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VernakuLa
08-05-2006, 10:39 PM
(Chorus)
Recorded on paper, I came short in behavior
Expose to my savior, hip hop remains my sport as a major
X2

(Vernakula)
As my life cycles, rhymes at a whirling peak
Passed by high trials, times were I couldnít speak
I stare vague at old photos, pounding heart, I scream inside
The snare plays to mold vocals, resounding charge, I free a sigh
I sculpted my face to my own liking, herbs canít talk shit
Foldin pages I feel enlightened, words, rants in chopped print
The wisdom of old earth, went missiní from more work
I envisioned a soul search, spent wishiní but torn worse
Ever spittin those words, but never turning my back
Set for written flow spurts, while Iím burning a sack
Observing my raps, see emotion with pen strokes
Flow proving I trap, seize devotion against foes
My life proven to be, times of refusal through me
Why rhymes loosen the ease, to breathe to you what I seeÖ

Chorus X2

Life's Enterprize seems like it's no longer in Existence
Night Enter's Light my actions Awkwardly Efficient
Everything is up... even my minds Intelligence
Feather'd Wings helps the Pendulum Swing
My Heart's Dry...feeling little for Emotion
It's Cause White...is meltin' like a Snowman
the Boundarys Around Me are Closeing In
my flow is headed DownStream like a Broken Ship
Rollin Blunts cuz it helps Keep and Ease the Pain
from Swollen Cuts that is Deep and Bleed from Vein's
Judgement's are coming from every Direction
Summon Toughness but it aint Detected..Deception
Relentless on becoming a Evil Seed..People Need ta Read da Message
Breathe Fluorescent life brings everything Even Death in Perfection

chorus X2

White N Dangerous
08-05-2006, 11:06 PM
word feelin this shit

VernakuLa
08-06-2006, 02:39 AM
uppin for feed

Wu-Ronin
08-06-2006, 03:33 AM
tight, get some beats and some voice in that shit and post it in the audio lounge. i especially like the chorus.

Wu-Ronin
08-06-2006, 03:39 AM
and that aint dickridin allright! we're cool now so im just showin props!

noel411
08-07-2006, 12:08 AM
Nice collab. Obviously heavily focused on rhyme schemes. Might have made a few lines a little confusing, but good drops by both of you.

White N Dangerous
08-07-2006, 12:42 AM
word def. appreciate u two for accutally leaveing feed. much luv

VernakuLa
08-07-2006, 02:49 AM
peace to all, bumpin

Locust
08-07-2006, 02:49 AM
couldve made it a lil longer, still a nice drop tho.. and like noel said ease a little with the multies next time

VernakuLa
08-07-2006, 02:54 AM
couldve made it a lil longer, still a nice drop tho.. and like noel said ease a little with the multies next time

Loc'! Were you been man???? Got gay here without your rhymes

Logik1991
08-07-2006, 03:26 AM
yeah man thats a nice drop

would be some nice shiznay over a beat

Locust
08-07-2006, 03:27 AM
my rhymes are gay. but yea im still on holiday in japan, i had an arguement with my moms so i gotta stay at my grandparents place the whole trip where theres no internet, you know how it is fam.. now i cant download porn and i gotta jack off to soft ass hentai comics that i jack from our local 7-11, shiieeeet!!
shoot me a link to some of ur audio, we should collab if u already got it sorted out let me know fam

Da Dishonourable Don
08-08-2006, 01:59 PM
well, well, what do we have in this thread, another collabo feat. my nikka Vern, haha, nice shit V, even WnD's verse was nice, keep up with the good work, you know I still gotta come out here and smash shit, but I always check everybody's threads, keep doing U, peace!

Bigot Hitman
08-10-2006, 04:09 PM
White n dangerous
"the Boundarys Around Me are Closeing In
my flow is headed DownStream like a Broken Ship"

Thick thoughted line, i like that

Nak- your lines never broke the scheme, its hard to that without being confusing, when its complex.

8 outa 10 for the whole song

VernakuLa
08-10-2006, 04:12 PM
word, i had actually saved the first part of the verse from a whhhhhile back, but then i actually wanted to do a collab so i wrote 6 extra lines, chorus is adlibed btw lol, anyways peace for feed!

White N Dangerous
08-11-2006, 01:50 AM
word feeling da feedback on this piece really suprised me, shit even DDD hit this up :)