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Robert
08-13-2006, 02:58 AM
Right, this is it, the final to see who reigns supreme.....the prize, a sig in recognition of being the best....

The final will be 2 rounds with Dusk spitting first in round 1, and T-ribe dropping first in round 2......the verses should be 20 lines in length......

The voting must be a bar by bar break down as this is the final and i'm expecting those that battled in the comp to vote, otherwise yall are bitches.......and yes it is first to 5 votes, open voting, i will determine whether votes should be ignored for dickriding, poor explainations etc....

So thats all ya need to know.....get those verses in within the next three days......

Luther Large
08-13-2006, 06:23 PM
no offense but sum1 else should be facin dusk

T-ribe
08-13-2006, 07:10 PM
No respect!!

oDoUoSoKo
08-13-2006, 08:07 PM
no offense but sum1 else should be facin dusk
ill take that as a compliment:)

Luther Large
08-13-2006, 08:58 PM
No respect!!


nah son it aint even like that you nice i just honestly think there is cats in here whos a little better ive seen sum of your battles and they pretty good

and dusk yeah it was sorta a compliment we both in the top 5 homie :Y

VernakuLa
08-13-2006, 09:20 PM
top 5 homie :Y

wouldnt say top five.....but near ur nice with the writtens

oDoUoSoKo
08-13-2006, 09:43 PM
no disagreement there LL, im spittin tomoro,aslong as ribe is awake we can finish by tuesday the latest

Robert
08-14-2006, 12:06 AM
Right LL your not allowed to vote in this battle, it seems you've already decided who will win it, just accept the results as they are and dont flood this thread with bullshit like "i'm in the top five", maybe concentrate on your own writing ability instead of bitching and dickriding Dusk....

Luther Large
08-14-2006, 07:46 AM
Right LL your not allowed to vote in this battle, it seems you've already decided who will win it, just accept the results as they are and dont flood this thread with bullshit like "i'm in the top five", maybe concentrate on your own writing ability instead of bitching and dickriding Dusk....

dickriding? why u comin off like a bitch for? i will definetly vote fairly on this battle but i just feel ive seen dusks abilities and ribes abilities and i think i know who might win thats all i'm sayin so quit catchin emotions you faggot

Jesus Christ
08-14-2006, 09:41 AM
no offense but sum1 else should be facin dusk

Transalation: OH Dusk your nuts or so swollen, please bust in my face.

ill take that as a compliment:)

Transalation: Oh yeah open your mouth you little bitch.

nah son it aint even like that you nice i just honestly think there is cats in here whos a little better ive seen sum of your battles and they pretty good

and dusk yeah it was sorta a compliment we both in the top 5 homie :Y

Transalation: Sorry tribe, you got a big dick but, there are just so many longer, harder cock's in here to suck. Iv'e seen you fuck a few down, but I'd rather be hit by Dusk's big sweaty thing.

and dusk, I want you to come inside me this time.

dickriding? why u comin off like a bitch for? i will definetly vote fairly on this battle but i just feel ive seen dusks abilities and ribes abilities and i think i know who might win thats all i'm sayin so quit catchin emotions you faggot

Translation: I've sucked off Dusk before and I know his semen is absolutley delcious. I've seen T-ribe's semen, but never tasted it, and don't really want to taste it because I'm in love with dusk's shiny totem pole. Oh god i'm such an emotional faggot myself I have to call others emotional faggots, when really I just want dusk to Pull out of my ass bust in my face!

Visionz
08-14-2006, 09:45 AM
Slippy's wylin out haha. CS is always down to ride for his homies.(no homo)

Jesus Christ
08-14-2006, 09:50 AM
Yo.....LUTHOR LARGE

Quit sending me Private Messages, if I siad something that hurt your feelings you should cease from acting like an emotional dick riding faggot.

Robert
08-14-2006, 12:16 PM
dickriding? why u comin off like a bitch for? i will definetly vote fairly on this battle but i just feel ive seen dusks abilities and ribes abilities and i think i know who might win thats all i'm sayin so quit catchin emotions you faggot
Lol,im not catching emotions im just trying to run the comp fairly and if you got a problem with that and feel the need to bitch about it i dont really care.....anyway i wont count your vote,the whole comp you winged and complained about the voting and how i changed the rules up,plus you didn't bother voting once after you were eliminated......pathetic

Robert
08-14-2006, 12:17 PM
Get them verses in people!!

Luther Large
08-14-2006, 12:30 PM
Lol,im not catching emotions im just trying to run the comp fairly and if you got a problem with that and feel the need to bitch about it i dont really care.....anyway i wont count your vote,the whole comp you winged and complained about the voting and how i changed the rules up,plus you didn't bother voting once after you were eliminated......pathetic

yo if u aint noticed i havent been here much latley which has to do with me not voting yet even though i'm willing to and have the time now and never did i wine or complain i just simply questioned the way you ran the comp cuz it sucked

Robert
08-14-2006, 12:47 PM
yo if u aint noticed i havent been here much latley which has to do with me not voting yet even though i'm willing to and have the time now and never did i wine or complain i just simply questioned the way you ran the comp cuz it sucked

Why did it suck? because you lost early on?

No one else has a problem, in fact the others are pretty happy with the way things have gone, but yes there were some problems with the voting (official judges not voting) and interest by emcees but that was minor, the fact is this comp will actually get finished unlike the other one which proves i did an ok job.......

the fact is i put a lot of effort into running this shit for you guys and for you to say it sucked really is quite annoying......it just shows how much of a bitch you are,getting all annoyed coz you didnt make it past the second round, posting meaningless shit in the other battle threads like "it should have been open voting/two rounds the whole time", not voting......

Please stop cluttering this thread with spam posts, this is a battle thread not a bitch session,get the fuck out!:fucku:

Jesus Christ
08-14-2006, 01:50 PM
yo if u aint noticed i havent been here much latley which has to do with me not voting yet even though i'm willing to and have the time now and never did i wine or complain i just simply questioned the way you ran the comp cuz it sucked

Transalation: Once again you've exposed my bitchmade character, and i'm a sissy homo that's why I never came back to vote after I lost. I'm a sore loser and I whine and bitch everytime I lose to someone. I think your doing a bad job at running the competition, and I think you should leave so someone who knows how to dick ride can take over, that way the people I think should win- will win.

Visionz
08-14-2006, 02:51 PM
ahaha^ , btw Robert props on getting this one to the end. I know just how difficult it can be to keep everything organized.

VernakuLa
08-14-2006, 04:43 PM
ahaha^ , btw Robert props on getting this one to the end. I know just how difficult it can be to keep everything organized.

wtf ever happened to ur tourny? It was poppin then it stopped....and all the members left

Visionz
08-14-2006, 05:19 PM
It'd might uv had something to do with the site crashin for two or three months in the middle of the tourny........ain't shit I can do about it now.

VernakuLa
08-14-2006, 05:23 PM
It'd might uv had something to do with the site crashin for two or three months in the middle of the tourny........ain't shit I can do about it now.

but u SAID no matter what ud get it done which is coo

Visionz
08-14-2006, 05:33 PM
if emcees aren't droppin verse though what can you do? When I saw Robert starting this one up, at that point, with lack of participation and all, I was just like "fuck it"

T-ribe
08-14-2006, 07:59 PM
I'll follow up

oDoUoSoKo
08-14-2006, 08:55 PM
the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE

oDoUoSoKo
08-14-2006, 09:07 PM
sorry for the lateness

oDoUoSoKo
08-14-2006, 09:21 PM
It'd might uv had something to do with the site crashin for two or three months in the middle of the tourny........ain't shit I can do about it now.

thats exactly why, and cuz i jinxed ur shit since u didnt have me in it (tho at the time i was better than a few people in it:thumbdwn:) rofl, !!!!

jallainINS
08-14-2006, 09:34 PM
fire, this has started off pretty good

oDoUoSoKo
08-14-2006, 09:59 PM
thanks

T-ribe
08-14-2006, 11:28 PM
Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps

Robert
08-15-2006, 12:20 AM
Aight thats the first round done, T-ribe spits first in the second....

Robert
08-15-2006, 12:25 AM
Btw that was fire from both netcees this final could be classic shit if the second round is like that....

VernakuLa
08-15-2006, 08:08 AM
Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps

psh, u jus jealous of my name lol, nice verse Ribal

Robert
08-15-2006, 12:55 PM
Verses?

T-ribe
08-15-2006, 01:18 PM
Second vrs. a little later I gotta go make that $10.50 an hour.......still grind'n

T-ribe
08-15-2006, 11:11 PM
From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall

oDoUoSoKo
08-16-2006, 07:05 PM
ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little

fuk u feed haters...


VOTES

Germillion
08-16-2006, 09:40 PM
I vote for Cabron... He DOMINATED this. Totally. Palestine Liberization Organisation style. Savezna Federativna Republika Jugoslavija style...

oDoUoSoKo
08-16-2006, 10:06 PM
thanks for voting but they aint gonna count it unless u brake it down bar by bar...1

WARPATH
08-17-2006, 03:51 AM
DUSK

the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
^^Ha Ha, it's funny because I know some cats are mad about it too.
1/2

barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
^^Uh huh, nice line, Why's it gotta be a Tee-Pee though?
2/2

See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
I like this second line, but where's the punch?
1/2

YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
Filler, says no homo, but came off homo ass hell.
0/2

reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
????.........oh ok now I get it.....haha..
1/2

ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
eh.
0/2

violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
Ok, I like the Aztec reference, but how can chucking spears compete with a tek???? Now........I get the whole cry bullets theme,the imagery is good.
1/2

word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
eh.
0/2

ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
Tribe did you split?
0/2

fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
Ok, a shot at tribe's Conrete Warrior label, but really dusk you can stand on your own, you don't need to call in the Odd Jobs for this one.
1/2

Total 7

Tribe

Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
Eh.....a shot at the wifee, wasn't feeling it.
0/2

This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
Ok, it had more of an impact since Dusk is chucking spears.
1/2

I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
Ok.
1/2

When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
eh....
0/2

The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
Ok, don't know if it's true, I haven't been reading the battles lately.
1/2

He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
Shot at the mommy, like the rocky refference......but still fell short
0/2

Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
Another shot at the wifee.....this line was cool.
1/2

So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
Peep the set up.....
0/2


Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
And the survey says.....
2/2

Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
The last six lines worked well together, It helped finish it out strong.
1/2

Total 7

Tribe

From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
now your just acting like a Diva.....
0/2

Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
uh huh, that takes me back...........
0/2

Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
eh....
0/2

I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
ha ha.
1/2

Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
Tribe's breaking down to you cats with some shit ya might not know. Use it wisely.

28 grams in an OZ
14 grams in half
7 grams in quarter
3.5 in an eighth

16 oz in a pound
8 in a half pound
4 in a quarter pound
2 in an eighth

0/2

Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
LMAO BANG A RANG PETER
2/2

Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
eh.....
0/2

Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
ok
1/2

Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
ok, another shot at the mom's.
1/2

Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
Ok finisher, not like the last verse, plus that hand ball line's played out...
1/2

Total 6

Dusk

ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
ok, nice opener.
1/2

act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
eh....
0/2

speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
what the fuck is midget in a cum gland?? Was this a shot back at the mexican's coming up short line?
0/2

is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
It's funny because:
Denver is a Mile High Above sea level(if you didn't know)
Drugs are cheaper there and they get you more fucked up because of the elevation.
Tribe likes to get fucked up while he writes, and then his wiffee edits the spelling and structure.
1/2

crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
eh......no, I was picked as an offical judge, and was probably one of the only cats to stay consistant with the voting. Really though, I like how you thought about me, makes me feel good. But see here's where shit breaks down:
If you diss me in a verse and I give my vote to Tribe, then any way you chop it up I come out looking bad.
And really what would it benefit if I just voted for him just because? Is he gonna pat me on the back next time we visit? Is he gonna throw a hissy fit if I don't vote and call me on the phone and say we're not cousins anymore? No. But still, there's genius in what your trying to do.

1/2

Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
eh.
0/2

pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
I see how it ties in together......it's just kinda forced out there.
0/4

Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
I get it, but really what's the point?
0/2

its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
Nice finisher.
2/2


Total=5


CONCLUSION:

Dusk came out the gate with some fire, Tribe was able to hold his own by combating what Dusk through at him. The first verses were pretty decent.

Then second verses came..............I don't know what to say, they weren't garbage, they just weren't poppin like they should've on both sides. Now what kills it for me was Tribe was throwing out some week punches, and Dusk fired back with some gibberish shit, that just seemed like it was made to rhyme but wasn't very coherent.

As far as rhyme schemes, and word play neither emcee can say they're better then the other. Both had a different style, Dusk would have came ahead if he could have molded his rhyme schemes into decent punches. Dusk was persistant in showing his skill, but Tribe was able to show that he could match what Dusk was throwing out there. What did it for me was, Tribe didn't sacrifice his rhymes and punches just to show he can rhyme words, and feell really that's where Dusk fell. Believe me, I catch shit for same thing on other boards I battle on all the time.

Vote= T-ribe

I used a 2 point method, and based giving 2 points for each line- a point was given out for the message and presentation of the punch. If I didn't feel nothing for the line I didn't give a point. Simple.

If my vote isn't respected, then don't count it. I spent over 2 hours mulling these verses over to come to a conclusion. I remained un-biased through out my voting process, even if some of my comments don't seem so.

VernakuLa
08-17-2006, 03:57 AM
ahaha, somehow i new you would do that charge (you pop outta nowhere wtf lol) anyways dusk been riding sack for a vote so lemme break this shit up

VernakuLa
08-17-2006, 04:23 AM
Round 1

Dusk

the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
Decent opener, had very solid flow, not to shabby
barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
lame lines hear, decent attempt at name play
but your still keeping with the flow 8O
See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
Ahh, dope wordplay and metaphors, good use of multies too Cabron
YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
This ones a Filler, your puttin me to sleep here buddy
reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
I'm feeling this bar, those are very good rhyme schemes but half decent ender
ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
Ok, the flow is becoming monotone right about now, but witty wordplay
violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
Niice, i see you figured your flow out, again not a punch (kinda) good wordplay
word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
filler...
ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
theres some great wordplay here
fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
Half decent closer here, a tad bit played with the concrete warriors


Now for T-ribes first


Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
Totally random punch, not a good set off man
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
Good bar, good personal
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
A bit corny here, IMO i dont like comparisons
cuz most of them are played and corny yo
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
Again, nice attempt at personals/punches, but
I've had this problem too, its a totally random punch
i.e you should have a set up line, naw mean?
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
OK personal, kinda fucked up the line with "aluminum bums" lol
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
decent bar.
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
Good attempt. Decent bar
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
One word, battle. No bragging here first line was nice
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
Mentioning me? Flattered, but punch is decent
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
decent closer

Round 1 I'd say goes to Dusk, his rhyme schemes were on point developing in to more complex ones coupled with good wordplay. T-ribes verse was decent but just alot of off beat punches ie, they werent hitting

I'll be back with round 2 tommorow, and my vote

1

Robert
08-17-2006, 12:33 PM
Charge's vote counts...damn man you broke that down comprehensively, 1-0 to T-ribe, i'll vote soon......

Robert
08-17-2006, 01:28 PM
Round 1
Dusk-
the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
Ha, solid opener.

barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
Really weak punch, "tipi chewing a pipi" is kinda pre school.

See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
K, solid lil' punch on the second line set up by the first....

YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men
solid lines....nothing special tho

reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
Nice first line, not heavy hitting but solid, second line is just bragging

ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
Getting personal on the first line, solid lines here.....

violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
lines are good...but once again not heavy hitting punches...

word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
Hmmmm........filler

ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
Ok....

fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
solid closer....


T-ribe-
Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
Lol, nice opener, second line had me laughing, some might say its played but imo it hits.....

This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
Hmmmm....i'll call the second line a weak jab

I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
Doesn't hit.....

When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
ha, average to solid lines

The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
Nice lines, second line def hits...

He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
Lol, i know a lot of cats on this site and me included will say "ya mum" jokes are played but the way you delivered this was funny, hits for me....the first line is alright....

Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
Kinda repetitive but ok....

So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
Ok lines

Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
Lol, nice personals, hits....

Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
Solid closer....

I think the first round definitely went to T-ribe, Dusk dropped a verse with good wordplay and rhyme schemes but overall i felt the punches were lacking whereas T-ribe was hitting with the personals and punches and had some nice flow and rhymes to back it up. Remember all those voting, wordplay and schemes can be included in making your decision on who wins but the most important element of a battle are the punches and personals (whoever tells you this isnt the case is kidding themselves) so thats what i want voted on in the main.......


Round 2
T-ribe-
From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
Solid opener, not hitting that hard but solid....

Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
Average lines, the second doesn't hit

Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
Alright.....

I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
Ok, a lil' jab here.....

Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick or 448 grams
Nice wordplay but not hitting.....

Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
Lol, nice second line, good punch....

Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
K, solid lines but not hitting hard.....

Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
Solid lines but once again they dont hit hard, seems a step down from your first drop in this battle....

Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
Bad lines, not feelin this at all....

Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
Average closer....

Dusk-
ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
Lame first line but the second is very good, makes up for it, good punch...

act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
Hmmmm.....pretty decent lines here

speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
Not feelin' these lines, seems like the multi is kinda forced too "dumb bland" is kinda pre school, weakens the punch which doesnt hit anyway...

is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
Solid Lines.....

crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
Alright lines, although really you got a whole cru (Bom, Obb Jobz and all that) that can vote for ya, but still, good lines, hits...

Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line:your folks,"T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
Very weak second line, average first, filler for me....

pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
Alright....

in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
Ok wordplay...pretty decent...

Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
Alright but nothing too write home about....

its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
Haha, nice closer....

Well overall that was real close, i think both of you dropped much weaker verses on the second round which i think Dusk won. Overall, T-ribe got this, he was well on top in the first round and although Dusk took the second it wasnt by enuff, I mean you really coulda capitalised on T-ribe's second drop but i feel the verse you layed down was good enough to win that round but not good enough to undone the damage done in the first round.....
Vote=T-ribe
2-0 to T-ribes keep them votes coming

Robert
08-17-2006, 01:34 PM
Oh, and no bitching on the votes, i'll decide whether votes should be discounted for whatever reason.....it took me fifty minutes to vote of this battle...so yeah i certainly took my time preparing a fair and honest vote, i think bar by bar voting is the best way to do this final for sure so....... please keep voting....
2-0 T-ribe

Robert
08-17-2006, 01:41 PM
I vote for Cabron... He DOMINATED this. Totally. Palestine Liberization Organisation style. Savezna Federativna Republika Jugoslavija style...
This vote doesn't not count, it is a perfect example of what you dont do if you want your vote to count (besides he only got 11 posts), bar by bar bitches!!
peace

T-ribe
08-17-2006, 01:46 PM
Thanx 4 thakin the time to vote peeps

WU-GC
08-17-2006, 08:02 PM
the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
(ok opener)
barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
(waist)
See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
(i like that)
YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
(ok)
reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
(dope)
ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
(nice)
violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
(shit was nice)
word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
(i like the first line and attempt at wordplay)
ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
(i like the avatar attack)
fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
(solid closer)

Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
(dont like the girl shot..played)
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
(ok, not much goin on tho)
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
(eh)
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
(this ones ok)
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
the rhymes scheme is boring, good as hell concept)
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
(corny)
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
(really bad ender for the last line)
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
(ok but a bit forced)
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
(like it)
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
(good ender)

(dusk takes the first round 5 to 4.5)

From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
(good opener)
Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
(nice but didnt like the rhyme Set up to much)
Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
(good 1st line, second one was a bit boring)
I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
(Bad filler very bad)
Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
(thats better)
Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
(second line was good)
Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
(wack)
Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
(good lines)
Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
really fukin bad dude)
Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
(nice closin)

ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
(great open)
act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
(eh, not all dat)
speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
(i like the wordplay and imagery)
is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
(nice)
crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
(nice again)
Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
(i see it but its not all that either)
pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
(pretty nice)
Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
(ok hitter)
its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
(fukin dope closer LOL)

ok, all together dusk's mix of flow, multies and ok punches overpowered ribes good punches, so while this was one of the best battles of the corp yet, i say dusk had a razors edge on this one,

v=dusk, ya niggaz say whatcu want about dickridin, i explained my self enuff to not give a fuck...peace

Fuck
08-17-2006, 08:13 PM
Thanx 4 thakin the time to vote peeps

good point, iz hard to vote wit 4 fkin verses and bar for bar breakdown rules, but im glad this pussy up here^^^ voted...ima vote in a sec..1

Fuck
08-17-2006, 08:45 PM
the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
(im feelin it a lil 4/5)
barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
(hmmmmmmmmm 2.5/5)
See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
(dope poetry type second line 4.5)
YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
(i see where u gettin at 3.75)
reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
(dope shit 4/5)
ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
(violent dusk? 5/5)
violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
(ditto 5/5)
word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
(pretty good filler believe it or not 4/5)
ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
(nice boxing counter and scheme)
fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
(ur specialty? closers? maybe...5/5)

overall (not averaged) 4/5

Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
(good play but girl disses is 3rd grade lunchroom status 3/5)
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
(idk about this 1 3/5)
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
(well not hatin 3/5)
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
(like this shit 5/5)
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
(not too bad 4/5)
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
(eh not too good duke 2/5)
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
(filler like hell ribe 2/5)
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
(well let the points speak 3/5)
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
(boom low blow 4/5)
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
(ite dude u held urs 5/5)

not averaged...3.5/5

From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
(nice transition 5/5)
Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
(koodve worded it better 4/5)
Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
(ok 3/5)
I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
(2/5..dude)
Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
(4/5 DUDE)
Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
(ite not too good ov a set up 3/5)
Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
(2/5)
Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
(4/5)
Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
(uh man, here we go 2/5)
Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
(redeemer, 4/5)

ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
(hotness b 5/5)
act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
(well..3.5/5)
speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
(lol nice 4/5)
is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
(i love that set up like u not gonna diss it..lol 4/5)
crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
(multy attack...4/5)
Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
(ribbit,,,lol 3/5)
pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
(lol its like a movie directed by slim shady..5/5)
Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
(coodve had a better set up 3.5/5)
its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
(100/5 the best feed/close/ punch/ w/e in the battle, {jus cuz its mad true} lol)

u kno what overall in the second dusk takes it again for standing HIS ground, cuz no homo but i talked to him about it and he gets real tite at the voters on this site (not y im votin tho so hop off) cuz they have weird as fuck taste, and hes modest, but he be like "i kno i won it but theyre not givin the credit" even when he does win, so w.e keep ya head up "cabron"....lol and change ya fukin name, and ribe dont be offended, but this is ur best battle by fukin far, but no excuse....keep at it, (3rd times a charm) LOL
vote-cabron;';';';';';';';';';1

oDoUoSoKo
08-17-2006, 09:19 PM
ok fine, thx for the votes ya, (YO AUD U LIKE TELLIN MY SECRETS AND SHIT)

2-2 VOTE

oDoUoSoKo
08-18-2006, 07:34 PM
vote

Jesus Christ
08-18-2006, 09:26 PM
DUSK

the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
HA HA THAT NIGGA CHARGE IS MAD HOMO YO!

barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
YO I BET DUSK FANATAZISE ABOUT THAT SHIT, THAT' WHY HE THOUGHT OF IT!

See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
THIS LINE IF FUCKING WHACK

YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
I THINK THIS JUST CONFIRMED THAT DUSK LIKES TO TOSS MANLY SALADS!!!!!!!!!!

reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
SOME BODY STOP THE CORNBALL FROM ROLLING DOWN HILL

ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
DO YOU FANTASIZE ABOUT MEN WRAPPING THEIR MOUTHS AROUND SOMETHING HARD?

violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
ARE YOU CALLING YOURSELF SPEAR CHUCKING ZULU WARRIOR, THAT'S SO FUCKING ILL YO!

word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
HOT SHIT, REFERENCING ERIC IN A BATTLE IS ALWAYS HOT!


ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
YO, TRIBE WAS WATCHING YOU GET UNDRESSED, AND THEN SPLIT BECAUSE HE'S NOT GAY? WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON WITH THIS ZANY VERSE!!!

fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
ODDBALLZ TO THE RESCUE!


Tribe

Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
SO, A MIDGET GAVE YOU A JAR OF BRAINS, THAT'S FUCKING INSANE DOOKIE


This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
WOW, YOU BOTH WROTE SOMETHING WHERE YOU RAN AWAY FROM EACH OTHER, TALK ABOUT A COUPLE OF PANSY ASSES.

I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
ON CALL, LIKE A CALL GIRL? GET OVER HERE AND SUCK MY DICK BABY!


When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
YES, JACKING OFF IS BAD FOR THE FOREARMS, HOT SHIT, I'M FUCKING QUIVERING IN EXSTACY OFF ALL THESE HOT LINES

The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
YO! RECYCLING IS GOOD FOR THE ENVIROMENT!


He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
TRIBE ARE YOU GOING ANAL ON HIS MOMMY, PLEASE ELABORATE!


Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
WOW, WE WATCH THE SAME JERK OFF FLICKS...........EMMANUEL IN SPACE, EMMANUEL IN THE DESSERT, EMMANUEL IN TEXAS, EMMANUEL FUCKS ANOTHER ANONYMOUS MOTHER FUCKER.


So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
KICK THAT SHIT DOOKIE


Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
HA HA NASTY NAK IS FUCKING WHACK

Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
TOP FIVE? HARDLY I AM THE TOP THREE, ME MYSELF AND I, THEN IT GOES DAE JA NAE THEN BIG BEN.


Tribe

From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
THAT'S ONLY BECAUSE I DIDN'T ENTER!


Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
CAN WE GET SOMTHING DOPE FROM THIS KID PLEASE!

Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
YOU MEAN T AS IN T-RIBE?

I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
DON'T KNOCK IT TILL YOU TRY IT!

Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
WOW, NOW I CAN REJUVANATE MY DREAM OF BECOMING A DOPE DEALER!


Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
SO DO YOU FANTASIZE DUSK HOLDING COCK AND BALLS, ARE SURE YOU TOO AREN'T SWAPPING PM'S

Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
THAT WAS SO FUCKING DOPE............I JUST DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY


Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
I THINK YOU SHOULD HAVE USED 'MANTIS' INSTEAD, LIKE FACE THE STYLE OF THE MANTIS, SOME HOT KUNG FU REFFERENCE, THAT WOULD OF MADE SOME OF THESE KIDS BUST A NUT.


Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
YOU TOO?


Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
HEY LET'S BITE BUSTA RHYMES AGAIN SOME TIME!


Dusk

ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
HOOKERS AREN'T VIRGINS YOU DUM SHIT, THAT'S WHY THEY ARE HOOKERS!

act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
YEAH BITCHES JERK THAT SHIT DUSK IS DROPPING KNOWLEDGE YO!

speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
YO, THIS REMINDS ME OF THIS MIDGET GANG BANG I SAW....POOR KID.


is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
A MILE HIGH, AND STILL CLIMBING CHECK ME OUT I'M STILL RHYMING SUBLIMING CHINY CHEENY CHICK IN A BEENY I'M SUCH A MEENY WITH MY GREENY TEXT NEXT I'M GONNA SAY SOME MORE DUM SHIT WHEN I COME WIT, MY FREESTYLE SO ELOQUENT FOR YOU BITCHES THAT ARE CELIBANT BOO HA HA I'M SO FUCKING ILL WHEN I JUST START KILLING SHIT OFF THE DOME SUCK MY CHROME.......GUN THE BULLETS BE THE JIZZ SQUARE FUCKING BIZZ MY NIZZA CHOPPING HEADS LIKE THE RZA


crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
EVERYONE KNOWS CHARGIN SOLDIER SHOULDN'T BE ALLOWED TO VOTE IN THIS BATTLE, HE'S GONNA VOTE FOR TRIBE NO MATTER WHAT, AND YOU ALL KNOW IT'S TRUE, ERASE HIS VOTE, BETTER YET BAN HIS ASS BEFORE HE BRINGS MORE DRUNKEN INDIANS TO THE BOARD!

Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
CAN WE SEE THE VIDEO TAPE?

pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
DAM CENTAUR PRICKS, THAT REALLY FUCKING.....WIERD.

Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
HA HA HE SIAD VIRGINA SLIMS LIKE THE CIGGARETTE, THAT SO FUCKING WITTY

its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
I THOUGHT HE WAS A DIRTY INDIAN, WHO KNEW?

VOTE= SLIPPY THE PIMP

BECAUSE I DIDN'T ENTER THE TOURNAMENT, AND EVERYONE KNOW'S I'M SO FUCKING ILL SO DO THE RIGHT THING.................GIRL YOU KNOW IT'S TRUE....UUUH UUUH.......I LOVE YOU.......

T-ribe
08-19-2006, 04:30 AM
Lace up ya fuckin clown shoes and walk off a cliff
Non-hoe havin std carry'n 5yr old sience project.
Eat a dick........ and yes thats how I really feel
Fuckin flooder

T-ribe
08-19-2006, 04:31 AM
Legit votes plz

Robert
08-20-2006, 09:45 AM
Votes

Robert
08-20-2006, 01:51 PM
Vote!!!!!!

Robert
08-21-2006, 11:21 AM
Those that participated in the tourney should be voting in this!!!!

oDoUoSoKo
08-21-2006, 11:25 AM
damn man....THIS IS THE FUCKING FINAL BATTLE<<<<<VOTE

Robert
08-22-2006, 03:31 AM
C'mon people, as those in the battle comp should be voting.....lets get this one over and done with

Jesus Christ
08-22-2006, 11:56 AM
All these bitches are Salty because they aren't in the finals. HA HA, what a bunch of pussies.

Visionz
08-22-2006, 12:24 PM
^lmao, not at all here, I'm gonna get a vote in today, gotta find the time here at work but look for it soon, peace

Visionz
08-22-2006, 01:56 PM
the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
(nice opener)
barge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
(nice play on his name here)
See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
(I get it, but just Ok here)
YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
(ehh---the word play is good but not much of a punch)
reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
(ok)
ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
(nice here, still remember the sig u had when you wrote this)
violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
(nice wordplay)
word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
(haha, nice wordplay, and no not cause my name's in it)
ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
(callin 'em out, nice lines)
fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
(nice finish here)





Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
(this first line is kinda eh, second line was good)
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
(nice)
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
(another nice set of lines here)
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
(haha, you battlin Dusk or Intellekt?, nice)
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
(damn, that's alotta recyclin)
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
(nice, stayin on point past that first line)
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
(haha)
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
(that one mighta been the killer right there^)
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
(eh ok here, maybe you left out "just" in the second line, would be more effective)
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
(ok finisher here)


From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
(Nice opener)
Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
(funny-liked the Kris Kross wordplay, even if I could never stand 'em)
Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
(ok)
I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
(haha, nice)
Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
(nice)
Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
(haha, that second line is killa)
Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
(ok here)
Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
(nice)
Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
(ok)
Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
(ehhh, just ok for a finisher)


ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
(breakin out the gates w/ a heater!)
act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
(damn!)
speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
(ok here, not feeling the second line )
is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
(haha, nice)
crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
(aha, another nice set)
Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
(ehh, funny but kinda stretched)
pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
(ehh, good rhyme schemes just not sure what ur saying here)
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
(haha, that shit is funny)
Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
(very nice wordplay here)
its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
(nice finisher)



Damn very nice battle and respect to both emcees. Yall had a nice contrast in styles goin which makes it tough to call.


flow..............Tribe gets the nod in flow, he had the more compact lines and managed to stay away from stretching bars
wordplay.......Dusk here, a lot of lines that put a twist on things different from how they'd normally be used
creativity.......Dusk here as well, to me its kinda the same as wordplay, so I'd just end up repeating myself. I would say thou that for the sake of rhyme schemes some of those lines become pretty obscure. In the end, that sometimes hurts you as much as it helps.
vocabulary.....Dusk here as well
punches.........Tribe get the nod for this one. I felt like he was just being more direct and to the throat type shit w/ his lines. To me you nailed it w/ the abstract vs facts line cuz it kinda sums up ya styles. Nothing wrong w/ being either but I thought it was a good move the way you pointed it out.


Really, I wanna say tie, for me it was that close. The vote system helped me kinda break it down though and come to a decision, so I gotta say Dusk by the slimmest of margins. When yall both represent like this, sucks that someone's gotta lose. peace and respect to both yall.

oDoUoSoKo
08-22-2006, 10:09 PM
thanks for starting atleast....damn these people are fucking dead

T-ribe
08-22-2006, 10:18 PM
This shit dosent suprise me 1 bit my last 4 or 5 battles never got closed due to non-voters. Nowonder that line about my stats hits so hard!!!!!
My battles seem to drift into a blackhole, never finished
I hope this one gets finished..... Its bout time I earn some respect and rep around this bitch. Shit before Eric dropped his recent 100 bar verse, Me and Da Don were the only one's who done dat shit. I'v been on a battle road and aint got shit to show for it no L's or W's ......what the fuck?

oDoUoSoKo
08-22-2006, 10:34 PM
our last battle was completed..either way man ur right...this is fukin bullshit..either way nice one ribe,,,1

T-ribe
08-22-2006, 11:49 PM
Word Lyfe Dusk hell of a battle.... U got my respect

T-ribe
08-22-2006, 11:52 PM
By the way the battles I was talkin bout never being closed due to non-voters
1. Classic
2. Da Don
3. God Concept
4. Eric Unseen
5. Vanak

and I think the battle wit Slippy also not sure though.

jallainINS
08-23-2006, 12:02 AM
DUSK

the vast methods of ass kicking got me bruisin ur spinal
but u and charge can be proud that i made u lose in the finals
heh nice opener i liked it way to start things off
Charge through and find u in ur tipi chewing a pipi, fag
i view u as weak b, old style is makin ya TT"S sag
Solid, good flow as well
See T's mad my branch set adds to his losses so
its obvious its hard as hell to skip stones across his flow
Good continuity and flow but wasnt the strongest bar
YOU LOST IT BRO y should i be in the same state of mind as when
i first penned a verse? since then i recruited merciless kind of men (n/h)
No punch, i like the scheme but no punch really
reverse the day u was 9'd (born) to encase u in pinewood
wit verses makin ya blind when displaying my rhymehood
Kinda braggin more then a punch but i still liked it
ur sayin im good? ur still crying since the last dent
the sigs no joke ill have u choke frenchin the silencer attachment
Okay, felt a little forced but it was okay
violent as an AZTEC you blast teks, i chuck spears
Snuff peers and hug foes, cry snub nose bullets FUCK TEARS
I'd take a tek over a spear, but i like this bar, good scheme
word to eric i stay unseen like DUCK EARS since
i beat queers dense like ribe who'd cry NEAR PRINCE
I think i don't understand it so maybe id like it a lil more but its decent
ive met pussy posers like you who jus love to spit
but soon as u saw me unrobe u unlaced ya GLOVES and SPLIT
I like this bar, good multy
fuck ur shit, my clik ull find is liver than a bomb's *BEEP*
soon as i call the WARRIORS they'll drive u through the CONCRETE
I like this bar but not as a closer, but it was still solid

Tribe

Fuck, ya style is more played than Milton Bradly board games
My IQ shot up after ya shortie gave me more brains
I did like the rhymes, but i didnt like the content cuz i dno i dont like i did your girlfriend/wife jokes
This is war games, why U commin at me wit no ammo
Probly cuz U shook duk, runnin from ya own shadow
Decent, was this because he was chuckin spear? anyways it was good
I'm like a camel, rhymes stored for long hauls
You'ze a part-time Mc, better yet on-call
Okay, a little lower then most of ur bars but its okay
When readin ya shit no-one benefits
Since ya still a virgin, U say its cool to be celibate
Is he a virgin? didnt like this anyway
The hell with it, I'ma b the one to call U out
Duk recycles more rhymes than aluminum bums for $ amounts
If he does then good punch if not then useless so decent i guess since im not sure either way
He burnt out, this underdog gonna do U like Rocky did the Russin
Come home after DUSK and catch me and ya mom's crush'n
I liked everything except the mom reference, still a solid bar
Don't say nutin, back talk will get U a back hand
Treat ya bitch like Cinamax after Dark, get wit the program
Liked the wordplay, decent bar
So man, why U sell ya self short like pinched sacks
Ya rhymes might be abstract, but yo I kick facts
Not really a punch, imagery was interesting heh, decent.
Why would U even rep a cru wit members like Nasty Nak
U aint hip-hop cuz you got hoodies and backpacks
I like this bar pretty solid
Fuck that, U WU-Corp top 5 but neva the champ
U can read this twice to help rid ya menstrual cramps
Cool closer, both of you could have ended on a stronger note though


Tribe

From the get I had this tourny sealed like Zip-Lock
Homies time ran out like dead batteries on a wrist watch
Weak, didn't like this.
Like Kris Kross, I'ma leave U Totally Krossed Out
U Depressed on the Brooklyn Bridge, Jump Jump is what I shout
Decent but not a punch or really much of anything
Brooklyn rebel's don't respect phalonious MC's
Why does it seem to me you portray that to a T
Decent you need to punch harder though
I'm grimmy, kickin these gutter raps
U soft son, take'n milk weed bubble baths
Heh, Thats more like it, strong
Whats up wit dat? dissappointing ya Wu Corp fans
My lyrics hit like a brick(pound) or 448 grams
Maybe a little step down but strong still
Thats 16 a piece, do the mathamatics
You hold'n ball joints and shafts, but not like a mechanic
Hah, best bar so far, made me laugh
Kill the antics, Dusk'll drop next, I'ma get the last laugh
His Vrs. is why this battle will end bad like a plane crash
Kinda weak, could have scrapped this bar
Get ya brains bashed by thoroughbred semantics
You're far beneath me like the great city of Atlantis
I like this one, clever
Taste the canvas, swollen jaws and all
I'm blood thirsty from eat'n ya moms raw
I don't like mom shots so ehh
Get smacked wit open palms like this was hand ball
Dusk's a mexican kat, thats why he'll never stand tall
Decent closer, could have finished stronger but it was okay.


Dusk

ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers
Okay opener, didnt understand the first line but i liked the second one
act like no one can cook ya but theres just 1 flaw
u could jerk off sushi and still wouldnt bust one raw
I like this bar, your building it stronger
speaking of bust, uniquer than dusk? bitch ya shit is dumb bland
cuz ur ass keep coming short like a midget in a cum gland
Im trying to figure out the second line.the midget is short, and hes coming, but hes inside a gland? i dno.
is that where ur from man? diss on it ill try
but trust me, beating me sonny? u must be a mile high
Nice personal, your def tryin
crusty like childs eyes, it aint hard for ribe to choke
unless he rigs it, cuz shit bitch Charge was B-ribed to vote
Nice wordplay and personal solid bar
Ribbit time to croak, prohibit ur mindless punch attempts
on the other line: your folks, "T-RIBE IS TRYIN TO GROPE MY SON FOR RENT"
Forced, i wasnt feelin it.
pun intent, adam apple piercing had em fearing the bastard G.O.A.T(cabron)
punishment, steering backwards while ur in ur classroom passing notes
Okay this was a good bar
in other words ur ass is young, and as for me im CAR SICK
my brothers murda have u HUNG, something like centaur pricks
Didn't like this as much it did tie in but wasnt as strong
Startin shit wit a certain set for rep aint makin ya big
Virgin, ya (virginia) slim and STILL u aint takin the CIG (sig)
good finish but didn't really like the rest of the bar
its funny for wins in ur stats its a circle (0) like perfect nipples
Ribes a mexican CAT, A fuckin PUSSY who works for little
Excellent closer, really finished it strong



Good battle guys. Tough one to call for me. You both flowed well and were payin attention to each others verses and stuff. I guess for me Dusk had more personals and punches hit harder. And it was a battle so my vote is gonna have to go to Dusk. Real Nice battle though guys. worth the time to break it down for you guys.

Robert
08-23-2006, 01:45 AM
3-2 to dusk, keep them votes coming....

oDoUoSoKo
08-23-2006, 11:32 AM
werd keep votin.....unseen finish that vote up for a bom bro...lol..1

oDoUoSoKo
08-24-2006, 09:52 AM
WTF, unseen finish the vote man!!!!

T-ribe
08-24-2006, 12:08 PM
Once again thanks 2 everyone who took the time to vote.
looks like Dusk is up 4-2

oDoUoSoKo
08-24-2006, 01:30 PM
word keep up the votes

Robert
08-24-2006, 09:09 PM
keep voting, vern still gotta finish his vote

oDoUoSoKo
08-25-2006, 09:23 PM
yo cmon finish that vote or someone else vote

VernakuLa
08-25-2006, 10:16 PM
Well I was gonna break it down but no...This battle was hard to decide, I gave dusk the wordplay and T-ribe the flow, because his was less as, "mechanical", in a sense that it was more unpredictable and flowed smoothe. I think based on the second verses that Dusk took it, because, due to the lack of on point punches, or actuall punches at all by both emcees, he took of it because of the intrecet wordplay, and his bars and lines were a lil' less forced. I dont have the time nor energy to break this down, just take it or leave it if you want too Jamel. Doesn't matter....

v-DuSk

tha god concept
08-26-2006, 02:53 AM
co sign

Robert
08-27-2006, 03:31 AM
V - Dusk

"
ayo his ass verse made this kid nap like a person took ya
no joke the flow leave ya nose broke like virgin hookers"

That did it for me...
Dusk had more personals...more punchlines...and the disses hit hard...T-Ribe had some stuff...but didnt connect with alot of punches...not as effective
vote doesnt count and neither does Vern's, if you cant be bothered following the bar by bar break down dont bother voting, still 3-2, cmon ppl...put in a little effort....
peace

T-ribe
08-27-2006, 04:27 AM
Hmmmmm........ Really who thought I'd win????

Robert
08-27-2006, 04:43 AM
4-2, thank you spoken

oDoUoSoKo
08-27-2006, 02:19 PM
4? wasnt i four 1 vote ago?

Robert
08-27-2006, 02:33 PM
my bad 5-2 Dusk wins the comp nice goin man, this was a good battle start reppin that sig