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tha god concept
08-01-2006, 05:52 AM
1 round

20 or more lines

5 votes

3 vote knockout

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 06:08 AM
Aight Duke, you issued...put your game up son

_One

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 06:23 AM
http://myspace-945.vo.llnwd.net/00357/54/90/357930945_m.jpg (http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewPicture&friendID=28809395&MyToken=10e4428f-a6a0-4095-b7f4-744383046b87) this is vern 4reel!!


its verns turn to learn how it feels to get burned
put this faggot down once and for all in a coffin or urn
this kids got a WEIGHT problem....he cant WAIT till lunch time
i dont even gotta spit one rhyme this kids pics the whole punch line
Vern you must have a tuff time even pickin up bum dimes
with that nasty freckled face you cant stare directly into like sun shine
this kid must be a virgin yo im takin all bets
unless you count the virtual sex he has with himself on the net
type of pervert stickin his fingers all up in his pets
this pests head is as empty as all his weak threats
cmon you fat fuck get some exercise you lazy cat
actin all hard on the net rockin 80 extra pounds of baby fat!!
ya whole styles softer than the toddlers down at baby gap
you say you rap....but ya statements fulla holes
lyrically kickin ya ass right now and strangglin ya with ya bellyrolls
your a nasty lookin troll...you fuckin make me sick punk
how you gonna say your iller than me lookin like Theodore of the Chipmunks

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 07:08 AM
ok bud...

That verse was wack as fuck..Use ma rhyme n punchline like a divine tool
My signs proove..I got as many "sick lines" as "lunchtime in highschool"
Concept is wack...Weak fillers, just punch another replay song
Dudes got the nerve to say hes iller, when he *bit c-rayz walz*
Recievin' a beatin'....Naw son, this cat begins to bleed when I see 'em
His raps speak for the weakend...Leavin' em breathin' is treason
Are flows are different...I'm just better and textin' it shorter
And he displays "no resistance"...Like "minute men at mexican borders"
Lessen the houlster...Round one shoulda' get set to get smashed
Dudes got less a chance of "beatin' me"..Than a "dick-head in a cast"
Spit led in ya ass...makin fat jokes...I'll rip out ya intestines with steel
Split ya neck in a half..wit his basic rap flow...couldn't impress me w/ skill
Testing the steel?...Session get killed, Cat forced his bars loopy
But Naks never been "out-done"...like "pornstars in movies"



is 14 enuff

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 07:11 AM
good battle vern

votes..

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 07:11 AM
bit c-rayz walz verse for the smackdown

http://wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=7968&highlight=Rize

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 07:22 AM
~

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 07:53 AM
fuckin bitch edited the shit out, wow, ur lame as fuck yo

wooooow, fo some1 claiming to be sick you like to cover up ya tracks on the net huh? I have no respect for you, change it back or basically admit to being a schemin bitch

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 08:01 AM
naw i was jus takin out some of the wack shit i was sayin back then

thats all....i was so heated that nite and i was poppin off sayin some dumb shit

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 08:02 AM
naw i was jus takin out some of the wack shit i was sayin back then

thats all....i was so heated that nite and i was poppin off sayin some dumb shit

So why edit out the line i was calling you on, I dunno wuss good ya just seems mad suspect

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 08:03 AM
i admitted to bitin tose lines that nite.....it was the first nite i was ever on here about a year ago

i did it because you fuckers werent reading the shit i wrote and saying it sucked with out reading it'

so i threw a few of sum1ns verses down to see if u bastards would notice..

u no this...its old as fuck

Robert
08-01-2006, 10:43 AM
This was a tough battle to decide....concept came wit some severe personals that really hit hard, the verse was ferocious but in some ways you played on the same theme too much and neglected other punches....apart from that the wordplay was good, i liked the structure....

And Vern chose to respond wit some good quality punches and elevated wordplay, the two opening lines were dope and the mexican border one was sick also......and that bite claim hit pretty hard....

Overall this was very hard to decide because the battles styles were far different but imma give this to concept, his verse has the edge coz the personals are ferocious....I feel that Vern, you would have got this if he focussed more on a personal counter attack to go wit your good punches....but as you didnt do this....
Vote=Tha god concept
Peace and vote in the comp ppl!

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 11:12 AM
I guess its 1-1, concept u rocked my pic in personals man, TWAS DOPE!

peace

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 11:17 AM
"Biting is unnacceptable...and it seems you HAVe done it a couple of times already..."

couple times already??? when

that was the only time..and it was about a year ago...

anyway votes

tha god concept
08-01-2006, 11:19 AM
i think ur mail box is full vern...send me that link tho

Da Dishonourable Don
08-01-2006, 01:30 PM
I'm a have to say Vern took this battle for me, Concept came with some pretty funny shit but didn't have to extend a whole verse on the same topic, you could of built up on some extreme disses following up with all those fat jokes {which were funny as fuck imop}, but wordplay goes to Vern and his punches were nice, should of done a round 2, and biting is unacceptable unless you didn't know you were biting, in this case you admitted to Concept!

vote=vern

good battle to both of y'all

VernakuLa
08-01-2006, 04:41 PM
votes appreciated...thanks

2-1

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 10:18 AM
ahaha, i was lookin so gay back then yo.....pic is 2 years old, i aint start listenin to hip hop about a year ago...anyways

votes

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:12 PM
"Concept came with some pretty funny shit but didn't have to extend a whole verse on the same topic,"

that was the point of having the picture tho.....juss for character assasination....i never seen anyone do somethin like that yet it was pretty orignal so you gotta include that shit, plus my punches were way more ruthless and clever

anyway votes

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 07:16 PM
"Concept came with some pretty funny shit but didn't have to extend a whole verse on the same topic,"

that was the point of having the picture tho.....juss for character assasination....i never seen anyone do somethin like that yet it was pretty orignal so you gotta include that shit, plus my punches were way more ruthless and clever

anyway votes

u only had one punch

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:23 PM
almost every line is a punch^^^^read it again

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 07:26 PM
almost every line is a punch^^^^read it again

no, almost all of it is an attempt at personals

Calling it a punchline, in a line, doesnt classify it as a punch

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:27 PM
wtf?? man..you are retarded!! lmao

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 07:29 PM
wtf?? man..you are retarded!! lmao

yea thats why im leading!!! Vote people

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:31 PM
ur only leading cause all i did was burn you about how fat n ugly you are....thats all i wanted to do in this battle and i knew people would take off points for that but i didnt care....i juss wanted to burn you about ur looks cause your nasty

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 07:38 PM
ur only leading cause all i did was burn you about how fat n ugly you are....thats all i wanted to do in this battle and i knew people would take off points for that but i didnt care....i juss wanted to burn you about ur looks cause your nasty

Naw man, what you did was make a played verse about a two year old pic with attempts at weak punches. So what you said in that verse wasnt "fresh" at all. Ha, you really burned me, grow a spinal cord, your acting just like hollywood. Just because a bunch of weak cats like Eversick dickride the shit out of your rhymes, and because you say your the sickest doesnt mean anything dude. Notice how I haven't had to explain any of my shit because im no sore loser. Notice how you basically said how fat i was in a two year old pic. WOW, you must be really something dude, because I've NEVER seen any body write that on this wack fuckin' site. Go dickride yourself somewhere else, I'm done talking too you.

oDoUoSoKo
08-02-2006, 07:38 PM
dont get ur hopes up vern...lol jk

since ya both bom brother, i dont wanna vote but....

flow-gc
punches-tie
wordplay-gc
creativity-tie
vocab-tie

tite ass battle, vern ur movin on up

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:39 PM
hahahahaha man you catch feelins quik

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 07:42 PM
hahahahaha man you catch feelins quik

like hepatitus, naw man ur cool, just defendin my shit

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:45 PM
lets stop beefin for reel kid....i told u i dont want beef the other day

its gay to bitch at other people on the net man...so its squashed

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 07:46 PM
lets stop beefin for reel kid....i told u i dont want beef the other day

its gay to bitch at other people on the net man...so its squashed

word, les go thug out like big pun

tha god concept
08-02-2006, 07:46 PM
2-2 votes...

VernakuLa
08-02-2006, 09:33 PM
dont get ur hopes up vern...lol jk

since ya both bom brother, i dont wanna vote but....

flow-gc
punches-tie
wordplay-gc
creativity-tie
vocab-tie

tite ass battle, vern ur on up

sry, tuco is calling me, no homo

VernakuLa
08-03-2006, 12:03 AM
uppin'

VernakuLa
08-04-2006, 03:23 AM
no votes for my old fack fuckin self ha

naw votes...

num2son
08-04-2006, 07:56 AM
Flow - GC
Punchelines - GC
Wordplay - GC
Creativity - Vern
Vocab - Vern

Tha god concept gets my vote

tha god concept
08-04-2006, 06:08 PM
nice on the votes everyone...


votes...

oDoUoSoKo
08-04-2006, 06:27 PM
your fat

tha god concept
08-04-2006, 11:09 PM
votes^^^lol

jallainINS
08-05-2006, 10:02 AM
Flow - GC
Punchelines - Vern
Wordplay - GC
Creativity - Vern
Vocab - Vern

vote for vern. i thought god concepts was good, i just didn't like how basically the whole verse was about the picture, even tho it was mad funny.

tha god concept
08-05-2006, 10:16 AM
that was the point...why you think the picture was posted...it was a character assasination...anyway

tha god concept
08-05-2006, 10:17 AM
}:t

tha god concept
08-05-2006, 10:19 AM
everyone says mine had iller funnier punches..but dont gimme the vote..??
thats why i put the fuckin pic up 4 fuck sakes!!! lol

anyway

votes

tha god concept
08-05-2006, 10:44 AM
illstatiks vote dont count...hes h8 on me cause i sonned his faggot ass over 10 times...

tha god concept
08-05-2006, 10:46 AM
if he drops a vote...

tha god concept
08-05-2006, 11:08 AM
k never mind...he didnt drop...

VernakuLa
08-05-2006, 03:39 PM
your fat

word

VernakuLa
08-05-2006, 04:22 PM
illstatiks vote dont count...hes h8 on me cause i sonned his faggot ass over 10 times...

no homo

lol. I'm turning in to Tuco