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BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-15-2006, 06:09 PM
Ya'll know the drill ! 2 verses each
use the rules on voting
X starts the first round
Don starts the second round

5 votes = Win
DING DING!!

Definitive X
06-15-2006, 06:20 PM
Def is the bomb, drop a psalm on any dishonorable don
Hold ya heart inside of my palm when I dishonor ya moms
Speak with a calm intonation, my rhymes cause emotion inflammation
Your little tracks only give me mild irritation
Kick it with or without athlete's foot
Ya whole team gets jooked, with one recitation from my rhymebook
Any street team behind you would just support a bitch
Yeah, you got a HO: a hypersexual orifice
I use my tongue to fuck up ya mind
You use yours to lick manure from another man's behind
Need to rewind them pipe dreams, put down the crack
Def cause Spinal Taps with the way I put these emcees on they back
Elevate above the globe, what a sight to behold
Spin the axis backwards, kill your fetus while it crowns in ya mom's hole
I got that Nas flow, it ain't hard to tell me
That the Don is gone quicker than Santino Corleone
All I need is two verses, I'm true versus any dude
Show you the difference between dishonored and dishonorable...

oDoUoSoKo
06-16-2006, 09:16 AM
not bad

Da Dishonourable Don
06-16-2006, 03:29 PM
I spit the truth, this bitch is cute, tryin' to POST MAD LIES/
like I ain't know your mom's a ho:slutty: , and you got the POSTMAN'S EYES/
I blew your brain out your head, are you FORGETTING YOU'RE DEAD?/
but then you woke up, all soaked up from WETTING YOUR BED/:o
I read his WEAK VERSE, this kid's gonna die a fuckin' virgin/
'cause he couldn't kick it with some pussy if his REBIRTH was FEET FIRST/
you're whack son, your people lied to you, you're NOT NICE/
I'll cook your TOP SLICED in a WOK DICED with some HOT RICE/
git DROPPED TWICE, three time's a charm when I ROCK MICS/
vagina juice, why's your rhyme's so loose but your TWOT'S TIGHT?/
COCK LICE infested crab nigga, you SO FAKE/
SNOW FLAKE rappers like X be holdin' NO WEIGHT/
you'll die by your OWN FATE, LEFT IN A MESS/
with a guided missle aiming at the DEFINITIVE X ON YOUR CHEST/
since..NINETY-TWO, been that GRIMY DUDE/
making the crowd throw it up like it's CHINESE FOOD/ {not a racial slur}
my SIAMESE TOOLS got an infra big as a STOP LIGHT/
this fag ain't gotta go to Chinatown to bet on a COCK FIGHT!!!!

oDoUoSoKo
06-16-2006, 07:10 PM
damn nice verse

Da Dishonourable Don
06-16-2006, 08:33 PM
yeah, respect D!

WU-GC
06-16-2006, 10:11 PM
nice battle gentlemen

Definitive X
06-18-2006, 12:25 PM
Peace, don, dope verse...time to kick off the second round, homey...

Da Dishonourable Don
06-18-2006, 03:53 PM
aight man, whenever you're ready drop that!

Definitive X
06-18-2006, 09:44 PM
nah, you gotta drop first...

Da Dishonourable Don
06-19-2006, 02:53 AM
aight, but some time later kid, gonna catch some z's right now

Definitive X
06-19-2006, 08:46 AM
^^^^Get your sleep! You gon' need it! :)

Da Dishonourable Don
06-20-2006, 09:37 PM
Son, you'll git X'd out the game, is it WORTH the PUNISHMENT?/
you'll be one with the Earth and the DIRT right UNDER IT/
see I ain't finished WIT YOU, fucker let's just make this OFFICIAL/
disintegrate your CRANIUM TISSUE with an ARABIAN MISSLE/
I'll pop holes through your chest like you PIERCED YOUR NIPPLES/
kiddo you're just BITS n KIBBLES vs. the FIERCEST PITBULL/
it's as CLEAR AS CRYSTAL, front, and leave STUCK IN A BOX/
I'll shove my dick up in your brain so I can FUCK WITH YOUR THOUGHTS/
homie you'll GET BEAT, these people want the truth, well then LET'S SPEAK/
you're just the NEXT CHEAP imitation Immortal TECHNIQUE/:yes:
your REP'S WEAK, ya never gonna BLOW IN DA GAME/
It's Da Dishonourable Don, BITCH now you KNOWIN' MY NAME/
SHOWIN' NO SHAME, you can throw your hardest punch it'll HARDLY HURT ME/
you'll see 'darkness',...... like Rick James slappin' out CHARLIE MURPHY/
CARVE THIS TURKEY thanksgiving style, COKE AND A SMILE/
the only time you exchange blows is when you OPEN YOUR MOUTH:nonono:

VernakuLa
06-20-2006, 09:41 PM
that shit had me laughin dawg nice verse homie

Da Dishonourable Don
06-21-2006, 04:11 PM
yeah, nuff respect homie! X you're up next!

Definitive X
06-22-2006, 06:24 PM
Me against the don? That ain't no fair game
He gon' catch a quicker exit than peeps sittin' at the front of a plane
Who remains? Da Dishonourable Don? Bitch please
Only knockout blow he ever scored was when he fell asleep on his knees
Kool Keith couldn't combat this ultramagnetic force
With punchlines that get more "ohs" than Tina Turner post-divorce
And before you wanna challenge the best
Remember that Charlie Murphy caused bleeding in Rick James' chest
I put lames to rest like equestrian medical teams
You Duke against the '89 UNC team, ain't stoppin' the Dean
Top of the cream, you an undeveloped Bavarian hop
Can't kick a rhyme against me, you got Bernard Berrian drops
You more than a snitch, damn near marryin' cops
I spit Derrek Lee bullets that'll tear through ya sox
Pimpin' yourself for less than fifteen minutes of fame
My raps are soccer, show you how to spit some beautiful game...

Definitive X
06-23-2006, 03:50 PM
Aiight, people, time to vote!

Da Dishonourable Don
06-23-2006, 06:44 PM
let's get these votes peeps and please read the whole battle before voting, I know some of you be skimming along, just read the verses, aight?!

num2son
06-23-2006, 07:34 PM
Flow - DX
Punchlines - Tie
Vocab - Tie
Creativity - Tie
Wordplay - DX

Definitive X wins

Da Dishonourable Don
06-23-2006, 07:40 PM
aight 1-0 in X's favour

T-ribe
06-23-2006, 08:58 PM
Flow - Don
Punchlines - Don
Vocab - X
Creativity - Tie
Wordplay - X

I'm go wit Da Don because he headed up some steam midway through the first vrs, and kept it going. I felt like X's first vrs waz way hotter than his second, and thats where he fell off for me. Both ya came wit some heat doe.
Vote-DA Don

Da Dishonourable Don
06-23-2006, 09:23 PM
1-1, aight let's get some more votes

Da Dishonourable Don
06-24-2006, 05:15 PM
uppin' for votes, c'mon people!

VernakuLa
06-24-2006, 05:19 PM
honestly, i think dat some of X's punches were forced,
"catch a quicker exit than dudes on the front of the plane"

c'mon thats not fresh man,

as for don, shit was sick...some of it better than others..i can tell on some parts he was goin out of his element, but i just liked his alot better

v-DDD

Da Dishonourable Don
06-24-2006, 05:39 PM
aight, that's 2-1 in my favour, good lookin' on the vote!

Definitive X
06-26-2006, 08:48 AM
Votes!

Da Dishonourable Don
07-02-2006, 05:09 PM
where the votes at?
2-1 in my favour, let's git this done!

Locust
07-02-2006, 05:21 PM
Flow - Don
Punchlines - Don
Vocab - X
Creativity - Don
Wordplay - X

i vote for don

Da Dishonourable Don
07-02-2006, 06:41 PM
ok, good looking on the votes, 3-2 in my favour

Da Dishonourable Don
07-05-2006, 05:09 AM
more votes needed!

Definitive X
07-06-2006, 10:41 PM
If y'all don't vote, I'll reach through the computer, and break ya fucking fingers!





















Just playin'...

Longbongcilvaringz
07-06-2006, 11:25 PM
Flow - DX
Punchlines - Tie
Vocab - DX
Creativity - DX
Wordplay - Don


overall i think that x's verse flowed better and hit harder with the punches. the don had a decent verse, but i feel that most of what he was saying wasnt really original unlike x who camer with some creative punches and lines.

Vote - Definitive X


alos as a side note i dont see why some text battlers feel the need to put shit in caps of quotations, its not as if people actually pay more attention to this. w/e nice verses.

Definitive X
07-07-2006, 06:32 PM
3-3! We're deadlocked people!

Da Dishonourable Don
07-07-2006, 06:48 PM
i vote for myself, lol just fuckin around, 3-3, it's lookin good!

Definitive X
07-07-2006, 06:49 PM
We got a classic goin'!

Robert
07-08-2006, 12:48 AM
Right lets break this down.......

Round 1 Def
Def is the bomb, drop a psalm on any dishonorable don
Hold ya heart inside of my palm when I dishonor ya moms
(nice opener wit good personal)

Speak with a calm intonation, my rhymes cause emotion inflammation
Your little tracks only give me mild irritation
Kick it with or without athlete's foot
Ya whole team gets jooked, with one recitation from my rhymebook
(Liked this but the punch prolly aint hitting for mine......)

Any street team behind you would just support a bitch
Yeah, you got a HO: a hypersexual orifice
I use my tongue to fuck up ya mind
You use yours to lick manure from another man's behind
(alright.....)

Need to rewind them pipe dreams, put down the crack
Def cause Spinal Taps with the way I put these emcees on they back
(clever lines, pretty, good punch)

Elevate above the globe, what a sight to behold
Spin the axis backwards, kill your fetus while it crowns in ya mom's hole
I got that Nas flow, it ain't hard to tell me
That the Don is gone quicker than Santino Corleone
(lol, nice little section man)

All I need is two verses, I'm true versus any dude
Show you the difference between dishonored and dishonorable..
(nice finsh)

Round 1-DDD
I spit the truth, this bitch is cute, tryin' to POST MAD LIES/
like I ain't know your mom's a ho , and you got the POSTMAN'S EYES/
(nice opener)

I blew your brain out your head, are you FORGETTING YOU'RE DEAD?/
but then you woke up, all soaked up from WETTING YOUR BED/
(lol, nice punch)

I read his WEAK VERSE, this kid's gonna die a fuckin' virgin/
'cause he couldn't kick it with some pussy if his REBIRTH was FEET FIRST/
(nice man, keeping up with some good punches)

you're whack son, your people lied to you, you're NOT NICE/
I'll cook your TOP SLICED in a WOK DICED with some HOT RICE/
(this is ill, really liked the word play)

git DROPPED TWICE, three time's a charm when I ROCK MICS/
vagina juice, why's your rhyme's so loose but your TWOT'S TIGHT?/
(pretty good......)

COCK LICE infested crab nigga, you SO FAKE/
SNOW FLAKE rappers like X be holdin' NO WEIGHT/
you'll die by your OWN FATE, LEFT IN A MESS/
with a guided missle aiming at the DEFINITIVE X ON YOUR CHEST/
(nice punch)

since..NINETY-TWO, been that GRIMY DUDE/
making the crowd throw it up like it's CHINESE FOOD/ {not a racial slur}
my SIAMESE TOOLS got an infra big as a STOP LIGHT/
this fag ain't gotta go to Chinatown to bet on a COCK FIGHT!!!!
Ok finish...
Overall i think DDD got the first round with some harder hitting punches and creative wordplay

Round 2-DDD
Son, you'll git X'd out the game, is it WORTH the PUNISHMENT?/
you'll be one with the Earth and the DIRT right UNDER IT/
(ok opener)

see I ain't finished WIT YOU, fucker let's just make this OFFICIAL/
disintegrate your CRANIUM TISSUE with an ARABIAN MISSLE/
I'll pop holes through your chest like you PIERCED YOUR NIPPLES/
kiddo you're just BITS n KIBBLES vs. the FIERCEST PITBULL/
(nice wordplay but for mine these aint hitting)

it's as CLEAR AS CRYSTAL, front, and leave STUCK IN A BOX/
I'll shove my dick up in your brain so I can FUCK WITH YOUR THOUGHTS/
(ill man, this is clever and hits)

homie you'll GET BEAT, these people want the truth, well then LET'S SPEAK/
you're just the NEXT CHEAP imitation Immortal TECHNIQUE/
(nice personal)

your REP'S WEAK, ya never gonna BLOW IN DA GAME/
It's Da Dishonourable Don, BITCH now you KNOWIN' MY NAME/
SHOWIN' NO SHAME, you can throw your hardest punch it'll HARDLY HURT ME/
you'll see 'darkness',...... like Rick James slappin' out CHARLIE MURPHY/
(lol, nice punch)

CARVE THIS TURKEY thanksgiving style, COKE AND A SMILE/
the only time you exchange blows is when you OPEN YOUR MOUTH
(nice finishing lines)

Round 2-Def X
Me against the don? That ain't no fair game
He gon' catch a quicker exit than peeps sittin' at the front of a plane
(ok opener)
Who remains? Da Dishonourable Don? Bitch please
Only knockout blow he ever scored was when he fell asleep on his knees
(lol, nice punch man)

Kool Keith couldn't combat this ultramagnetic force
With punchlines that get more "ohs" than Tina Turner post-divorce
(pretty decent.....)

And before you wanna challenge the best
Remember that Charlie Murphy caused bleeding in Rick James' chest
(lol, this is dope, nice build on DDD)

I put lames to rest like equestrian medical teams
You Duke against the '89 UNC team, ain't stoppin' the Dean
Top of the cream, you an undeveloped Bavarian hop
Can't kick a rhyme against me, you got Bernard Berrian drops
(good section)

You more than a snitch, damn near marryin' cops
I spit Derrek Lee bullets that'll tear through ya sox
Pimpin' yourself for less than fifteen minutes of fame
My raps are soccer, show you how to spit some beautiful game...
(dope finish...)

Def X prolly got the second round overall, it was a damn close battle, but i felt your first verse was weaker X, while DDD was consistently good wit some hard hitting punches. I'd like to see another round to decide this but right now i gotta vote for DDD
Vote DDD
peace, both had ill verses
__________________

Definitive X
07-08-2006, 07:47 AM
DDD up 4-3...let's get these votes in...

hollywoodrealty
07-08-2006, 05:27 PM
Flow - DX
Punchlines - DX
Vocab - DX
Creativity - DX
Wordplay - DX

i felt the DX was overall better then the don, id give the don an 8 out of 10 on this, but i give Dx 9 out of 10, he was just always a little better, i vote for DX, peace

Treazon
07-08-2006, 11:00 PM
i will give it to the Don.. i just liked his punches and flow more, felt alot more like a battle rap to me. dont get me wrong X had some nice wordplay, throwing in lots of names and shit like that (charlie murphy response was ILLLL). but the feet first line.. fuck with your thoughts line... maybe not the MOST creative ever, but worked into the dissing very very well, seemed like he couldve been the first one to ever come up with somethin as hard-hitting as that

Don gets my vote, but in a reallllly close battle and its nice to see ones like this every so often.

one word of advice id like to give you Don, dont capitalize and put smilies, the shit you write should capitalize itself, and we dont need help seeing what rhymes with what.. lol.


peace

Definitive X
07-09-2006, 11:49 AM
Aiight, congratulations Don, you take it...final vote: 5-4...it was close...

Da Dishonourable Don
07-09-2006, 08:17 PM
1 love to those who voted on this battle, nuff respect to you X for being a good piece of competition, keep doing U!