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Definitive X
07-05-2005, 10:46 AM
Take a look at me, I’m twice the MC you’ll ever be
After your fall, I spit on the grave after delivering your eulogy
Kick a verse, Freddy can’t perform what “I do”
Every rhyme puts whack MCs through combines with two-inch verticals
On to you, I smack that fake grimace off your face
Very dangerous to those that attempt to invade my space
Enter the dragon, I breathe fire at weak rappers
Reckon that God added a subnote to the 5th Commandment afterwards
Yank you straight outta your knock-off Tim boots
Outta sight, outta mind, like Pablo Escobar’s narcotic truths
Ubiquitous with this, I’m omnipotent with a sixteen
Renderin’ you unconscious, Vinne Paz-style, transplant ya spleen
Correct ya hunchback with a Louisville Slugger bat
Rippin’ you a new asshole, I’m not ashamed to smack cats on a track
Every time you try and make me fold under your industrial rule
We pull a Al Capone, and TAKE OVER YOUR CREW…

westvillain
07-05-2005, 12:22 PM
Whatup X! I like this verse a lot. I can see that you've really improved since i last read your shit. There are a lot of good lines in here. My faves are these

Kick a verse, Freddy can’t perform what “I do”
Every rhyme puts whack MCs through combines with two-inch verticals

Enter the dragon, I breathe fire at weak rappers
Reckon that God added a subnote to the 5th Commandment afterwards
Nice stuff man keep it up. Peace.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-05-2005, 01:30 PM
You know I like the message in a verse style PEACE

GuardianOne
07-06-2005, 01:10 AM
Interesting rhymes, like the way you worked it out. I could quote some noteable parts but it was nice. Nice verse.Although towards the end it seemed to involve a lot of references.

Peace

Create
07-06-2005, 02:08 PM
is this the one u pmed me about if so


NICE WORDPLAY AND RHYME SCHEME

WORK ON UR MULTIS CUZ U GOT NOINE AND THATS WHAT I LOVE

NO REAL PUNCHES


BUT VER NICE COMMANDING LINES


BUT NO REAL PUNCHES

UR GETTIN GOOD THO

Knok-A-Fella
07-06-2005, 02:26 PM
Always likin this kind of rhymin

keep postin n gracin us wit lyrics

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