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VernakuLa
07-17-2006, 06:33 PM
this is the unflooded one

VernakuLa
07-17-2006, 06:43 PM
aight heres a quick key style

Pumpin knowledge in to heads, you forget whos the father?
forfeit, crews left throbbin,with a torch lit to the author
Grab 50 n then throw em in the back of the van
Transmit bowes quickly the crowds left clappin their hands
Dunno whos the boss, when your crew gets lost
Fools get tossed, Then i tore threw the slobs (gangs, bloods)
I kill swift and quick, transcripts, sick penmanship
When the clips hit, ya'll thick dicks get lynched


peace

jallainINS
07-17-2006, 06:52 PM
nice closer, pretty tight even though its short

VernakuLa
07-17-2006, 06:56 PM
thanks for the feed Jal

uppin

VernakuLa
07-17-2006, 07:46 PM
My mack hand smacks thugs, leavin em throbbin
I don't roll with bats man, cuz I flea with the robbins
Bleed n i watch it, My flow catches mad hype
and is bitten more than the backs of average crack pipes
Raps like, God givin out secrets of livin to ancient
Seed of a great witch, leave you sittin when slang hits
A demon thats faceless, don't stand out in a small room
claw wounds, enthrall you, to lash n mawl tunes

peace

VernakuLa
07-18-2006, 03:56 PM
none huh?

oh well

jallainINS
07-18-2006, 08:17 PM
i liked it nak. solid throughout. nice schemin.

the second half...the last 4 lines were real nice IMO

VernakuLa
07-18-2006, 08:20 PM
peace JAl, i drop some more in a bitty

Robert
07-18-2006, 11:38 PM
Good shit man, i'd like to see something longer though
peace

VernakuLa
07-20-2006, 08:16 PM
no1 else? Ill be droppin audio, im hitting this thread up soon wit lyricals

peace

VernakuLa
07-21-2006, 04:03 AM
i wrote this over the Sean Price song- Onionhead (nice beat)
BTW, this is a verse were i tried real hard on the first half so... :=)

It be that cold slicer, More nicer den mackin a babe
With a flow twice per, four kinds of rapper today
I shake clits, break kids off who dabble in street
Make spits, place bids on dudes battlin - me
Actors believe, lyrics spit out of the woodwork
Packin sum heat,to smak and deplete some these hood jerks
I could splurge, and explode in the margins n lines
So they steal clocks, just to say they "borrowing time" (played lol)
Far from these rhymes, They be clawed under my shoes
Jaws, runnin em lose, get paused when plunged by the duece
Tsunami raps, hit fools flaunting with gats
Calmly get smacked, kids whos bodies get cracked
Toxins spit out the mouth, Punk actors, I'm feedin the mic
Kids runnin south, These crunk rappers easily die

all i got

1

FEED

Longbongcilvaringz
07-21-2006, 07:27 AM
not bad, didnt flow to well for me, but it would sound better over a beat.

when are you droppin some audio.

VernakuLa
07-21-2006, 01:53 PM
not bad, didnt flow to well for me, but it would sound better over a beat.

when are you droppin some audio.

thanks man, well, as i stated, i aint really write the second half over the "Onionhead" beat lol, audio might take like 2 weeks, depending on my satisfaction with what i write ya dig? I'll prolly put u on my list and pm u wen its done cuhh

peace

VernakuLa
07-21-2006, 08:09 PM
uppin' for feed

tha god concept
07-21-2006, 08:32 PM
uppin for feed when throwin up what i read
u see its slick , but not enuff for a tru heads needs
i make a rhyme sprout like tree seeds before makin the leaves
breezy when lit but the wick flames like my spit
un-official dedicated to the game kid slanguagde
nightmare in the closet lost it while on a cane bid

tha god concept
07-21-2006, 08:33 PM
ill shit v nak.....u deff stepped ya game up

VernakuLa
07-21-2006, 08:35 PM
ill shit v nak.....u deff stepped ya game up

Word.....when u spittin some new shit god?

peace

tha god concept
07-21-2006, 08:38 PM
asap homie...droppin more jewels than stigmata wounds

VernakuLa
07-21-2006, 08:40 PM
asap homie...droppin more jewels than stigmata wounds

aight well get on that like an asain bitch (lol)

yo, u said u were gonna drop audio when u get a new mic or some shit right? wha happened

Eversick666
07-22-2006, 01:31 PM
i started

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 01:35 PM
i started

dont flood dude, drop some feed

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Eversick666
07-22-2006, 01:49 PM
vernak shut your cake hole,im crazy head stressen,should'ent u be wit ya momz strummen a lesson,im guessin gunnen wit the weapons just not your cause,only thing u tear up is faggots backs wit claws.

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 01:53 PM
vernak shut your cake hole,im crazy head stressen,should'ent u be wit ya momz strummen a lesson,im guessin gunnen wit the weapons just not your cause,only thing u tear up is faggots backs wit claws.

? that aint feed back

cool verse, dude post this somewhere else

pece

Eversick666
07-22-2006, 01:59 PM
k then don't be fucken laughen when im postin or it i'll be you that were roasten
eversick666

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 02:04 PM
k then don't be fucken laughen when im postin or it i'll be you that were roasten
eversick666

sure dude, i aint wanna murder anymore....

Eversick666
07-22-2006, 02:18 PM
u couldent murder trust me

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 02:20 PM
u couldent murder trust me

ok, keep telling yourself that:thumbup:

Eversick666
07-22-2006, 02:26 PM
Herb

Edgar Erebus
07-22-2006, 02:38 PM
If you wanna beef go to Battlefield

Nak, you got intelligent verses, street knowledge without gimmicks. Fine work, keep on it. You got only sometimes small problem wit flow, but else you do it smoothly.

Continue with the work, hopin' for audio

Peace

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 02:50 PM
thanks for the input slim. Yea im workin on the flow, the bad thing is with me, i start off strong then i get bored wit what im writin then it falls of naw mean? Chyea cuhh stay up

Eversick666
07-22-2006, 02:50 PM
i'll set beef where i please slim t so stop being verns dog wit ya nose suckin his
shit

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 02:51 PM
i'll set beef where i please slim t so stop being verns dog wit ya nose suckin his
shit

i still dunno what i did to u but w/e i have no beef like mcdonalds

pece

Edgar Erebus
07-22-2006, 02:51 PM
thanks for the input slim. Yea im workin on the flow, the bad thing is with me, i start off strong then i get bored wit what im writin then it falls of naw mean? Chyea cuhh stay up
Yeah, same shit as on my last joint

Eversick666
07-22-2006, 03:05 PM
americans never liked canadian beef anyway
lol
peace
eversick666

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 11:58 PM
I don't-know, it sho-blows the way poor life-is
Spine, no-bones, plus i gota pay for five-kids
My shit aint that bad, but im spose to act-sad, right?
With these crap-fads, and ass-hats who lack-mad spice
It aint true, these aint rules man, unless we rollin with cups
We sho-snoozed, but those fools, just get scolded n fucked
Growin is tough, wit no-roots, that why they skulls-loose
Mo-proof, the cold-truth got em all in a rope-nuse
Choke spoofs, Flow proves, dum dums stick guns up they rear
Bump bump, the slums spun, Fucks who sung nuff they queer

VernakuLa
07-23-2006, 03:40 AM
Thick skull, I blitz souls with one swipe of the pen
Prints mold, Hits form, left kids with a knife in the skin
life of the men, who actually fallen deep in lagoons
dreamin these tunes, youngins left seepin with wounds
My flow breaks the cliche, and strikes fear in the omen
I got a taste for replays, lets get that clear in the open
Monsters get fierce, as the swells of black water emerge
Wrath of a wandering curse, in a flash, throngs get diverse


peace

Da Dishonourable Don
07-23-2006, 04:21 AM
gggyyyyyeeeeeaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

you comin' off nice wit it kid, readin' some of your verses, killin' nuff of these dudes by far man, let me know when the audios are in effect! BRRRRRAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

VernakuLa
07-23-2006, 04:23 AM
gggyyyyyeeeeeaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

you comin' off nice wit it kid, readin' some of your verses, killin' nuff of these dudes by far man, let me know when the audios are in effect! BRRRRRAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

word up my homie, youll be the FIRST to know bout audionesss

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VernakuLa
07-24-2006, 04:52 PM
no feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed?

jallainINS
07-24-2006, 05:04 PM
the beginning was a little weaker then the rest of it but it finished off nice and strong. keep blessin yo.

VernakuLa
07-24-2006, 05:12 PM
the beginning was a little weaker then the rest of it but it finished off nice and strong. keep blessin yo.

lol, keep blessin, thanks for the feed ja, i can always count on you to give your honest opinion on shit

peace

VernakuLa
07-25-2006, 01:16 AM
uppin

Longbongcilvaringz
07-25-2006, 01:20 AM
thanks man, well, as i stated, i aint really write the second half over the "Onionhead" beat lol, audio might take like 2 weeks, depending on my satisfaction with what i write ya dig? I'll prolly put u on my list and pm u wen its done cuhh

peace


sounds good.

recent work is nice.

nice schemes, as you would say.

VernakuLa
07-26-2006, 01:41 AM
Nak'll rip the coast, pack sacks n spliff em soaked
Macks, Gats, spray em quick, lay them bricks n clip dem pros
Tattered chrome, splatter domes, flatten crowns, slap drones
Clack fo's, heat seepin, knee deep in, a rappin flow

lol

VernakuLa
07-28-2006, 04:10 AM
Lungs soaked in refer, these words speak for nations
None for these birds they either neither, sleep nor trace it
Creeps stash the message, left us rappin this sentence
Slashin' at a dissed menace, or seem to ask for repentance


,y new style

Logik1991
08-01-2006, 03:59 AM
Lungs soaked in refer, these words speak for nations
None for these birds they either neither, sleep nor trace it
Creeps stash the message, left us rappin this sentence
Slashin' at a dissed menace, or seem to ask for repentance


,y new style

word thats some illness right there

all the other verse is dope also man

keep blessin yo'

Father N Dangerous
08-01-2006, 04:26 AM
Lungs soaked in refer, these words speak for nations
None for these birds they either neither, sleep nor trace it
Creeps stash the message, left us rappin this sentence
Slashin' at a dissed menace, or seem to ask for repentance


word like'n that shit good vocab, feelin da new style

VernakuLa
08-13-2006, 08:59 PM
Yo

fuck the dimes and riches, crunk rap and shiny bitches
I blind wit these digits, clean hits from the deep risen
I breathe fitness, turn from hustlin dimes to music
Rhyme to lose wit, crime is foolish les u apply the bullshit

VernakuLa
08-17-2006, 11:42 PM
KeYsTyLe for thought

Inflicting the plague, I still remain-low-key
Cracking skull-brains, Keep saying my flow breathes!
Like it was a living pattern, connected by light
Inducing my rhymes with being, confessing my plight!
Then your perception is right, when you gaze at the text
bathed in foam, I'll still suceed in blazin your vets
Came with your best? I'll put bloodstains on your vest
Concieved in stone, most men are walking on steem
My thoughts more evil than most cabnets of kings


drop feed

peace

tha masta GenIUS

VernakuLa
08-26-2006, 09:16 PM
My mind is a razor cut, to blaze these fucks, out the metal door
The same weak front, dull mental swords and fake metaphors
Even though it flows well, It shows well...other sounds things change
Its all the game, bling in the mainstream, the undergrounds the same thing
We change names, but its the archetype issue, And its not like I diss you
But how can you get youth, to get you, if you dismiss truth?
It dont mean I list do's, but you can do it up different
You blew up the gifted, took the styles and screwed up the sickness
But here is the truth, you can break the mold on the radio waves
Come Clear with the youth, truth and space sold songs aching to play

Paving the way, for those souls facing estrange
It doesn't mean anything if re-making the name
These stupid actors, making groups with rappers
Claim a real feeling, but misconstrued it after
My thoughts ooze with laughter, at this pitiful pestilence
destroying the game, Riddled with subliminal messages....

peace, and share comments

VernakuLa
08-27-2006, 11:47 PM
feed....