View Full Version : Finish the Verse

08-03-2006, 12:20 AM
One person starts a cool verse from a song they really like and then see if someone else can add on to the rest of the actual verse. As always....add on

I'll start............SF was talkin about this song earlier and it's definetly a classic "Respiration" on the BlackStar album

The moon rose high in the crown of the metropolis
Shinin, Like "who on top of this?"
Peoples is agruing, moving and bustlin
Gangstas of the Goth'am is hardcore hustlin.....................(add on here)

And if these words are a little off let me know so I can edit it. Pot does affect the memory })

08-03-2006, 12:29 AM
weed as a copout? nah youre clost but you got it a little twisted, a classic track ive banged it 10000 times

gangstas of gotham.. hardcore hustlin//
im wrestlin with words and ideas
muh ears is picky..seekin what will transmit/
scribes can apply to transcript//

since u didnt do it on point now i get to pick a new verse someone has to finish..

fuck is everybody so mad at the south for
learn how to switch your style up..and go south pa//
you aint even mean it? whatchu open ya mouf for/
better reason for me, just to open ya scalp pa//
all these metaphors and simalies are memories/
ima expose these young boys identies//

ok now keep it movin people dont fuck up the concept this is a fresh idea

08-03-2006, 02:24 PM
bump bump or get dumped dumped people

Tha Double-P
08-03-2006, 02:30 PM
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
With a joint, drinkin some 8-ball
Three little pigs in a Coup de Ville
Lookin for, the wolf to kill
They're fucked up and they want revenge
Them and Humpty used to be friends
Now they're enemies cause he's a traitor
Pulled out the Uzi cruised by and sprayed him
Cinderella hoeing for the fellas
And Mister Rogers is gettin mighty jealous
Of the cash that the pigs were makin
Time for the pigs to get turned to bacon

08-03-2006, 02:43 PM
Cause Mister Rogers found out quick
That Humpty Dumpty was blown to bits
They said that the motherfuckin wolf was next
So Mister Rogers better watch his step
So he let the wolf know
We're gonna fuck up the pigs, and take their ho
Cause Cinderella is much too fast
Before twelve, givin up ass
Double barrels all loaded and cocked
As soon as they show, they gonna get popped
They bailed down Sesame Street and caught em
Little Boy Blue is up front givin orders
Little did they know Cinderella was a fink
She called the cops and got thrown in the clink
A bad influence? Yo, I don't know
But Ice Cube'll tell the kids how the stories should go

Bitch I'ma kill you! Like a murder weapon, I'm-a conceal you
in a closet with mildew, sheets, pillows and film you
Fuck with me, I been through hell, shut the hell up!
I'm tryin to develop these pictures of the Devil to sell 'em
I ain't "acid rap," but I rap on acid
Got a new blow-up doll and just had a strap-on added
WHOOPS! Is that a subliminal hint? NO!
Just criminal intent to sodomize women again
Eminem offend? NO! Eminem'll insult
And if you ever give in to him, you give him an impulse
to do it again, THEN, if he does it again
you'll probably end up jumpin' out of somethin' up on the 10th

Sicka than aidZ
08-03-2006, 03:17 PM
"shimmy- shimmy ya, - shimmy yam,- shimmy yeah... "

08-03-2006, 06:53 PM
give me the mic so i can take it away

08-03-2006, 07:03 PM
Off on a natural charge, bon voyage
Yeah, from the home of the Dodgers, Brooklyn squad

now its my turn to start one

Imma add on like arithmetic
Suckers careers get stopped so stopped so watch who you riffing with
Im on point with the snakes and fakes
Aint the one (think I am? ) you get hung like drapes
And its proven, point blank thats the conclusion
Seeing me losing, its all an illusion
Like the raw ism, Im a kiss him when I hurt him
Then desert him, because the show & a.g. shit is sickening

maestro wooz
08-04-2006, 12:31 AM
dont fuck up the concept


Hidden Chamber
08-04-2006, 12:53 AM
2 late

Strange Fruit
08-05-2006, 02:53 AM
^^smh @ all of you,,,,

i'ma start it over.

Like the faces that are woven in the fabric of my consciousness
From cities where making 21's a big accomplishment
Like when my people understood their prominence
And my past life visions of the continent
Like the first time I saw KRS live, rockin' it
I heard Resurrection by Common Sense
Dominant in my psyche
I chose my direction like Spike Lee,,,

08-05-2006, 07:18 AM
As we travel through Trial and Tribulations Avenue
Destination's Zanavoo, smokin' a zu, drinkin' Jack Dan's and Malibu
Flammable sidewalks where guys walk like cyborgs
The minds walk, scorched with polluted force
I sought resolution, then I swore retribution for braves abusin' this music
Like it was boozin', they left battered and bruised from the Terra Firm movement
T stands for, the F for further improvement
Collate the teeth so much if you're a willin' student
I know it seems deep, and at times life's confusin'
Ya whole world's tremblin' like aero planes collidin'
With high sky rises, how many more lives before we realise there's a crisis
I cry red mist, but still live with the will to climb Everest
Livin' in this friggin' world full of pessimists
Reminiscin' on days ravin' and Pegasus
Were braves get fucked, police askin' where the weapon is
Welcome to the east maze, this is where the Devil lives..

Frontal Lobotomy
08-05-2006, 08:08 AM
^^ Choon!

Yeah, we little kids peddle ship
And settle sick situations with a metal stick
Leave you stiff, this world stands uncontaminated with biological hatred
It's blatant, Morphius tried to show you in The Matrix
But was you watchin' the beanie or clockin' for the agents
Practice pure patience, produce this pure kayman
While pruny little prento's are a pain in the anus
Fuck aimin' to be famous, I'm aimin' two flamers at Tony Blair's face first
Worst comes to worse blood, I'll kidnap his neighbours.
That's my word blood, trust

08-05-2006, 08:52 AM
wordd paper he is sick! :) it's dopeness, but this track I loveeeeeeeeeee:

Now triple nine is the reflection of the ripplin' time
While cripple minds run blind into the eye of the storm
I've fought wars and returned war torn
My wife was scorned, she took the life of my first born
So be warned, these days of times are now transformed
A pen is a now formed of states and collateral
As clapped opium petrels, a rose sent to capture you
From Clapton to Katmandu, what can a man do?
It said man handle my inner feeling, sealing the inner angles
Maintain my balance while walkin' on broken ankles...

08-05-2006, 04:25 PM
My moods manifest into red shades of scandals
Home of website of the seed we weave
My chest heave, I breathe to ventilate this grief
I'm seekin' relief in a brief glimpse of Parrowdice
Beget left paralyzed from the Jankrows and parasites
My eyesight, from great heights of hindsight
I'm tryin' to line the blind mind with divine light
But find my life to be a start to the death
So fuck vex, my mind state is Semtex
Explosive guides of venomous viper
Stalk the beats like a wild tiger
The Son of Niah, spit my phlegm on the flames of desire

For every rhyme I write, its 25 to life
yo, it's a must the gats we trust safeguardin' my life
ain't no time for hesitation
that only leads to incarceration
you don't know me, there's no relation
Queensbridge niggas don't play
I don't got time for your petty thinking mind
son, I'm bigga than those claimin' that you pack heat
but you're scared to hold