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Robert
07-23-2006, 05:22 AM
Verseatyle drops first, same rules as first round, good luck to both writers
peace

VillainousV
07-23-2006, 04:12 PM
lol aight yo. I haven't battle in a while, so this should be easy 4 u.

Lemme see...
After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
Tha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
And im ghost....

......I say WORD?........lol kill me now, so my writer's block can end.
Good luck yo.

GIMME FEEDBACK!!!!!

VernakuLa
07-23-2006, 04:13 PM
you said you were READY DUUED?? WHAT HAPPENED???

VillainousV
07-23-2006, 04:18 PM
huh? what u mean Nak?

Thai Gear
07-24-2006, 09:05 PM
dusk can't post now b/c his computer ain't working

oDoUoSoKo
07-24-2006, 10:01 PM
im good, i fixed it

oDoUoSoKo
07-24-2006, 10:27 PM
this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R.
u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity

w/e i lost my flow, been gone for a while

oDoUoSoKo
07-25-2006, 09:43 PM
just incase u havent noticed....i dropped my verse...so...vote

Bigot Hitman
07-25-2006, 11:33 PM
My vote goes to versatyle, better lyrics. I guess my vote don't count though cuz i ain't no judge.

Robert
07-26-2006, 03:09 AM
Verseatyle-
After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
(average opener)

ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
(average not really hitting)

Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
(the wordplay is good but once again the punch aint there, this is a battle, you need punches and personals)

originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
(alright)

I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
(like this second line, pretty nice)

Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
(alright lines but not hitting)

Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
(im pretty sure i've heard "beat your ass like a drum" a lot of times, average)

leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
(alright)

Tha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
(alright closer)
Without having read Dusk's verse i'd say you've prolly already lost, i mean there are no hard hitting personals or punches, this verse would be better in the temple of darts coz theres some good wordplay in there but not so much in the battlefield.

Dusk-
this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
(alright opener and punch)

first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
(average)

and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
(alright punch on the second line)

irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
(nice wordplay but thats it)

and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
(nice wordplay and punches here, lol at calling him ernie)

nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R
(personal, like the wordplay)

u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
(alright)

and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
(lols)

full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
(nice personal)

equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity
(nice finish)

And yes Dusk got this, his verse was pretty decent but the main thing was the lack of punches and personals from Verseatyle
Vote=Dusk

Judges please vote
peace

VillainousV
07-26-2006, 05:46 PM
Yo, Thanx anyways Banga. I was kinda hopin peeps would recognize real wordplay. lol. To me, there's more than 1 way to win battles, and they don't have 2 involve personal attacks (especially since u really don't know that person at all) or textbook punches. If thas all y'all look for, then im in the wrong forum yo. lol. Good battle anyways Dusk. word is bond.

Judges, lets get this over with yo. VOTE.

Da Dishonourable Don
07-26-2006, 09:41 PM
yeah, I feel what ya saying 'bout not knowing the person at all, so how the fuck is it personal? oh well!.............

oDoUoSoKo
07-26-2006, 09:45 PM
who do u think won mr dony boy!! lol

and not knowing the person is no excuse, either way personals arent a required thing to talk about he jus thought i used what i had well, and u can have wordplay but u gotta strengthen that shit

Robert
07-27-2006, 01:25 AM
Yo, Thanx anyways Banga. I was kinda hopin peeps would recognize real wordplay. lol. To me, there's more than 1 way to win battles, and they don't have 2 involve personal attacks (especially since u really don't know that person at all) or textbook punches. If thas all y'all look for, then im in the wrong forum yo. lol. Good battle anyways Dusk. word is bond.

Judges, lets get this over with yo. VOTE.
Nah man, battles are not only about punches and personals, wordplay strengthens that, but thats what you gotta judge on predominately. how the fuck can you judge a battle, Where two emcees go at each other to see whose better on wordplay? No battles are decided like that......
peace

oDoUoSoKo
07-28-2006, 07:52 PM
vote yall

VillainousV
07-28-2006, 08:50 PM
4real tho yo. this shit is takin too long

Robert
07-29-2006, 02:20 AM
Open voting from this point on.....
i'll void votes that are dickriding or unexplained

Robert
07-29-2006, 02:21 AM
My vote goes to versatyle, better lyrics. I guess my vote don't count though cuz i ain't no judge.
This vote doesnt count coz it is unexplained, for a vote to count it must be judged on a bar by bar explaination basis or using full house rules...
peace

VillainousV
07-29-2006, 02:49 AM
Aight yo, it's open votes now, so all these people who keep viewin this shit can finally VOTE.......SO VOTE!!!!

Robert
07-30-2006, 02:29 AM
Vote, big ben can ya help me out?

Ghost Lee
07-30-2006, 04:23 PM
awesome battle


Verseatyle-
After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
(ok opener)

ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
(average)

Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
(needs punch)

originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
(alright)

I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
( pretty nice)

Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
(what with all the letters)

Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
(average wait didn't i see this one of thai gear's battle and a whole lot more battles)

leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
(alright)

Tha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
(nice closer)

Dusk-
this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
(awesome fucking opener)

first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
(average)

and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
(alright punch)

irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
(nice wordplay )

and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
(nice wordplay and punches here)

nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R
(personal, like the wordplay)

u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
(alright)

and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
(NICE)

full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
(nice personal)

equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity
(nice finish)


easy Vote=Dusk
better verse better overall everything enjoyed reading his verse

num2son
07-30-2006, 08:04 PM
Flow - V
Punchlines - V
Creativity - Dusk
Wordplay - V
Vocab - Dusk

Vote goes to Vers

oDoUoSoKo
07-30-2006, 08:50 PM
num lets get this out of the way, what do u have against me? u personally go out of ur way to vote against me in most of my battles, whats up? let the vote count but wtf? lol

Robert
07-31-2006, 09:39 AM
Yeah that vote counts as i have no reason to believe its a dickriding one.....
2-1 to Dusk, more votes ppl.....

WARPATH
07-31-2006, 03:00 PM
Versatyle

After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
eh...
ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
dope..
Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
ok..
originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
like V for....vendetta? or the alphabet? or both? OK!
I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
like the imagery.
Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
ok, I'll remind him.
Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
BANGA RANG PETER!
leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
dope
Tha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
ok finisher.

Dusk

this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
ok opener...nube that's white boy lingo for new person right?
first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
Lyrical privilages?!?!? damn that was like a power punch that missed completley.
and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
depends on who you ask, there's some loose essay chicks out there.
irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
walk on they backs? ok............
and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
eh..
nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R.
O.R.?? what the fuck is that?
u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
ok, I don't see what you mean but i'll take your word for it.
and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
second line was ok.
full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
eh...
equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity
ok..

Both verses were pretty good, i felt Versatyle came with better imagery, and a nice flow which overall made it a superior verse to Dusk's.

Vote = Versatyle

Fuck
07-31-2006, 06:51 PM
flow-dusk
pnchs-dusk
vcb-verse
crtvty-tie
wrdply-dusk

if u get the punches it makes for a way better fukin verse, read them over, unless ya two got some grudges against eachother i dont kno about

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 07:14 PM
flow-tie
pnchs-dusk
vcb-verse
crtvty-dusk
wrdply-verse

close call, both very forced rhymes...however I'm going to give the slight edge to dusk because of his creative-ness with the play on Verses name and such

v-dusk

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 07:17 PM
very forced rhymes...


this battle was actually shit, dusk turned soft and let his stats fuk his style, verse u r vveeerry amateur nigga step ya fuckin game up, lemme think this shit over

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 07:23 PM
fine dam

After this, we'll get judged however tha gods see-fit//
steppin to a ill Villain? Dracula Food: ya leak it//
bad
ya get ya neck split, my metaphor smashed through ya chamber//
Fake MC's like you soon find themselves endangered//
mediocre
Tha big black bat smash cats on my nutsack//
ya get ya back cracked like a crab, ya skills lack...//
crap
originality, address me like: "yes, your Majesty?"//
Im comin after u like "V", ya story ends in a tragedy//
used many times and never impresses me
I smash rappers sayin' that they spit tha best//
V got they hearts soundin like Gorrillas beatin the chest//
ok
Come wit tha Swordplay, only Verse'll cut-off tha "S"//
Next time we battle, be sure to bring ya Lyric-Proof Vest//
ehhhh..
Red-rum pa-pum-pum to tha blind, deaf, dumb//
I chant an incantation as I beat that ass like a drum//
wack
leavin' em' numb like they stuck under arctic thick ice...//
my pen slices like cesarians, im buryin' ya corpse at midnight//
okTha next verse I write will be written in Dusk's blood//
a slow trickle at-first, now it's a crimson flash-flood//
ok finisher.

Dusk

this nubes a trout, dudes about spittin what he rehearsed a while
but i grabbed a fuckin tube of GROUT when i heard i had to verse-a-tile
last line is pretty good
first to disperse a burst of wild thats wrapped in i dont give a shit
slapped with a villainous pack of --lyricall privilages
nice wordplay, kind of lazy tho
and since this is the battlefield and i never been pooched
than nak is right, ur raps is as tight as mexican cooch
nice punch
irrevelant douche talker my crew stalks and attacks
a few caught on the track abused walk on they backs
nice play
and dude thought he could rap so he signed for the tourney thinkin
he'd burn me, shit jus cuz hes a flame(fag) like ernie(sesame street) winking
like that multie action and punch
nerd, keep drinkin pom juice, im obviously winning so far
i got this stinkin mongoose wit a cleaver in the O.R.
operation room....i get it operation mongoose..lol ok
u havent developed a fuckin flow so, DUH, im doubtin it
and X took a dildo sales pic and made a sig out of it
hmm alright
and i see u rock it wit pride,but on the opposite side,
ur a candy covered bitch made with chocolate inside
ok
full of shit since u were bs'ed into round 2 easily
i know i can pound you so good luck finding a way of defeating me
wack
equally as skilled as me is the fucking jest of the century
flow killin ur villainy wit rhymes molestin ur entity
nice ending

u guys shitted on the battle (bad thing) both need to wake up, but dusk definetley did better on this shit.

v=dusk

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 07:38 PM
this battle was actually shit, dusk turned soft and let his stats fuk his style, verse u r vveeerry amateur nigga step ya fuckin game up, lemme think this shit over

yea dude ur such a good rapper, claiming to be me and all

go dickride some1 else

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 07:42 PM
good fucking job stupid, im talking about verse, and its true if either of u want it bring it

wordwarlock
07-31-2006, 07:44 PM
what there is a tournament who do i ask to join

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 07:46 PM
good fucking job stupid, im talking about verse, and its true if either of u want it bring it

my bad

wordwarlock
07-31-2006, 07:49 PM
o well its too late to join so i'll just vote

flow=tie
wordplay=dsk
creativity=dsk
vocabulary=vtle
punches=dsk

this one when to dusk

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 07:56 PM
shit is over buddy

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 07:57 PM
shit is over buddy

no it aint u fuck

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 07:58 PM
count the votes and are u challengin me or not nigga

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 07:59 PM
count the votes and are u challengin me or not nigga

are you challenging me? If so set the shit up and spit...been up all night man

WU-GC
07-31-2006, 08:08 PM
im jus saying dont talk shit about me not being good if ur not gonna get at me dum ass nigga

VernakuLa
07-31-2006, 08:13 PM
im jus saying dont talk shit about me not being good if ur not gonna get at me dum ass nigga

stfu

oDoUoSoKo
07-31-2006, 08:33 PM
this battle was actually shit, dusk turned soft and let his stats fuk his style, verse u r vveeerry amateur nigga step ya fuckin game up, lemme think this shit over


appreciate the critisicm and vote but i dont appreciate u callin anyone that here especially not in my battles, thank you....

goood, VERY good battle verse, until nex time

Robert
07-31-2006, 11:53 PM
Thats 5-2 i think.....Dusk advances

VillainousV
08-01-2006, 02:31 PM
SUNaSAM.......who tha fuck are you? Seriously yo. I haven't seen u battle YET. Don't talk shit over forums yo. Step up in a Real battle, and i guarauntee you'll get sliced up. word is bond. Call me "nigga" again, and thas it 4 u yo. Closed curtains n shit. I don't care if youre black or not. Tha only 'nigga' here is you. word is bond.

VillainousV
08-01-2006, 02:39 PM
SUNaSAM's vote did kinda sound like a dickriding vote 2 me now that i read it over, but i dunno.... whatever

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 05:43 PM
SUNaSAM.......who tha fuck are you? Seriously yo. I haven't seen u battle YET. Don't talk shit over forums yo. Step up in a Real battle, and i guarauntee you'll get sliced up. word is bond. Call me "nigga" again, and thas it 4 u yo. Closed curtains n shit. I don't care if youre black or not. Tha only 'nigga' here is you. word is bond.

don't sweat this kid verse, hes a 13 year old drama queen jacking off to Dusk's crew

For an unsigned crew, ya'll got mad dickriders yo lol

WU-GC
08-01-2006, 06:11 PM
i love the way u say it like ur not their number 1 fan bitch

anyways, im sorry u took my comment up the ass verse and if that was a challenge i accept, set it up and we'll see....

..as far as dick riding (ask dusk) i actually hate dusk and eks faggots or w/e theyre called now, but i dont let personal bull shit get in the way of my votes, dusk barely shitted on u but he still shitted on u, and the whole nigga thing? u kno u dont give a fuck..u jus mad hype cuz dusked gassed u up

oDoUoSoKo
08-01-2006, 06:28 PM
ok cut the shit, battle over, verse sweet battle, no more flooding