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View Full Version : VOTES NEEDED------->woz t Vs. TUCO (Battle Championship)


Robert
07-10-2006, 02:50 PM
One Round of twenty lines, house rules, woz t spits first.....
woz t has 3 days to respond
Good luck to both netcees, peace

Robert
07-12-2006, 03:08 AM
C'mon woz t, you got one and a half days for yo verse

Robert
07-13-2006, 04:50 AM
What's happening man? you wanna be d/qu'd?

Visionz
07-13-2006, 04:57 PM
I'll take his place if he don't drop soon

Visionz
07-13-2006, 11:51 PM
fuck it mayne, lets get this shit hype. Look he entered first soo if Woz drop cool, his verse can take this place but if not I think we should make people earn they wins, and I wouldn't be doin this if it wasn't someone live like Tuco to go up against. Fuck it thou, here we go



Tuco here is the fat albert of rap, with every step he takes his buttcheeks clap
But I'm the Unseen One, I make necks snap back like collapsed rat traps
You can trash the Delorean, there ain't no turning back
I pack trunks with bodies to dump, I'm sending this Florida Gator back to his swamp
He can't romp on the same streets I stomp,
You better stick with them pretty boys with the rainbows to flaunt
You'd be an Ace to stay in ya place,
Go catch the Real World to see how them Austin boys will rearrange ya face
You an amateur foucused on the Bass, could never grasp my Treble
You could could never touch me like a finger to its own elbow
You're gettin beat red like Elmo, this Big Bird is about to get Snuffed
I'm a Dragon mothafucka, this kid is just Puff
I'm takin you back in time cause your ass is a Kiddie
You still bitch whether it's T or T-diddy
My rhymes stick like chewed Good & Plenties
Your style is like your soul, hollow and empty
Theivin crook with the eyes that're shifty,
I'm placin a citzen's arrest for spittin wack shit that my ears detest
Lyrical conquest to see whose best, these're headshots, no help from the vest
You pumped up from the Fakeness like Jenna James' Breast, With One sideways shot I leave Two holes in ya chest

J-Cee
07-14-2006, 01:58 AM
nice fucking verse man.props.

Robert
07-14-2006, 03:21 AM
aight eric replaces woz, TUCO needs to drop

TUCO
07-14-2006, 08:57 AM
dope dope!
ima have to get at this after work which will be at 9:00 pm EST

Robert
07-15-2006, 01:40 PM
cool

Visionz
07-17-2006, 10:46 AM
where u at Tuco?

mashqauck
07-17-2006, 05:02 PM
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/image.php?u=22130&dateline=1143729048
we may never know!

Dirty Knowledge
07-17-2006, 05:16 PM
Punchlines = Tuco
Flow = Tuco
Wordplay = Tuco

I Vote MY NIKKA TUCO

Visionz
07-17-2006, 05:36 PM
ummm, nice vote, usually people wait till a verse is dropped to drop a vote but lets face it, we'll never move forward if we keep on clingin to archaic mindsets

Locust
07-17-2006, 05:44 PM
lmao

Dirty Knowledge
07-17-2006, 07:29 PM
I show that hometown love.

Thai Gear
07-17-2006, 08:11 PM
tuco is out as well isn't he i mean his day to reply has pasted

Visionz
07-17-2006, 10:40 PM
^I wish he'd dropped a verse, its really crazy how many verses I've written for tournament comps for some no-shows

Robert
07-18-2006, 02:28 AM
ah he aint out, ive given him extra time coz he wasnt even supposed to drop coz woz t was a no show

Visionz
07-18-2006, 09:41 AM
good, I'd rather lose in a dope battle then win by default. peace

Robert
07-18-2006, 10:01 AM
well it mite be a default victory coz he was on before i pm'd him and he still didnt drop a verse so unless shit doesnt happen soon its your win

Robert
07-19-2006, 02:44 PM
TUCO dq'd as of now, sorry man, but you had plenty of time to get a verse in, Eric advances by default
peace

hollywoodrealty
07-19-2006, 02:49 PM
wow that is truely wack, taco would of lost anyways

Visionz
07-19-2006, 03:01 PM
Judges could I get some feedback on my verse on a 1 to 10 scale? I'd still like to see what yall think of the verse even if theres nothings to compare it to. thanks, peace

Robert
07-19-2006, 03:13 PM
Tuco here is the fat albert of rap/
with every step he takes his buttcheeks clap/
(Alright opener)

But I'm the Unseen One/
I make necks snap back like collapsed rat traps/
(i like the wordplay here)

You can trash the Delorean, there ain't no turning back/
I pack trunks with bodies to dump/
I'm sending this Florida Gator back to his swamp/
(average personal)

He can't romp on the same streets I stomp/
You better stick with them pretty boys with the rainbows to flaunt/
(the flow,wordplay i like, but this section aint hitting IMO)

You'd be an Ace to stay in ya place/
Go catch the Real World to see how them Austin boys will rearrange ya face/
(ok personal, streched 2nd line)

You an amateur focused on the Bass, could never grasp my Treble/
You could could never touch me like a finger to its own elbow/
(like the 2nd line, good punch but the "rhyme" is a little lazy)

You're gettin beat red like Elmo, this Big Bird is about to get Snuffed/
I'm a Dragon mothafucka, this kid is just Puff/
(lol, get "beat red like elmo" nice punch but compare the line length of the first and second lines, you didnt need that big bird part for this to hit, nice tho)

I'm takin you back in time cause your ass is a Kiddie/
You still bitch whether it's T or T-diddy/
(average punches)

My rhymes stick like chewed Good & Plenties/
Your style is like your soul, hollow and empty/
(alright)
Theivin crook with the eyes that're shifty/

I'm placin a citzen's arrest for spittin wack shit that my ears detest/
(lol, like this line)
Lyrical conquest to see whose best, these're headshots, no help from the vest/
(wordplay throughout this section is good, nice work)

You pumped up from the Fakeness like Jenna James' Breast/
With One sideways shot I leave Two holes in ya chest/
(dope finish, good punch

overall i'd give this 7/10, the lines for me were a little streched at times but there were some dope punches in there plus some solid wordplay to make up for it
peace Eric

Visionz
07-19-2006, 05:50 PM
thanks for the feedback homie, respect

anything else from the other judges?

VernakuLa
07-19-2006, 06:04 PM
i aint a judge, but ill break ur shit down homie


Tuco here is the fat albert of rap, with every step he takes his buttcheeks clap
But I'm the Unseen One, I make necks snap back like collapsed rat traps

aight...nice opener, feelin the multies, however kinda streched

You can trash the Delorean, there ain't no turning back
I pack trunks with bodies to dump, I'm sending this Florida Gator back to his swamp

NOT FEELINN THE SECOND LINE lol (i love the gators) naw its good, hard to catch the flow, real choppy, but decent personal

He can't romp on the same streets I stomp,
You better stick with them pretty boys with the rainbows to flaunt

lol, decent, just expand your disses with the faggot shit yo, played line

You'd be an Ace to stay in ya place,
Go catch the Real World to see how them Austin boys will rearrange ya face

I get it, ur from austin, real world, nice punch

You an amateur foucused on the Bass, could never grasp my Treble
You could could never touch me like a finger to its own elbow

Nice multies dood, semi played line, but sounds nice when read

You're gettin beat red like Elmo, this Big Bird is about to get Snuffed
I'm a Dragon mothafucka, this kid is just Puff

Nice wordplay dood, feelin this bar

I'm takin you back in time cause your ass is a Kiddie
You still bitch whether it's T or T-diddy

trynna play his name like diddy, not effective, wasnt feelin this one

My rhymes stick like chewed Good & Plenties
Your style is like your soul, hollow and empty

Ouch, nice personal

Theivin crook with the eyes that're shifty,
I'm placin a citzen's arrest for spittin wack shit that my ears detest
Lyrical conquest to see whose best, these're headshots, no help from the vest

Decent wordplay, braggish kinda, wasnt feelin this one

You pumped up from the Fakeness like Jenna James' Breast, With One sideways shot I leave Two holes in ya chest

Silicon? Decent closer

overall

7 out of 10

dont take this the wrong way, this is just my honest opinion

peace

Visionz
07-19-2006, 07:47 PM
its all good homie the feedback's appreciated. peace

maestro wooz
07-19-2006, 08:50 PM
who the fuck is this woz character