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Gubbi
05-29-2006, 01:30 PM
Down motherfucker get down! Down motherfucker get down!

When you see me/you get a energy rush/
Not just like a shot of bacardi breezer/
When the season is over i be banging some more/
When the season is over i be banging some whores/
And you see me../in the cold streets, leads by the view/
Everyone arounds me gets a middle finger/
Everyone gets a sip of little blinger in the air/
Flashing everywhere/bring pucnhes that hits you/
Battling everything and everyone/it's gonna get you/

chorus x2.
Quit over/stop joking/stop bitching around/
Leftovers/drop smoking/start listen to the sound/
Feel the streets/feel the heat coming at ya/
You gonna feel it like a DJ-scratcher/
When you see me... It's gona be-be-be.../

The truth that you telling are all naked/
The shit that you bust up are all faked/
Hate me i don't care/as long as i know my shit is fair/
I bang around like a want to/
I get my account/and smoke a blunt too/
Feel the realness/feel the illness/
A kid who hates school and allways too late?/
Yeah that's me/i am what i am/and i know what i wanne be/
A G?/No, i can't but i do anything to be superman-you-will see/

chorus x2.
Quit over/stop joking/stop bitching around/
Leftovers/drop smoking/start listen to the sound/
Feel the streets/feel the heat coming at ya/
You gonna feel it like a DJ-scratcher/
When you see me... It's gona be-be-be.../

Alright last words/last verse/this shit is gonna hit/
Though fight this night/i'm better than you so stop bit-kid/
My rhymes and my lines is all filed up.../
With hiphop/only realness is passing by/
So if you think i'm selling out/i'm the wrong guy/

- Credit please :)

ProjectArchimedes
05-29-2006, 11:51 PM
its alright but it was real simple, i would expect someone like nick carter to rap like that. Its alright though if youre danish cause its probaly not your first language, but keep improving on your structure; longer sentences, more then 2 sound words.

Gubbi
05-30-2006, 03:18 AM
Oh yeah thanks.

But i hears that this senteces was good as they were.

But thanks :)