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Robert
07-23-2006, 05:20 AM
Eric drops first, same rules as the first round, good luck to both writers,
peace

Visionz
07-23-2006, 07:57 PM
Alright here we go, no real dissrespect intended but its a comp so fuck it...peace




Tha God's Concept of Downfall, ya name doesn't finish the sentence
Last walk down this Brickwall, No time for a preacher's repentence,
You both read your last lines, In this place in time,
Scheduled a pickup w/ the Most Devine,
The moment when you Resign from Rhymes
You style's recyled like aluminum cans, Tinman smuggling a heart like contraband
The raw from Afghanistan,
These are herione hits homie, one shot to lay you out
We both know who got skills Cronie, so fuck your clout
You only as nice as the rhymes you heard
2-1 shot the vulture is your favorite bird
I peep competition w/ psycho-optic lenses, the visions stupendous
You simply horrendous, flooded from the flow like the Wizard's Apprentice
You're praying for the misery to stop,
Instead its your head popped like watermelons dropped from a rooftop
This guys Concepts focus on the Unseen, he chases the level of this Human Being
And Being that I am of God's Manifestation,
I hand him Decimation that's got him sigining his resigination
He's Played like Stations, getting robbed by what he pumps
Wanted to be a dope dealer, but ended up sleeping in the dumps
Beat up for his change by chumps,scratching at his bumps
I forcefeed handgrenades you getting off lucky with lumps

Robert
07-23-2006, 08:53 PM
Nice drop, concept drop soon
peace

tha god concept
07-25-2006, 05:02 AM
none of Unseens lines have ever been worth a quote
and that last verse ya spoke is pretty much a suicide note
so go on slit ya throat , maybe open up a vein
or imma beat you with so many punches until only a stain remains
claimin you got skill yet u can only write when weeded
sorry ass rhymes make the Ying Yang Twins look genius
his wifee said his name "Unseen" stems from his penis
cause its so small he or her hasnt even SEEN it!!
dont get me heated or imma come gunnin dook
with chrome at ya dome rapin wifee right in front of you
equipped with a web cam in hand peep it at www
dot Ericsbitcheatindick.com dam i cant stop sonnin you
this is a fuckin lob sided brawl
like erics moms tits in those double d bras
UNSEEN is the weakest link that i ever SAW
he could cap a pig in the face and still not lay down the law
so go back and practice ya just got ya ass kicked
its obvious that ya heart aint even tin its plastic
watch me melt it down to fast and snap it back like elastic
then be ghost like Erics degenerit dad that left him a bastard

tha god concept
07-25-2006, 05:14 AM
dope battle eric

Visionz
07-25-2006, 09:19 AM
no doubt homie, respect

Visionz
07-25-2006, 11:24 AM
aite judges, lets see some votes

tha god concept
07-26-2006, 12:47 AM
votes....?

Robert
07-26-2006, 02:26 AM
Eric Unseen-
Tha God's Concept of Downfall, ya name doesn't finish the sentence
Last walk down this Brickwall, No time for a preacher's repentence,
(I see another battle with a religious theme? nice opener)

You both read your last lines, In this place in time,
Scheduled a pickup w/ the Most Devine,
The moment when you Resign from Rhymes
(average)

You style's recyled like aluminum cans, Tinman smuggling a heart like contraband
(lol, good lines nice personal punches)

The raw from Afghanistan,
These are herione hits homie, one shot to lay you out
We both know who got skills Cronie, so fuck your clout
(aggressive lines, pretty good personals)

You only as nice as the rhymes you heard
2-1 shot the vulture is your favorite bird
(nice man, im liking your shit sofar)

I peep competition w/ psycho-optic lenses, the visions stupendous
You simply horrendous, flooded from the flow like the Wizard's Apprentice
(dope section, great wordplay and a solid punch to go with it)

You're praying for the misery to stop,
Instead its your head popped like watermelons dropped from a rooftop
(pretty good)

This guys Concepts focus on the Unseen, he chases the level of this Human Being
(average line but still a punch, alright play on words)

And Being that I am of God's Manifestation,
I hand him Decimation that's got him sigining his resigination
(you already said something about resigning, not hitting)

He's Played like Stations, getting robbed by what he pumps
Wanted to be a dope dealer, but ended up sleeping in the dumps
(alright)

Beat up for his change by chumps,scratching at his bumps
I forcefeed handgrenades you getting off lucky with lumps
(alright finish)

Tha god concept-
none of Unseens lines have ever been worth a quote
and that last verse ya spoke is pretty much a suicide note
(lol, nice opener with a good personal thrown in)

so go on slit ya throat , maybe open up a vein
or imma beat you with so many punches until only a stain remains
(lol, aggressive personal, nice)

claimin you got skill yet u can only write when weeded
sorry ass rhymes make the Ying Yang Twins look genius
(alright punch)

his wifee said his name "Unseen" stems from his penis
cause its so small he or her hasnt even SEEN it!!
(lol, a played concept (dissing on dick size, gayness etc) but this is a pretty good effort)

dont get me heated or imma come gunnin dook
with chrome at ya dome rapin wifee right in front of you
(personal attack but this is average)

equipped with a web cam in hand peep it at www
dot Ericsbitcheatindick.com dam i cant stop sonnin you
(alright)

this is a fuckin lop sided brawl
like erics moms tits in those double d bras
(average personal)

UNSEEN is the weakest link that i ever SAW
he could cap a pig in the face and still not lay down the law
(dope lines man, pretty clever wordplay and the punches are hitting)

so go back and practice ya just got ya ass kicked
its obvious that ya heart aint even tin its plastic
(the second line is an attempted build on that tin man line in Eric's verse but it doesnt really hit)

watch me melt it down to fast and snap it back like elastic
(aaahhhh, this makes the punch hit, alright)

then be ghost like Erics degenerit dad that left him a bastard
(av. closer)

This was a pretty high standard battle, prolly the best or second best of the tourney sofar, some clever wordplay, nice personals and good punches from both writers. It was really hard to decide who won, i had to read over the shit a couple of times but overall i feel tha god concept edged it wit more aggressive personals and a couple of hard hitting ones too.
Vote=concept

Get those votes in judges
1-0
peace

tha god concept
07-26-2006, 10:38 PM
votes...?

Robert
07-27-2006, 01:27 AM
C'mon and VOTE!~!

tha god concept
07-28-2006, 06:33 PM
lets get some votes .....

Visionz
07-29-2006, 02:06 AM
Fuck this, open vote

Robert
07-29-2006, 02:09 AM
Aight the rest of this round is open votes, but i will disconting unexplained or dickriding votes, this goes for all battles, fucking lazy ass judges!

Visionz
07-29-2006, 02:19 AM
Word is bond....if you know you a dickrider please just don't vote. You know who you are just as soon as you read it. We's just lookin for some honest oppinions. peace

num2son
07-30-2006, 08:17 PM
Flow - Eric
Wordplay - Eric
Creativity - Tie
Punchlines - Eric
Vocab - Eric

Erice Unseen gets my vote

Robert
07-31-2006, 09:40 AM
1-1, more votes ppl......

WARPATH
07-31-2006, 02:55 PM
Eric

Tha God's Concept of Downfall, ya name doesn't finish the sentence
Last walk down this Brickwall, No time for a preacher's repentence,
eh......
You both read your last lines, In this place in time,
Scheduled a pickup w/ the Most Devine,
eh........
The moment when you Resign from Rhymes
You style's recyled like aluminum cans, Tinman smuggling a heart like contraband
ok..
The raw from Afghanistan,
These are herione hits homie, one shot to lay you out
ok..
We both know who got skills Cronie, so fuck your clout
You only as nice as the rhymes you heard
good...
2-1 shot the vulture is your favorite bird
I guess this line if over my head....
I peep competition w/ psycho-optic lenses, the visions stupendous
You simply horrendous, flooded from the flow like the Wizard's Apprentice
You're praying for the misery to stop,
ok......
Instead its your head popped like watermelons dropped from a rooftop
This guys Concepts focus on the Unseen, he chases the level of this Human Being
eh..
And Being that I am of God's Manifestation,
I hand him Decimation that's got him sigining his resigination
He's Played like Stations, getting robbed by what he pumps
eh..
Wanted to be a dope dealer, but ended up sleeping in the dumps
Beat up for his change by chumps,scratching at his bumps
I forcefeed handgrenades you getting off lucky with lumps
eh..

Concept

none of Unseens lines have ever been worth a quote
and that last verse ya spoke is pretty much a suicide note
ok opener....
so go on slit ya throat , maybe open up a vein
or imma beat you with so many punches until only a stain remains
ok, the second line was solid.....
claimin you got skill yet u can only write when weeded
sorry ass rhymes make the Ying Yang Twins look genius
BANG A RANG PETER!
his wifee said his name "Unseen" stems from his penis
cause its so small he or her hasnt even SEEN it!!
First line was good the second line wasn't nessacary.
dont get me heated or imma come gunnin dook
with chrome at ya dome rapin wifee right in front of you
really?
equipped with a web cam in hand peep it at www
dot Ericsbitcheatindick.com dam i cant stop sonnin you
eh...
this is a fuckin lob sided brawl
like erics moms tits in those double d bras
really? is that how your mom looks eric?
UNSEEN is the weakest link that i ever SAW
he could cap a pig in the face and still not lay down the law
:)9:(
so go back and practice ya just got ya ass kicked
its obvious that ya heart aint even tin its plastic
so that means what?
watch me melt it down to fast and snap it back like elastic
then be ghost like Erics degenerit dad that left him a bastard
really, eric did that happen to you?

Eric is displaying a lot of lyrical skill, he's just not exercising it properly. I didn't feel like Eric was chopping heads with this one. Concept had a few hotlines, followed by medocresy, but it was enough to combat what eric dished out.

Vote = God Concept

Fuck
07-31-2006, 07:09 PM
flow-gc
vcb-unseen
crtvty-unseen
wrdply-unseen
pnchs-gc

Ghost Lee
07-31-2006, 07:18 PM
flow-gc
vcb-unseen
crtvty-unseen
wrdply-gc
pnchs-unseen

eric had a little better verse

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 07:34 PM
flow-gc
vcb-unseen
crtvty-unseen
wrdply-gc
pnchs-gc

wordwarlock
07-31-2006, 07:59 PM
flow=gc
wordplay=usen
creativity=usen
vocabulary=gc
punches=tie

when more towards Eric Unseen

Visionz
07-31-2006, 11:05 PM
That's a 4-3 game right?

Visionz
07-31-2006, 11:26 PM
Never mind just realized ol'boy ain't got that many post.

Robert
07-31-2006, 11:46 PM
3-3, first to five, these last couple of votes seem a bit odd, especially that aud spec one (aint that Dusk) but we'll let em slide....
peace

Robert
07-31-2006, 11:56 PM
Votes

Visionz
08-01-2006, 12:07 AM
3-3, first to five, these last couple of votes seem a bit odd, especially that aud spec one (aint that Dusk) but we'll let em slide....
peaceI guess its all good as long as Dusk don't vote too right, if AudSpec is Dusk, I don't know one way or the other.

Robert
08-01-2006, 12:14 AM
^^^well yeah its not proven so let it slide i guess....
peace

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 12:35 AM
This battle was nothing special....I'm not going to do a "bar-by-bar" brake down, but I will say this.

Eric Unseen- Verse was decent, no really hard hitting lines, but you had some good wordplay, Wizards apprentice line was the only one that stuck out to me....Decent use of multies but the verse was average.

Elevate some man...

God Concept-

Alot of your shit was forced, I will admit you had a couple good personals but besides that, your attempts at making punches were decent, "Shooting a pig in the face you still wouldn't lay down the law" Decent punch, but probably bitten, I dunno you don't seem like a dude who would think that up just IMO

elevate some man....

v- Eric, he had some nice wordplay and some strong lines, YOU BOTH could use some elevation

_OnE

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 03:59 AM
wtf?

thats a madd dick ridin vote....but i dont really care

not that its dick ridin eric really just that vern always tryin to fuck with me

elevate our game??

all your shits wack vern

and how was any of my verse soundin forced???

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 04:06 AM
wtf?

thats a madd dick ridin vote....but i dont really care

not that its dick ridin eric really just that vern always tryin to fuck with me

elevate our game??

all your shits wack vern

and how was any of my verse soundin forced???

My shits wack, I'm not the person who has one syllable schemes and dickrides thirstin howl, not a dickriding vote, not that good of a battle tho

Robert
08-01-2006, 10:25 AM
4-3, but i'd be more comfortable with bar by bar descriptions and house rules.....
peace

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 10:32 AM
4-3, but i'd be more comfortable with bar by bar descriptions and house rules.....
peace

check out me n conceptuals battle

word is love

WU-GC
08-01-2006, 06:18 PM
I guess its all good as long as Dusk don't vote too right, if AudSpec is Dusk, I don't know one way or the other.

lol his pussy ass is gonna get tight when he sees this, hes not aud but he gets his panties in a bunch when people say so

oDoUoSoKo
08-01-2006, 06:25 PM
what the fuck man, IM NOT FUCKING AUD SHIT, and if u dont count my verse im gettin u banned man, this is fuckin bullshit


FLOW-FUCKING TIE
PUNCHELINES-FUCKING GOD CONCEPT
WORDPLAY-TIE
CREATIVITY-FUCKING UNSEEN
VOCAB-FUCKING UNSEEN

im sorry i snapped but it really ticks me off after a while..1

Robert
08-01-2006, 10:52 PM
5-3, Eric advances unless concept has a problem wit someone in the tourney voting....
peace

Visionz
08-02-2006, 09:29 AM
I'm gonna break down some of the lines cuz I think sometimes people either don't get 'em at all or kinda get it but not all of it.Tha God's Concept of Downfall, ya name doesn't finish the sentence Settin it off, showing yall, a dead man walkin
Last walk down this Brickwall, No time for a preacher's repentence,
You both read your last lines, In this place in time,
Scheduled a pickup w/ the Most Devine,
The moment when you Resign from Rhymes The setup for the execution
You style's recyled like aluminum cans, Tinman smuggling a heart like contraband
The raw from Afghanistan,
These are herione hits homie, one shot to lay you out
We both know who got skills Cronie, so fuck your clout Straight talk in these rhymes. not gonna insult anyone's intellegence
You only as nice as the rhymes you heard tie in with the tinman line, recycled lines rearranging and making ur own
2-1 shot the vulture is your favorite bird Vultures feast off of dead shit, I try to connect lines in the same stream of thought,it makes more sense I guess when you look at it as a whole
I peep competition w/ psycho-optic lenses, the visions stupendous
You simply horrendous, flooded from the flow like the Wizard's Apprentice
You're praying for the misery to stop,
Instead its your head popped like watermelons dropped from a rooftop
This guys Concepts focus on the Unseen, he chases the level of this Human Being
And Being that I am of God's Manifestation,
I hand him Decimation that's got him sigining his resigination
He's Played like Stations, getting robbed by what he pumps I'm guessing most people don't realize I'm talking about three different things in this one line
Wanted to be a dope dealer, but ended up sleeping in the dumps You have to understand the last line to truly get this one
Beat up for his change by chumps,scratching at his bumps
I forcefeed handgrenades you getting off lucky with lumps


Would've broke it down sooner but I didn't want to influence any votes. Thanks to all the voters and much Respect to Concept. Ain't none of this shit personal in these rhymes homie. it was ill getting in the ring for another round mayne. peace

BLACKNEFERTITI07
08-02-2006, 09:49 AM
I'm gonna break down some of the lines cuz I think sometimes people either don't get 'em at all or kinda get it but not all of it.


Would've broke it down sooner but I didn't want to influence any votes. Thanks to all the voters and much Respect to Concept. Ain't none of this shit personal in these rhymes homie. it was ill getting in the ring for another round mayne. peace


:spin: :spin: :spin: :W :W :W you got my vote eric!!! hands down!!! halla baq!!

Visionz
08-02-2006, 07:21 PM
dont ever read my rhymes again^you don't have the fuckin brains for it,

BLACKNEFERTITI07
08-28-2006, 05:03 PM
flow=E_unseen
wordplay=E_unseen
creativity=E_unessn
vocabulary=E_unseen
punches=E_Unseen

my vote- E_Unseen!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
12-29-2006, 01:32 AM
ERIC WINS