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VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 02:05 PM
I'm in RED hollywood in BLUE

once and for all, ima put this bitch to a hault
cut him up alive, then i cover his body up with salt
i catapult electric volts, your body jolts in resistance
i got a hidden vault filled with weapons, like for instance
grenades that will blow past your barracades, stop the sherades
you dont wanna battle me, i got rhymes for days, you go to gay parades
wave your colored flag, you love rainbows and lebrechans
you trying to defeat me is like a white woman marrying lois faracon
it cant be done, impossible, unattainable
hang you by the neck, left you strangled by the mic cable
as you gasp for air hoping god hears your prayers
you think you playing me, but your playing yourself like solitaire
ill break you beyond repair, you got no warranty
im the king sitten in the golden chair, feel the sovereignty
vernakular step aside, i cant even see you with binoculars
vehicular homicide, your body found by 2 officers
one talks into his radio, 187, short white male found dead on the road
the other grabs chalk, traces the body from head to toe
the cause of death was determined by the coroner
choked, lost his breath, he fucked with the best out of florida


How can i stress skill, my flow enough for your rambles to get?
When I press bills, guy knows he bluffs, but his gambles are set
Can't handle a vet,so, this guy calls out rookies instead
So give it a rest, Nope, I'll just throw out my hooks and hes dead
hollywood, you failed to impress me, with a style derailed n messy
Face it, even if you were a mailman, you couldn't adress me
The herse car is callin, hollywood gloats but aint trying-for-this
Verse was appalling, garbage bars and two lines were a diss
Your fighting is shit, trying to come off with more witt instead
Gettin "shafted" in is this, is the only way you'll "get a-head"
Don't tell me how you will kill me, i'm sick of that ruse
Flow cant compete, your shit really, bitch fuck your rules
Your drowning ya punk, I don't think your songs aren't special
It sounds like your drunk, You flow as well as solid metal
I don't need to waste lines for votes, so go dickride bigben
Hollywood is so "wack" he reminds me of italian hitmen

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 02:09 PM
Vote

hollywoodrealty
07-05-2006, 02:50 PM
Ya Lets Get Some Votes Here

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 02:54 PM
vote in this thread

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 03:36 PM
thanks for the vote spoken, 1-0 in my favor

num2son
07-05-2006, 03:38 PM
I vote for Vern

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 03:38 PM
I vote for Vern

got to obey the rules yo, elaborate more

num2son
07-05-2006, 03:40 PM
Flow - Vern
Punchlines - Vern
Creativity - Tie
Wordplay - Vern
Vocab - Tie

Vernakula gets my vote

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 03:41 PM
aight, 2-0 in my favor keep voting

Locust
07-05-2006, 04:10 PM
Flow - Vern
Punchlines - Vern
Creativity - Vern
Wordplay - Vern
Vocab - Tie

Vote=Vern

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 04:11 PM
yo, thanks locust

aight thats a 3-0 ko hollywood

you cant call me weak anymore

hollywoodrealty
07-05-2006, 04:39 PM
sorry, keep voting, spoken's vote doesnt count, he and tuco are too connected for his vote to count, sorry, u made the rules
keep voting, peace

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 05:52 PM
sorry, keep voting, spoken's vote doesnt count, he and tuco are too connected for his vote to count, sorry, u made the rules
keep voting, peace

look at the way its going for you already, out of all the people who voted you shud respect spoken, you little bitch dont make it harder for yourseld you already lost

hollywoodrealty
07-05-2006, 06:30 PM
take it easy poppacrackhead

hollywoodrealty
07-05-2006, 06:31 PM
alright u won, good battle, peace

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 06:41 PM
alright u won, good battle, peace

naw not even, now you cant say shit, stop reppin florida, u suck at rapping, dont quit your day job u got slammed peace

hollywoodrealty
07-05-2006, 07:37 PM
none of your rhyme was good, i smell something fishy bcuz u didnt even have any flow, its crystal clear who the better mc is, dont even try and say otherwise, u still only win 50 % of your battles, my percentage is far better sucker, you got 3 friends to vote for you, congradulations

oDoUoSoKo
07-05-2006, 07:49 PM
i have the best stats on the corp...lol jk (even tho its probably true considering its more thant i report)

Classic
07-05-2006, 08:20 PM
I sonned you Dusk!
I give you that L, son.
Naww, juss playin'.
But yeah, he does have the best stats. So far I'm 6-0. Goin down same path as him.
But yeah, givin' this a bar-by-bar breakdown.
No bias, or a vote. Just feedback.

Hollywood :

once and for all, ima put this bitch to a hault
cut him up alive, then i cover his body up with salt
(Mediocre opener here.)
i catapult electric volts, your body jolts in resistance
i got a hidden vault filled with weapons, like for instance
(Throw a punch, don't just set one up for the next line. This wasn't hitting your opponent at all. Bad bar.)
grenades that will blow past your barracades, stop the sherades
you dont wanna battle me, i got rhymes for days, you go to gay parades
(Good bar here. You're gettin better.)
wave your colored flag, you love rainbows and lebrechans
you trying to defeat me is like a white woman marrying lois faracon
(Another good one.)
it cant be done, impossible, unattainable
hang you by the neck, left you strangled by the mic cable
(Half-decent bar, 1st line wasn't done too good. Could've been re-worded.)
as you gasp for air hoping god hears your prayers
you think you playing me, but your playing yourself like solitaire
(Half-decent AT BEST, this wasn't too hard hittin' either.)
ill break you beyond repair, you got no warranty
im the king sitten in the golden chair, feel the sovereignty
(Good transitions. But you're braggin' on the 2nd line. Battle in the battlefield, don't brag.)
vernakular step aside, i cant even see you with binoculars
vehicular homicide, your body found by 2 officers
(1st line is more of props then a diss if you ask me. 2nd line was half-decent at best. A lot of played concepts in this verse. Bad.)
one talks into his radio, 187, short white male found dead on the road
the other grabs chalk, traces the body from head to toe
(Pretty good here.)
the cause of death was determined by the coroner
choked, lost his breath, he fucked with the best out of florida
(Bad closer.)

Venakular

How can i stress skill, my flow enough for your rambles to get?
When I press bills, guy knows he bluffs, but his gambles are set
(Bad opener. There's really no punch here.)
Can't handle a vet,so, this guy calls out rookies instead
So give it a rest, Nope, I'll just throw out my hooks and hes dead
(Good first bar, a sort-of personal. 2nd was seeming like some bragging. Decent at best.)
hollywood, you failed to impress me, with a style derailed n messy
Face it, even if you were a mailman, you couldn't adress me
(Nice shit, wordplay n all. Good bar.)
The herse car is callin, hollywood gloats but aint trying-for-this
Verse was appalling, garbage bars and two lines were a diss
(Some fillers in this verse. Cut out shit you don't need dude. "The hearse car is callin", was this really necessary? Looks like you stuck it in there just to rhyme with "Verse was appalling". And the last line wasn't hittin' hard. Half-decent atbest.)
Your fighting is shit, trying to come off with more witt instead
Gettin "shafted" in is this, is the only way you'll "get a-head"
(Good wordplay again. Good bar.)
Don't tell me how you will kill me, i'm sick of that ruse
Flow cant compete, your shit really, bitch fuck your rules
(Bad bar. Wasn't really hittin' hard. You could've set some shit up with the 1st line Vern.)
Your drowning ya punk, I don't think your songs aren't special
It sounds like your drunk, You flow as well as solid metal
(Didn't quite get the 2nd line. Bad.)
I don't need to waste lines for votes, so go dickride bigben
Hollywood is so "wack" he reminds me of italian hitmen
(This bar was "okay". Half-decent.)

Review : When y'all got beef goin' on like this, I would expect to see some PERSONALS. All I really saw were generic disses, and played concepts on Hollywood's side. No real personals. Vern's verse had some filler that shouldn't have been there. And no personals on his side either. This was a crummy battle overall. I've read pieces from both y'all, and I know BOTH of you could come a lot harder then this shit. Research your opponent and dig some dirt up on 'em. If I was to vote, it would've been for Vern. He had some wordplay, and some harder hitting punches. Truthfully, you should rematch and really try to write some shit up on each other.
Peace, and stay up.
Both of y'all.

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 08:41 PM
yea, no rhyme schemes in there at all

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 08:52 PM
I sonned you Dusk!
I give you that L, son.
Naww, juss playin'.
But yeah, he does have the best stats. So far I'm 6-0. Goin down same path as him.
But yeah, givin' this a bar-by-bar breakdown.
No bias, or a vote. Just feedback.

Hollywood :

once and for all, ima put this bitch to a hault
cut him up alive, then i cover his body up with salt
(Mediocre opener here.)
i catapult electric volts, your body jolts in resistance
i got a hidden vault filled with weapons, like for instance
(Throw a punch, don't just set one up for the next line. This wasn't hitting your opponent at all. Bad bar.)
grenades that will blow past your barracades, stop the sherades
you dont wanna battle me, i got rhymes for days, you go to gay parades
(Good bar here. You're gettin better.)
wave your colored flag, you love rainbows and lebrechans
you trying to defeat me is like a white woman marrying lois faracon
(Another good one.)
it cant be done, impossible, unattainable
hang you by the neck, left you strangled by the mic cable
(Half-decent bar, 1st line wasn't done too good. Could've been re-worded.)
as you gasp for air hoping god hears your prayers
you think you playing me, but your playing yourself like solitaire
(Half-decent AT BEST, this wasn't too hard hittin' either.)
ill break you beyond repair, you got no warranty
im the king sitten in the golden chair, feel the sovereignty
(Good transitions. But you're braggin' on the 2nd line. Battle in the battlefield, don't brag.)
vernakular step aside, i cant even see you with binoculars
vehicular homicide, your body found by 2 officers
(1st line is more of props then a diss if you ask me. 2nd line was half-decent at best. A lot of played concepts in this verse. Bad.)
one talks into his radio, 187, short white male found dead on the road
the other grabs chalk, traces the body from head to toe
(Pretty good here.)
the cause of death was determined by the coroner
choked, lost his breath, he fucked with the best out of florida
(Bad closer.)

Venakular

How can i stress skill, my flow enough for your rambles to get?
When I press bills, guy knows he bluffs, but his gambles are set
(Bad opener. There's really no punch here.)
Can't handle a vet,so, this guy calls out rookies instead
So give it a rest, Nope, I'll just throw out my hooks and hes dead
(Good first bar, a sort-of personal. 2nd was seeming like some bragging. Decent at best.)
hollywood, you failed to impress me, with a style derailed n messy
Face it, even if you were a mailman, you couldn't adress me
(Nice shit, wordplay n all. Good bar.)
The herse car is callin, hollywood gloats but aint trying-for-this
Verse was appalling, garbage bars and two lines were a diss
(Some fillers in this verse. Cut out shit you don't need dude. "The hearse car is callin", was this really necessary? Looks like you stuck it in there just to rhyme with "Verse was appalling". And the last line wasn't hittin' hard. Half-decent atbest.)
Your fighting is shit, trying to come off with more witt instead
Gettin "shafted" in is this, is the only way you'll "get a-head"
(Good wordplay again. Good bar.)
Don't tell me how you will kill me, i'm sick of that ruse
Flow cant compete, your shit really, bitch fuck your rules
(Bad bar. Wasn't really hittin' hard. You could've set some shit up with the 1st line Vern.)
Your drowning ya punk, I don't think your songs aren't special
It sounds like your drunk, You flow as well as solid metal
(Didn't quite get the 2nd line. Bad.)
I don't need to waste lines for votes, so go dickride bigben
Hollywood is so "wack" he reminds me of italian hitmen
(This bar was "okay". Half-decent.)

Review : When y'all got beef goin' on like this, I would expect to see some PERSONALS. All I really saw were generic disses, and played concepts on Hollywood's side. No real personals. Vern's verse had some filler that shouldn't have been there. And no personals on his side either. This was a crummy battle overall. I've read pieces from both y'all, and I know BOTH of you could come a lot harder then this shit. Research your opponent and dig some dirt up on 'em. If I was to vote, it would've been for Vern. He had some wordplay, and some harder hitting punches. Truthfully, you should rematch and really try to write some shit up on each other.
Peace, and stay up.
Both of y'all.


I actually feel what you saying, mind you, classic, look at the rhyme schemes in there, the first two bars where the best examples, i aint really swing the punches tho

1 thanks for the feed, but i just want you to feel what i was doing yo

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 11:40 PM
none of your rhyme was good, i smell something fishy bcuz u didnt even have any flow, its crystal clear who the better mc is, dont even try and say otherwise, u still only win 50 % of your battles, my percentage is far better sucker, you got 3 friends to vote for you, congradulations


none of your rhyme was goofd ether you little fuckin faggot

you call out people like wordwarlock, musicalman, fuckin rookies

your a little bitch with no skill, get over yourself, stop rhyming, or i will embarass you

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 11:47 PM
none of your rhyme was good, i smell something fishy bcuz u didnt even have any flow, its crystal clear who the better mc is, dont even try and say otherwise, u still only win 50 % of your battles, my percentage is far better sucker, you got 3 friends to vote for you, congradulations


fuck it im sick of bitching lilke this, but yo holly, dont keep running your mouth man, u lost fair and square, thats all, now ill stop posting shit in your thread, if you leave mine alone as well

1

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 06:18 AM
how can u say i lost fair and square, it usually takes a week or 2 just to get people to vote on some shit, u managed to get 3 people to vote in one hour, and they all happened to vote for you, as soon as i call u out and say something seems fishy, i get 2 people to say i was right, and my verse was better, u can have the win, bcuz i got the truth, and i want people to continue to put their oppinions on this, bcuz like i said, u wrote a bunch of garbage, none of it flowed or made any sense, and maybe i didnt have many punches, but my rhyme killed yours from a overall stand point, sit down little kid and observe the truth

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 06:47 AM
say what u want spoken, but this is my oppinion, some shaddy shit is going down and vern is in the mix, he got the win, i agreed with that, but im just trying to get the truth. I have no beef with u, and maybe your vote was honest, but lets be real here. Tuco is practically your girlfriend, and he hates on me more then everone else combined, thats just my take on things, let the truth come out, peace

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 08:42 AM
alright, thsi battle is officially reopened, thanks to vern's rules he established at the beginning, take a look at what u said vern........


"alrighty, since you wanted a battle and made the challenge here we go

1 round
16-20 lines

first too 5 votes

3-0 KO 4-1 TKO

no PMing people to vote, no hater, dickriding, or crew votes

you issued the challenge so spit first"


so u mentioned no "crew votes", spoken and yourself along with 5 other people are part of a crew called "oddjobzz" so spoken's vote doesnt count, and ive collected votes from t-ribe and classic, so the score is now officially 2-2, keep voting people

INF
07-06-2006, 11:07 AM
Flow - Hollywood
Punchlines - Hollywood
Creativity - Tie
Wordplay -Hollywood
Vocab -Tie


Overall- Hollywood

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 11:10 AM
yo infinity thanks for the vote, keep them coming, thats 3 for me, 2 for vern, keep voting

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:12 PM
alright, thsi battle is officially reopened, thanks to vern's rules he established at the beginning, take a look at what u said vern........


"alrighty, since you wanted a battle and made the challenge here we go

1 round
16-20 lines

first too 5 votes

3-0 KO 4-1 TKO

no PMing people to vote, no hater, dickriding, or crew votes

you issued the challenge so spit first"


so u mentioned no "crew votes", spoken and yourself along with 5 other people are part of a crew called "oddjobzz" so spoken's vote doesnt count, and ive collected votes from t-ribe and classic, so the score is now officially 2-2, keep voting people

i count 3-1 for me, or if u want to be a bitch its 4-2

honestly hollywood your verse was a peice of shit as well, dont think of yourself highly your punches hit like an old lady

my schemes sonned yours, as for flow, yea you got me, still my schemes and punches and wordplay beat you, you arrogant prick, stop this please i already won this, and as for the votes, i really dont need your bullshit, i havent talked to locust in three days, and honestly i dunno who the fuck spoken is, you already lost give it a rest


also, i disqualify your vote cuz infitnity was dickriding you, who the fuck is this cat? Ive never seen him vote on a battle here

3-1 w/e

INF
07-06-2006, 12:18 PM
I aint dickridin shit so you can hold up right there but beyond that , I'll vote on whatever the fuck I wanna vote on. Just cuz you aint ever seen me up in here voting dont mean that my vote dont count. You fixin to see me very often as a matter of fact cuz I'm bout tired a seein fake fucks like you up in here. Yeah, you gotta have all kinds but damn son, you a joke.

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:26 PM
I aint dickridin shit so you can hold up right there but beyond that , I'll vote on whatever the fuck I wanna vote on. Just cuz you aint ever seen me up in here voting dont mean that my vote dont count. You fixin to see me very often as a matter of fact cuz I'm bout tired a seein fake fucks like you up in here. Yeah, you gotta have all kinds but damn son, you a joke.

well im trying to proove a point, your vote counts, hold your fuckin toungue next time, dude, hollywood tries to say profound shit and come off lyrical and it turns in to shit....look how this wack mother fucker bitched me out of a battle that i already won

the point im trying to make is that, hollywood is a sore loser who catches feelings on the net, after losing a battle....fuck you for actin a bitch, and postin that shit, i tried to make ammends but obviously hollywood doesnt want to and thinks that every body is against him

27 years old and acts like a fuckin baby

fuck both of you, i already won in a knockout fashion, hollywood could never touch me if i were on my game, he prolly spent all night thinking about how he was gonna write the verse

if your vote counts than spokens does too

3-1 in my favor

vote

Longbongcilvaringz
07-06-2006, 12:27 PM
anyone can vote, stop being an idiot vern. you made the rules, follow them.

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:29 PM
anyone can vote, stop being an idiot vern. you made the rules, follow them.

no look, "I smell some shaddy shit", look him and hollywood are the same age

THEY MUST BE THE SAME PERSON

see its stupid when people bitch up a closed thread

INF
07-06-2006, 12:30 PM
Point is Vern , ur not even a real MC. You just write shit out of fantasy and thats where the real line is drawn.

Longbongcilvaringz
07-06-2006, 12:32 PM
ok is the thread still open?, cause on my count no one has won it yet. since spokens vote doesnt count.

INF
07-06-2006, 12:33 PM
You are more dense than you look. There are links to me and Hollywood that show you we are not the same person. Theres audio and pics. Ur most likely the first person that I'm gonna smash on up in here just cuz you askin for it.
no look, "I smell some shaddy shit", look him and hollywood are the same age

THEY MUST BE THE SAME PERSON

see its stupid when people bitch up a closed thread

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:34 PM
Point is Vern , ur not even a real MC. You just right shit out of fantasy and thats where the real line is drawn.

Yea i am, and hollywood isnt, hes a fuckin real-estate agent (hollywoodrealty) who thinks hes on some profound shit

fuck you and your bum buddy hollywood

im done with the wack mother fuckers on this forum

1

INF
07-06-2006, 12:36 PM
Where is an audio of you that I can hear as proof of that?
Yea i am, and hollywood isnt, hes a fuckin real-estate agent (hollywoodrealty) who thinks hes on some profound shit

fuck you and your bum buddy hollywood

im done with the wack mother fuckers on this forum

1

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:38 PM
Where is an audio of you that I can hear as proof of that?



itll be done as soon as i perfect my flow, so i dont sound like hollywoods drunken ass

INF
07-06-2006, 12:45 PM
Then you are not a true MC , not touching the mic an all. Mastering the ceremony of typed rhymes is not being a real MC. And by the way , you are a far way away from mastering this type shit here.

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:45 PM
Classic:
Review : When y'all got beef goin' on like this, I would expect to see some PERSONALS. All I really saw were generic disses, and played concepts on Hollywood's side. No real personals. Vern's verse had some filler that shouldn't have been there. And no personals on his side either. This was a crummy battle overall. I've read pieces from both y'all, and I know BOTH of you could come a lot harder then this shit. Research your opponent and dig some dirt up on 'em. If I was to vote, it would've been for Vern. He had some wordplay, and some harder hitting punches

say wha???

t-ribe vote dont count cuz hes a maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hater

so its like

4-1 now right TKO

shhhhh.... ur a bitch for doing that

1

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:48 PM
Then you are not a true MC , not touching the mic an all. Mastering the ceremony of typed rhymes is not being a real MC. And by the way , you are a far way away from mastering this type shit here.

not a true emcee, ha, you make me laugh yo, considering that i do free verses every day

and if you must know, i gave my mic to my cousin, when i get it back ill gladly post some tracks, and ive only been at this for a year, dont talk shit, your prolly nothing special ether

and btw, u started this bullshit, i was trying to get a point across that holly was biching me out

i think this qualifies you as a "hater" right, fuck your loose pussy

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:51 PM
fuck the net, fuck beefs, your intitled to your opinion

INF
07-06-2006, 12:52 PM
I keep a demo in my sig so fuck what you think it's about what you know and what you know is that you don't really want none. You the one that complained of tha vote being rigged an made a new thread. Don't worry about what I do, thats what started this. You was all concerned about me when you need to just do you.

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 12:54 PM
I keep a demo in my sig so fuck what you think it's about what you know and what you know is that you don't really want none. You the one that complained of tha vote being rigged an made a new thread. Don't worry about what I do, thats what started this. You was all concerned about me when you need to just do you.

w/e

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 01:46 PM
yo this is some wack shit, see vern, i did my research, and i see who u try and crew up with, plain and simple, u and spoken are part of a crew called oddjobbz, its written in your thread fool, so we are looking at vote count 3 for hollywood and 2 for vern. oh and illstatiq, your vote will count so go ahead and drop some truth on this bullshit thread. peace keep voting

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 01:49 PM
and u can look at every thread i ever written in, i have no clue who infinity the god is, all i can tell u is he see's the truth, but when i look through all your past threads, all i see is u riding spoken's dick, i saw that u are part of this oddjobbz consisting of the following wu corp people.......


spoken and vern part of oddjobzz
ya done

"O.J."
Vern
classic
god concept
spoken
DDD
Unseen


so thats on you, you made the rules, u said no crew voting, therefor spoken's vote doesnt count, tally it up bitch, 3-2 for me, keep voting

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 02:41 PM
yo correction, the score is 2-2, classic's vote dont count either, he is part of oddjobbz also, score is 2-2, keep voting out there

Classic
07-06-2006, 03:06 PM
Dude, in my whole review I posted my shit as "FEEDBACK".
Merely my view on the situation.
I even stated in my post that IF I was to vote, it would've been for Vern.
Therefore, I clearly posted it up just as my thoughts.
No intention of voting.
So yeah, my "vote" doesn't count.
I even said it myself. Read my posts more closely.

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 04:11 PM
that wasnt directed to you, i was in agreement with u, vern was trying to count your oppinion as a vote, so i was just letting him know not to count that, sorry if i made that seem directed towards you clasic, but keep on voting, 2-2 so far, peace

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 05:52 PM
2-1 t-ribes vote dont count nether, hes a mad hater

w/e ima let you see all see the truth, hollywood here obviously needs to take a lesson in Hip Hop 101, because its apparent that my schemes and personals sonned his....im not dissing im just saying, you really want to say your a better lyricist, fine, your entitled to your opinion, but it dont change the fact that all you did in your verse was say how your gonna kill me, or whatever you think shows you have "mad skill", while my bars were directed at you, the first bar meaning that you challenged me, "press bills" and placed a gamble to battle me, but the schemes are flawless with that..so dont even say shit, as for you holly, your condradicting

"Classic can vote as long as he dont vote for vern"

im sick of this shit man, just leave me alone, and ill leave you alone except if i see some hot shit

oDoUoSoKo
07-06-2006, 06:23 PM
I sonned you Dusk!
I give you that L, son.


been brushed my shoulder off homes, still fucking king^O^

lol

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 06:41 PM
vern, the only fact is that u have no clue who u are, u have changed your name more then u have won battles, u have had like 8 different names in a matter of one year, and u were even banned once from this site for acting wack, now u coming with some more wack shit, u cant piece sentences together properly, and your vocabulary is at a 6th grade level, i have lost 8 times and won 19, i think that should speak about who has more skills. and on this battle, i took u on all levels, lets just let people keep voting, the truth is close, peace

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 06:50 PM
vern, the only fact is that u have no clue who u are, u have changed your name more then u have won battles, u have had like 8 different names in a matter of one year, and u were even banned once from this site for acting wack, now u coming with some more wack shit, u cant piece sentences together properly, and your vocabulary is at a 6th grade level, i have lost 8 times and won 19, i think that should speak about who has more skills. and on this battle, i took u on all levels, lets just let people keep voting, the truth is close, peace

man where the fuck do you get off saying that you own shit? Mutha fucka i beat your ass down with the personals, now your just licking your wounds and catching feelings, u aint shit, you never will be, i could have given this battle waaaaay more time but i didnt because your wack, i do know myself, and i know im alot better than you, just cuz one person out of five people says your hot shit, you get your head stuck in the clouds, i got a pm from classic and he knows i could tear you, you fuckin contradicting-ass cunt, you take it like a bitch yo, and im sick of your bullshit, all you do is challenge rookies n shit, wordwarlock....U SERIOUS youve maybe battled like one decent person, and took him while he was off his game, get the fuck outta here, i dont need your bullshit, elevate your schemes and punches, actually make a diss.,....the hardest diss ive ever heard from your stupid ass was "your name is Tuco, one letter off from being taco, ive been good about this, tried to make amends, but you keep fucking bitching, and being an arrogant prick, GET YA DAMN DICK OUT YA MOUTH KID

oDoUoSoKo
07-06-2006, 06:57 PM
good lines in green
wack lines in pink
winning lines in yellow

I'm in RED hollywood in BLUE

once and for all, ima put this bitch to a hault
cut him up alive, then i cover his body up with salt
i catapult electric volts, your body jolts in resistance
i got a hidden vault filled with weapons, like for instance
grenades that will blow past your barracades, stop the sherades
you dont wanna battle me, i got rhymes for days, you go to gay parades
wave your colored flag, you love rainbows and lebrechans
you trying to defeat me is like a white woman marrying lois faracon
it cant be done, impossible, unattainable
hang you by the neck, left you strangled by the mic cable
as you gasp for air hoping god hears your prayers
you think you playing me, but your playing yourself like solitaire
ill break you beyond repair, you got no warranty
im the king sitten in the golden chair, feel the sovereignty
vernakular step aside, i cant even see you with binoculars
vehicular homicide, your body found by 2 officers
one talks into his radio, 187, short white male found dead on the road
the other grabs chalk, traces the body from head to toe
the cause of death was determined by the coroner
choked, lost his breath, he fucked with the best out of florida



How can i stress skill, my flow enough for your rambles to get?
When I press bills, guy knows he bluffs, but his gambles are set
Can't handle a vet,so, this guy calls out rookies instead
So give it a rest, Nope, I'll just throw out my hooks and hes dead
hollywood, you failed to impress me, with a style derailed n messy
Face it, even if you were a mailman, you couldn't adress me
The herse car is callin, hollywood gloats but aint trying-for-this
Verse was appalling, garbage bars and two lines were a diss
Your fighting is shit, trying to come off with more witt instead
Gettin "shafted" in is this, is the only way you'll "get a-head"
Don't tell me how you will kill me, i'm sick of that ruse
Flow cant compete, your shit really, bitch fuck your rules
Your drowning ya punk, I don't think your songs aren't special
It sounds like your drunk, You flow as well as solid metal
I don't need to waste lines for votes, so go dickride bigben
Hollywood is so "wack" he reminds me of italian hitmen



v=vernakula straight honesty broken down line by line, no fishy bs i was feelin verns multys more than hollywoods, altho i respect hollywood alot, true wu corp vet, but thats how i called it (close if u ask me)

oDoUoSoKo
07-06-2006, 07:02 PM
all you do is challenge rookies n shit, wordwarlock....U SERIOUS youve maybe battled like one decent person, and took him while he was off his game,\

aud spec...lol peace to both of ya, cut the crap

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 07:04 PM
im done wit him, peace

hollywoodrealty
07-06-2006, 09:10 PM
vern never has a battle that goes smooth, u are the drama queen, not to mention u cant take the heat, drAMA follows u bitch, u are beyond wack, keep voting

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 09:14 PM
vern never has a battle that goes smooth, u are the drama queen, not to mention u cant take the heat, drAMA follows u bitch, u are beyond wack, keep voting


lol peace

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 09:16 PM
i forget how many votes i have like 6 or something

anyways, this battles going nowhere

1

hollywoodrealty
07-07-2006, 06:49 AM
6 votes, u count about as good as u rap, take a rest homey, time for retirement again, or maybe another name change, that seems to help

hollywoodrealty
07-07-2006, 06:58 AM
all u gotta do is just stop having your crew vote on your battles and everything will go smooth, and stop crying like a baby when someone calls u out, it shows your immaturity, and stop changing your god damn name already, who the fuck are u this week?

WARPATH
07-07-2006, 09:51 AM
Hollywood came with a more creative, funny, better flowing verse. Vern came with some punches but there was no momentum behind them.

Vote Hollywood

and that's just being real, I know verns gonna come in here and bitch and say my vote don't count, and it's all good, I never had beef with this kid, I even tried to be cool with him, but he continues to expose himself.

Props to hollywood for speaking out on some of these groupies, you don't need to apologize to them.

VernakuLa
07-07-2006, 11:12 AM
Hollywood came with a more creative, funny, better flowing verse. Vern came with some punches but there was no momentum behind them.

Vote Hollywood

and that's just being real, I know verns gonna come in here and bitch and say my vote don't count, and it's all good, I never had beef with this kid, I even tried to be cool with him, but he continues to expose himself.

Props to hollywood for speaking out on some of these groupies, you don't need to apologize to them.

ill take that vote

2-2

VernakuLa
07-07-2006, 01:27 PM
yes holly im beyond wack, then what does that make you?

hollywoodrealty
07-07-2006, 04:06 PM
ILL JUST GIVE U A QUOTE FROM ONE OF MY RHYMES VERN.........

" I will not change my style, you either hate it or you love it
Im giving you bitches the boot, ya you know where you can shove it"


ENOUGH DRAMA, KEPP VOTING PEOPLE

VernakuLa
07-07-2006, 04:08 PM
ILL JUST GIVE U A QUOTE FROM ONE OF MY RHYMES VERN.........

" I will not change my style, you either hate it or you love it
Im giving you bitches the boot, ya you know where you can shove it"


ENOUGH DRAMA, KEPP VOTING PEOPLE

u can have the damn win if u really want it, i dont care honestly

hollywoodrealty
07-07-2006, 04:10 PM
Thanks For The Vote Charging Soldier, Like Vern Said Its 2-2

VernakuLa
07-07-2006, 04:11 PM
Thanks For The Vote Charging Soldier, Like Vern Said Its 2-2

chyeas im sick of the bitchin, nice battle hollywood, im out like a fat kid in dodgeball

hollywoodrealty
07-07-2006, 04:26 PM
Im Not Gonna Take This As A Win, If U Are Backing Down, Then Just Forget This Whole Battle, But Why Go Through So Much To Just Quit, If That Is What U Choose Then Consider It A Draw, Peace

VernakuLa
07-07-2006, 05:08 PM
ok...but yo, ill stay out of your shit but if i see good shit, ill say its good

peace yo

VernakuLa
07-07-2006, 05:25 PM
Yo Vern...you always do this when the votes are almost wrapped up...lol...


u know me too well then.........

hollywoodrealty
07-08-2006, 07:50 AM
people vote and end the misery

White N Dangerous
07-10-2006, 08:16 PM
[quote=VernakuLa]I'm in RED hollywood in BLUE

once and for all, ima put this bitch to a hault
cut him up alive, then i cover his body up with salt

ight feeli'n this good shit so far

i catapult electric volts, your body jolts in resistance
i got a hidden vault filled with weapons, like for instance

ight good first line hope the 2nd line leads up to something

grenades that will blow past your barracades, stop the sherades
you dont wanna battle me, i got rhymes for days, you go to gay parades

lol ok

wave your colored flag, you love rainbows and lebrechans
you trying to defeat me is like a white woman marrying lois faracon

i didn't get this one

it cant be done, impossible, unattainable
hang you by the neck, left you strangled by the mic cable

word nice

as you gasp for air hoping god hears your prayers
you think you playing me, but your playing yourself like solitaire

hahahahah :D

ill break you beyond repair, you got no warranty
im the king sitten in the golden chair, feel the sovereignty

nice wordplay and vocab

vernakular step aside, i cant even see you with binoculars
vehicular homicide, your body found by 2 officers

ight good name play

one talks into his radio, 187, short white male found dead on the road
the other grabs chalk, traces the body from head to toe

no

the cause of death was determined by the coroner
choked, lost his breath, he fucked with the best out of florida

ight

overall: 7/10


How can i stress skill, my flow enough for your rambles to get?
When I press bills, guy knows he bluffs, but his gambles are set

ight str8 opener i wanna c more

Can't handle a vet,so, this guy calls out rookies instead
So give it a rest, Nope, I'll just throw out my hooks and hes dead

u just called urself a rookie?

hollywood, you failed to impress me, with a style derailed n messy
Face it, even if you were a mailman, you couldn't adress me

HAHAHHA :vroar:

The herse car is callin, hollywood gloats but aint trying-for-this
Verse was appalling, garbage bars and two lines were a diss

hope this is gettin sumwhere

Your fighting is shit, trying to come off with more witt instead
Gettin "shafted" in this, is the only way you'll "get a-head"

hahah nice

Don't tell me how you will kill me, i'm sick of that ruse
Flow cant compete, your shit really, bitch fuck your rules

fuck his rules hahah

Your drowning ya punk, I don't think your songs aren't special
It sounds like your drunk, You flow as well as solid metal

lmao good shit

I don't need to waste lines for votes, so go dickride bigben
Hollywood is so "wack" he reminds me of italian hitmen

LMMMFAMFOAO


overall:8.5/10

my vote/ vern

good battle u guys

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 10:54 PM
thanks for thoroughness white, 3-2 peace

keep up the voting so we can get a winner

hollywoodrealty
07-11-2006, 06:50 AM
sorry i cant count white and dangerous vote, he is too white to vote on battles, sorry

hollywoodrealty
07-11-2006, 06:51 AM
hahaha just fucken around, white and dangerous is my boy, thanks for the feedback, and yes, the score is 3-2 in favor of vern, keep voting out there

Da Dishonourable Don
07-12-2006, 03:51 AM
both of you just wasted valuable time arguing 'bout shit all, who cares who votes, as long as they give a good reason why homie won, then there shouldn't be a problem, it's not like Vern told me to come vote on his battle and choose him, I came into here on my own account, and I honestly think that Vern took this battle!

My vote= Vern

no dickriding what so ever, just my opinion, so if you want to take my vote away, by any means go ahead, but I think that shit's whack, 'cause I just battled Dusk, we're on the same little team, but that doesn't mean I know dude, I'll battle anyone anytime, win or lose, I just don't give a shit!

VillainousV
07-12-2006, 04:15 PM
Vernakular- Style was too monotext. ALL it was was just the same rhyme scheme throughout the whole verse. Overall though, the lines were good. Your style is more geared towards 4-8 bar battles. Not full 16+ ones. 1 yo.

Hollywood- Yo you explain your punchlines too much. A good rhyme should have 2 meanings beneath it. One for the "general people" (your everyday person whose JUST reading it), and One for the "hardcore" hip-hop people who dig deeper to find the hidden meanings in shit. Don't STAY deep though, because people generally don't like reading (at first glance) a ton of abstract shit that it looks like only YOU know what it means. 1 yo.

My Vote: Vernakular. word is bond.

VernakuLa
07-12-2006, 04:25 PM
thanks to DDD and verseatyle

it would be 5-2, but, i dont really know how holly feels about dons vote, however it would be 4-2 without

peace bofe of you

hollywoodrealty
07-12-2006, 05:13 PM
just close it already, u earned the win, just stop the hate, peace

VernakuLa
07-12-2006, 05:25 PM
just close it already, u earned the win, just stop the hate, peace

lol, no hating left cousin, good battle tho

stay up

YODDLE!!!

DREW-DIE$EL
07-16-2006, 02:00 PM
glad to see all this drama is over.

mashqauck
07-16-2006, 03:35 PM
I like how they was all fighting like "Yo your verse sucked, you aren't an emcee, blah blah blah.." and then in the end it's like "good battle, you deserved it"

tha god concept
07-22-2006, 12:07 PM
hollywood been spittin the truth since back then.........................i got ya back homie and i no u got the front

jallainINS
07-22-2006, 12:59 PM
wow, man both of you need to stop the arguin and stuff. if your gonna be attackin and arguin like that do it in PMs or something, or start a thread called noone read this wack crap cuz it took me like 8 times longer then it should have to get through this thread. i had to read like 15 posts from the two of you bickerin. jeeze, anyways i guess its over and i dont need to vote so ill just shut up and hopefully you two will too.

VernakuLa
07-30-2006, 01:53 AM
i think i need one more