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View Full Version : WINNER----->the god concept Vs. Luther Large (Battle Championship)


Robert
07-10-2006, 02:52 PM
One Round of twenty lines, house rules, Luther Large spits first.....
Luther has 3 days to respond
Good luck to both netcees, peace

Robert
07-12-2006, 03:07 AM
Where you at Luther?

Luther Large
07-12-2006, 12:45 PM
damn almost forgot about this aint done this shit in a while

i'll drop later on today though

Luther Large
07-12-2006, 05:35 PM
My CONCEPTions aint religious, consider this slaughter
The "devilz son"'ll leave GOD holy, minus the water
amplify the ryhme, any competitors gruesomely died
the last time GOD CROSSed me his son got CRUCIFIED
intesify the battle with verbal magnums i buck this fairy
and we all know GODS a VIRGIN since he never fucked MARY
clearly I CLEAN THE BILL, cuz I GOT'EM IN CHECK
u might know how to use a MIC(jordan) but wont come close on the NET
and when i take this win u'll be prayin 2 see tomorrow
the truth is god lied, cuz when he spits....he just wont swallow
in the temple of darts his raps state he hustles, and does crimes
theres and exception! how do u CLOCK dollars wit no CONCEPTion of TIME
every SCRIPTURE you've written is lesser than mine times 7
once i drop this verse tell me what its like up in HEAVEN
Negligence seems relevant in any religious element when evils ignored
so I ahnialated your pryor faith with this 3rd world war
ready with ryhmes out the ASS when the SHIT hits the fan
my mouth goes hand and hand wit my words his goes hand and hand wit a man
fuckin faggot'll get mastered then blasted wit bombs
step to me again you'll rock a cross....attached through the palms



word up god, your turn

VernakuLa
07-12-2006, 05:36 PM
heat!!!!!

Da Dishonourable Don
07-12-2006, 07:10 PM
sorry L, I just ain't feeling that verse, not that I'm gonna vote on this battle or anything, I'm saying, too much offensive shit in that verse to digest, you're totally using the Holy Trinity for punches, my motto to everybody is, keep offensive religious rhymes to yourself, there's people that don't want to hear that shit, don't fuck with a person's faith, just my opinion!

By the way I heard you have some audios up, where can I listen to it, send me the link in my pm box, Peace

Luther Large
07-12-2006, 07:19 PM
sorry L, I just ain't feeling that verse, not that I'm gonna vote on this battle or anything, I'm saying, too much offensive shit in that verse to digest, you're totally using the Holy Trinity for punches, my motto to everybody is, keep offensive religious rhymes to yourself, there's people that don't want to hear that shit, don't fuck with a person's faith, just my opinion!

By the way I heard you have some audios up, where can I listen to it, send me the link in my pm box, Peace

yeah i sent u that link

but u dont gotta take this seriously man its kinda like Big L's dangerzone song it is what it is its just about wordplay and sum punchlines that hopefully make you go OHHH SHIT i know where you comin from though just take into mind that when i wrote this verse i didnt write it disrespectfuly i can honestly tell you i wrote this verse with humor in mind although sum may think different we all have our opinions and im still a christian myself.............its just ryhmes dog

peace....

jallainINS
07-12-2006, 07:46 PM
yeah i gotta agree, some of that stuff was hard for me to even read. but i know u were only doin it because the dudes name is god concept. i still dont agree with it but im not gonna hold it against you personally. good luck.

oDoUoSoKo
07-12-2006, 07:49 PM
i liked the verse...and im a catholic, it was nice

J-Cee
07-12-2006, 09:38 PM
that verse was nice..lol shit dont make sense to me..ppl always diss other ppls moms n shit in there raps like they gonna rape them etc and no one cares,,but if u rhyme about religion ppl take it in to offense n shit..lol..its weird to me.

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 12:18 AM
sorry L, I just ain't feeling that verse, not that I'm gonna vote on this battle or anything, I'm saying, too much offensive shit in that verse to digest, you're totally using the Holy Trinity for punches, my motto to everybody is, keep offensive religious rhymes to yourself, there's people that don't want to hear that shit, don't fuck with a person's faith, just my opinion!

By the way I heard you have some audios up, where can I listen to it, send me the link in my pm box, Peace

I was saying the same thing when kids attacked my culture. They don't realize to me making rhymes about- Sacred Pipes, icons like head dresses with feathers earned to be in a Warriors status,- is offensive to me. Just people rhyming in general like I should be ashamed of who I am. I guess it just comes with the territory. The only way you can get him back is hit em with that heavy christian rap.

Luther Large
07-13-2006, 02:33 PM
i huess every1's got opinions i just hope the judges dont let religion get in the way of ryhmes(NOT REALITY!!!!!!!! just ryhmes)

anywayz, God u droppin u only got till 2nite

oDoUoSoKo
07-13-2006, 04:34 PM
^^^ur rite, that wood be the stupidest thing in battle field history since greenbee

hollywoodrealty
07-13-2006, 07:05 PM
see this is the kinda battle i like right here, people are too caught up in having to go after someone's throat, when sometimes the battle should be about who can show their lyrical skill, id rather see luther write some controversial shit then keep hearing the same things over again about this or that, im sure god concept is gonna drop some fire too, and it will be interesting to see the winner, ill be watching, peace


oh and about offending someone's religion, thats not gona happen, unless someone is clossed minded, this is the battlefield people, dont be so sensitive

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 07:37 PM
Relgious comments won't effect my vote. Not about Jesus anyways.

oDoUoSoKo
07-13-2006, 07:41 PM
yo charge what ever happened to the last tourney the big 1,?

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 08:08 PM
Eric should've been more strict with that shit, but it's not his fault, the corp crashed half way though it, and some peeps never came back, then that shit just fell off. I lost to ilz but I had wait 3 weeks each time for her 2 verses a total of almost 6 weeks..................she's deadly though when she does drop.

oDoUoSoKo
07-13-2006, 08:11 PM
i voted for u so watch the groupie talk

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 08:17 PM
i voted for u so watch the groupie talk

or else..........what?

Robert
07-14-2006, 03:23 AM
aight then hurry up concept, if you dont drop soon its a dq, btw adedwutang has already bin dq'd

tha god concept
07-14-2006, 06:45 PM
son please your to stupid with ya raps so stop
and after this battle youll be able to park in handi-cap spots
ill damage ya KNOT wether ya like it or NOT
and PLOT a scheme to watch ya rot dead stinkin in a PLOT
ill is what ya not kid thats my diagnosis
my rhymes impregnate you with explosives until ya head imploded
callin God a virgin??? when Mary was with Joseph!
stupid mutha fucka didnt do the knowledge before he wrote it
ya styles a joke kid even ya own fam hates ya raps
and its kinda funny even ya own hunnie gives me daps
got ya mommie makin me money sittin on old mens laps
while Luthers in the back givin out hand-jobs for crack
like the nun on Bad Lietenant youll get raped with Gods cross
u should change ya initials to LLL cause you juss took another loss
your weak fragile battle is like ya style son way too soft
imma beat ya with a bunch of rocks stuffed in two tube socks
fuckin hobble ya legs so you have an excuse for half steppin
then light the fuse and let you choose life or death brethren
you say your the devils son so ill send ya to heaven
while my angels strangle and mangle ya soul in every angle and section

hollywoodrealty
07-14-2006, 07:16 PM
damn yo, i told u god concept would bring the fire, i gotta read these both a few times to drop my vote, this is one of the best battles ive ever seen

oDoUoSoKo
07-14-2006, 07:23 PM
BOM is in effect

Robert
07-15-2006, 02:02 PM
LL-
My CONCEPTions aint religious, consider this slaughter
The "devilz son"'ll leave GOD holy, minus the water
(average opener)

amplify the rhyme, any competitors gruesomely died
the last time GOD CROSSed me his son got CRUCIFIED
(nice punch, clever reference to his name)

intesify the battle with verbal magnums i buck this fairy
and we all know GODS a VIRGIN since he never fucked MARY
(lol, good punch but is this religious theme gonna carry through the whole battle?)

clearly I CLEAN THE BILL, cuz I GOT'EM IN CHECK
u might know how to use a MIC(jordan) but wont come close on the NET
(ok punch but no one was gonna get this unless you explained it)

and when i take this win u'll be prayin 2 see tomorrow
the truth is god lied, cuz when he spits....he just wont swallow
(hmmmm, average)

in the temple of darts his raps state he hustles, and does crimes
theres an exception! how do u CLOCK dollars wit no CONCEPTion of TIME
(doesnt hit for me)

every SCRIPTURE you've written is lesser than mine times 7
once i drop this verse tell me what its like up in HEAVEN
(average punch)

Negligence seems relevant in any religious element when evils ignored
so I ahnialated your pryor faith with this 3rd world war
(the lines here are way too streched, this is noticable throughout the verse)

ready with ryhmes out the ASS when the SHIT hits the fan
my mouth goes hand and hand wit my words his goes hand and hand wit a man
(first line is good, the second once again is way too streched and that punch doesnt hit)

fuckin faggot'll get mastered then blasted wit bombs
step to me again you'll rock a cross....attached through the palms
(ok finish)

Alright verse Luther but i feel you over played the religion related punches to a point where they just werent hitting, some nice punches in there, but you gotta sort out the length of your lines IMO.

The God Concept-
son please your to stupid with ya raps so stop
and after this battle youll be able to park in handi-cap spots
(ok opener)

ill damage ya KNOT wether ya like it or NOT
and PLOT a scheme to watch ya rot dead stinkin in a PLOT
(ok wordplay)

ill is what ya not kid thats my diagnosis
my rhymes impregnate you with explosives until ya head imploded
(nice wordplay)

callin God a virgin??? when Mary was with Joseph!
stupid mutha fucka didnt do the knowledge before he wrote it
(lol, nice build and punch, this hits hard coz LL over used the religious punches IMO)

ya styles a joke kid even ya own fam hates ya raps
and its kinda funny even ya own hunnie gives me daps
(nice punch)

got ya mommie makin me money sittin on old mens laps
while Luthers in the back givin out hand-jobs for crack
(this is pretty good personals, compared to the standard sofar of thesesorta punches)

like the nun on Bad Lietenant youll get raped with Gods cross
u should change ya initials to LLL cause you juss took another loss
(ok lines...)

your weak fragile battle is like ya style son way too soft
imma beat ya with a bunch of rocks stuffed in two tube socks
(empty threats on the net, alright lines)

fuckin hobble ya legs so you have an excuse for half steppin
then light the fuse and let you choose life or death brethren
(ok, kinda filler like the last two lines)

you say your the devils son so ill send ya to heaven
while my angels strangle and mangle ya soul in every angle and section
(ok finish)

Overall Tha God Concept got this, better verse with some nice wordplay and good punches. LL dropped an alright verse but you gotta sort out your line length IMO...
Vote=Tha God Concept
peace
1-0

Classic
07-15-2006, 03:29 PM
Luther Large :

My CONCEPTions aint religious, consider this slaughter
The "devilz son"'ll leave GOD holy, minus the water
(LoL. Good opener. Wordplay is nice.)
amplify the ryhme, any competitors gruesomely died
the last time GOD CROSSed me his son got CRUCIFIED
(Wasn't really feelin' this. Seems like you're dissin' God/TGC's son.)
intesify the battle with verbal magnums i buck this fairy
and we all know GODS a VIRGIN since he never fucked MARY
(Contractdicts with the bar above. You kill God's son, then call him a virgin....
You know, if I wasn't a Christian I wouldn't know WTF you were talkin' about. Nice wordplay though, lol. Decent/Avg.)
clearly I CLEAN THE BILL, cuz I GOT'EM IN CHECK
u might know how to use a MIC(jordan) but wont come close on the NET
(Good wordplay. Nice shit. Good bar.)
and when i take this win u'll be prayin 2 see tomorrow
the truth is god lied, cuz when he spits....he just wont swallow
(Seens this concept done over, and over, and over. A played one. Decent.)
in the temple of darts his raps state he hustles, and does crimes
theres and exception! how do u CLOCK dollars wit no CONCEPTion of TIME
(Actually, I get this. Pretty nice. And a good personal. Good bar.)
every SCRIPTURE you've written is lesser than mine times 7
once i drop this verse tell me what its like up in HEAVEN
(Feel like the rhyme here is a force with the "times 7". No real punch here either. Bad bar.)
Negligence seems relevant in any religious element when evils ignored
so I ahnialated your pryor faith with this 3rd world war
(Wow, nice multis. But not much goin' in this bar other then that. This wasn't really a hard hittin' punch. Half-decent at best.)
ready with ryhmes out the ASS when the SHIT hits the fan
my mouth goes hand and hand wit my words his goes hand and hand wit a man
(Good shit with 1st line. 2nd was a played concept. Decent.)
fuckin faggot'll get mastered then blasted wit bombs
step to me again you'll rock a cross....attached through the palms
(Good closer.)


Tha God Concept :

son please your to stupid with ya raps so stop
and after this battle youll be able to park in handi-cap spots
(Lol, good opener.)
ill damage ya KNOT wether ya like it or NOT
and PLOT a scheme to watch ya rot dead stinkin in a PLOT
(You multi'd PLOT and PLOT, or maybe you meant POT? Not sure. Brings the bar down. Half-decent.)
ill is what ya not kid thats my diagnosis
my rhymes impregnate you with explosives until ya head imploded
(Good bar. Wordplay nice. Mediocre/Avg.)
callin God a virgin??? when Mary was with Joseph!
stupid mutha fucka didnt do the knowledge before he wrote it
(Aww, you fed. Brings it down a bit. BUT DAMN, what a way to flip it. Mediocre/Avg.)
ya styles a joke kid even ya own fam hates ya raps
and its kinda funny even ya own hunnie gives me daps
(Agh, bad. What more can I say? I just dislike bars like this, most particularly, the 2nd line.)
got ya mommie makin me money sittin on old mens laps
while Luthers in the back givin out hand-jobs for crack
(Same as above. Just not my kind of material.)
like the nun on Bad Lietenant youll get raped with Gods cross
u should change ya initials to LLL cause you juss took another loss
(LMAO. Nice play of the name. Good shit.)
your weak fragile battle is like ya style son way too soft
imma beat ya with a bunch of rocks stuffed in two tube socks
(Decent.)
fuckin hobble ya legs so you have an excuse for half steppin
then light the fuse and let you choose life or death brethren
(Decent.)
you say your the devils son so ill send ya to heaven
while my angels strangle and mangle ya soul in every angle and section
(Good closer.)

Good shit.
My vote -- Tha God Concept
Good shit to both.
LL was comin' hard with some NICE fuckin' wordplay. Almost got confusing, lol.
That shit was intensive. Some played concepts, maybe a little forced rhyme there. But it feels like he just dropped off towards the end of his verse.
TGC, same as above man. Some nice wordplay, some generic disses, etc etc. Just, those bars about his girlfriend and his mom, I hate. Those are just stupid. Don't use 'em!
Again, stay up.
Good shit to both.

Robert
07-15-2006, 03:53 PM
2-0 to TGC, keep em comin!

Luther Large
07-16-2006, 10:17 AM
aight aight it's 2-0

but if were going to allow feeding off eachothers verses we should have 2 rounds

WARPATH
07-16-2006, 02:47 PM
Luther Large

My CONCEPTions aint religious, consider this slaughter
The "devilz son"'ll leave GOD holy, minus the water
^^nice opener
amplify the ryhme, any competitors gruesomely died
the last time GOD CROSSed me his son got CRUCIFIED
^^like the imagery
intesify the battle with verbal magnums i buck this fairy
and we all know GODS a VIRGIN since he never fucked MARY
^^ZINGER
clearly I CLEAN THE BILL, cuz I GOT'EM IN CHECK
u might know how to use a MIC(jordan) but wont come close on the NET
^^eh
and when i take this win u'll be prayin 2 see tomorrow
the truth is god lied, cuz when he spits....he just wont swallow
^^Ok
in the temple of darts his raps state he hustles, and does crimes
theres and exception! how do u CLOCK dollars wit no CONCEPTion of TIME
^^OK
every SCRIPTURE you've written is lesser than mine times 7
once i drop this verse tell me what its like up in HEAVEN
^^Ok I like the bible imagery
Negligence seems relevant in any religious element when evils ignored
so I ahnialated your pryor faith with this 3rd world war
^^Ok
ready with ryhmes out the ASS when the SHIT hits the fan
my mouth goes hand and hand wit my words his goes hand and hand wit a man
^^eh
fuckin faggot'll get mastered then blasted wit bombs
step to me again you'll rock a cross....attached through the palms
^^Nice finishing move

God Concept

son please your to stupid with ya raps so stop
and after this battle youll be able to park in handi-cap spots
^^eh
ill damage ya KNOT wether ya like it or NOT
and PLOT a scheme to watch ya rot dead stinkin in a PLOT
^^eh
ill is what ya not kid thats my diagnosis
my rhymes impregnate you with explosives until ya head imploded
^^eh.....OK
callin God a virgin??? when Mary was with Joseph!
stupid mutha fucka didnt do the knowledge before he wrote it
^^nice try
ya styles a joke kid even ya own fam hates ya raps
and its kinda funny even ya own hunnie gives me daps
^^PUNCH
got ya mommie makin me money sittin on old mens laps
while Luthers in the back givin out hand-jobs for crack
^^OUCH
like the nun on Bad Lietenant youll get raped with Gods cross
u should change ya initials to LLL cause you juss took another loss
^^it's funny because it's true......almost
your weak fragile battle is like ya style son way too soft
imma beat ya with a bunch of rocks stuffed in two tube socks
^^eh
fuckin hobble ya legs so you have an excuse for half steppin
then light the fuse and let you choose life or death brethren
^^OK
you say your the devils son so ill send ya to heaven
while my angels strangle and mangle ya soul in every angle and section
^^OK

My Vote goest to Luther Large-

Using stronger vocab, that inhanced the bible imagery he brought through out his verse. I felt he did good job keeping the imagery together, and mediocre job tying it together, it was however, in my opinion good enough to overpower God Conepts Punches. God Concept, in my opinion came through with a strong flow, but Luther already did to much dammage.

Luther Large
07-16-2006, 11:02 PM
Good breakdown of each verse on that vote charge...good looks

VOTES!!!!!!! yall..

Luther Large
07-17-2006, 11:35 AM
C'MON JUDGES VOTE!!!!!!!!


pleeez

Luther Large
07-18-2006, 03:52 PM
C'mon Judges!!!!!!! Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

VernakuLa
07-18-2006, 07:12 PM
damn yo, i told u god concept would bring the fire, i gotta read these both a few times to drop my vote, this is one of the best battles ive ever seen

i'm confused yo, aint hollywood a reserve judge???? Or am i readin this shit wrong..w/e

tha god concept
07-18-2006, 07:15 PM
this shits taken waaay too long

VernakuLa
07-18-2006, 08:02 PM
this shits taken waaay too long

wutup ked?

Eversick666
07-18-2006, 08:49 PM
good battle but my ninja concept just too raw to eat.can't feast on that
kid unless you just as cold...

vote go's to tha GOD
eversick666

VernakuLa
07-18-2006, 08:50 PM
good battle but my ninja concept just too raw to eat.can't feast on that
kid unless you just as cold...

vote go's to tha GOD
eversick666

LOL sure khed

Robert
07-19-2006, 02:50 PM
2-1 to concept votes needed

Eversick666
07-19-2006, 06:20 PM
sure what vern

Eversick666
07-19-2006, 08:55 PM
not counting my vote,ok don't matter

Father N Dangerous
07-19-2006, 10:43 PM
My CONCEPTions aint religious, consider this slaughter
The "devilz son"'ll leave GOD holy, minus the water

UMM PRETTY DOPE OPENER LMAO

amplify the ryhme, any competitors gruesomely died
the last time GOD CROSSed me his son got CRUCIFIED

LMAO HILARIOUS

intesify the battle with verbal magnums i buck this fairy
and we all know GODS a VIRGIN since he never fucked MARY

STR8

clearly I CLEAN THE BILL, cuz I GOT'EM IN CHECK
u might know how to use a MIC(jordan) but wont come close on the NET

DOPE

and when i take this win u'll be prayin 2 see tomorrow
the truth is god lied, cuz when he spits....he just wont swallow

LMAO NICE

in the temple of darts his raps state he hustles, and does crimes
theres and exception! how do u CLOCK dollars wit no CONCEPTion of TIME

HAHA PRETTY DOPE

every SCRIPTURE you've written is lesser than mine times 7
once i drop this verse tell me what its like up in HEAVEN

OK DECENT

Negligence seems relevant in any religious element when evils ignored
so I ahnialated your pryor faith with this 3rd world war

DOPE

ready with ryhmes out the ASS when the SHIT hits the fan
my mouth goes hand and hand wit my words his goes hand and hand wit a man

AVERAGE

fuckin faggot'll get mastered then blasted wit bombs
step to me again you'll rock a cross....attached through the palms

PRETTY FUCKIN DOPE CLOSER

OVERALL: 9.7



son please your to stupid with ya raps so stop
and after this battle youll be able to park in handi-cap spots

IGHT PRETTY STR8 OPENER

ill damage ya KNOT wether ya like it or NOT
and PLOT a scheme to watch ya rot dead stinkin in a PLOT



ill is what ya not kid thats my diagnosis
my rhymes impregnate you with explosives until ya head imploded
callin God a virgin??? when Mary was with Joseph!
stupid mutha fucka didnt do the knowledge before he wrote it

HAHA LIKE THIS ALOT

ya styles a joke kid even ya own fam hates ya raps
and its kinda funny even ya own hunnie gives me daps

GOOD WORDPLAY STR8

got ya mommie makin me money sittin on old mens laps
while Luthers in the back givin out hand-jobs for crack

LMMFAO NICE

like the nun on Bad Lietenant youll get raped with Gods cross
u should change ya initials to LLL cause you juss took another loss

LMAO

your weak fragile battle is like ya style son way too soft
imma beat ya with a bunch of rocks stuffed in two tube socks

DECENT

fuckin hobble ya legs so you have an excuse for half steppin
then light the fuse and let you choose life or death brethren

ABOVE AVERAGE

you say your the devils son so ill send ya to heaven
while my angels strangle and mangle ya soul in every angle and section

IGHT PRETTY DOPE CLOSER

OVERALL: 9.5

OVERALL OVERALL THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE AND NOBODY CAN DENY THAT, BUT IMO LUTHER LARGE HAD NICER LINES AND A LIL MORE COMPLEX'D THAT YOURS TGA! I LIKED BOTH OF YOUR VERSES BUT LL HAD THE BETTER NAME PLAY, AND WORDPLAY. DOPE BATTLE, DEFINETLY TWO GLADIATORS

MY VOTE/ LUTHER LARGE

Robert
07-20-2006, 10:27 AM
2-2, keep em coming judges

hollywoodrealty
07-20-2006, 12:00 PM
im not gonna break this down line by line, because everyone has already done that, im just gonna give my take on who i think won. I said from the beginning that this would be a hott battle, too bad this one wasnt the championship bcuz i feel u 2 the best in this competition, i gotta give this one to god concept, he just lit it up line after line after line, the man was in the zone, but not to discredit luther large, like i said, in my eyes u are looken at # 1 and # 2, but god concept just took it one step further, peace to you all

Robert
07-20-2006, 12:05 PM
Thanks hollywood, 3-2 to the god, the first round is finally over!!!!!
ill set the second round up tomorrow
peace

tha god concept
07-20-2006, 06:29 PM
dope battle LL that was close

props to the judges that voted in this battle 2

Luther Large
07-20-2006, 06:35 PM
damn i thotthis shit was to 5 votes aint it a bitch the 1st time i lose gotta be in a tourney

anywayz dope battle concept u always got that fire

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
12-23-2006, 01:16 AM
Wow great votes... this was a real nice display by both of ya'll....

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