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believin
06-09-2006, 10:17 AM
Im from denmark, so i might have misspelled some words.
Its kinda old, but i tried some of my best.
Hope you like it

I did it over Crimonology
enjoy:b

With feelings lost to the 'tips of my fingers/
slugs fuck ya windows, like a c-note from opera singers/
yall betta watchout, cos we blast hole through the limos/
make directed hit, and clear your throut like cig holes/
strapped and locked up in the back of a van/
toruring you and make you eat coke from a can/
its your own shit we serve you like a dog dinner/
"now whos the fucked and whos the junkie sinner?"/
eleven long years, been livin with the rats in the suers/
wonderwoman bracelet, finnaly collected, "the gambino supers"/
alergic to dust, we colloct from the oldest bookstores/
"tired of escaping?" we continue the gambino wars/
Its stated on the corp, that in august we will return/
Another dealer, anotehr wack emcee, and bitch will burn/
Aiyo fuck that, crimonology rap/
betta prepare cos this year the gambinos will get you strapped/

Sicka than aidZ
06-09-2006, 02:33 PM
Pretty Dope

believin
06-10-2006, 06:40 AM
Thanks:thumbup:

More feed?

Father N Dangerous
06-10-2006, 06:48 AM
word keep posting so i can see wat u all about, but good start shit

believin
06-10-2006, 07:29 AM
"My name, my name" arrrrrrrrr give me a fuckin minute
Half-concentration, the other have my name in it
Worlds best entertainer, is my speciality
Cos you allways gon' love my rhymin delivery
When its on tape, live, or a or something that i mention
Gruff voice send you into another dimension
With memories from a beloved time aka 94
Where we proved to the world whats really hardcore
The ol' grimy shit, that i allways gon' keep
I write you some grimy story even while im sleep
My rhymes psykopatic, my brain is like an E-pill
Everything on my body but my hand is sittin still
any pretender here will atleast end as a wreck
They hit the deck, as fast as i rhyme and check
ODB drop science like girls be droppin babies
I drop science like The GZA is hittin ladies

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^^^^^
ODB R.I.P

GuardianOne
06-10-2006, 07:32 AM
Your lyrics seem out of context, most of them. Might be you mentioned the "criminology" relation. As your lyrics seemed to be based of Raekwon's lryical content ( kind of like you where using his words-then you just reshuffled some and added a few of you own lyrics). Try use your own style.

Peace
PS: Keep posting!

believin
06-10-2006, 07:40 AM
Your lyrics seem out of context, most of them. Might be you mentioned the "criminology" relation. As your lyrics seemed to be based of Raekwon's lryical content ( kind of like you where using his words-then you just reshuffled some and added a few of you own lyrics). Try use your own style.

Peace
PS: Keep posting!

I mentioned Crimonology cos i love that one.
No, i dont re-use his rhymes, i dont listen to him that much, i just fell over crimonology, and i started to spit.

I spit about being a fan, and be royal to it.
thats why i say "Its stated on the corp that in august we will return"
A fan, so close to feel that the fan is like a wu tang member himselves.
A part of Wu Tang, cos it has followed me through a big part of my life, thats why i mention "we will return" and that you will hear in my other rhymes too.
Im trying to stop it, so dont worry

peace

Alesco
06-10-2006, 07:46 AM
Listening to your music right now GuardianOne.

Its good stuff bruv.

Stay deep

GuardianOne
06-10-2006, 09:21 AM
I mentioned Crimonology cos i love that one.
No, i dont re-use his rhymes, i dont listen to him that much, i just fell over crimonology, and i started to spit.

I spit about being a fan, and be royal to it.
thats why i say "Its stated on the corp that in august we will return"
A fan, so close to feel that the fan is like a wu tang member himselves.
A part of Wu Tang, cos it has followed me through a big part of my life, thats why i mention "we will return" and that you will hear in my other rhymes too.
Im trying to stop it, so dont worry

peace

That's alright.

Take care

Peace
PS: Keep posting and keep to the good work, i have been around lately but now i did what i need. And can roam within the temple (also check others lyrics).

GuardianOne
06-10-2006, 09:25 AM
Listening to your music right now GuardianOne.


Whilst i was posting i was a bit distracted as i was also editing another new beat "missed".

Do you have any music of your own we can hear?

Peace
PS: Keep posting

believin
06-10-2006, 02:02 PM
Here is totally my own style
hope you think this is better than the previous two


enjoy:b


First you will get slayin, for all the things you say
Then ill set the guilloutine cam on replay
Call me Dirty 5th, and ill tell you why
I deploy five lines before i let you die
Call me ritcher and the graph is showing a ten
Your hometowns shakin and the fun is only bout to begin
Raaaar, and ill let thousands dogs let loose
Your mind is pressured and can only focuse on booz
Youre in the news, you are seen in the article MIA
But my money will let the police use the article as hay
At the conspiration party that ill host
And your momma and daddy wants to make a toast
"Cheers, cheers, thank god he is gone
Now i dont see a 20 year ol kid in my house every morn'
No more embarrasing family gatherings
We need money, so well sell all his things
His autographed glove that he wanted us to keep
Little did he know that we didnt love him that deep"

num2son
06-10-2006, 09:09 PM
No more embarrasing family gatherings
We need money, so well sell all his things
His autographed glove that he wanted us to keep
Little did he know that we didnt love him that deep"

I like the last four lines

num2son
06-10-2006, 09:11 PM
I did it over Crimonology
enjoy:b

With feelings lost to the 'tips of my fingers/
slugs fuck ya windows, like a c-note from opera singers/
yall betta watchout, cos we blast hole through the limos/
make directed hit, and clear your throut like cig holes/
strapped and locked up in the back of a van/
toruring you and make you eat coke from a can/
its your own shit we serve you like a dog dinner/
"now whos the fucked and whos the junkie sinner?"/
eleven long years, been livin with the rats in the suers/
wonderwoman bracelet, finnaly collected, "the gambino supers"/
alergic to dust, we colloct from the oldest bookstores/
"tired of escaping?" we continue the gambino wars/
Its stated on the corp, that in august we will return/
Another dealer, anotehr wack emcee, and bitch will burn/
Aiyo fuck that, crimonology rap/
betta prepare cos this year the gambinos will get you strapped/

lol, i read the lyrics over the criminology instrumental,,lol

Very Dope, keep it up

Peace

believin
06-13-2006, 02:44 AM
On my own language

Du skal huske en ting, der er stadig mit tjald på dit skøde.
Enhver der lægger tro til bryde, burde vide hvad de går i møde.
Han er ikke loyal, tro og han vil aldrig være me' dig.
Han er wannabee gangsta, fuck finger og hva så fætter.
Du var uhøflig, stum og du så i virkeligheden aldrig godt ud.
Det blir værre når du fucker med en desibel af gud.
Jeg er det hårdeste af det hårdeste, den femte troende.
Og to som os vil aldrig nogensinde forsone.
Du stak min gade prinsesse, kunne jeg selv læse i hendes øjne.
Og mine drømme om natten blev pludselig støjne.
Hvis det var rigtig og jeg ville rense mit navn.
Så ville sprætte dig op, dig som ingen ville savn.
Du opfører dig som et barn, som en lille pige på tretten.
Skyder skylden på den uskyldige og nu skal hun i retten.
Aflæs mine mundbevægelser og de siger mord.
Med at dræbe dig var jeg blevet enig med din mor.