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Cap I
05-29-2006, 08:08 AM
Havent Posted For Awhile. Bit Rusty.

So High i'm flying through the ozone, speeding in my own zone,
Screaming in my ear I canít even hear ya, beware the tear leaves scars,
Pass mars on my way out to Jupiter, roam the universe on a chariot of fire,
Messiah on a mission for nirvana, Connected to all creatures big or small my mind reaches out and teaches the devout about truth, Knowledge of the universe put to use to induce a higher state of being, most donít, thatís the reason we in the season of bleeding, the beast feeding on our hatred, turned to savage from what was once sacred,
The eternal debate I paint ancient pictures, inspired by the true scriptures, but most ain't listening, just want hear shit about bitches.

ProjectArchimedes
05-30-2006, 12:54 AM
its creative i guess but none of it really rhymes.

Sirkulayshun
05-30-2006, 04:26 PM
^^doesnt rhyme but its creative
"So High i'm flying through the ozone, speeding in my own zone":thumbup:

Mr:Merrick
05-30-2006, 05:11 PM
i agree with the others, very creative, but lacks rhymes

Alesco
05-31-2006, 11:39 PM
A liked it . Had you made it rhyme it would have been dope.. Still enjoyed it though. Thums up bruv. Keep posting

Alesco
05-31-2006, 11:42 PM
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That was a good rhyme

Alesco
05-31-2006, 11:44 PM
The rhymes were there. Jus a bit structure is all ya need

trooper
06-03-2006, 07:48 PM
this is the own zone so y r u here,
ur about as misplaced as a queer,
ill sho u the true meaning of fear,
i can sense ur death is near,
i might be new to this crew,
but if u fuck with me ill do things worse to u then hitler did jews,
so u better watch it when im coming thru.

trooper
06-03-2006, 08:23 PM
ya jus felt like writing something down, uhhh ya i have to agree with everyone here