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Cap I
07-03-2005, 08:55 AM
Just a short one.

My rhyme entwine divine shine in your mind,
with energy sent to me by a heavenly entity,
crossing the boundary of reality to find truth,
not fighting against the evil you see is a felacy,
minds put to use,my thoughts are poetic,
to real for the mass synthetic,
leaving unsaid whats ment to be,instead of fake imagery,
devise a way to rise toward clarity.

crastuf
07-03-2005, 08:08 PM
Ill word wizardy

GuardianOne
07-04-2005, 03:30 AM
this was a good verse, and had a lot of knowledge there-short but devastating. Quite versatile, besides your other verses. You got some skill developing.

Peace

JOHNNY_TICAL
07-08-2005, 08:31 PM
Ur Techniques R Pretty Good....... Good Wisdom.......


Peace Out

Rebel_INS
07-09-2005, 07:37 AM
NICE keep it up mann