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Tunavillian
07-08-2005, 12:42 AM
I wrote this one a little while ago to that busta rhymes/mariah carey track

Just expressin' the way I feel thru the motion of this pen/
let the ink release emotion cause i'm feelin' frozen when in/
your presence baby girl, u got my heart beatin'/
palms sweatin', paradise palm springs, start heatin'/
look into yur eyes, gaze into a rare beauty/
of purity, pretty smile just lurin' me in/
gettin' closer/
thoughts like a roller coaster/
shot by cupid talkin' stupid like how i ain't suppose tah/
french candy, yur sweetness got me hungry for affection/
i promise you'll be safe in my arms, wit more protection/
than these other cats, they tryin' to play u for some sexin'/
I know i'm new to this, but i'm willin' to learn some lessons/
wettin' my lips, just dyin' to give you a kiss/
feel the passion with deepness like the hidden abbys/
yo, we can laugh together/
a perfect match can't ask for better/
pillow fight in the twilght, my love will last forever...baby/

SHRAP
07-08-2005, 01:06 AM
shit was good. no homo. i was gonna skip it but then i remembered what track u were talking about and the beat popped into my head and i thought why not read dukes rhymes while its there, hahah

GuardianOne
07-08-2005, 09:34 AM
Doesn't seem real. But somehow you had the flow going . Maybe if you had been more creative.

Peace
PS: Keep posting

Tunavillian
07-09-2005, 03:12 AM
what do u mean it doesn't seem real...& creative?

Rebel_INS
07-09-2005, 07:33 AM
Nice!

Dae Ja Nae
07-09-2005, 12:09 PM
I wrote this one a little while ago to that busta rhymes/mariah carey track

Just expressin' the way I feel thru the motion of this pen/
let the ink release emotion cause i'm feelin' frozen when in/
your presence baby girl, u got my heart beatin'/
palms sweatin', paradise palm springs, start heatin'/
look into yur eyes, gaze into a rare beauty/
of purity, pretty smile just lurin' me in/
gettin' closer/
thoughts like a roller coaster/
shot by cupid talkin' stupid like how i ain't suppose tah/
french candy, yur sweetness got me hungry for affection/
i promise you'll be safe in my arms, wit more protection/
than these other cats, they tryin' to play u for some sexin'/
I know i'm new to this, but i'm willin' to learn some lessons/
wettin' my lips, just dyin' to give you a kiss/
feel the passion with deepness like the hidden abbys/
yo, we can laugh together/
a perfect match can't ask for better/
pillow fight in the twilght, my love will last forever...baby/
:D ... Hottness ... fo sho ;) ... flows perfectly with the beat.

Peace

Zac McFly
07-16-2005, 04:10 AM
Illness!