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hollywoodrealty
08-14-2006, 06:40 PM
ok here is a short but sweet rhyme, click the link and tell me what you think..............


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=401654&songID=4315981

Hellspawn
08-15-2006, 06:32 AM
nice drop Butcher but the track needs more bass (i mean you gotta boost the bass in your voice and the beat)
the beat is dope tho

peace

hollywoodrealty
08-15-2006, 11:10 AM
thanks for the comments, i have shitty recording equipment, so the sound quality is always an issue for me, until i find someone who wants to do some free work and help me touch up the sound, i will be stuck

Killer Falcon
08-15-2006, 02:06 PM
this track is decent. your lyrics are good, got some solid punchlines in there. you could smooth out your flow a bit more, might make it sound a bit better. the sound quality is not too bad considering you say you use poor equipment.... anyways keep it up man

peace

hollywoodrealty
08-15-2006, 04:21 PM
yo thanks for the input, im glad people are feelen the lyrics atleast, i will try and work on the things im hearing, but in the meantime i still think this is one of my better songs, thanks for the comment though winte

mashqauck
08-15-2006, 04:36 PM
prety tight doggy

Pretty Toney
08-15-2006, 06:01 PM
yeah! the better the lyrics, the better the whole production! best one from you yet!

hollywoodrealty
08-15-2006, 06:43 PM
thanks akabobbyd and pretty toney, glad to see some heads are digen this rhyme

Killer Falcon
08-16-2006, 03:33 PM
yo thanks for the input, im glad people are feelen the lyrics atleast, i will try and work on the things im hearing, but in the meantime i still think this is one of my better songs, thanks for the comment though winte
dont get me wrong, this track is solid. i was a bit vague.... your delivery is pretty good but if you smooth out your flow it will sound better.

peace

hollywoodrealty
08-17-2006, 12:16 PM
oh ya i understand winte, infact i appreciate your oppinion bcuz u have been droppen a lot longer on here then i have. Im just trying to get better ad better with each release, thanks for checking outthe song atleast and droppen your oppinion, peace

hollywoodrealty
08-21-2006, 09:04 AM
can i get some more comments from all you good people out there

hollywoodrealty
08-28-2006, 10:04 AM
?

Pretty Toney
08-28-2006, 11:30 AM
i sent you a pm! wanna put this track on the 7th zoo babees album
go check it

hollywoodrealty
08-31-2006, 11:50 AM
yo i just checked your message and wrote back to you, yes id be honored to be on teh c.d., cant wait to listen to it, thanks for the opportunity, peace

Pretty Toney
08-31-2006, 11:53 AM
cool ^ post your picture in the other thread LOOKYS here in the adio lounge...
if you want your face in the screensaver too peace

hollywoodrealty
09-15-2006, 03:46 PM
give me some more feedback, anyone?