NEW TRACK (Help and feed)

[White_Mouse]

I' did a track yesterday for a mixtape called
"The Holy Culture Speaks vol. 2" I don't know what to call it. Any suggestions and feed are needed.
the site is
www.soundclick.com/jxl
click on the top song

[Pharaoh Snefru]

Peace, yo this shit is got a nice vibe, the beat is off the hook, flows go great to this. I dunno what I would call it tho. Just keep postin shit like this, names come later fuck it. Nice work


Pharaoh Snefru The Great!!!

[White_Mouse]

aight i'm glad someone liked this,
uppin for more opinions

[Big Risk]

Shit Is Hot, Nuff Said

[White_Mouse]

yep da kid toney said i need to put some more emotions into it, and alos try to be funnier with lyrics. I sound like a kid so i should rap like a kid but i'm gonna be funny as well as violent}:T
LOL
uppin for more opnions.

[White_Mouse]

sorry yall my guy at the mixtape said to keep the track out of public view until the mixtape drops. SO i removed the track. kinda limited time thing.