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Robert
07-10-2006, 01:53 PM
One Round of twenty lines, house rules, DDD spits first.....
DDD has 3 days to respond
Good luck to both netcees, peace

Da Dishonourable Don
07-11-2006, 07:04 PM
ok, ok, it's me and Dusk, this one should prove worthy......

fuck a tourney, after this you're gonna need an attourney/
surely recievin' an early beatin' to have you bleed on a gurney/
believe in it firmly, Da Don'll make your silly squad step/
let me expose the truth 'cause I know this spook is really Aud-Spec/8O
pick the domain, son I'll be rippin' those brains/
I throw flames that'll turn your whole frame to chicken low-mein/
Dusk, why we battling?, you know it's a wrap/
and it don't take a bag of weed to say you blowin' a sack/
you notice the stats, I've never been the one you should cross/
now how you gonna kill Da Don when you be under the boss?/
hundreds have lost, but only few can really say they were worthy/
gave 'em no mercy, battle me?, that's like playin' with hurpies/
invading the tourney, my lyrics spray, ricochet and grazed ya head/
the only time you hold a razor blade is when you shave your legs/
save the begs, and all the baby crying for later/
ya hate to die?, well you'll be dying a hater, no denying I'm greater/
I bust quicker than a minute-maid man/
Dusk you should quit rap, and go back to lemonade stands/
disintegrate clans and entorauges, rap groups and solo artists/
Fuck Dusk, I should be battling tidal waves to see who flow's the hardest!

aight, Dusk you're up next!

oDoUoSoKo
07-11-2006, 09:37 PM
The DONS "Crack" rhymes are poser type, since his pots are empty
the spec MisConception is Common, so i cant say ur not an MC
the HOTTEST ENTRY in the SET, a PYROTECHNIC EXPERT
CHUCK the beef, meat cleaver lodged in ur maple leaf sweatshirt
once u dissapear like the "Whats Happenin" cast
i want a dude to hop out a plate of pancakes and pop a cap in ya ass (pulp fiction joke)
stop and laff, talk and jab punches while DDDUNCES, chew the knob
i blew the sack on ur moms breast, i tol her a mamogram would do the job
SCREW THE SLOB, whos only known projects he gets f's on
hes got THAI GEAR (tiger) gassin him up so now he thinks hes exxon
yes DONs his name, but its far from his title tho
the best pawn in the game, but not far from where the knight'll go
and get JUMPED when DOG actually steps PAW in the ghett
put the bacon down cuz "fakin brown"s as RAW as it gets
i call to the set, in a sec hear a "woof" in the rear
and if i called attendance, ur pig ass'd throw a HOOF in the air!
ur shook as beer durin a prank, STANK PEE-ON POSER
lyrical hollow tips pierce ur celine dion posters
toss 100 bars here queer, and expect cheers from that fucka NAK
i thought u'd avoid the war but ur countries done enuff of that




yo really sorry for the last one no offense on any other canadians (us is more fuked up anyway)

Classic
07-11-2006, 09:52 PM
DDD :

fuck a tourney, after this you're gonna need an attourney/
surely recievin' an early beatin' to have you bleed on a gurney/
(NICE opener.)
believe in it firmly, Da Don'll make your silly squad step/
let me expose the truth 'cause I know this spook is really Aud-Spec/
(Decent bar. Would've proved more effective of you could support with evidence.)
pick the domain, son I'll be rippin' those brains/
I throw flames that'll turn your whole frame to chicken low-mein/
(Good.)
Dusk, why we battling?, you know it's a wrap/
and it don't take a bag of weed to say you blowin' a sack/
(Good.)
you notice the stats, I've never been the one you should cross/
now how you gonna kill Da Don when you be under the boss?/
(Dropped a little, but good.)
hundreds have lost, but only few can really say they were worthy/
gave 'em no mercy, battle me?, that's like playin' with hurpies/
(Bad bar. There's no real punch here for Dusk.)
invading the tourney, my lyrics spray, ricochet and grazed ya head/
the only time you hold a razor blade is when you shave your legs/
(LOL, nice.)
save the begs, and all the baby crying for later/
ya hate to die?, well you'll be dying a hater, no denying I'm greater/
(Good.)
I bust quicker than a minute-maid man/
Dusk you should quit rap, and go back to lemonade stands/
(Decent bar here.)
disintegrate clans and entorauges, rap groups and solo artists/
Fuck Dusk, I should be battling tidal waves to see who flow's the hardest!
(1st line should've been re-worded to keep up with the constant punches.
NICE closer nonetheless.)


Dusk :
The DONS "Crack" rhymes are poser type, since his pots are empty
the spec MisConception is Common, so i cant say ur not an MC
(Good opener. But you fed some. Kinda brings it down for me.)
the HOTTEST ENTRY in the SET, a PYROTECHNIC EXPERT
CHUCK the beef, meat cleaver lodged in ur maple leaf sweatshirt
(LOL, played the fact he's Canadian. Good shit, it's a battle. Mediocre bar.)
once u dissapear like the "Whats Happenin" cast
i want a dude to hop out a plate of pancakes and pop a cap in ya ass (pulp fiction joke)
(Good.)
stop and laff, talk and jab punches while DDDUNCES, chew the knob
i blew the sack on ur moms breast, i tol her a mamogram would do the job
(Agh, a mom bar. I hate these. This isn't dissing your opponent, this is dissing their mother.Good wordplay on the DDD name. Bad bar though.)
SCREW THE SLOB, whos only known projects he gets f's on
hes got THAI GEAR (tiger) gassin him up so now he thinks hes exxon
(Good.)
yes DONs his name, but its far from his title tho
the best pawn in the game, but not far from where the knight'll go
(Good wordplay here. Nice bar.)
and get JUMPED when DOG actually steps PAW in the ghett
put the bacon down cuz "fakin brown"s as RAW as it gets
(Nice flow here. Was feelin' this. Good.)
i call to the set, in a sec hear a "woof" in the rear
and if i called attendance, ur pig ass'd throw a HOOF in the air!
(LOL, good wordplay. Good bar.)
ur shook as beer durin a prank, STANK PEE-ON POSER
lyrical hollow tips pierce ur celine dion posters
(This wasn't as hard hitting as previous bars. Mediocre.)
toss 100 bars here queer, and expect cheers from that fucka NAK
i thought u'd avoid the war but ur countries done enuff of that
(Good closer.)


CLOSE BATTLE.
What more could I expect?
Who will I toss my vote to?
DUSK.
Dusk, for me, had better wordplay, and just as much of a constant flow in the punches as DDD did.
DDD, very SOLID verse. Constant punches. Hard-hittin' almost everytime. But you coulda came with better personals. I was hopin' to see that.
Like play off the fact Dusk said he was gonna lose the minute he saw this thread set-up.
GOOD SHIT.
I actually thought this would be like, the championship match, LOL.
But.
Vote - Dusk

Robert
07-12-2006, 01:56 AM
DDD-
fuck a tourney, after this you're gonna need an attourney/
surely recievin' an early beatin' to have you bleed on a gurney/
(Nice opener)

believe in it firmly, Da Don'll make your silly squad step/
let me expose the truth 'cause I know this spook is really Aud-Spec/
(nice personal)

pick the domain, son I'll be rippin' those brains/
I throw flames that'll turn your whole frame to chicken low-mein/
(nice wordplay man, but this is kinda filler for me)

Dusk, why we battling?, you know it's a wrap/
and it don't take a bag of weed to say you blowin' a sack/
(lol, good punch)

you notice the stats, I've never been the one you should cross/
now how you gonna kill Da Don when you be under the boss?/
(doesnt hit)

hundreds have lost, but only few can really say they were worthy/
gave 'em no mercy, battle me?, that's like playin' with hurpies/
(alright)

invading the tourney, my lyrics spray, ricochet and grazed ya head/
the only time you hold a razor blade is when you shave your legs/
(good punch, and ive liked your wordplay up till this point)

save the begs, and all the baby crying for later/
ya hate to die?, well you'll be dying a hater, no denying I'm greater/
(lol, clever)

I bust quicker than a minute-maid man/
Dusk you should quit rap, and go back to lemonade stands/
(ill punches, really put him in his place)

disintegrate clans and entorauges, rap groups and solo artists/
Fuck Dusk, I should be battling tidal waves to see who flow's the hardest!
(great closing lines IMO)

Dusk-
The DONS "Crack" rhymes are poser type, since his pots are empty
the spec MisConception is Common, so i cant say ur not an MC
(average opener)

the HOTTEST ENTRY in the SET, a PYROTECHNIC EXPERT
CHUCK the beef, meat cleaver lodged in ur maple leaf sweatshirt
(lol, nice personal)

once u dissapear like the "Whats Happenin" cast
i want a dude to hop out a plate of pancakes and pop a cap in ya ass
(alright...)

stop and laff, talk and jab punches while DDDUNCES, chew the knob
i blew the sack on ur moms breast, i tol her a mamogram would do the job
(average, i personally dont like these sorta punches (your a homo, i fucked ya mum, that sorta thing) unless they are done real well, for me they are unoriginal and kinda lame)

SCREW THE SLOB, whos only known projects he gets f's on
hes got THAI GEAR (tiger) gassin him up so now he thinks hes exxon
(lol, very nice personal)

yes DONs his name, but its far from his title tho
the best pawn in the game, but not far from where the knight'll go
(nice)

and get JUMPED when DOG actually steps PAW in the ghett
put the bacon down cuz "fakin brown"s as RAW as it gets
(nice)

i call to the set, in a sec hear a "woof" in the rear
and if i called attendance, ur pig ass'd throw a HOOF in the air!
(nice punch, some hard hitting punches in this verse sofar)

ur shook as beer durin a prank, STANK PEE-ON POSER
lyrical hollow tips pierce ur celine dion posters
toss 100 bars here queer, and expect cheers from that fucka NAK
i thought u'd avoid the war but ur countries done enuff of that
(this last bit is the sealer for me, hard hitting personals settle the issue)

Overall-DDD came with an average verse, dude i know your capable of coming with a much better verse then that, you had some good wordplay and punches but there was too much filler in there.

Dusk on the other hand prolly had the same amount of punches but his personals hit hard and this sealed it, especially that four lines. For future reference Dusk, i'd stay away from "ya mum" punches, IMO the lamest and most overused punch in battles, but apart from that you deserved to win this battle, ill verse

Vote-Dusk
peace to both
2-0 still need three more votes

Da Dishonourable Don
07-12-2006, 03:14 AM
2-0 in Dusk's favour, this is a nice one!

num2son
07-12-2006, 08:35 PM
Flow - Don
Vocab - Don
Wordplay - Don
Creativity - Tie
Punchlines - DON

Don gets my vote

oDoUoSoKo
07-12-2006, 08:38 PM
officials only num (not ur fault its not posted in the title, all tourney battles are onlly voted on by ojs)

Da Dishonourable Don
07-12-2006, 08:52 PM
that should really be 2-2, where and who are the official judges, 'cause if I don't see none, I'm counting those votes!

Da Dishonourable Don
07-12-2006, 08:58 PM
my bad, I didn't read the top thread where the official judges were named, but I still think it's whack!

Thai Gear
07-12-2006, 09:02 PM
srry to burst ur bubble don but its in the first thread in the battlefield

Da Dishonourable Don
07-12-2006, 09:04 PM
w/e 2-0, I still think that the people should be voting on Tourney battles, what can those 5 guys really say for everyone else?

num2son
07-12-2006, 09:07 PM
officials only num (not ur fault its not posted in the title, all tourney battles are onlly voted on by ojs)

OK....;(

Robert
07-13-2006, 03:31 AM
^^in relation to the official judges, thats the best way to do it so there are no dickriding, unexplained bullshit votes, which i think is the fairest way to do it, and as all the judges have no part in the comp they hav no reason to influence the result, anyway Spoken, bigben, get your votes in on this one
peace

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 07:46 PM
DDD

fuck a tourney, after this you're gonna need an attourney/
surely recievin' an early beatin' to have you bleed on a gurney/
I don't know what an attorney has to do with anything.

believe in it firmly, Da Don'll make your silly squad step/
let me expose the truth 'cause I know this spook is really Aud-Spec/8O
Really?

pick the domain, son I'll be rippin' those brains/
I throw flames that'll turn your whole frame to chicken low-mein/
PUNCH

Dusk, why we battling?, you know it's a wrap/
and it don't take a bag of weed to say you blowin' a sack/
ok...........

you notice the stats, I've never been the one you should cross/
now how you gonna kill Da Don when you be under the boss?/
so there's a pecking order?

hundreds have lost, but only few can really say they were worthy/
gave 'em no mercy, battle me?, that's like playin' with hurpies/
so battling you is......like playing with dirty little bumps?

invading the tourney, my lyrics spray, ricochet and grazed ya head/
the only time you hold a razor blade is when you shave your legs/
BANG A RANG PETER

save the begs, and all the baby crying for later/
ya hate to die?, well you'll be dying a hater, no denying I'm greater/
eh.......

I bust quicker than a minute-maid man/
Dusk you should quit rap, and go back to lemonade stands/
we'll give it to you......punch

disintegrate clans and entorauges, rap groups and solo artists/
Fuck Dusk, I should be battling tidal waves to see who flow's the hardest!
PETER PETER PETER PETER

Dusk

The DONS "Crack" rhymes are poser type, since his pots are empty
the spec MisConception is Common, so i cant say ur not an MC
really?

the HOTTEST ENTRY in the SET, a PYROTECHNIC EXPERT
CHUCK the beef, meat cleaver lodged in ur maple leaf sweatshirt
eh......PUNCH

once u dissapear like the "Whats Happenin" cast
i want a dude to hop out a plate of pancakes and pop a cap in ya ass (pulp fiction joke)
Actually is hop out a bowl of rice to pop a cap in yo ass, but we'll give you point for effort

stop and laff, talk and jab punches while DDDUNCES, chew the knob
i blew the sack on ur moms breast, i tol her a mamogram would do the job
really?

SCREW THE SLOB, whos only known projects he gets f's on
hes got THAI GEAR (tiger) gassin him up so now he thinks hes exxon
thai gear, what've you been up to you little devil?

yes DONs his name, but its far from his title tho
the best pawn in the game, but not far from where the knight'll go
which is?..........

and get JUMPED when DOG actually steps PAW in the ghett
put the bacon down cuz "fakin brown"s as RAW as it gets
still waiting........

i call to the set, in a sec hear a "woof" in the rear
and if i called attendance, ur pig ass'd throw a HOOF in the air!
wow billy that punch really nailed him...

ur shook as beer durin a prank, STANK PEE-ON POSER
lyrical hollow tips pierce ur celine dion posters
PUNCH

toss 100 bars here queer, and expect cheers from that fucka NAK
i thought u'd avoid the war but ur countries done enuff of that
a punch.......that hit V-Nack........and Canada......

Vote=DDD

My vote goes DDD..........for having a more solid, better flowing verse, stronger punches, and a dope ending. Dusk, had some punches, but they didn't land as hard ass DDD's.

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 07:51 PM
charge but im more than positive it will be for u, and spoke..other than that im not sure..one

I know what your getting at, but I take voting seriousley. I didn't let the comments we threw at each other effect my voting. I didn't even see this battle until a few minutes ago, because it didn't have Netcee tournment in the title.

oDoUoSoKo
07-13-2006, 08:13 PM
DDD


once u dissapear like the "Whats Happenin" cast
i want a dude to hop out a plate of pancakes and pop a cap in ya ass (pulp fiction joke)
Actually is hop out a bowl of rice to pop a cap in yo ass, but we'll give you point for effort




i kno it was bowl of rice, but marsallis said anywhere in the world, so if butch (ddd) went to canada (maple syrup)......pancakes

WARPATH
07-13-2006, 08:17 PM
i kno it was bowl of rice, but marsallis said anywhere in the world, so if butch (ddd) went to canada (maple syrup)......pancakes

I know, I was being sarcastic.

Da Dishonourable Don
07-14-2006, 12:36 AM
2-1 in Dusk's favour, let's keep it going!

Robert
07-19-2006, 01:42 PM
^^^nice one, lol! Not my fault that the other judges are so unreliable, the point of having official judges is so there aint dickriding, unexplained bullshit votes, but i see wot you mean, its starting to piss me off alwell that these battles aint finished yet, mite have to rethink things past this round as to how i run the tourney
peace

Robert
07-19-2006, 01:49 PM
2-2 all one more vote needed

White N Dangerous
07-19-2006, 09:21 PM
fuck a tourney, after this you're gonna need an attourney/
surely recievin' an early beatin' to have you bleed on a gurney/

iGHT DECENT OPENER HERE GOTTA SAY GOOD WORDPLAY AND CONCEPT

believe in it firmly, Da Don'll make your silly squad step/
let me expose the truth 'cause I know this spook is really Aud-Spec/

UMM NOT THE BEST BUT SURE IT WAS AN AVERAGE BAR

pick the domain, son I'll be rippin' those brains/
I throw flames that'll turn your whole frame to chicken low-mein/

HAHA THIS WAS ABOVE PAR STR8

Dusk, why we battling?, you know it's a wrap/
and it don't take a bag of weed to say you blowin' a sack/

PRETTY PLAYED

you notice the stats, I've never been the one you should cross/
now how you gonna kill Da Don when you be under the boss?/

PRETTY GOOD WORDPLAY WITH UR NAME ON THIS ONE

hundreds have lost, but only few can really say they were worthy/
gave 'em no mercy, battle me?, that's like playin' with hurpies/

LMMFAO PRETTY GOOD

invading the tourney, my lyrics spray, ricochet and grazed ya head/
the only time you hold a razor blade is when you shave your legs/

I THINK I HAVE HEARD THIS ONE SOMEHWERE BEFORE CAN'T PUT A FINGER ON IT THO, OTHER THEN THAT GOOD VOCAB ON THIS ONE

save the begs, and all the baby crying for later/
ya hate to die?, well you'll be dying a hater, no denying I'm greater/

GOOD VOCAB AGAIN AND WORDPLAY

I bust quicker than a minute-maid man/
Dusk you should quit rap, and go back to lemonade stands/

NO.

disintegrate clans and entorauges, rap groups and solo artists/
Fuck Dusk, I should be battling tidal waves to see who flow's the hardest!

THIS WAS AN AVERAGE CLOSER, AVERAGE NAME PLAY THO

OVERALL:8.7/10



The DONS "Crack" rhymes are poser type, since his pots are empty
the spec MisConception is Common, so i cant say ur not an MC

PRETTY BASIC OPENER SAFE

the HOTTEST ENTRY in the SET, a PYROTECHNIC EXPERT
CHUCK the beef, meat cleaver lodged in ur maple leaf sweatshirt

IGHT LIKE THIS ABOVE PAR LINE RIGHT HERE

once u dissapear like the "Whats Happenin" cast
i want a dude to hop out a plate of pancakes and pop a cap in ya ass (pulp fiction joke)

OK DECENT WORDPLAY HERE AND THATS ABOUT IT

stop and laff, talk and jab punches while DDDUNCES, chew the knob
i blew the sack on ur moms breast, i tol her a mamogram would do the job

LMAO IGHT FEELIN THIS

SCREW THE SLOB, whos only known projects he gets f's on
hes got THAI GEAR (tiger) gassin him up so now he thinks hes exxon

DIDN'T GET THIS ONE, SUPPOSPE IM OUT OF THE LOOP

yes DONs his name, but its far from his title tho
the best pawn in the game, but not far from where the knight'll go

LIKED THIS ONE ALOT!!! REALLY GOOD

and get JUMPED when DOG actually steps PAW in the ghett
put the bacon down cuz "fakin brown"s as RAW as it gets

LOL

i call to the set, in a sec hear a "woof" in the rear
and if i called attendance, ur pig ass'd throw a HOOF in the air!

IGHT SAFE

ur shook as beer durin a prank, STANK PEE-ON POSER
lyrical hollow tips pierce ur celine dion posters

ANOTHER STR8 BAR

toss 100 bars here queer, and expect cheers from that fucka NAK
i thought u'd avoid the war but ur countries done enuff of that


LMMFAO DOPE CLOSER LIKED IT

OVERALL:8.8

OVERALL OVERALL LMAO, THIS WAS A VERY CLOSE ONE, I GOTTA SAY BUT I LIKED SUM OF DUSKS LINES MORE THEN YOURS DON, BUT LIKE I SAID U CAME WITH IT, JUST DIDN'T HIT HARD ENOUGH. GOOD BATTLE

MY VOTE: DUSK

Da Dishonourable Don
07-20-2006, 03:17 AM
3-1 , Dusk wins, we'll do it again Dusk, but fuck the hand-picked judges, let people vote for real, I'm not feeling this lil bs, besides WnD's vote could of been a hater vote from the static we had, but I don't know and don't care, good battle, next time 2,3 rounds each, real heavyweight status! let me know if it sounds good!

White N Dangerous
07-20-2006, 03:20 AM
lmmfao u the one still bringing it up, shhhhhhh

im a judge respect my descion no h8

Da Dishonourable Don
07-20-2006, 04:19 AM
Not hatin' at all, I said that I didn't know and didn't care, so fuck whatever was going on before with you and me, you vote for Dusk, congratulations to him, now onto the next!

Da Dishonourable Don
07-20-2006, 04:20 AM
like Cormega said, I lose with a smile:) , I'm still the illest!

Robert
07-20-2006, 09:26 AM
3-2, Dusk wins
peace to both emcees, and btw that was defs not a hater vote