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Da Dishonourable Don
07-14-2006, 12:44 AM
2 rounds, first to 5, 3-0 is a k.o.

GIT READY TO JOUST!

VernakuLa
07-14-2006, 12:50 AM
haha, u stole my battle don, lol w/e PEACE to the gods

smokebongoncliff
07-14-2006, 01:15 AM
na i already made one with you

Da Dishonourable Don
07-17-2006, 08:08 AM
bout to go to sleep, so here we go....

what the fuck kinda name is Smokebongoncliff?/
a white dread hippy burnout choking off one spliff?/
I throw long-bombs quick, so you better be running for cover kiddo/
San Andreas style, beat ya to death with a bloody rubber dildo/ [no homo]
I'm the type to act a fool wit da lama/
I spit a verse, and instantaneously ya shredded like a school of piranas/
don't git me heated, 'cause right now I'm 'bout as cool as a sauna/
I know you're mad 'cause I ain't your dad but I'm in the pool wit ya momma/
we duel for the honour, but only one will leave tell the story/
Creepy'll turn your face into a plate of chicken cacciatore/
rippin' cats with glory, mark my territory with your brains leakin'/
veins seepin' colour red, enough with all this lame preachin'/
I ain't speakin', my actions speak louder than verses/
git found where the dirt is, I plead innocent at trial for the verdict/
I vowed that I'd murder any rapper fuckin' with Da Dishonourable one/
crack you in da chest until you're stretched with your collarbone numb!

aight, quick verse 9 in da morn steez, my bad on taking long, you're up next!

smokebongoncliff
07-18-2006, 02:50 AM
Yo i started readin ya rhymes and got thru half of it
I was expectin something atleast halfway passionate
Your flow was off and you soundin like ur actin, shit
Mankins were seen laughing as don's rappin in action
I got the facts in, You shoulndt touch a mic contraption
What would happen? Theres really noway of knowing
You might start decomposing, Your fingers start imploding
They yell stop! please! just stop writing until the morning
What you write is either childish, nonsense or its boring
please dont rhyme numb and one again or else i am ingoring
Your round two, Ill clown you, watch verbal dart surround you
Strap you to the ground glued by your ankles and thighs too
See ive seen rappers just like you and im tyrin to be nice dood
Your mom lick'd my ass, ahh shit!, see, now thats rude
I could really just ramble, youve got no leverage and no handle
Its done, pm me if you seriusly wanna battle

Da Dishonourable Don
07-19-2006, 02:58 AM
you said my mom licked your ass?, what's with the perverted language?/
your mom'll git raped, abused, screwed loose and a dirty sanchez/
jam machetes in ya dad's throat and watch the fag choke/
then stuff your mother's face in a batch of bad coke, the fat hag croaks/
you lab-roach, you're fuckin' with killer's that's known to tag toes/
let's see if I can fit a half-0 in your sister's asshole/:cheerlie:
my prison castle contains your dead granny's skeleton/
chained to the walls, eyeballs lookin' like geletin/
this lame wants to brawl 'cause the alcohol just settled in/
but flames from my jaws dissolve all that's relevant/
I spit fire, rifle blastin' styles, watch your skin melt/
my rhymes are like the kids in the Micheal Jackson trial, 'cause they been felt/
now send help, 'cause you're bound to git slew when I spew a verse/
I got grimy homies and cronies ready to do my dirt/
like, "Creepy you the greatest, anytime you want I'll screw him up"/
homie chill, just check the first 4 bars, now ain't that rude enough?/

smokebongoncliff
07-26-2006, 07:56 PM
Your mom licked my crack and also drank my milk
its no offense to you because yours moms a milf
You question my language, and say its perverted?
Then you spit 5 lines that assures ur gay for sure kid
This battle is like a capsul and Ill seal the lid
You have a castle? And my grannies in that shit?
Thats seriously fuckin comical, you must be six
You'd mistake a fork for fucking chopsticks
The flames in ur jaw burned away ur brain
Your rhymes are so bad i forgot about ur name
Da Disonorable Don? I put bitches in their places
This dood battles with cheerleading smiley faces
Ditches half ounces cause he cant hold weight
Screams outlound "bong on cliff seals my fate"
I ate Da don, so imma throw away the wrapper
Ur the subject matter of tribe's phony rappers



edit: votes needed

Da Dishonourable Don
07-26-2006, 08:21 PM
ok, let's git some votes!

oDoUoSoKo
07-26-2006, 08:40 PM
wrdply-ddd
pnchs-ddd
crtvty-tie
vcb-tie
flw-sboc

get ur wordplay and personal attacks on check cliff

Stevebud23
07-26-2006, 11:55 PM
smokebongoncliff

Da Dishonourable Don
07-27-2006, 05:31 AM
1-0 in my favour, next dude's vote don't count, explain why you voted!

Robert
07-27-2006, 10:47 AM
DDD, got this although that "cheerleading smiley faces" punch in the second verse was dope from smokinbongoncliff as was that 2nd verse. However, Don was more consistent overall wit less filler material and solid punches so my vote goes to Don...
Vote=Don
peace

Stevebud23
07-27-2006, 12:07 PM
Reason for the victory to smokebongoncliff is decided from the cheerleader smiley face line and tribes phony rappers lines. Don has more punchlines but are not as effective as bong on cliff. First round is about a tie. Key is Don, u are tryin to hard with the wordplay, not as fluid. On the other hand bong needs a bit more to his wordplay. Like gza said u want the verses half short but twice strong.

Vote- Smokebongoncliff

Da Dishonourable Don
07-27-2006, 07:59 PM
2-1 in my favour

Da Dishonourable Don
08-01-2006, 01:22 PM
votes needed!

Da Dishonourable Don
08-08-2006, 01:48 PM
still uppin for votes, somebody give some votes in here, even though I know it's a wrap already!

Da Dishonourable Don
08-25-2006, 06:38 PM
still 2-1 in my fav, let's git some more votes people!

Da Dishonourable Don
09-12-2006, 07:33 AM
vote fuckers!

SMOKE BLUNTS
09-14-2006, 01:34 PM
still 2-1 in my fav, let's git some more votes people!

For the real don the fon got blasted on the 1st 2 he also started with a excuse saying Im tierd so Ill suck dick, but the 2nd one was much better but then in response he got blasted again just like when hes on his knees get blasted with facals in jail

Da Dishonourable Don
09-14-2006, 05:13 PM
and you vote for?