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Sub Zero
06-03-2006, 09:17 AM
leave comments on my rhymes

Sub Zero
06-03-2006, 09:54 AM
you wanna fight pass the booze,
cuz chances are that ya gonna lose,
life or death its what u choose,
drunken masta bruce lee style,
call me the dragon i'll burn the Green Mile,
i take more risks than Steve Irwin wit crocodiles,
as i keep pumpin my rhymes my voice gets deeper,
they put me in a horror film cuz i stole the spot from the creeper,
more peeps got killed in my movie than cars hittin leaper,
too bad they forgot to call the grim reaper,
two faced like a ying yang,
believin in unethical theories like the big bang,
i have many chapters,
i create lyrical disasters,
so smart didnt go to college n still got my Masters,
makin more sense than wendy likin casper,
ima freeze u to ya death and theres no regrets,
i think i'll go to Vegas i'll win all of ya bets

Sirkulayshun
06-03-2006, 05:47 PM
its pretty good for ur 1st post...........the vocab was good....and u had some good lines
as i keep pumpin my rhymes my voice gets deeper,
they put me in a horror film cuz i stole the spot from the creeper,
more peeps got killed in my movie than cars hittin leaper,
too bad they forgot to call the grim reaper,:thumbup:

my only suggestion is that u even out ur flo...try ritin it 2 a beat and u'll elevate
keep it up
peace

Raptica
06-09-2006, 10:39 PM
bui i lik ur flow and its even better cause its only ur first rhyme and it will get better with time keep it up

Eversick666
06-10-2006, 12:51 PM
like the rhymes mang keep posten
peace
eversick666

Eversick666
06-10-2006, 12:59 PM
leave you at a sub zero degree,when shang sung,says FINISH HIM,my style b
like mk3.old but deadly,peep the sick and demented medly,tempt me scorpion sword chop off the head clean,red gliem,blood poor's off the top, we got it locked like the characters in the game you gotta beat to cop.

Sub Zero
06-19-2006, 10:50 AM
thanx for the comments

Raptica
09-20-2006, 02:28 AM
as i keep pumpin my rhymes my voice gets deeper,
they put me in a horror film cuz i stole the spot from the creeper,
more peeps got killed in my movie than cars hittin leaper,
too bad they forgot to call the grim reaper

dis line u posted was off the chizi bui keep it up

Sub Zero
10-22-2006, 09:45 AM
i dont know why but somethin smells like chicken,
and when u hear my rhymes u think their finga lickin,
wanna hear some more, gotta go back in da kitchen,
i'll fry you up anotha batch so gimme the match,
cause when i start bustin you betta get ready to patch,
i got the realistic styles,
i got you droppin ya mouth like crocodiles,
baskin in the sun, i'll bake you like a hot cross bun,
i'm armed n dangerous like a public enemy numba one,
and when u fools see me you betta get ready to run,
cause ain no tellin what i'll do when i start blastin my gun.

Raptica
10-22-2006, 01:47 PM
dis ur best one yet

keep up gud werk i liked the line dropin ya jaws lik a croc lmao

Da Dishonourable Don
10-24-2006, 01:38 AM
work on ya skills kid:mmmyah: in due time u git better

J.T.S.
10-24-2006, 02:27 PM
:lmao: i dont know why but somethin smells like chicken,
and when u hear my rhymes u think their finga lickin,
wanna hear some more, gotta go back in da kitchen,
i'll fry you up anotha batch so gimme the match,
cause when i start bustin you betta get ready to patch,
i got the realistic styles,
i got you droppin ya mouth like crocodiles,
baskin in the sun, i'll bake you like a hot cross bun,
i'm armed n dangerous like a public enemy numba one,
and when u fools see me you betta get ready to run,
cause ain no tellin what i'll do when i start blastin my gun.