PDA

View Full Version : piece im workin on


jallainINS
07-22-2006, 01:33 PM
bored today so i started workin on this litte thing... feedback negative or positive so far?

See Billy? Watch him flee willynilly
Gee silly, I think its time we free willy
Milly Vanilly's right lets lip and synch
Labels sleepin on me like Rip Van Wink
Thats cool though, I stick to rhymin right
And you'll know, I'm quick for climbin heights
Cuz my satirical spherical lyricals an ear full
So cotton swab that rotten mob a lotta blobs be careful
I abuse and amuse ya with no producer
Did I lose ya? Just accuse the diffusers
I carry nerds on my back while i parry words
Unstoppable lines cant be held back by Barriers
Tarry herds, they want funk worse then jim carey's turds
I shut-em-up with shots accurate like Larry Bird's

jallainINS
07-22-2006, 03:08 PM
i was just kinda jokin around when i wrote this but how bout some feed you 9 viewers...

VernakuLa
07-22-2006, 03:19 PM
not that special khed, u said u was jokin tho, its a relief but shit decent got some schemes