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444trumpets
07-07-2005, 02:10 AM
Yo
Day Of Rest Moonlight Sets The Tone Story Told Endless Scripts Unfold
From The Dome Purest Form Killah Bee Storm Swarm The State Checkmate Cast The Winds Take The Glimpse Wirlwinds
Portal
To Different Areas
Soak In Life Ill Meet U At The Top Of The Clif
Telescope At The Star
Revolves Around Me Astronomy New Discovery Winds Chilly
Portrait Like Davinci Winds Drift Gravity Feel My Body Drop Back To Earth
Reality Verse Slash Opponents Afterlife Components
3rd Planet From The Sun Evolutionary Energy Force The Sword Swing Strikes Devils Off Course MY SOURCE OF UNITY DIVIDES SANTUARY GATHERINGS LIGHT BEAMS FLASH THE INTENT TO SACRIFICE
MIRACLES HAPPEN WITH MENTAL STIMULATION
HEAL THE WORLD WhERE FACING
NO ERASING HISTORY IS THE TIMELINE LIFELINES BLOOD PUMPS LIFE TO AN INSTANT REVELATION TO THE LAST CRIES OF BABIES BORN
FIRST BREATH ALREADY SCORNED
MILITARY UNIFORM PERFORM FORMS OF HYBRID TRANSFORM
DIVIDED LIFES TORN
TRUMPETS BE THE SIGNS
4.4.4 BE THE RYME

the messiah
07-07-2005, 02:52 AM
i always like that absract direction you take it to, nice drop...peace and 1

GuardianOne
07-07-2005, 03:36 AM
Your verse seemed not well placed (or organized), but i think thats just the fact about it. It continues to flow in some disbanded effort. All the words seem to be expressing something whilst they (th words ) are joined. Nice though. Hey what would happen on sunday?

Peace
PS: Keep posting