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Logik1991
06-25-2006, 04:30 AM
Youll prolly be hearing and reading alot from me in the future...

i aint got a lot of my shit typed up , i prefer paper , but ill script something so you know what im about..

i blast with a squadron of natural elements
too fast to be dodging the track is venemous
enters your blood to infect the structure
catch pens to the mug or respect the culture
my swords swing chop disconnect your wig
little snitches from the block they collect the tip
so hit the deck when i dispurse a scripture
my shit reflects and then the verse'll hit ya
chops your head , and drifts back to the paper
solidified liquid reacts to the vapour
enter the facility of criminal enhancement
thought that you was killing me but lyrically your average
the bladed i throw be dislocating your shoulder
a baby though y'all just wait till im older
i train to perfect performing mediation
aim for the neck the storm is hesitation
reside with the books extracting information
its time to be shook to act upon the nation
im swift with a liquid axe to slay sylables
i hit with the twisted rap and stay spiritual
i search for words rehearse work the asauphagus
murk the herbs a wordsearch of apocolypse
one word multiply's its attacking you all
logik works with the eyes see the graff on the wall

Logik1991
06-25-2006, 05:15 AM
Word

Thanks for the feed , i'll peep your work

Father N Dangerous
06-25-2006, 05:25 AM
i blast with a squadron of natural elements
too fast to be dodging the track is venemous
enters your blood to infect the structure
catch pens to the mug or respect the culture
my swords swing chop disconnect your wig
little snitches from the block they collect the tip
so hit the deck when i dispurse a scripture
my shit reflects and then the verse'll hit ya
chops your head , and drifts back to the paper
solidified liquid reacts to the vapour
enter the facility of criminal enhancement
thought that you was killing me but lyrically your average
the bladed i throw be dislocating your shoulder
a baby though y'all just wait till im older
i train to perfect performing mediation
aim for the neck the storm is hesitation
reside with the books extracting information
its time to be shook to act upon the nation
im swift with a liquid axe to slay sylables
i hit with the twisted rap and stay spiritual
i search for words rehearse work the asauphagus
murk the herbs a wordsearch of apocolypse
one word multiply's its attacking you all
logik works with the eyes see the graff on the wall


word homie i was feelin this verse, the high-lighted lines is wat stood out to me, stay active on this site and i can see you excell'n to a great level, get active in da cyhpa's too!! i'll be lookin out 4 u, stay up keep blessin

Logik1991
06-26-2006, 10:52 AM
thanks for the feed brother , always appreciated

Locust
06-27-2006, 12:36 PM
nice multies, nothing much else to say.. looking forward to your next verse, keep scripting!

Logik1991
07-13-2006, 12:51 PM
Thanks for the feed brotherman

Logik1991
07-13-2006, 04:26 PM
i used to think ... that us humans had a certain existance
to conquer any mountain of a vertical distance
but where we live is covered with the curtains of sickness
so we rap to escape , spit the urban lynquistics

what happens when you lose every reason to fight?
got the fakers spittin fables and decievin the mic
the grip is gettin tighter now ma breathin is tight
and am workin always searchin for the meanin of life

incarcaration its apparent that were trapped in a cycle
tryna keep the balance the reaction is vital
im spittin from the heart , this is actually michael
theyre tryna make me listen to the masters resitals

i sit and watch the dove as it soars from above
when it comes to battle scars , ive got more than enuff
i walk hooded at night , takin the form of a thug
im just another statistic i wasnt born to be loved

Scripted this one not too long ago

lookin for some feedback brothers and sisters

jallainINS
07-13-2006, 04:48 PM
this ones nice. i think i liked the first one better but this one was good too. the flow was nice throughout the whole verse. and i like the rhyme scheme, some of the rhyming was simple, but it held together okay. good work.

Logik1991
07-14-2006, 09:21 AM
Thanks for the feed

keep it coming peoples

Logik1991
07-16-2006, 07:14 AM
Feedback Please

Logik1991
08-01-2006, 04:45 AM
Yeah i got audio man ... Hit me up with a PM brother

Quickly scripted..

Mathematically i kick it to numerical celibates
sins in galaxys of spirits ya can tell its intelligence
spit the relevent elements makin memories venemous
the infection is the pregnancy of energy benefits
magnetically compressed flipped verbally raped
in the chamber i reside , swords'll murder the snakes
soldiers from the temple hold the burner to face
to endure pain firstly you must learn to embrace
smooth concentration relaxed meditation
impulses from the brain reign and axe hesitation
lost in hope , forth and back steady pacing
dissappear in the darkness and lack any tracing
my verbal weaponary is hurting enemys with urban melody
dispursin energy im cursing hurbs and murking chemically
the verse eventually deteriates a lurking memory
pretend to be coincedentally im working steadily..

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 04:53 AM
i used to think ... that us humans had a certain existance
to conquer any mountain of a vertical distance
but where we live is covered with the curtains of sickness
so we rap to escape , spit the urban lynquistics

what happens when you lose every reason to fight?
got the fakers spittin fables and decievin the mic
the grip is gettin tighter now ma breathin is tight
and am workin always searchin for the meanin of life

incarcaration its apparent that were trapped in a cycle
tryna keep the balance the reaction is vital
im spittin from the heart , this is actually michael
theyre tryna make me listen to the masters resitals

i sit and watch the dove as it soars from above
when it comes to battle scars , ive got more than enuff
i walk hooded at night , takin the form of a thug
im just another statistic i wasnt born to be loved

Scripted this one not too long ago

lookin for some feedback brothers and sisters

thats a nice verse, really good rhyme schemes in there, sounds like some Louis Logic shit lol, good shit

peace

Logik1991
08-01-2006, 04:57 AM
Yeah i got audio man ... Hit me up with a PM brother

Quickly scripted..

Mathematically i kick it to numerical celibates
sins in galaxys of spirits ya can tell its intelligence
spit the relevent elements makin memories venemous
the infection is the pregnancy of energy benefits
magnetically compressed flipped verbally raped
in the chamber i reside , swords'll murder the snakes
soldiers from the temple hold the burner to face
to endure pain firstly you must learn to embrace
smooth concentration relaxed meditation
impulses from the brain reign and axe hesitation
lost in hope , forth and back steady pacing
dissappear in the darkness and lack any tracing
my verbal weaponary is hurting enemys with urban melody
dispursin energy im cursing hurbs and murking chemically
the verse eventually deteriates a lurking memory
pretend to be coincedentally im working steadily..

word thanks for the feed nak

can i get some opinions of this one?

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 05:00 AM
hit me up with ur audio

as for that one, well It had the schemes, non concept rhyme, it was good

only thing negative, your getti to the scheme to quick, use some more words like one or two to fill the gap NAWMEAN

Logik1991
08-01-2006, 05:06 AM
yeah man most definately , props on the feed ill pm you with some shit homie