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basho
07-13-2006, 05:13 PM
Peace all. I'm attempting to come on a conscious tip here and shine through for the God. I don't claim 5% never having undergone any lessons though I do identify with their purpose: to unite all human families with the God, the Reflector, the Universal Mind....99 names; pick one. This is the first rhyme I ever wrote and I have no idea if it's capable of registering the way I want it. There's more but my time is limited. Any feedback much appreciated....

Shake the sediment
on bullshit sentiment
you lost your scrolls but I saw where they went
so I vent
supreme fullfilment
from this mighty testament
you get rent
asunder
what a tragic blunder
I flip you over under
my mouth echos thunder
you nasty prick
I swallow obscurity like Moby Dick
for what you acting sick?
I puncture skull with the ink stick
unleash lyric flames lick brain like wick
and melt wax
I weild the small axe
for a big tree
catch the fire like Marley
and have a cookout
roasting devils inside out
then lead the ignorant by the snout
to the river
drink the water it's not bitter
as we flow ever deeper like the ancient scripture
you get the picture
like Van Goh
I'm in the spectrum like indigo
Christ robe rainbow glow
circle walls of Jericho
withstand furnace like Abednigo
Shadrach or Meshack
track the mind like a map
from the relentless attack
Nebechadnezzar gets a spinal tap
knowledge the true and living fact
or get snapped in the trap
gums go flappity, flap, flap
what follows? rat-a-tat-tat
guts go splat
in the Valley of Jehosephat
I stand; remain wrecking shit like Chow Yun Fat
why is that?
must be the clean digestive track
I sip the mint tea you eat gabage like the rat
mass stack of bacon back
your poor diet lay you flat
like the rat race
running rapid pace
absent of all grace
until I slap my palm on your face
make all man one race
the youth pay for the older mistakes
save the babies

That's one. How's that?

Another short one:

Vanity of vanities; all is vanity
the devils double face perpetuates insanity
the greatest sin is poverty
the few stacking paper like monopoly
expose the many to mephistopheles
ignorance and misery
the sum and the total
my equation the jade flesh immortal
throw your punk ass through the portal
the conjurer Doctor Strange
make dimensions re-arrange

???
peace

VernakuLa
07-13-2006, 05:35 PM
u suck fuck yo couch nigga

basho
07-13-2006, 05:39 PM
u suck fuck yo couch nigga

lol how you really feel?

VernakuLa
07-13-2006, 05:50 PM
lol how you really feel?

nah, shhit is decent holmes

peace A town down

basho
07-14-2006, 01:51 PM
I am the man in the moon
descended from the spiders loom
I can float eternity in a balloon
zoom, zoom, zoom, zoom
the world is in a mess
says Ella Fitzgerald
blow the trumpet like the herald
to reclaim cybertron from the decepticon
tape a Bible to my chest it's right next to the Quran
Hagakure, Kebra Negast and Secret Book of John
take heed or get baked like flan
roasted like a smore
what do you mean I'm poor?
I own a whole galaxy
to your possesions you are tied living in fallacy
why you put rims on a toaster?
your brother sleeps in the gutter
devil on the corner just raped his little daughter
sin on top of sin, 360 degrees
we all get ours in the end, best get on your knees

INF
07-14-2006, 02:16 PM
zoom zoom zoom zoom?I am the man in the moon
descended from the spiders loom
I can float eternity in a balloon
zoom, zoom, zoom, zoom
the world is in a mess
says Ella Fitzgerald
blow the trumpet like the herald
to reclaim cybertron from the decepticon
tape a Bible to my chest it's right next to the Quran
Hagakure, Kebra Negast and Secret Book of John
take heed or get baked like flan
roasted like a smore
what do you mean I'm poor?
I own a whole galaxy
to your possesions you are tied living in fallacy
why you put rims on a toaster?
your brother sleeps in the gutter
devil on the corner just raped his little daughter
sin on top of sin, 360 degrees
we all get ours in the end, best get on your knees

basho
07-14-2006, 02:50 PM
zoom zoom zoom zoom?




check the Ella Fitzgerald song "slap that bass"....lyric goes like this:

zoom, zoom, zoom, zoom
the world is in a mess
with politics and taxes
people grinding axes
there's no happiness

basho
07-14-2006, 09:04 PM
Yo....this be the valley of Jehosephat
just relax
dreadlock warriors got our back
Selasie to Assisi
cut down zombies left and right
laugh at devils till daylight
I saw it in the orb of agamotto
bring me the head of Baron Mordo
bury his dead ass underneath the green grass
as ethereal self I pass
through hidden dimension
brain gets the extension
hold court with eternity
and blast the triple eye beam on those kids who want to murder me
poverty stops equality, equality destroys poverty
so I shoot the sheriff of nottingham
distill the pineal gland
and sell it on the black market
your souls I render profit

VernakuLa
07-14-2006, 09:08 PM
upgrade ya rhyming some yo, this aint negative, keep workin at it yo, peace

oDoUoSoKo
07-14-2006, 09:57 PM
ur canadian?

basho
07-14-2006, 11:53 PM
upgrade ya rhyming some yo, this aint negative, keep workin at it yo, peace

thank you, I will.


ur canadian?


yeah. Ottawa, but I'll be hitting the road soon.

White N Dangerous
07-14-2006, 11:56 PM
i think u should stay away from using such complex words, trying to rhyme with everything, it really throws off the flow cuz teh syllables don't add up, ur on the right path tho, i will keep my eye on u, stay up keep blessin

basho
07-15-2006, 12:11 AM
i think u should stay away from using such complex words, trying to rhyme with everything, it really throws off the flow cuz teh syllables don't add up, ur on the right path tho, i will keep my eye on u, stay up keep blessin

thanks, I'll keep trying.