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Robert
07-23-2006, 04:15 AM
Same rules as always, Vernakula drops first, good luck to both writers
peace (btw judges get your votes in asap coz i dont want the 2nd round taking too long)

VernakuLa
07-23-2006, 08:08 PM
ok, ill do my best :thumbup:

VernakuLa
07-23-2006, 08:23 PM
..........

VernakuLa
07-25-2006, 07:02 PM
Eh yo, tribe couldn't (w)rap tight if he worked at a drive thru
Acts like hes on top of the game, but aint on G-Units side crew
This battles a lost favor, the last time it happened I shot duds
Only time tribe holds a hot paper, is when he rolls up, and rocks buds


Hes actin crazy, There is no disnosaurs comin thru after him (his last sig)
I rhymed poor and throw lazy, and hes still battling my crews acronym
He told me, hes recieved props, got clean chops, that he'd stop
When his statistics are as funny, as dancing crack feinds rocks


My fillers trounce your punches, wont beat me with crazy booted dreams
You only drop scientific shit, when you get radiation off computer screens
I'll 'shatter' competition, like Tonya Harding, in life time your lackin
Beatin off to tunes by Ricky Martin, is the only heat tribe's packin

I've seen garbage compactors, with less bitten shit than t-ribes raps
See why mack? Your "punch-drunk" rhymes got more holes than your "teeths wide gaps"
You can't measure up to me, if you even added it up correctly
More than half of your rhymes are wack as fuck, and elementary

VernakuLa
07-25-2006, 11:44 PM
T-ribe, weres your verse?

Robert
07-26-2006, 01:01 AM
Aight, T-ribe your up man, lets get this on the move.....

T-ribe
07-26-2006, 02:11 AM
This kid must hate himself, he just dove head first in tha fiya/
I'm livewiya/ force your 80's style to retiya/
How you gonna get your B-boy from Electric Boogaloo/
The only reason your rep'n a crew is because half dem pitty you/
I pitty the fool/ for fuckin wit Mr. T/ he's missin me/
This slacker's on the B squad/ hopin for tha A-Team/
He spits the same thing/ boring metaphors galore/
Look what I just discovered/ The Corps first metaphor whore/
You should'nt battle unless your completly shore...I mean sure/
That you want everybody to know your rhyme's obscure/
Laments terms/ your style is undefined sonn, step ya game up/
Nows the time to remove the make-up/ ret for the shake up/
I'm screamin yahtzee, you get laid flat like 3 card molly/
Killin handicaps that speak Vernacular is my hobby/
Diggin ditches/ farewell pictures/ your lyrics keep you somber/
You the type to put latex on cucumbers/
Hows that feel Vernak? Your girl told me she's sick of snacks/
Askin Tribe for a meal she cant finish wit out piggiebacks .....
I mean doggie bags/ Hold no weight so ya pants don't sag/
When I say drag I'm talkin bout a blunt/when you hear drag u get dressed up/

Robert
07-26-2006, 02:41 AM
Vernakula-
Eh yo, tribe couldn't (w)rap tight if he worked at a drive thru
Acts like hes on top of the game, but aint on G-Units side crew
(alright opener, the punches dont hit that hard tho)

This battles a lost favor, the last time it happened I shot duds
Only time tribe holds a hot paper, is when he rolls up, and rocks buds
(alright second punch but it aint hitting hard, the wordplay is good though)

Hes actin crazy, There is no disnosaurs comin thru after him (his last sig)
I rhymed poor and throw lazy, and hes still battling my crews acronym
(first line doesnt hit, the second is alright)

He told me, hes recieved props, got clean chops, that he'd stop
When his statistics are as funny, as dancing crack feinds rocks
(nice second line and hitting on a personal level)

My fillers trounce your punches, wont beat me with crazy booted dreams
You only drop scientific shit, when you get radiation off computer screens
(nice wordplay and punches, although i hope it proves true coz a lot of the material i've read sofar has been filler (ie the punches aint hitting))

I'll 'shatter' competition, like Tonya Harding, in life time your lackin
Beatin off to tunes by Ricky Martin, is the only heat tribe's packin
(ill first line, the second is average, bit of a played personal really)

I've seen garbage compactors, with less bitten shit than t-ribes raps
See why mack? Your "punch-drunk" rhymes got more holes than your "teeths wide gaps"
(nice personals and the first punch hits, although is that true?)

You can't measure up to me, if you even added it up correctly
More than half of your rhymes are wack as fuck, and elementary
(nice personal finish although the first line is average)

T-ribe-
This kid must hate himself, he just dove head first in tha fiya/
I'm livewiya/ force your 80's style to retiya/
(good intro, personal attack)

How you gonna get your B-boy from Electric Boogaloo/
The only reason your rep'n a crew is because half dem pitty you/
(lol, this is an ill personal the wordplay is good, nice)

I pitty the fool/ for fuckin wit Mr. T/ he's missin me/
This slacker's on the B squad/ hopin for tha A-Team/
(lol, nice punches, hitting hard, and the flow and wordplay is solid)

He spits the same thing/ boring metaphors galore/
Look what I just discovered/ The Corps first metaphor whore/
(ok personal)

You should'nt battle unless your completly shore...I mean sure/
That you want everybody to know your rhyme's obscure/
(average)

Laments terms/ your style is undefined sonn, step ya game up/
Nows the time to remove the make-up/ ret for the shake up/
(ok personal attack)

I'm screamin yahtzee, you get laid flat like 3 card molly/
Killin handicaps that speak Vernacular is my hobby/
(nice wordplay and punches)

Diggin ditches/ farewell pictures/ your lyrics keep you somber/
You the type to put latex on cucumbers/
(the second line is good, the first average)

Hows that feel Vernak? Your girl told me she's sick of snacks/
Askin Tribe for a meal she cant finish wit out piggiebacks .....
(average, played)

I mean doggie bags/ Hold no weight so ya pants don't sag/
When I say drag I'm talkin bout a blunt/when you hear drag u get dressed up/
(nice closer)

Tribe got this, i get the impression that Vern focussed more on wordplay then punches and personals, some nice lines there like the Tonya Harding one but really some of those punches were pretty weak.
Tribe that verse was pretty ferocious, heavy hitting punches and personals won it for you although some lines were a little bit filler (the girl/piggie backs line) but overall a very nice verse...

Vote=T-ribe

peace to both writers
1-0
judges get your votes in please

VernakuLa
07-26-2006, 02:44 AM
yea, pretty weak effort on my part, i just dont care no more

peace t-ribe and robert

1-0

Robert
07-27-2006, 10:09 AM
Votes....

T-ribe
07-28-2006, 06:30 PM
Com'on judges get on ya job!

Robert
07-29-2006, 01:23 AM
Aight then its open voting from this point....for votes to count they must be a bar by bar break down or house rules....and no dickriding, unexplained votes
1-0 to t-ribe
peace

num2son
07-30-2006, 07:24 PM
FLow - Tie
Creativity - Tie
Vocab - T Ribe
Worldplay - Vern
Punchlines - T Ribe

T-Ribe gets my vote

T-ribe
07-30-2006, 10:59 PM
2-0 I gots the lead

Robert
07-31-2006, 08:36 AM
C'mon, more votes, remember its open voting....

WARPATH
07-31-2006, 02:02 PM
Vernakular

Eh yo, tribe couldn't (w)rap tight if he worked at a drive thru
Acts like hes on top of the game, but aint on G-Units side crew
eh....this could've came out better
This battles a lost favor, the last time it happened I shot duds
Only time tribe holds a hot paper, is when he rolls up, and rocks buds
I felt the second line........Vernak? How you gonna admit to shooting blanks?

Hes actin crazy, There is no disnosaurs comin thru after him (his last sig)
I rhymed poor and throw lazy, and hes still battling my crews acronym
not really fealing the first line, and then your saying he's battling OJ....like the juice or the person....what are you saying?
He told me, hes recieved props, got clean chops, that he'd stop
When his statistics are as funny, as dancing crack feinds rocks
dancing crack fiends rocks......what the fuck?

My fillers trounce your punches, wont beat me with crazy booted dreams
You only drop scientific shit, when you get radiation off computer screens
was feeling this line, Good Job Odd Job.

I'll 'shatter' competition, like Tonya Harding, in life time your lackin
Beatin off to tunes by Ricky Martin, is the only heat tribe's packin
beatin off to ricky martin is equivelent to packing in some heat huh? Shattering shit like a bitch, so your saying you'll have your man come smack tribe in the knees huh.............oh that's some hot shit.

I've seen garbage compactors, with less bitten shit than t-ribes raps
See why mack? Your "punch-drunk" rhymes got more holes than your "teeths wide gaps"
ok..:=)
You can't measure up to me, if you even added it up correctly
More than half of your rhymes are wack as fuck, and elementary
ok nice finisher.

Tribe

This kid must hate himself, he just dove head first in tha fiya/
I'm livewiya/ force your 80's style to retiya/
eh...
How you gonna get your B-boy from Electric Boogaloo/
The only reason your rep'n a crew is because half dem pitty you/
#(
I pitty the fool/ for fuckin wit Mr. T/ he's missin me/
This slacker's on the B squad/ hopin for tha A-Team/
ok.
He spits the same thing/ boring metaphors galore/
Look what I just discovered/ The Corps first metaphor whore/
oh shit.
You should'nt battle unless your completly shore...I mean sure/
That you want everybody to know your rhyme's obscure/
eh...
Laments terms/ your style is undefined sonn, step ya game up/
Nows the time to remove the make-up/ ret for the shake up/
ok....more filler
I'm screamin yahtzee, you get laid flat like 3 card molly/
Killin handicaps that speak Vernacular is my hobby/
I like the first line.....but killin handicaps????????What the fuck?
Diggin ditches/ farewell pictures/ your lyrics keep you somber/
You the type to put latex on cucumbers/
lol at cucumbers
Hows that feel Vernak? Your girl told me she's sick of snacks/
Askin Tribe for a meal she cant finish wit out piggiebacks .....
ok.
I mean doggie bags/ Hold no weight so ya pants don't sag/
When I say drag I'm talkin bout a blunt/when you hear drag u get dressed up/
weak finisher

Vernakular had some decent lines, but a lot of it wasn't hitting home. Tribe had some mediocre punches, but mixed in with some lines that brought up the entertainment value just a notch.

Vote = T-ribe

Fuck
07-31-2006, 06:03 PM
flow-tie
vcb-tie
wrdply-vern
crtvty-ribe
pnchs-tie

slight edge to vern for some of the punches...both cood have hustled more

Ghost Lee
07-31-2006, 06:21 PM
flow-tie
vcb-vern
wrdply-vern
crtvty-t-ribe
pnchs-tie

had little better verse like 7.7 to 7.8 so the vote goes to vern

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 06:31 PM
flow-tie
vcb-tie
wrdply-vern
crtvty-t-ribe
pnchs-t-ribe

better structured verse

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 06:48 PM
aight t-ribe took it 5-2

ima get back at you

wordwarlock
07-31-2006, 06:55 PM
flow=rbe
wordplay=rbe
creativity=vrn
vocabulary=rbe
punches=vrn

tribe wins my vote by a landslide

T-ribe
07-31-2006, 08:46 PM
Good battle Vern
See you on the Flipside

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 08:51 PM
Good battle Vern
See you on the Flipside

flip side like lesbians peace

Robert
07-31-2006, 10:50 PM
All over...T-ribe advances, good to see ppl voting