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18bronzemen
05-29-2006, 03:06 PM
Tell me what u lot think

You are listening to the Lyricist
The lyrical deconstructionist
A shia islamist
I aint a terrorist although Iím a Brutal arsonist
I want to expose Israeli fundamentalist
Coz Iím a anti Zionist
Remember that prophet muhammed cartoonist?
Iím not gonna let that Danish Pussy exist
So make sure u dnít make me clinch my fist
Coz u will be part of my hit list
Forget assassinating me coz Iím an immortalist
I am also a historical chronologist
U know the Space race between the capitalist and communist?
The Americans didnít walk on the moon they hired professional illusionists

I Will be recruiting people like Malcolm X
In the procces assassinating prime suspects
Your crew is nothing apart from rejects
Remember bin laden didnít blow up the projects
U ainít ready for my ideologies they are too complex
Making u motionless coz your perplex

Mr:Merrick
05-29-2006, 03:12 PM
thats some nice shit yo, you got some BIG words goin and thats allways cool..
keep tha steam up..

peace

Kontagouz
05-29-2006, 03:19 PM
It was str8 theres room 4 improvment though

ProjectArchimedes
05-29-2006, 11:47 PM
haha, that was really funny man. Its very nicely written, but as far as a rap flow i think it was kind of off, but only because you had to use such big words. Really intelligent rap though, just kind of written in essay form.

18bronzemen
05-30-2006, 03:08 AM
SAFE people

18bronzemen
05-30-2006, 05:26 AM
Check this people

Iím darker then Darth Vader,
I will slice u in half with my light saber,
If u enter my country I will track u with my radar,
And run you down with my bulletproof hummer,
In the process I will rip out your gall bladder
Leaving u in a life threatening coma,
When I visit u I will break your knee caps with my sledge hammer
One strike will make your legs shatter
If u declare war I will take war to your country coz Iím a suicide bomber.
In case u forgot store this in your head and remember,
I ainít Bin Laden and ainít George bush either,
Iím a natural born leader, like Xerxes and Julius Caesar.

Sirkulayshun
05-30-2006, 03:29 PM
nice vocab:thumbup:the flo cud improve tho
peace

18bronzemen
05-31-2006, 04:59 AM
Thanks for the feedback peeps. In what ways can flow b improved.

18bronzemen
06-05-2006, 02:05 PM
Yo i'm workin on this 1 at the moment

It’s time for me to lyrically tear the zionist into pieces
Now I know why Jews all look the same coz they only marry their nieces
They don’t let Palestinians live in peace there houses are surrounded by fences
U best protect your olive shaped, obsessed president coz when I’m in town I will reduce his life chances.