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Classic
07-05-2006, 08:55 PM
Fuck, it I'll set this shit up.
Verses due by midnight.
I know you see this shit.
Writin' shit now, get ya pen son.

7 bars. 'Nuff said.
Y'all know tha rules.

VernakuLa
07-05-2006, 08:57 PM
why are you wastin bars on this fuckin red skinned faggot

T-ribe
07-05-2006, 09:10 PM
No dick ryder votes from any of these kats, all the shit thats been said bout my style is from all u lil bitches. I'll tear down each of you one by one.


"O.J."
Vern
classic
god concept
spoken
DDD
Unseen

Classic
07-05-2006, 09:32 PM
Fuck your WHACK STYLE, you'll get RIPPED-REGUARDLESS!
Say I got Vern's dick in my mouth? BUT YOU RIDE THAT SHIT THE HARDEST!
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=16644
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=22062
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=21527
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=16644
Oh Wow! You're an ON-LINE DUDE! Couldn't equal my victories if you took your's TIMES-TWO.
Let's see EXACTLY how many battles you've won, here, I'LL EVEN REMIND YOU!
T-ribe.............................0wins............ ....2defeat(Jamel)(Dusk)
Your battles have WHACK beginnings, WEAK middles, and even LACK CLOSERS!
And your location says your "ELEVATED", now I know you're a WHACK-POSER!
I could put your "LIFE ON THE LINE", like fighting a "CAUGHT BASS".
You're TOSSED-TRASH, pick apart your brain, just to expose what you "THOUGHT-LAST!"
You ain't focused enough T-ribe, sit back and check the LINGUISTICS.
I'm fuckin' BALLISTIC, this shit's over, I'm "gifted", something you don't even get to open at CHRISTMAS!
On a personal level, your birth itself was a CONSTANT-ISSUE!
Your pops shoud've beat you off into his hand, AND TOSSED THE TISSUE!
Lay you in a CASKET BURIED, sad how your TACTICS-VARY.
I'll "key up a DICTIONARY", you play "scrabble" to practice your VOCABULARY.

7 bars, easy shit.

oDoUoSoKo
07-05-2006, 09:45 PM
No dick ryder votes from any of these kats, all the shit thats been said bout my style is from all u lil bitches. I'll tear down each of you one by one.


"O.J."
Vern
classic
god concept
spoken
DDD
Unseen

they are also affiliated with me..and we both kno u aint tear me down

oDoUoSoKo
07-05-2006, 09:47 PM
btw great verse class

Classic
07-05-2006, 10:18 PM
This dude is gettin' passed around like a blunt.
11:17. 43 minutes left.

T-ribe
07-06-2006, 12:59 AM
I hit you wit a ruse/ and boi you got screwed/ I leave you marked up and scared up like tattoos/ You hadnt got a clue/ I'm playin you like a game/
First drop a Classic verse/ than u can use the name/
Go against the grain/ ya Cheddar Bob'n ya-self/ Postin up links on how I dugg ya crew out/ Get the foot out ya mouth/ Please talk some sense/
"I'm 6-0" but ya haven't won since/Ya like a chain link fence/ I see right through you/ I rain heavy on ya brain like July monsoon's do/

T-ribe
07-06-2006, 01:01 AM
Before you say shit about the time
I droped at 11:59 in my area.

T-ribe
07-06-2006, 01:02 AM
*sigh*

Set up the thread...You Drop First...

Yeh your on the list, you can take it like you want it. I bow down to no one. Thats Real

T-ribe
07-06-2006, 01:09 AM
Fuck your WHACK STYLE, you'll get RIPPED-REGUARDLESS!
Say I got Vern's dick in my mouth? BUT YOU RIDE THAT SHIT THE HARDEST!
**http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=16644**

http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=22062
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=21527

**http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=16644**


Now why the fuck would you post the same link up twice? Yo this is to a battle that hasent even been finished yet. Yous a fuckin lame Duck. Great tactics think Slower type Faster.






Oh Wow! You're an ON-LINE DUDE! Couldn't equal my victories if you took your's TIMES-TWO.
Let's see EXACTLY how many battles you've won, here, I'LL EVEN REMIND YOU!
T-ribe.............................0wins............ ....2defeat(Jamel)(Dusk)
Your battles have WHACK beginnings, WEAK middles, and even LACK CLOSERS!
And your location says your "ELEVATED", now I know you're a WHACK-POSER!
I could put your "LIFE ON THE LINE", like fighting a "CAUGHT BASS".
You're TOSSED-TRASH, pick apart your brain, just to expose what you "THOUGHT-LAST!"
You ain't focused enough T-ribe, sit back and check the LINGUISTICS.
I'm fuckin' BALLISTIC, this shit's over, I'm "gifted", something you don't even get to open at CHRISTMAS!
On a personal level, your birth itself was a CONSTANT-ISSUE!
Your pops shoud've beat you off into his hand, AND TOSSED THE TISSUE!
Lay you in a CASKET BURIED, sad how your TACTICS-VARY.
I'll "key up a DICTIONARY", you play "scrabble" to practice your VOCABULARY.

7 bars, easy shit.

.

Classic
07-06-2006, 01:54 AM
Look kid, I posted my verse up in like fuckin' 10 minutes.
Get off my dick son.
How long did it take you to post your shit?
I gave you like 2-3 hours.
PLus, your shit in no way, shape, or form stacks up to my shit.
Let's get some votes, fuck this shit talkin'.

Robert
07-06-2006, 03:47 AM
Ok ill break this shit down.....

Fuck your WHACK STYLE, you'll get RIPPED-REGUARDLESS!
Say I got Vern's dick in my mouth? BUT YOU RIDE THAT SHIT THE HARDEST!
(Ok opener, nice personal and multi)

Oh Wow! You're an ON-LINE DUDE! Couldn't equal my victories if you took your's TIMES-TWO.
Let's see EXACTLY how many battles you've won, here, I'LL EVEN REMIND YOU!
(kept up with the personals)

Your battles have WHACK beginnings, WEAK middles, and even LACK CLOSERS!
And your location says your "ELEVATED", now I know you're a WHACK-POSER!
(hmmm this is ok but i dont know if this is hitting, i mean anyone can say another person is wak or gay or whatever, you could have done this better)

I could put your "LIFE ON THE LINE", like fighting a "CAUGHT BASS".
You're TOSSED-TRASH, pick apart your brain, just to expose what you "THOUGHT-LAST!"
(this is ill, nice multi's and solid punch)

You ain't focused enough T-ribe, sit back and check the LINGUISTICS.
I'm fuckin' BALLISTIC, this shit's over, I'm "gifted", something you don't even get to open at CHRISTMAS!
(the punch here doesnt hit that hard for mine but still nice structure and multis)

On a personal level, your birth itself was a CONSTANT-ISSUE!
Your pops shoud've beat you off into his hand, AND TOSSED THE TISSUE!
(this is ok but its bin done a million times, still keeping up with the punches...)

Lay you in a CASKET BURIED, sad how your TACTICS-VARY.
I'll "key up a DICTIONARY", you play "scrabble" to practice your VOCABULARY.
(lol, this had me laughing good wordplay and a good punch)
Overall a solid verse with some clever punches and good personals. Multis were good and so too the structure....
and T-ribe......

I hit you wit a ruse/ and boi you got screwed/ I leave you marked up and scared up like tattoos/ You hadnt got a clue/ I'm playin you like a game/
(this is alright but there aint any real punches here)

First drop a Classic verse/ than u can use the name/
(yeah i like this line, nice punch)

Go against the grain/ ya Cheddar Bob'n ya-self/ Postin up links on how I dugg ya crew out/ Get the foot out ya mouth/
(nice, getting the personals happening....)

Please talk some sense/
"I'm 6-0" but ya haven't won since/Ya like a chain link fence/ I see right through you/ I rain heavy on ya brain like July monsoon's do/
(nice finish)

Pretty good verse...
This battle for me wasnt as clear cut as some might think but Classic took it a dope verse, the scrabble call was a killer and so to the life line punch, overall you got it but to T-ribe's credit he had a nice verse wit ok personals, you just needed some more punches in there....
peace

Classic
07-06-2006, 02:37 PM
Good shit Robert.
It's great to see a bar-by-bar breakdown.

1-0, my favor.

Luther Large
07-06-2006, 03:30 PM
punches-classic
flow-tie (i guess)
wordplay-classic
crtvy-classic (but it was close)
vocab-classic

vote=classic

dope verses by both

peace...

Classic
07-06-2006, 04:21 PM
Good shit Luther.
2-0, my favor.

Da Dishonourable Don
07-06-2006, 05:11 PM
I don't even know why this ferry's mentioning me in his lil drama over here, DDD, that's me sucka, you really want to spar wit me fag?, 100 bars if you have any courage in you, fuckin' dick mentioning me like I even know who the fuck you are, matter of fact I'm a set up that thread!

Classic your verse ripped this fucker apart!

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 08:33 PM
I don't even know why this ferry's mentioning me in his lil drama over here, DDD, that's me sucka, you really want to spar wit me fag?, 100 bars if you have any courage in you, fuckin' dick mentioning me like I even know who the fuck you are, matter of fact I'm a set up that thread!

Classic your verse ripped this fucker apart!

my nigga don yo, lol, peace fam

ps get on msn clown!!!!lol

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T-ribe
07-06-2006, 08:34 PM
2-0 right now
It nothin, I'm not the one too back down from any challenge
It is hella funny how I struck a nerve wit most the Odd Jobs
now errbody wanna call me out. I aint scarred. Whats really funny is I'm rydin solo in this war, straight Rambo style.

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 08:36 PM
2-0 right now
It nothin, I'm not the one too back down from any challenge
It is hella funny how I struck a nerve wit most the Odd Jobs
now errbody wanna call me out. I aint scarred. Whats really funny is I'm rydin solo in this war, straight Rambo style.

but your not killing shit now are you?

T-ribe
07-06-2006, 08:38 PM
I killed your shit. Easy!



but your not killing shit now are you?

VernakuLa
07-06-2006, 08:39 PM
I killed your shit. Easy!

lol, peace

WARPATH
07-07-2006, 09:25 AM
why are you wastin bars on this fuckin red skinned faggot

I like how he siad this from the saftey of his own home.

Thai Gear
07-07-2006, 06:54 PM
No dick ryder votes from any of these kats, all the shit thats been said bout my style is from all u lil bitches. I'll tear down each of you one by one.


"O.J."
Vern
classic
god concept
spoken
DDD
Unseen

they are also affiliated with me..and we both kno u aint tear me down

t-ribe don't talk shit they also affiliated with me and i honestly think you don't want to fuck with me either

T-ribe
07-07-2006, 08:15 PM
^^^^^^His names not on the list, yet and still he stands in line to get murked. What a fuckin joke

oDoUoSoKo
07-07-2006, 08:40 PM
lol ribe i didnt have a problem with you but if ur gonna bs than yull get it back, and incase uve been sleeping...oj is part of bom which i run and ssc is also in so...nice job

T-ribe
07-07-2006, 08:40 PM
Fuk look at this shit.


what? u serious is eveyone on the website me
and if i am everyone u claim why wouldn't i battle u i beat before i can do it again so hop off my dick and stop thinking i'm everyone on the fucking site first it was that i was exile and spinna now its that i'm shadowray wtf? don't u ever get tired of being wrong and u talk so much shit like "ur 14 then ur 17" get ur lies straight mister pussy out of a battle against aud and use ur fake cousins account to get someone that doesn't exist "mad" i was fucking joking with u on my fucking last post since we r in the same set now u dipshit


I see that Ya crew is real tight!!!!!! This shit keeps getting better and better.
U guys keep actin like the Free World and I'll be B.Rabbit. Ya whole crew and than some are on some 8 mile shit, commin at one Man.

Classic
07-08-2006, 01:01 AM
Fuk look at this shit.



I see that Ya crew is real tight!!!!!! This shit keeps getting better and better.
U guys keep actin like the Free World and I'll be B.Rabbit. Ya whole crew and than some are on some 8 mile shit, commin at one Man.

Tell me about it.
You think you're 1,000 times better then what you actually are.
Perhaps you should watch yo mouth.
Cause that thing will get you into some shit.
Besides, you're the one who called out all of O.J.
And you can't even handle a single member of us.
Let's just get a final vote in here for the K.O.
Everyone knows I smashed this pussy.

T-ribe
07-08-2006, 02:04 AM
Words were spoke by members of ya crew. All I did was stand up for mine. if innocent bystandards gotta get stomped cuz their in the way that whats it gotta be. And for the record I have neva bragged bout my skill nore have I eva bitched bout a vote that has went against me. So that shit bout me thinkin I'm 1000 times betta than I really am is a falacie. Its just that I wont bow down when I'm wrongfully confronted and kats take that as me being bigheaded.

Thai Gear
07-08-2006, 07:24 AM
^^^^^^His names not on the list, yet and still he stands in line to get murked. What a fuckin joke

stop talking shit
yes i'm part of the crew i was judge to see gets in
and i see u want to die at i early age
also u have denied alot of votes

so you have list of people ur gonna "murk" i guess i'm on it too so set up the thread

WARPATH
07-08-2006, 05:25 PM
Tell me about it.
You think you're 1,000 times better then what you actually are.
Perhaps you should watch yo mouth.
Cause that thing will get you into some shit.
Besides, you're the one who called out all of O.J.
And you can't even handle a single member of us.
Let's just get a final vote in here for the K.O.
Everyone knows I smashed this pussy.

Classic it sounds like your talking about yourself in this post, acting like your the greatest person to bless the battlefield.

Why do you post links in your battles? That's whack, that's not skill.

You force your lines to rhyme, a bunch of weak words meshed together, and since everyone's busy returning your jock rides, you never get the real critiscism you deserve.

I'm just saying you talk a lot of shit, but i'm not gonna be like all the pussies on here and kiss your ass. Your always swaying votes in the battle. Just drop your verse and shut the fuck up and let people vote. Did you ever try reading your shit out loud?

I mean really, Mount Olympus kid? C'mon, where you really from? Greenbo Alabama? I'm just saying kids from the burbs shouldn't act hard on the net, because it keeps you from getting a tan.

T-ribe
07-08-2006, 05:44 PM
^^^^OHHHHHHH SHit thats real!

Classic
07-08-2006, 06:50 PM
Classic it sounds like your talking about yourself in this post, acting like your the greatest person to bless the battlefield.

Why do you post links in your battles? That's whack, that's not skill.

You force your lines to rhyme, a bunch of weak words meshed together, and since everyone's busy returning your jock rides, you never get the real critiscism you deserve.

I'm just saying you talk a lot of shit, but i'm not gonna be like all the pussies on here and kiss your ass. Your always swaying votes in the battle. Just drop your verse and shut the fuck up and let people vote. Did you ever try reading your shit out loud?

I mean really, Mount Olympus kid? C'mon, where you really from? Greenbo Alabama? I'm just saying kids from the burbs shouldn't act hard on the net, because it keeps you from getting a tan.


I don't have a problem with criticism.
You find things wrong in my verse? Criticize me, by all means.
But make it constructive and not offensive. Quality feedback.
And please elaborate on how I sway votes.
And there's really only a few things in your post here that I'm findin' wrong.
Yeah, I talk shit. But who doesn't? Not to mention it's usually only after someone has run their mouth to me.
My rhymes forced? Quote me on some, point it out for me. So I can look back and correct that shit.
And if they're just a bunch of weak words meshed together, why is it beating people?
Because it must not be.
And the links in battles are for personals.
When you dig up information on someone and type the personal, maybe people don't know in the battlefield what the bar is about. Then it makes the punch less effective then what it really is.
So all they have to do is *CLICK* "OHHH, so that's what the punch is about!"
And the bar becomes a lot more effective then what they actually thought it was.
Not to mention I usually put them in hyperlinked words in the punchline.
And I'm guessin' that little part at the end was just some insult, but enough has been said.

oDoUoSoKo
07-08-2006, 08:40 PM
Classic it sounds like your talking about yourself in this post, acting like your the greatest person to bless the battlefield.

Why do you post links in your battles? That's whack, that's not skill.

You force your lines to rhyme, a bunch of weak words meshed together, and since everyone's busy returning your jock rides, you never get the real critiscism you deserve.

I'm just saying you talk a lot of shit, but i'm not gonna be like all the pussies on here and kiss your ass. Your always swaying votes in the battle. Just drop your verse and shut the fuck up and let people vote. Did you ever try reading your shit out loud?

I mean really, Mount Olympus kid? C'mon, where you really from? Greenbo Alabama? I'm just saying kids from the burbs shouldn't act hard on the net, because it keeps you from getting a tan.

charging soldier to the RESCUE













































*laffs as hard as he possibly can without blowin milk from his nose*:tease:

T-ribe
07-09-2006, 01:14 AM
I don't have a problem with criticism.
You find things wrong in my verse? Criticize me, by all means.
But make it constructive and not offensive. Quality feedback.
And please elaborate on how I sway votes.
And there's really only a few things in your post here that I'm findin' wrong.
Yeah, I talk shit. But who doesn't? Not to mention it's usually only after someone has run their mouth to me.
My rhymes forced? Quote me on some, point it out for me. So I can look back and correct that shit.
And if they're just a bunch of weak words meshed together, why is it beating people?
Because it must not be.
And the links in battles are for personals.
When you dig up information on someone and type the personal, maybe people don't know in the battlefield what the bar is about. Then it makes the punch less effective then what it really is.
So all they have to do is *CLICK* "OHHH, so that's what the punch is about!"
And the bar becomes a lot more effective then what they actually thought it was.
Not to mention I usually put them in hyperlinked words in the punchline.
And I'm guessin' that little part at the end was just some insult, but enough has been said.







I mean this and that abouts that, and....and .....and.......Fuck you sure did try to explain yourself Classic. "My rhymes forced? Quote me on some, point it out for me. So I can look back and correct that shit." Why the fuck would you care soooooo much about what someone else thinks. See I don't give 2 squirts of piss bout what U, anyone else in ya crew or the corp think bout my rhymes. I can not belive all you lil pussies got soooo fuckin offended and quick to jump the gun on some shit I said. The reality of it is, is that only Dusk has beat me and everybody want a peice of Tribe. WHY if I'm soo fuckin weak why does all you lil kats wann knock me out the box. If my rhymes are shit than whats the point? It not like you fools are gonna embaress me so bad that I'm gonna leave the site. This shows how self concious and petty each and everyone of you are for getting all huffy and puffy and taking this shit personal.


*Laughs sooo hard he pisses on Dusk's moms*
4 the record she loves the golden showers

WARPATH
07-09-2006, 12:12 PM
Let me quote you on some shit.........

Swaying-
This dude is gettin' passed around like a blunt.
11:17. 43 minutes left.


Swaying-
Look kid, I posted my verse up in like fuckin' 10 minutes.
Get off my dick son.
How long did it take you to post your shit?
I gave you like 2-3 hours.
PLus, your shit in no way, shape, or form stacks up to my shit.
Let's get some votes, fuck this shit talkin'.


Kissing ass
Good shit Robert.
It's great to see a bar-by-bar breakdown.

1-0, my favor.


Kissing ass
Good shit Luther.
2-0, my favor.


Swaying
Everyone knows I smashed this pussy.

Swaying
LMAO. Slippy could AT LEAST check in to say he saw this and is postin' back.
If he doesn't show up tomorrow, this is a "no-show".


Kissing Ass
Appreciate the votes.
2-0, my favor.
Keep em comin'.


Swaying
Where's the verse at?
You wanted a rematch so bad.


More ass kissing
Much appreciated Alesco.


and more kissing of the buttox
1-0, appreciated Num2Son.


Swaying
2-0.
Need 1 more fo' K.O.
Lets get it!


Swaying

You gonna respond back or what?


Swaying
You did feed quite a lot in your verse.
I don't do 2nd/2 rounds.
I do rematches.
Let the votes settle this, win or loss.
So, if you'd like a rematch after this.
Then that's fine.
May the best man win.


Now go search these quotes in your battles, because they're taken out of context. You'll get a clearer understanding of what I mean.

Just drop your verse, let people vote.

WARPATH
07-09-2006, 01:10 PM
Forced lines:


You ain't focused enough T-ribe, sit back and check the LINGUISTICS.
I'm fuckin' BALLISTIC, this shit's over, I'm "gifted", something you don't even get to open at CHRISTMAS!
On a personal level, your birth itself was a CONSTANT-ISSUE!
Your pops shoud've beat you off into his hand, AND TOSSED THE TISSUE!
Lay you in a CASKET BURIED, sad how your TACTICS-VARY.
I'll "key up a DICTIONARY", you play "scrabble" to practice your VOCABULARY.




Two rounds you've been "burnt", I know I've HEATED-THIS-KID.
Best move you can MAKE now is STRAIGHT DELETIN'-YOUR-SHIT.

Positive SCORING your MISSION? Classic TORE Slippy for HIS-DISSIN'.
All Slippy does is BITCH and COMPLAIN, BigBen should make a FORUM-FOR-HIS-BITCHIN'.
I've said it before Slippy, I continue to MAKE-YOU-MELT. Can't beat me alone, go SEEK-SOME-HELP.
And now everyone knows you RIDE dick, you SIGN ON-LINE with a SEAT-BELT.
Your just DROPPING-SHIT-GAY, STOP-POPPIN'-SHIT, just go the OPPOSITE-WAY.
The only chance this dude has BEATIN' ME WOULD BE on OPPOSITE-DAY.

No MORE back and FOURTH with Slippy, leave him in the DIRT, MURDERED for a THIRD-SPIT.
Look at his signature, we can tell his autograph ain't WORTH-SHIT.

You never IMPRESSED me AT-ALL, so even when you TEST-ME, doesn't make LESS-OF-ME AT-ALL.
And you're comebacks are weak, so the benefit of you going 2nd, doesn't STRESS-ME-AT-ALL.

I'm always the FIRST-TO-SPIT, beatin' you easy, I've only DISPERSED-A-BIT.
But even "pidgeons" fly over this "pimp", cause they know he ain't WORTH-A-SHIT.
I'll RATTLE-YOU, posted our battle in tha general chat, now who you gon TATTLE-TO?
Disadvantage I'm spittin' first, but advantage is that I BATTLE-YOU.
You'll only "sink" to the DEPTH-OF-ME, after this battle, even' you'll give "REP"-TO-ME.
Even with a STAIRMASTER in this thread, you still couldn't STEP-TO-ME.



Gettin' the "JITTERS, BUG"? Cause my flows cause a SICKER-BUZZ.
You're NOT-HOT, find someone SICKER-CUZ

I'll rip this SHIT QUICK, Slippy a Pimp? BITCH, you've been MISAPPOINTED.
Nobody's impressed by you, in fact, the whole site has been DISAPPOINTED.

I'll make you MELT-DUDE, cause NOBODY has ever FELT-YOU.
You'd SHELF-WHO? SOMBODY QUICK JUMP IN, wait...nobody wants to HELP YOU!
Get smoked like a WEED-HIT, Your good? I never BELIEVED-IT.
Part of your diet, YOU NEED DICK. You have bad structure, cuz ya verse, NODBOY WANTED TO READ-IT.
Don't try to GRAPPLE-ME, you ride DICK, EQUIPPED like a SADDLE-BE.
Get TACKLED-FREE, over 130 posts, and the majority of those was to promote a BATTLE WITH ME!




Facts you neglect are TRUE, further on, your REJECT has GREW.
I've smashed and bashed emcees, with TEN TIMES THE RESPECT AS YOU!
Tha battlefield CRIMINAL, kill you with messages SUBLIMNAL.
I can EAT-YOU or BEAT-YOU, and still keep my talent MINIMAL.
Are you done BITCHIN? You at a loss of breath, like a LUNG'S MISSIN'.
We're done LISTENIN', you couldn't flow right if you took your "TONGUE FISHING".
You'll get BLAZED and BLIND, I'm a Tyrant, makin' examples of faggish "SIGNS".

Quote:
Originally Posted by Slippy The Pimp
shit the fack ip

Ha ha pussy you got jokes I got jokes too, unlimited lines house rules bring it on cock lips.

Next time you try diss me, use some more ORIGINAL LINES.
Bitch, you couldn't "RIP" SHEETS, get SLICED and DICED, chopped down to MINCE MEAT.
How are you a pimp SLIPPY? In my last bar, I had to instruct you how to DISS ME.




Dusk wants a Battle? Classic will FLOOR-HIM, in every category I've TORE-HIM.
Dusk is a strayed MESS, so like the REST, you should read his verse then IGNORE-HIM.
You wanted an "open challenge", I do these things for FITNESS.
I've been told not to mess with this rookie, cause our levels are DIFFERENT.

get credit the MOST, step on ya face like the gas pedal, I'll FLOOR-IT.
Your response verse well be just like your PERONSAL (http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=11821), you should apologize FOR-IT.



I'm castin' a CURSE, Gonna beat Classic? NAW!! You just havin' a WET-DREAM.
I'll take ya LIFE, run in ya house with a mask and a KNIFE like a SCENE from SCREAM.

Spok3n!! Our first world BLUNDER.
I reversed my THREAD, INSTEAD of above, I diss the bitch UNDER.
I'll get this dude PUNK'D, like Ashton KUTCHER.
How you gon' battle Classic? You couldn't handle "beef" wit a BUTCHER. (http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=10451)
I'll have you runnin' like SPORTS, when I'm commin' wit FORCE.
Spok3n's like midget sex, always "cummin" up SHORT.
This was over before started, go 'head and say I WON.
If this was golf, I'd shoot this "BIRDIE" and put a "HOLE-IN-ONE".
No more FUN, y'all should know I'm gonna beat his whack POSER.
The only time he comes wit da "HEAT" is when he BEATS to a shaq POSTER.
Get smoked like a CIGAR, I'll make you see STARS.
This dude wants be a "club-owner" but he just can't "RUN-BARS".
And before y'all POST a VOTE, take this to CONSIDER.
This dudes parents can get divorced and they'd still be BROTHER-AND-SISTER.



Tell you what, I'll go first so you can copy and TWIST-THIS.
Spin it like a DISCUSS, hit you in the face and correct yo LISPIS.

In my honest opinion, out of the seven battle I read you won 2 of them.

One against J-Man and one against Slippy. Just take a little bit more time to come up with something creative. Don't force your lines, don't post links in your battles becuase links don't rhyme. If it were a real battle you wouldn't be able to post a link to it, everyone would just look at you dum if you tried to rap this......

http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/editpost.php?do=editpost&p=508062

try and come up with somthing funny or fun. Put some effort into making it flow. Get a tape recorder and read it out loud, if it sounds whack, then it is whack.

Classic
07-09-2006, 02:22 PM
All those lines are not forced. Maybe one or two.
You have to mix up words in order to get good rhymes.
Forcing rhymes is different.
That's like intentionally placing an insult/name-call at the end of a line to force it to end-rhyme with the line above it.
And this ISN'T a real face-to-face battle, so I can use lines with links and what-not to get the punch across. Otherwise, that battle would be filled with mediocre/generic punchlines that you hear over and over.
That's the point.
If this was face-to-face, no doubt I wouldn't be using lines like that.
Also, you have other stuff to make fun of someone face-to-face.
Clothes, how they look, hair, face, etc.
You really don't know shit about your opponent on here except for what they previously posted.
So you gotta dig up information, something the people in the battlefield probably don't know about, and make shit up off that.

WARPATH
07-09-2006, 03:58 PM
Well you wanted constructive criticism when you first got here, and no one gave it to you so i'm just gonna let you know-

If those aren't considered forced, then they're considered whack. Just my opinion on the subject, don't get all huffy about it, it's just the net. Peace.

Classic
07-09-2006, 06:32 PM
How is calling my lines "whack" constructive criticism?
I wasn't getting huffy about anything, merely explaining.
You were talking about how whack my battles would sound face-to-face.
I was merely explaining that since this is the net and not face-to-face, then it's completely different.
You need new material then what you would find outside the net if you're going to battle on the net.
You were right though, swaying votes.
Now that I look at it, there's a lot of shit on that.
But ass kissing just for thanking someone for a vote?
BTW, damn this is a lot of feedback.
Perhaps you'd like to drop a vote?

oDoUoSoKo
07-09-2006, 07:54 PM
yo charge there is a difference between agreeing with someone and riding him, ur basically trying to take a bullet for ribe! classic is a big boy, he got himself, i don need to back him up, so w/e

and ribe....theres a thread u made where some guy named dusk pissed on you, look for it..its funny

T-ribe
07-10-2006, 07:11 PM
^^^^This fuckin guy is always bringing up old shit. If you dont need to back him up than why the fuck are all up in this thread. Ohhh I know its because your Wink right!

oDoUoSoKo
07-10-2006, 07:21 PM
ahaha funny, no just cuz i can and.....i can

WARPATH
07-10-2006, 07:32 PM
How is calling my lines "whack" constructive criticism?
I wasn't getting huffy about anything, merely explaining.
You were talking about how whack my battles would sound face-to-face.
I was merely explaining that since this is the net and not face-to-face, then it's completely different.
You need new material then what you would find outside the net if you're going to battle on the net.
You were right though, swaying votes.
Now that I look at it, there's a lot of shit on that.
But ass kissing just for thanking someone for a vote?
BTW, damn this is a lot of feedback.
Perhaps you'd like to drop a vote?

A combination of swaying, thanking, are impressionable on some of these dummies that don't really read the verses and just vote.. OK, In my opinion, those lines I picked- they're lacking the substance you bring in your the rest of your lines not featured in my post. I'm, in no way stating that I can come up with something better, i'm just saying you need to elimnate material like this from your lines that are good and tie them together.


You think you're 1,000 times better then what you actually are.



I only brought this out because of this statment. Humble yourself. And cut out that shit with the capitol letters, we all can read.

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 07:34 PM
I only brought this out because of this statment. Humble yourself. And cut out that shit with the capitol letters, we all can read.

LMAO

oDoUoSoKo
07-10-2006, 07:36 PM
ok no need for this petty beef crap, lets jus get votes or w/e guys screw this heat

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 07:38 PM
yea and charge, i know u think im a racist but thats a fuct mindstate, i only said native bullshit to hit a nerve yo, thats it, slippy called me out and i thought it was you, but i guess i be wrong so sry bout tat shit, peace

WARPATH
07-10-2006, 07:40 PM
s'all good as long as you realize it was wrong, now it's time to grow.

oDoUoSoKo
07-10-2006, 07:42 PM
im racist and pollaticly incorrect

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 07:43 PM
s'all good as long as you realize it was wrong, now it's time to grow.

naw, i knew it was fucked up, cause im a little bit native american, my mom is at least...so chyea boy stay up 1

oDoUoSoKo
07-10-2006, 07:43 PM
polliticly (lol) theres proof^^

WARPATH
07-10-2006, 08:10 PM
naw, i knew it was fucked up, cause im a little bit native american, my mom is at least...so chyea boy stay up 1

You can't be a part time native, your either native or not. Seems to me like your ashamed of your heritage, if you gonna say things like you did. Doesn't really matter- Like I said before- Self hating people are the worst kind. Be proud of your heritage.

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 08:12 PM
You can't be a part time native, your either native or not. Seems to me like your ashamed of your heritage, if you gonna say things like you did. Doesn't really matter- Like I said before- Self hating people are the worst kind. Be proud of your heritage.

peace man

Classic
07-10-2006, 11:51 PM
If you mean capital letters in my rhymes, then those are staying.
Capitals, hyphens, quotations, etc.
Not gonna change it.
That's just my style, is all.

VernakuLa
07-10-2006, 11:57 PM
If you mean capital letters in my rhymes, then those are staying.
Capitals, hyphens, quotations, etc.
Not gonna change it.
That's just my style, is all.

but wha do they mean lol, i always wondered

T-ribe
07-17-2006, 11:44 PM
Bump

T-ribe
07-22-2006, 09:50 AM
Votes please