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GuardianOne
07-08-2005, 08:07 AM
"Could have been that one said too much, but what was saying was not of any meaning as such, plus tried to make it seem to have touched, and minds continue to test till the way is found, of the weaker one, the game timed with each others speed, so who shall follow, not at all, for those are not our ways, combined forming awesome thoughts, between the both of them, we remain true, for need not play the self to made up games of influence, yet now is all common sense, to provide a decent time".

martyr
07-08-2005, 09:06 AM
... i read your other drop as well.... i felt both pieces we're well writting but you gotta drop in bar format most definately... we're reading you text, not looking for a challenge... i also feel that your 'drops' need to be longer... need multies too, but thats always been common in this forum... but keep dropping and drop a bit longer because your verse(s) is/are only a little longer than my reply...

444trumpets
07-08-2005, 11:29 AM
Coo Your Own Way Your Own Path
Get Yours Right Peace

GuardianOne
07-11-2005, 12:35 AM
Thanks Martyr, i keep that in thought. Peace 444Trumpets!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace