been checkin out some stuff. Peace. Good battle. Voting Commence.

Tage
07-03-2005, 12:35 PM
" you know, real girls, not somthin you found on 'ebuamsworld' "

^thats a dope puchline.. lol.. and butter had amazing flow, but g...'s was just funnier...

and the last 2 bars of g...'s was some funny shit that had me loling....
so my vote goes to g...

" And his mouths 'full of shit', check his breath for 'diarrhea'
Plus he's thick, the rap Foundation, me - I took the Higher Tier "

^that bit is dope too....


Vote = G...

hope i explained ok... close battle...

not much difference in style jus punchlines...

G...
07-03-2005, 01:48 PM
1-0 to me. More votes please. ONE

Butter
07-03-2005, 07:35 PM
anyone else care to vote please?

crastuf
07-03-2005, 07:40 PM
my votes for G

Butter
07-03-2005, 07:42 PM
explain? ^^

Definitive X
07-03-2005, 08:22 PM
G. had good lines, but some were whack. Example:

"I got punches for days, you could call me a boxer"
"I spread butter on my sandwiches, so I literaly eat you"

Who spreads butter on a sandwich (unless it's a grilled cheese)?

Butter's whole rhyme stood out to me, he focused on his verse as a whole as opposed to making individual rhymes stick out...

No disrespect, G...but...

VOTE=THE REAL BUTTER

Butter
07-03-2005, 08:32 PM
thankyou for explaining. untill the other guy does ill count it 1-1.

Idiom
07-03-2005, 09:23 PM
I'm not to impressed with this verse G, i mean you did have some clean punches, but i'm not feeling the full effect like your other verses, like the one you did verse myself, those were nasty, everybody has a bad one from time to time, but you're on a higher level than most your age, so take this as a learning experience if you do lose, becuase hey losing only makes you stronger....

Sgt. Lee Butters, first i seen of your, i was feeling pretty much the whole thing, your sytle is one that i like to see, your punches made a bigger impact on this than G's but watch out for this kid cause he's something to wreckon with for younster..

"ll '[W]rap' up your mic, leave it tucked under the tree/
ill even leave some skills with a tag reading 'from butter, To G'/" < was nice

vote = Sgt. Lee Butters

krapass
07-03-2005, 09:38 PM
Vote goes to G. He got some whack lines.

crastuf
07-03-2005, 09:57 PM
G's flow was nice and concise. He was fluent with throwing punches and ego munches.

G...
07-04-2005, 02:33 AM
3-2 to me? I took it those last two votes counted, cuz even tho they werent explained brilliantly, they were explained. ONE

Necromancer
07-04-2005, 06:18 AM
G had some funny ass punches, Gs last bar was mos def but he didnt have much structure in his verse.. i know flow doesnt mean much in battles but i got sick of Gs one syllable rhyming, butter flowed much better than G IMO, and after reeding the two verses butter looked more experienced than G, these lines for example stood out in butter's

take one spread and you'l see how sick 'butter can be'/
how many people beat you 'G', na im talkin about 'other than me'/
so many shots been fired, you should have a ' (taking) cover degree'
ill '[W]rap' up your mic, leave it tucked under the tree/
ill even leave some skills with a tag reading 'from butter, To G'/

vote=butter

Butter
07-04-2005, 06:42 AM
3-2 to me? I took it those last two votes counted, cuz even tho they werent explained brilliantly, they were explained. ONE
ok cool.

3-3.

Butter
07-04-2005, 10:16 AM
yo can we get a few more votes in here poleze, only a few more needed ill this is over.

AcidPhosphate69
07-04-2005, 10:28 AM
I give it to Butter, he killed you with some of those lines.

100pr00f
07-04-2005, 10:28 AM
i would vote but were crew...so damn

Butter
07-04-2005, 10:47 AM
acid, can you give an explination please?

np pr00f thanks for stoppin by anyways.

AcidPhosphate69
07-04-2005, 11:04 AM
"Aight 'G' you only 15 so ima 'take this easy'/
you'd probably 'beat your own ass just to please me'/"

That opening line killed him and just made his other punches seem that much better.

Butter
07-04-2005, 11:09 AM
4-3 to me?

G...
07-04-2005, 11:49 AM
Yep.

Ozmosis
07-04-2005, 08:55 PM
Shit, this battles fuckin' over, 'cause I easily defeat you
I spread 'Butter on my sandwiches', so I'll 'literally eat you'

Nice used of turning his name against him^^^^^

aiyo sorry i took so long but i actually have stuff to do in the 'real world'/
you know, real girls, not somthin you found on 'ebuamsworld'/

Nice bar which won me over

Vote = The Real Butter

Butter
07-04-2005, 09:00 PM
5-3 good battle G.

one.

Dupreez
07-05-2005, 01:54 PM
tHATS IT? come on i battle both of you. Ruff and rugged one on one two on one. Whatever you think you can handle.

The real butter........man howz your mother? She tell you bout my big hitter?
G.....the cardinal, with that picture im guessing you's apart of some kinda whack carnival.

Get your tickets cause the toast just been popped and im smoother than a hot knife through butter!!

Come on, GET AT ME lets get this show on the road - where you belong G...... aka Carnival gymnast!!

MC MIDAS
07-05-2005, 03:57 PM
Yeeeehhhh Mc Midas Up In This Mutha Fukka...

Yo All Ya'll Chit Shit So Next Rhyme You Write Drop It In The Toilet,
Every Time You See A Real Mic You Probably Choke Up And Avoid It, I Destroy Shit,:mmmyah:
All Y'all Could NEver Step To Me, Thats Like Stepping In A Minefield,
I Kick The Illest Shit Off The Top Of My Head , Y'all Just Bust Jokes Like Seinfield,
You Suckers Wont Find Nuttin Funny When I Verbally Annihalate You,
You Probably The Sorta Emcees That Let Gay Men Violate You!!
Im To Dope, I'll Probably Hear My Shit Rapped On Jay Zees Next Album,
The Serial Killer, I Eat Flesh From Bones And Hunt Wack Emcees Like A Falcon,
So Fuck This Internet Shit This Real Thugs Used To The Concrete Jungle,
If You Ever Met Me On Street You'd Probably Get On Your Knees And Act Real Humble!!

Yo Yo Thats Just To Get Me Started......................peace

Butter
07-05-2005, 03:58 PM
lol ^^ this battle is over if you want to battle someone make a thread or go to the freestyle thread.

MC MIDAS
07-05-2005, 04:29 PM
Oh Right Didn't Realise.... New To This Internet Shit. Peace

imitation is suicide
11-07-2005, 11:27 AM
you go first...big shot...