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JOHNNY_TICAL
07-08-2005, 07:36 PM
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b1ack fact10n
07-09-2005, 04:37 AM
i tink u should call in the hit of the bore. seriously,man i was bored before the end of ur 1st line. ur structure was....undescribable,it was as if i was readin singular words rather than lines or a verse so u need to put some slahes or stack em up,knahmsayin? I couldnt realli make out the rhyme scheme or the tempo so work harder!

6thPlanet
07-09-2005, 05:30 AM
Say what?

Rebel_INS
07-09-2005, 07:32 AM
Nice man

GuardianOne
07-11-2005, 01:55 AM
I would need to see more of your posts. Your style is a bit hard to grasp.
Keep posting though!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace