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08-18-2006, 06:00 PM
This is a peice I just got in to, writing, I love story telling, so here ya go, The One....

Unsheathing blades, the swift cuts to the throat
Crimson pools of red, the whiff of guts make me choke
Stay provoked, to journey in the ebony lights
Flaring down from the gates, making self esteem die
I see the sound one, quiet in the tounges of danger
The beef gets ground up, While he plunges all haters
From all races, those who oppose get thrown quickly
Souls get torn, his poems alone get foes dismissing
He knowledge great, though I step to him cautious
Of my mental state, the thick musk makes me nautious
Smog and smoke peirce my lungs, like some deadly venom
Distracted off point, perscision, so I think of many women
I draw nearer, feel the aura of the one with feelings numb
Like my whole body was medicated, or ripped seeping rum
Tounge loses speach, as I draw closer, nearer to "hell"
Open the door with ease, seeing a mirror and in it myself
Drop the icey steal, but my mind goes dumb instantly
Viciously crack the mirror, knowing the one was really me..


08-18-2006, 07:29 PM

Father N Dangerous
08-18-2006, 07:31 PM
shits tigth good read flowed nice and everything

08-18-2006, 07:32 PM
shits tigth good read flowed nice and everything