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Robert
07-23-2006, 05:17 AM
Aight then, second rounds up, same rules as the first, one verse each, Jclyrical genius is first to drop, good luck to both writers,
peace

J-Cee
07-24-2006, 02:23 AM
aight..will post it tonight.

J-Cee
07-24-2006, 11:16 AM
I got the Ravashing Disasterous plan for my battle man/
To Grab my fuckin knife and turn this Thai to spiced Spam/
A Target for my Killing Turn this Thread to Vietnam/
Or Paint his skin White and get adopted to Uncle Sam/
An opening Infection Let the Bacteria Spread/
all it takes is 20 lines for an Implosion of ya Head/
Call the Ambulance quick is it normal to have a small dick/
subliminal messages to hit your mind instead/
Then your ass is born again to a family of old men/
Chokin on a cock and saying "Why Big Ben'?/
Live footage of your rape daily on E.S.P.N/
How far would they take it the Gears Have Raised Again/
My style is exclusive to those that understand/
Losing is your destiny your life was all planned/
Livin your life to law of the land/
But gettin touched daily by some Wrinkly old hands/
Cause i am your creator an even i admit your shit/
Your not taken serious i compare you to a Skit/
Someone in the Background Who Deserves to feel my spit/
I just bruised Ya Ego Bit By Fucking Bit



hehe...dont take offense to none of this,just spittin.

Robert
07-24-2006, 12:24 PM
aight thai gear lets see this verse soon
peace

Thai Gear
07-24-2006, 09:01 PM
i'll post tommorrow night and robert dusk can't make now to post his verse b/c his computer is down

Thai Gear
07-25-2006, 08:31 PM
let throw something down real quick

Thai Gear
07-25-2006, 08:34 PM
Fuck the genius who decided to name himself J Cee
His rapping style is bootleg like an outback macy
aiming boomerangs at me but they just miss and go back
as u slip and I snap so around ur corspe everyone is wearing black
cuz of ur lack to put words together to make a verse that attacks
i could shit and let u battle crap and u still be recieving smacks
i'll drag u around sydney to perth and u still won't know what hit ya
from there i'll slap to darwin where you'll wonder the fuck just bite ya
the only thing J sees is death after my words have sealed his doom
cuz my verses cuz explosions that makes your lines go boom
u come to me and put on your gloves trying to box with joey
second round knockout against a australian rapping phony
after your murder more of my pics posted wanted in the NYC
did the world a favor by killing a nother wannabee who's idol is aussie
u try to spit a decent verse but keep tripping over bandicoots
this thread is a war but the only one with gun and wearing army boots
wanna battle? lets scrap yet u never show up cuz ur buns
spill ur blood like the cookie monster does crumbs
ur scared easily to win all i had to do was jump up and say boo
so quit the tough guy attitude go fuck ur pet kangaroo


before the votes come in if a judge is uncurtain of lines in my verse let me know and i'll explain it

Thai Gear
07-25-2006, 08:37 PM
hehe...dont take offense to none of this,just spittin.

same here

num2son
07-25-2006, 09:33 PM
Flow - Gear
Punchlines - J Cee
Wordplay - J Cee
Creativity - J Cee
Vocab - Tie

J Cee gets my vote

Robert
07-26-2006, 02:00 AM
J-Cee-
I got the Ravashing Disasterous plan for my battle man/
To Grab my fuckin knife and turn this Thai to spiced Spam/
(alright opener, nice wordplay and aggressive)

A Target for my Killing Turn this Thread to Vietnam/
Or Paint his skin White and get adopted to Uncle Sam/
(average punches here)

An opening Infection Let the Bacteria Spread/
all it takes is 20 lines for an Implosion of ya Head/
(alright)

Call the Ambulance quick is it normal to have a small dick/
(hmmmm.....)

subliminal messages to hit your mind instead/
Then your ass is born again to a family of old men/
(what exactly does this bottom line mean? not really a diss)

Chokin on a cock and saying "Why Big Ben'?/
Live footage of your rape daily on E.S.P.N/
(is this a personal? pretty average bars yet kinda amusing)

How far would they take it the Gears Have Raised Again/
(alright)

My style is exclusive to those that understand/
Losing is your destiny your life was all planned/
(average)

Livin your life to law of the land/
But gettin touched daily by some Wrinkly old hands/
(no not like this second bar, unoriginal, lame punch in my view)

Cause i am your creator an even i admit your shit/
Your not taken serious i compare you to a Skit/
(shocking bars, sorry man but the first is a recycled overused punch and the second is lame)

Someone in the Background Who Deserves to feel my spit/
I just bruised Ya Ego Bit By Fucking Bit
(alright closer)

Thai Gear-
Fuck the genius who decided to name himself J Cee
His rapping style is bootleg like an outback macy
(pretty decent opener)

aiming boomerangs at me but they just miss and go back
as u slip and I snap so around ur corspe everyone is wearing black
(alright first bar, the second line is average)

cuz of ur lack to put words together to make a verse that attacks
i could shit and let u battle crap and u still be recieving smacks
(wide lines, average punches, the second line is better)

i'll drag u around sydney to perth and u still won't know what hit ya
from there i'll slap to darwin where you'll wonder the fuck just bite ya
(lol, like this little section, nice punch on the second line)

the only thing "J sees" is death after my words have sealed his doom
(clever wordplay)

cuz my verses cuz explosions that makes your lines go boom
(not that good)

u come to me and put on your gloves trying to box with joey
second round knockout against a australian rapping phony
(average, maybe playing too much on the fact he's an Aussie)

after your murder more of my pics posted wanted in the NYC
did the world a favor by killing a nother wannabee who's idol is aussie
(nup, not hitting)

u try to spit a decent verse but keep tripping over bandicoots
this thread is a war but the only one with gun and wearing army boots
(first line is kinda funny, the 2nd i think you missed something out, do you mean your the only one wearing that stuff?)

wanna battle? lets scrap yet u never show up cuz ur buns
spill ur blood like the cookie monster does crumbs
(lol, nice second bar the first is ok)

ur scared easily to win all i had to do was jump up and say boo
so quit the tough guy attitude go fuck ur pet kangaroo
(bad closer, last line is pure garbage and im not saying that coz im Australian but its unoriginal and doesnt really hit)

Overall the standard of this battle was average, both writers had thier moments but J-Cee had some real wak lines (and some good ones) and Thai Gear was at times uncreative with the punches about Australia and over used them. Overall i feel that Thai edged this one, he was more consistent and had some amusing punches and personals.
Vote=Thai Gear

1-0, official judges get your act together please
peace

J-Cee
07-26-2006, 02:56 AM
meanings
-Call the Ambulance quick is it normal to have a small dick-Name is Thai Gear so assuming hes asian........

"Then your ass is born again to a family of old men"-After i killed him he was resserected to a family of pedaphiles and Big Ben was one of them lol..a weird idea but i just kept it goin.

Robert
07-26-2006, 03:10 AM
^^yeah if your gonna have such a far fetched punch in there your better off explaining it
peace

Robert
07-27-2006, 11:08 AM
Votes bitches!!!!!!

Dr.Teeth
07-27-2006, 06:38 PM
my nigg thai gets my vote.thats whats up.

oDoUoSoKo
07-27-2006, 08:09 PM
u cant vote u bean gagger

VernakuLa
07-27-2006, 08:10 PM
fuck

Robert
07-29-2006, 02:25 AM
this battle is at 1-1, open voting for the rest of this round, votes must be explained bar by bar or using house rules, dickriding or unexplained votes will be dismissed (one vote in this battle already has been)
peace

Robert
07-31-2006, 09:37 AM
Votes!!!

WARPATH
07-31-2006, 03:01 PM
JC

I got the Ravashing Disasterous plan for my battle man/
To Grab my fuckin knife and turn this Thai to spiced Spam/
A Target for my Killing Turn this Thread to Vietnam/
Or Paint his skin White and get adopted to Uncle Sam/
Kind of forced hear, but we'll let it slide.
An opening Infection Let the Bacteria Spread/
all it takes is 20 lines for an Implosion of ya Head/
20 lines huh?
Call the Ambulance quick is it normal to have a small dick/
subliminal messages to hit your mind instead/
still waiting for the sublimnals.........
Then your ass is born again to a family of old men/
Chokin on a cock and saying "Why Big Ben'?/
Big Ben, did you do that to him?
Live footage of your rape daily on E.S.P.N/
How far would they take it the Gears Have Raised Again/
I didn't know rape was a sport!
My style is exclusive to those that understand/
Losing is your destiny your life was all planned/
ok
Livin your life to law of the land/
But gettin touched daily by some Wrinkly old hands/
Cause i am your creator an even i admit your shit/
really?
Your not taken serious i compare you to a Skit/
Someone in the Background Who Deserves to feel my spit/
and what kind of spit it that?
I just bruised Ya Ego Bit By Fucking Bit
You sure did!

Thai Gear

Fuck the genius who decided to name himself J Cee
His rapping style is bootleg like an outback macy
so....your calling him a genius?
aiming boomerangs at me but they just miss and go back
as u slip and I snap so around ur corspe everyone is wearing black
eh........
cuz of ur lack to put words together to make a verse that attacks
i could shit and let u battle crap and u still be recieving smacks
so..he's battling shit, and getting hit, while battling shit?
i'll drag u around sydney to perth and u still won't know what hit ya
from there i'll slap to darwin where you'll wonder the fuck just bite ya
uh....
the only thing J sees is death after my words have sealed his doom
cuz my verses cuz explosions that makes your lines go boom
damn, that was wacker then JC's 20 line imposion rhyme.
u come to me and put on your gloves trying to box with joey
second round knockout against a australian rapping phony
ok.
after your murder more of my pics posted wanted in the NYC
did the world a favor by killing a nother wannabee who's idol is aussie
so let me get his straight- he's murdering wanted posters of Thai Gear in NYC, and by doing so, it was a favor to the world because Thai Gear's idol is austrailina and i'm assumin JC is australian?----- Or is it after JC's murder, wanted posters went up for Thai Gear, and it was a favor to the world because JC has an idol that's australian? Either way it's equally whack.
u try to spit a decent verse but keep tripping over bandicoots
this thread is a war but the only one with gun and wearing army boots
ok.........so who's wearing the boots?
wanna battle? lets scrap yet u never show up cuz ur buns
spill ur blood like the cookie monster does crumbs
because coockie monster is gangsta nicckah!
ur scared easily to win all i had to do was jump up and say boo
so quit the tough guy attitude go fuck ur pet kangaroo
ok nice finisher

Damn, I can't figure out who's verse is whacker, i'm sorry but those verses from both sides were garbage, I'm fucking pissed you guys made me waste 15 minutes of life breaking that bull shit down. Honstley I would just flip a coin, but since I took the time to break it down I have to give my vote to........................Thai Gear, he get's an A for effort.

Vote = Thai Gear

Fuck
07-31-2006, 06:55 PM
agreed for once wit charge..lol

flow-tg
pnchs-tg
crtvty-tie
wrdply-tie
vcb-tie

Ghost Lee
07-31-2006, 07:09 PM
not to offend anyone this was a very crappy battle

J-Cee-
I got the Ravashing Disasterous plan for my battle man/
To Grab my fuckin knife and turn this Thai to spiced Spam/
(good opener)

A Target for my Killing Turn this Thread to Vietnam/
Or Paint his skin White and get adopted to Uncle Sam/
(punch here)

An opening Infection Let the Bacteria Spread/
all it takes is 20 lines for an Implosion of ya Head/
(alright)

Call the Ambulance quick is it normal to have a small dick
(what does cock size have to do with the battle)

subliminal messages to hit your mind instead/
(please insert punch here)

Chokin on a cock and saying "Why Big Ben'?/
Live footage of your rape daily on E.S.P.N/
(and here)

How far would they take it the Gears Have Raised Again/
(and here as well)

My style is exclusive to those that understand/
Losing is your destiny your life was all planned/
(average)

Livin your life to law of the land/
But gettin touched daily by some Wrinkly old hands/
(unoriginal punch)

Cause i am your creator an even i admit your shit/
Your not taken serious i compare you to a Skit/
(whoa this line is wack so WTf)

Someone in the Background Who Deserves to feel my spit/
I just bruised Ya Ego Bit By Fucking Bit
(ok closer)

Thai Gear-
Fuck the genius who decided to name himself J Cee
His rapping style is bootleg like an outback macy
(great opener)

aiming boomerangs at me but they just miss and go back
as u slip and I snap so around ur corspe everyone is wearing black
(average)

cuz of ur lack to put words together to make a verse that attacks
i could shit and let u battle crap and u still be recieving smacks
(nice punches)

i'll drag u around sydney to perth and u still won't know what hit ya
from there i'll slap to darwin where you'll wonder the fuck just bite ya
(lol, for the people who know that those are countries in australia)

the only thing "J sees" is death after my words have sealed his doom
cuz my verses cuz explosions that makes your lines go boom
(nice with the wordplay but second line not that good)

u come to me and put on your gloves trying to box with joey
second round knockout against a australian rapping phony
(average)

after your murder more of my pics posted wanted in the NYC
did the world a favor by killing a nother wannabee who's idol is aussie
(not hitting)

u try to spit a decent verse but keep tripping over bandicoots
this thread is a war but the only one with gun and wearing army boots
(?) (who wearing boots)

wanna battle? lets scrap yet u never show up cuz ur buns
spill ur blood like the cookie monster does crumbs
(nice)

ur scared easily to win all i had to do was jump up and say boo
so quit the tough guy attitude go fuck ur pet kangaroo
(funny and nice closer)


Vote=Thai Gear
not good of a battle i couldn't believe i sat and J Cees verse and then expected something better then the stuff thai gear wrote
but he had better and more puches so the vote goes to Thai gear

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 08:03 PM
both verses were very bad, but...

flow-tg
vcb-tie
crtvty-tie
vcb-tie
pnchs-tie

wordwarlock
07-31-2006, 08:04 PM
flow=jce
wordplay=thg
creativity=thg
vocabulary=thg
punches=thg

jcee \/ thai gear

flow 8.9 \ 8.4
wordplay 7.8 \ 9.1
creativity 8.8 \ 9.0
vocabulary 8.3 \ 8.7
punches 8.7 \ 9.4


overall thai had a better and showed more effort

Robert
07-31-2006, 11:55 PM
Thai wins 5-2, he advances peace to both emcees....

J-Cee
08-03-2006, 02:34 AM
Call the Ambulance quick is it normal to have a small dick
(what does cock size have to do with the battle)


figure it out dude..if im battling a guy with Thai in it id incorporate that thinking hes asian..and u know what they say about asians...

and u got 13 posts..u have no austhority in this forum,shouldnt even vote.