View Full Version : Livakillah's thread

07-23-2006, 08:48 PM
Im quite new here, although I was a guest for a few weeks reading battles, got into rap a lot and I decided to post my shit here, I'm not that good so go easy, I would like a lot of criticism since i just started.


No need for discression
All I need is your attention
I just bombed a pension
Were mc's are located, I got a lot more intention
I hope you feel the problem
No one will be in weal
People will die bicoastly, bombs fall from the sky
Hide in the underground
Get found hiding by FBI hounds
While other niggas sliding through mudwholes
Get the picture, Corrupt cops don't care if you cross jurisduction
Getting shot by glocks
Ya dead, rotting and hobos stealing ya socks
Rats and crows pealing off your skin
And the presidents daughter is healing

I know it sucks but I might as well post.

07-28-2006, 05:44 PM

I got my flow shooting fast
Boom- Wu Tang and Livakillah will last forever
I battle so hard my opponent gets a fever
Lyrics bite ya harder than a beaver
scratch-scratch, i dont expect you to catch the meaning
Or hatch ur own, You won't match me
hah, a real killah- bee
Don't u see-see, I drop it raw
If I don't its like me goin against the law
Oh shit, it's tougher than a lion paw
nigga's commin up to me, askin me
How do you conquer the empire
I ain't no secret teller for hire
But be sure to address me as the siiiiiiiiiiiiire!

tha god concept
07-28-2006, 06:32 PM
nice....keep writtin homie

07-28-2006, 07:04 PM
thanks a lot, nice to get some feedback

tha god concept
07-28-2006, 07:07 PM
peep my thread homie its killer

07-28-2006, 07:15 PM
Yea i'll do it right now ;)