PDA

View Full Version : Something for amateurs and pro's


Dupreez
07-08-2005, 04:15 PM
This gonna be a battle only difference is the rules;

1. Gotta go through three diff styles eg; Pimp, christian, thug.......whatever. Just make sure you using 3 kinda styles in your verse.

2. Closing line gotta tie in with the opening line.

3. Gotta shout out for O'l Dirty (anywhere in your verse)

4. Gotta start with the word "air"

Its a challenge, something new. Lets see who really rules the forum. Somebody come up with a better idea, post it on the forum. Cause its always the same thing over and over. Be original.

OG Kane
07-08-2005, 04:46 PM
Lmao your just naming all the random bullshit you got in your own verse

Definitive X
07-08-2005, 04:49 PM
Lmao your just naming all the random bullshit you got in your own verse^^^co-sign, but you should try, OG Kane...I wanna see you beat dupreez...

OG Kane
07-08-2005, 05:08 PM
ok, i will after i beat 7th again

Dupreez
07-09-2005, 08:36 AM
Hey bro it dont have to be those exact rules. Im just trying to make it kinda equal. If anyone wanted to change them, thats cool. Im just trying to make it a battle where you can see who got the real skill. So who wanna start? And trust me I made that as random as possible. I havent used those before.

Necromancer
07-09-2005, 08:37 AM
yo dupreez keep this battle open holmes

b1ack fact10n
07-09-2005, 08:52 AM
Air? seriously Dupreeze,uve got mental retardation
from ma gangbanging, yo, i fucked the kkk nation
check this,ma lines be ma own fuckin creation
fuckin smash urs usin ma black thug variation
u wunt last against me, im bigga than a tree
step up kid, ill set ya faggot soul free
i knew Ol'Dirty bastard,u a fuckin mockery
Ol'Dirty Bastard ROCKS! u an insult to his memory
i stuff ma leadpipe down ya oesophagus,leave ya choking
take this seriously fuck, i fuckin aint joking
when i say ya ass ma niggaz be poking
leave ya pissin on the floor,ma threat's nerve wracking
after u read this, ya gonna sit and contemplate
what ya askin for is a twist of fuckin fate
ya fag lines make me wanna sneeze
air Dupreeze? ull be feelin my ass breeze

Dupreez
07-09-2005, 10:13 AM
Air? seriously Dupreeze,uve got mental retardation
from ma gangbanging, yo, i fucked the kkk nation
check this,ma lines be ma own fuckin creation
fuckin smash urs usin ma black thug variation
u wunt last against me, im bigga than a tree
step up kid, ill set ya faggot soul free
i knew Ol'Dirty bastard,u a fuckin mockery
Ol'Dirty Bastard ROCKS! u an insult to his memory
i stuff ma leadpipe down ya oesophagus,leave ya choking
take this seriously fuck, i fuckin aint joking
when i say ya ass ma niggaz be poking
leave ya pissin on the floor,ma threat's nerve wracking
after u read this, ya gonna sit and contemplate
what ya askin for is a twist of fuckin fate
ya fag lines make me wanna sneeze
air Dupreeze? ull be feelin my ass breeze
Air becoming vary rare, I cant bare this,
dude i get you aired you never been heard.
your shit was whack - dude you been smokin crack
I have you racked in the butchery, who's gotcha ya back.
sound like you still rocking burberry, ima punch you like
stallone did in rocky, yo ma wont take ya back. Matter of fact,
ima beat you easily, I do it backwards, you too "evian"
Here's a tissue you sounding kinda "sneazy", your dream was to kiss
snow white,,....dont look so "grumpy", man you's way to "dopey",
why aint you "happy" look like you need the "doc" couldnt kiss snow
white cause ya was too "bashful"
"Gotta get up and beeeee somebodyyyyyy" RIP - O'l dirty.
You need to stop smoking the herb, looks like its fucking wit yo
verbs. Ima keep this simple, kinda like yo pimples, and you got dimples,
yous a wimp, go grab a wimpy burger, Motherfuckers like you wasting
air, shut the fuck up, I flame grill you rare never well done. PEACE

I was hoping someone would come up with a better word than "air"
to start off with. Fuck that was a shit word if ever i came across one.

OG Kane
07-09-2005, 10:40 AM
i thought i told you to keep this battle open...
aight we battle some other time dupreez

Dupreez
07-09-2005, 12:36 PM
its still open homeboy, dont be shy. You wanna battle then battle. You know the rules.

Dupreez
07-10-2005, 11:26 AM
Is it only me and B1ack Fac10n that have the balls to battle to that? I know its shit topics but fuck I thought that would be easy for some of you. Obviously not.

AcidPhosphate69
07-10-2005, 12:55 PM
Air clogged wit gunsmoke, airways clogged you done choked
when the ODB spoke, grounds broke
I toke you like a blunt rolled with fine ass smoke
it's simple, you ain't pimp you pimple
get popped, my shit drops makin' faggots stop
bitch, look and listen...now i'm switchin' straight to christian
big ups to my man Jesus, who died just to please us
wrath of god, staight disease us with plague
now, back track to my pimp ass mack
i'm like dolemite, dynomite and outta sight
betta believe my pimp hand is tight, right straight into the night
alright, this is a weird ass kind of battle, Dup....but I'll saddle up
rodeo, round all you fuckin' cattle up, straight to the slaughter
i don't care, nobody is spared when my gunsmoke fills the air

yo, honestly...that was pretty interesting but it's hard to really "battle" something like that

Dupreez
07-10-2005, 02:34 PM
Dude ass kissing aint my style. But, on the real. You just killed that right there. That was pretty sick. Doubt anyone could beat that.

Yeah it is hard to battle too. But as you can see, that shows where the skill is, as its almost as close to freestlying you gonna get on a forum. You dont know who is just dropping shit or who is actually thinking and writting shit down so they look "talented".

In my opinion you just won that. I would like to see if anyone could actually better you on those rules.

b1ack fact10n
07-11-2005, 09:59 AM
Phosphate ripped it off again.as usual.

But that was fuckin sick.

Idiom
07-11-2005, 05:29 PM
Air is a scare when you get tossed up like a pass from steve mcnair, i'm bringing this shit back like it was laced with nair, life ain't fair, light up a square, pour out some liqour for my nigga Dirty, R.I.P, silence for 30, par rhyming niggas when i'm spitting birdies, you aint no hole in one so don't fake the funk, ya fetis rhymes should be left like junk in the trunk, lui kang bycicle kick ya bitches leavin' big lumps..scorpion style, get over here, hell fire uppercut, death by a spear.
Scared, when i Mcnair you tossing you like ragdolls throught the air...


kinda short but i gotta bounce.....
OmO < Idiom

Idiom
07-11-2005, 05:31 PM
oopsie poopsie *through*

AcidPhosphate69
07-11-2005, 11:25 PM
Idiom, that was pretty tight. I liked those opening couple lines. By square do you mean a cig? Cuz my boy from Brockton says that and he's the only kid I've heard say that around where I'm at.

Idiom
07-12-2005, 07:45 AM
lol, yeah square means cigarette..

hollywoodrealty
07-12-2005, 01:18 PM
got air like jordan, call me flash gorden
i splash like water, dont bother fucken with the warden
i kicked the door in, im the strett police man
put your hands up, hand cuffs, put your money ina rubberband
i aint got no blue and white im in the unmarked
i aitna pig, fuck the swine,im like ol dirty i eat no pork
i came to the fork in the road, started digging a hole
underground rail roads, raps slaves walken in rows
life so slow, and yet it ends so fast
im the cop that will pop ya leave ya in a body cast
write it off in my report as self defense
how the fuck am ig onna explain your cuts ftrom the chain link fence
ill say u tried to get away but i snatch ya from the top
when in reality your ass got thrown off
u wanna see my badge, u probably wanna see my nuts u lil fag
waving your white flag, you just a lil spazz
i told u im like jordan when i let my rhymes pore in
waking up the mental dead, you better stop your snooring

Dupreez
07-12-2005, 03:46 PM
started off aight but you lost it in the end (holywoodrealty). Acid phospate still shut this whole thread down in my opinion. What ya'll think? If you not gonna attempt to ryhme on this thread. Drop a vote. Peace.

MC MIDAS
07-12-2005, 04:36 PM
air heads spitting wackness and aint saying shit,
I like it raw like ol dirty, fires what i'm playing wit,
I've got more styles then the nike air dunk range,
all y'all styles bore me, im spitting enough flames,
i burn crews easy like candles sitting on mantles,
y'all melt like wax, when im spitting like a tanks tools,
my fires getting inside you and giving you heart burn,
emcees are stupid, they just brainless and cant learn,
im out, that cat midas thats at one with the elemants,
earth wind water FIRE, im burning ya testaments,

AcidPhosphate69
07-12-2005, 11:39 PM
That's cool shit. I heard a cig called a square for the first time only like a week ago.

Dupreez
07-13-2005, 05:08 PM
air heads spitting wackness and aint saying shit,
I like it raw like ol dirty, fires what i'm playing wit,
I've got more styles then the nike air dunk range,
all y'all styles bore me, im spitting enough flames,
i burn crews easy like candles sitting on mantles,
y'all melt like wax, when im spitting like a tanks tools,
my fires getting inside you and giving you heart burn,
emcees are stupid, they just brainless and cant learn,
im out, that cat midas thats at one with the elemants,
earth wind water FIRE, im burning ya testaments,


Did you read the rules? Your last line and opening line dont really tie-in.

MC MIDAS
07-13-2005, 05:26 PM
[QUOTE=Dupreez]Did you read the rules? Your last line and opening line dont really tie-in.[/QUOTE

air is wind, wind is one of the elements!!

"emcees are stupid, they just brainless and cant learn,"

Dupreez
07-13-2005, 05:28 PM
and so is a fart?

Dupreez
07-13-2005, 05:30 PM
ha ha you really had to think about that one again didnt you. Maybe I should go back and edit my first one?

MC MIDAS
07-13-2005, 05:30 PM
and so is a fart?
i'll put a flame to that and burn the arse out of you, dont make ya'self look stupid

MC MIDAS
07-13-2005, 05:33 PM
ha ha you really had to think about that one again didnt you. Maybe I should go back and edit my first one?
not really i was just puttin the quote from my rhyme about how stupid emcees are!! ITS DIRECTED AT YOU!!
fucking sucker sore loser wack ass rhymer

Dupreez
07-13-2005, 05:40 PM
^^^ This is what I thrive on motherfucker!!! Lets Battle but not on this thread. I will set one up tomorrow or you can. Upto you. Infact make the rules if you want. But im out for that night...............PEACE

MC MIDAS
07-13-2005, 05:49 PM
^^^ This is what I thrive on motherfucker!!! Lets Battle but not on this thread. I will set one up tomorrow or you can. Upto you. Infact make the rules if you want. But im out for that night...............PEACE
do what you want, go write ya'self a rhyme, i'll burn it out in two mins.............................PEACE

Dae Ja Nae
07-13-2005, 08:20 PM
Air clogged wit gunsmoke, airways clogged you done choked
when the ODB spoke, grounds broke
I toke you like a blunt rolled with fine ass smoke
it's simple, you ain't pimp you pimple
get popped, my shit drops makin' faggots stop
bitch, look and listen...now i'm switchin' straight to christian
big ups to my man Jesus, who died just to please us
wrath of god, staight disease us with plague
now, back track to my pimp ass mack
i'm like dolemite, dynomite and outta sight
betta believe my pimp hand is tight, right straight into the night
alright, this is a weird ass kind of battle, Dup....but I'll saddle up
rodeo, round all you fuckin' cattle up, straight to the slaughter
i don't care, nobody is spared when my gunsmoke fills the air

yo, honestly...that was pretty interesting but it's hard to really "battle" something like that
I can't tell ... you tore that shit up!!!

Peace

Shadow Pirate
07-14-2005, 05:31 PM
air ducts equals ya lungs, i'm shutting it off wit one punch
plutonium alloy arms leave ya people dead like dried out crops on a farm
i'm not golden i'm just holding this septar and leaving ya skull swoLLen
throw ya hand over ya chest,pray that ol' dirty's in peace while he rests,
now back to the rest of you wanna be tirants, this pirate is a drunken
master, shoalin like osirus, ya'll dont want me to outbreak on niggas like a deadly virus
i'LL kill you and you wont even know it till you're already dead, shadows attack from
every angle even from inside of ya head, this an old thread so it's time for lunch
crushing the tunnel to ya air unit with an uppercut punch

Poof...

AcidPhosphate69
07-14-2005, 08:40 PM
DAAAAMMMMNNN....i fucking liked that!

yo, who is that in your sig?

Ghost Pirate
07-15-2005, 12:10 AM
12 0 clock

Shadow Pirate
07-15-2005, 12:15 AM
timbo king **
from royal fam