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Visionz
08-21-2006, 10:24 PM
Here we go. 100 bars any way the fuck you want. Respond w/ some real shit or permanently shut the fuck up.

The way I smoke blunts, cut'em up and spill guts
This mothafucka stunts, face to face I'd fuck em' up
Talk that shit nested in the comforts of your home
Get a mouthful of chrome for temptin the unknown
I'd fly twenty times zones to let it be shown
That the dome or yours can still be cracked
Murderous assassin while u in your chair relaxed
Turn around now bitch I'm right behind you
All the way from Texas just to axegrind you
They'll find you tommorrow in tiny little pieces.........(10)
While I got ya blackbook off to go murder your nieces
All because their Uncle was a living piece of feces
& For his punk ass talking those words so absurd
It's like you took nouns and turned 'em to verbs
Like "I'll asshole my shit in ya girls manhole"
I'm thinkin "damn dog, how many tabs you role?"
You seem a lil' outta control, you oughta shut that lip
You already running around like the Pulp Fiction Gimp
People take one glance and know ya styles bitch
With post more annoying than a poison ivy itch..............(20)
You try to provoke w/ gay jokes bout every time you spoke
You's just a masochistic fag who hopes to get beat w/ ropes
But you only got enough rope to choke your cornball self
Got that mentality that worth is determined by wealth
There's no stealth to your tatics, moving at a speed of geriatrics
Battlin you is like scoring a hattrick,
Cuz its 3-0, and done,
Carried out execution in front of everyone
And my shit is more than just hype
I got dendrytes and genotypes to pick the fruit just right..........(30)
My mind is a wick that lights and then ignites
And if aimed just right, its a cannon w/ windpipes
That'll snipe any and all aggravated asswipes
Who think they can just take swipes
Without bein' verbally apprehended,
Grabbed by the ankles & suspended
Over the edge of the Brooklyn Bridge & dropped
We can handle shit homie w/out callin the cops
Never no snitches, dead men ain't got shit to pop
Your faggot-ass was cursed when you were given hip-hop...........(40)
Its really a shame your mind was misdirected
Lackin the Common Sense to be Resurrected
You should stay on ya lower planes with the lame brains
You'd fuck up the game where we look down on airplanes
I can't be contained w/ childish rants and repetitive chants
I feast off that competition like dead elephants and ants
Your style is fresh like three year old sneaks
Everywhere you're postin up shit starts to stink
You's a one-trick pony on a real short track
Dissapointing quickly cuz u a bullshit act..................................(50)
You'll get bitchslapped till you spittin out teeth
I hear your talking pussy, who told you you could queef?
You forever beneath me like the earth's crust
You ain't no volcano sonny, you ain't about to bust
Damn pedophile still fuckin w/ that child's style,
Think you wyle buts that's life in denial
Lets see how far you make it after the trial
Locked up & dead at the bottom of the stair spiral
Ain't no guard see what happened
Everyone wants you dead when you suck at rappin....................(60)
I'm clappin on this bastard like a Baptist in church
Said he wanted to make move but his ass just lurched
Fuckin amateur rollin up in the spot like his game on lock
And all the fuck he can talk about is how he loves to suck cock
Really wants to believe that I'm biting my rhymes
Cuz he 'em likes so much he can't believe they're mine
And that's just fine if you wanna hate but keep your mouth shut
Cuz I'm the type that'll hire surgeons to get your lips tucked
And permantely stuck to the crack of your ass
So you can eternally be the kid gettin gassed..........................(70)
And as that relates, hell is a mindstate
Where u deviate from the rightous gait
And I can smell your soul burning
Yapping all the time when you should be learning
Like butter churning, its the cream that rises to the top
Thats why you drop like Samoan belly flops
You should just stop, before I you leave in critical conditions
With your orthodonist moonlighting as your new dietician
I'm on a mission to banish the world of you haters
Drive East on I-10 and feed you to them gators......................(80)
This is lyrical domination across all nations
Your descimation is what you're facin
You're right that I'm never complacent
Rather Adjacent to higher degrees
Scorching emcees not of my pedigree
Rather they freeze when they should squeeze
The fuckin trigger, but you're not Fedex and you don't deliver
Rather you quiver like you was thrown into an icy river
And sooner enough you writher from these razor slivers
As they slither into the center of your mental quiver..............(90)
And the den of your dull darts
First detonation followed by sprayed brains and body parts
You lack the heart to fuck's with the likes of me
You would've never graduated from my emcee academy
Rather left and tried to sue me for assault and battery
Your audacity to be mad at me!?!
You fucking poser get the fuck off the boards!
You stumpled upon the den where the champs stash hoards
And we can't afford to hang w/ no chumps on this block
Don't be surprised when the shotgun cocks...............................(100)






put up or shut ya punk bitch. You' aint earned no mothafuckin braggin rights!!!

oDoUoSoKo
08-21-2006, 10:30 PM
thats more like it

VernakuLa
08-21-2006, 10:36 PM
Eric man! shit is hot

Visionz
08-21-2006, 10:41 PM
haha^it's always there mayne. Not always on display but always there. lol peace Dusk

jallainINS
08-21-2006, 10:53 PM
damn eric. cant believe you spent so much time murderin this cat. you could have decapitated him in like 4 bars with his whack skills.

Visionz
08-21-2006, 11:03 PM
haha^true but when it turns into matters of respect I gotta get attem' homie. Feel like they fuckin up this whole site nawmean.

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 05:40 AM
you called on tha dragon
now torturous lyrics are bound to happen
in this world im the fuckin captin
leavin u hangin off a cliff in a treacherous contraption
you thought you were in a position to be braggin?
now your bloody remains i be bagging
you thought battlin me wouldnt be a tragedy?
well now that your dead people be sayin "that was a catastrophe"
but dont worry no one feels calamity
people enjoy the site of your remains spread out so straggly(10)
it was just a part of my strategy
that i easily accomplished effectively
no one from texas could ever bring tha ruckus
its just a breedin ground for the worthless
i mean man just look at george w. bush
yall coyboys are the epitome of weakmindedness
everyone but your state understands my synopsis
go back to the ranch is your doctors prognosis
you beatin me is like sayin niggas are no longer free
or like tryin to out run a heard of angry killa bees(20)
or like tryin to run a marathon with your legs chopped off at the knees
or like steppin to a yakuza sayin give me all your gs
or like steppin to iron mike tellin him "youre a wannabe"
or like trying to sell red and meth and bag of fuckin seeds
Im like Alexander the great comin to smash in your door
pin you on the floor while you watch me kill everything you adore
you tried to send your chairots but that ended in gore
i trampled your people just cause the fact i was bored
you tried to battle me after i went on a world dominating tour
so i surounded you from the outside and smashed your armies core(30)
i come with shit 1,000,000,000 times sharper than a katana
blaze you harder than Jamaican marijuana
eat u up quicker that a hungry pack of piranas
school you faster than Afrika Bombata
im iller than 10,000 dollars suits made by prada
my rhymes are as nice as the ass on jessica alba
so stop thinkin you can step to this bloody minded tyrant
im a lyrical giant spittin mad science
that you cant fuck with, your a spectator while im rollin the dices
your more out dated than a hand opperated egg beater appliance(40)
at any ill party your given denyance
like hot sweaty sticky balls your a fuckin annoyance
i left you and your groupies massacred
people be sayin "this cutthroat murderess butcher left them fools slaughtered"
and "look hes enjoying it, he not even bothered"
"he killed em cause they copied the mad ill styles he fathered"
"hes so fuckin ill i want him to have my daughter"
"fuck battlin him? FUCK NO I woudnt bother"
"is he really god? is what i wonder"
left you incapacitated with a roar like thunder(50)

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 05:54 AM
you called on tha dragon
now torturous lyrics are bound to happen
in this world im the fuckin captin
leavin u hangin off a cliff in a treacherous contraption
you thought you were in a position to be braggin?
now your bloody remains i be bagging
you thought battlin me wouldnt be a tragedy?
well now that your dead people be sayin "that was a catastrophe"
but dont worry no one feels calamity
people enjoy the site of your remains spread out so straggly(10)
it was just a part of my strategy
that i easily accomplished effectively
no one from texas could ever bring tha ruckus
its just a breedin ground for the worthless
i mean man just look at george w. bush
yall coyboys are the epitome of weakmindedness
everyone but your state understands my synopsis
go back to the ranch is your doctors prognosis
you beatin me is like sayin niggas are no longer free
or like tryin to out run a heard of angry killa bees(20)
or like tryin to run a marathon with your legs chopped off at the knees
or like steppin to a yakuza sayin give me all your gees
or like steppin to iron mike tellin him "youre a wannabe"
or like trying to sell red and meth and bag of fuckin seeds
Im like Alexander the great comin to smash in your door
pin you on the floor while you watch me kill everything you adore
you tried to send your chairots but that ended in gore
i trampled your people just cause the fact i was bored
you tried to battle me after i went on a world dominating tour
so i surounded you from the outside and smashed your armies core(30)
i come with shit 1,000,000,000 times sharper than a katana
blaze you harder than Jamaican marijuana
eat u up quicker that a hungry pack of piranas
school you faster than Afrika Bombata
im iller than 10,000 dollars suits made by prada
my rhymes are as nice as the ass on jessica alba
so stop thinkin you can step to this bloody minded tyrant
im a lyrical giant spittin mad science
that you cant fuck with, your a spectator while im rollin the dices
your more out dated than a hand opperated egg beater appliance(40)
at any ill party your given denyance
like hot sweaty sticky balls your a fuckin annoyance
i left you and your groupies massacred
people be sayin "this cutthroat murderess butcher left them fools slaughtered"
and "look hes enjoying it, he not even bothered"
"he killed em cause they copied the mad ill styles he fathered"
"hes so fuckin ill i want him to have my daughter"
"fuck battlin him? FUCK NO I woudnt bother"
"is he really god? is what i wonder"
left you incapacitated with a roar like thunder(50)

Longbongcilvaringz
08-22-2006, 07:41 AM
that was horrible...

CHRONZ
08-22-2006, 08:33 AM
hahahaha

oDoUoSoKo
08-22-2006, 09:20 AM
shitx2

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 09:52 AM
look around at diffent treads you 3-4 fucks just follow eachother around supportin one other talkin shit when someone real points u out. sorry you dont know anything about correct formats of ryhmes and your biggest vocab word wasnt any higher than a 6th grade level. your a fuckin bitch and so is your famila posse who also eats dicks tryin to back your wackness so they dont lose thier only friends. forum friends. yall check the talk about why people got famila on forums...thread its about u fools get a life wack ryhmes spitter!:(W

Fuck
08-22-2006, 09:55 AM
Lol How Do U Post The Same Exact Thing On Two Different Threads?

Ur Fukin Lifeless

jallainINS
08-22-2006, 12:02 PM
aright well im gonna give it to you for real and not just say you suck.

for one of your first battles which i think this was one of your first, anyways it wasnt half bad. there was a little repetition and some of the "punches" were kinda immature. but there were a couple lines i actually liked. you could really step up your game with rhyme schemes. and you didn't have any wordplay really so if you could add that it would really elevate ya game.

what i would suggest is multies and schemes. like instead of ending the lines which pirhana, katana, prada, bombata or whatever, why not throw in another word in front of those like....

ill slice you up like the sharp end of a katana
then eat you up like u a carp and im a pirhana

it can really make it better to add multies like that. and in some lines if you can add rhyme schemes in the beginning and end of the line it all flows much better.

yo just tryin to help so it doesnt look like wu corp is all about bashin people, even tho you kind of deserved it for the way you came in here. much love tho keep writing.

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 01:02 PM
aright well im gonna give it to you for real and not just say you suck.

for one of your first battles which i think this was one of your first, anyways it wasnt half bad. there was a little repetition and some of the "punches" were kinda immature. but there were a couple lines i actually liked. you could really step up your game with rhyme schemes. and you didn't have any wordplay really so if you could add that it would really elevate ya game.

what i would suggest is multies and schemes. like instead of ending the lines which pirhana, katana, prada, bombata or whatever, why not throw in another word in front of those like....

ill slice you up like the sharp end of a katana
then eat you up like u a carp and im a pirhana

it can really make it better to add multies like that. and in some lines if you can add rhyme schemes in the beginning and end of the line it all flows much better.

yo just tryin to help so it doesnt look like wu corp is all about bashin people, even tho you kind of deserved it for the way you came in here. much love tho keep writing.

the reason i came in here dissinis mad fools and talked shit is they said bullshit first with wack shit and meaningless opinions!

Visionz
08-22-2006, 01:04 PM
really? like how you made that post claimin I was bitin outta nowhere?

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 01:28 PM
really? like how you made that post claimin I was bitin outta nowhere?

check the stats i wasnt the only one ex:you sound like df doom biter!

Visionz
08-22-2006, 01:34 PM
so now your actions are justified from what someone else said? And btw that quote you talking about was referring to Dusk.

mashqauck
08-22-2006, 02:33 PM
look around at diffent treads you 3-4 fucks just follow eachother around supportin one other talkin shit when someone real points u out. sorry you dont know anything about correct formats of ryhmes and your biggest vocab word wasnt any higher than a 6th grade level. your a fuckin bitch and so is your famila posse who also eats dicks tryin to back your wackness so they dont lose thier only friends. forum friends. yall check the talk about why people got famila on forums...thread its about u fools get a life wack ryhmes spitter!:(W

the reason i came in here dissinis mad fools and talked shit is they said bullshit first with wack shit and meaningless opinions!


YOU ARE WEAK AS FUCK! dude seriously you got murdered. I'm not dick riding eric either. you just sucked ass. I wrote shit just like yours when I first joined this forum and everyone said it sucked but I actually took that in instead of denying it and going off to suck another fucking cock. you are a dickless bastard and you need to learn stuff before you speak on others :loser:

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 03:02 PM
like i said before what you know your only 14 the most experience you had is a wet dream! check this guy out on the poll sex head or gay he admitily voted for gay sayin thats what hes had. your the true fag!

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 03:05 PM
so now your actions are justified from what someone else said? And btw that quote you talking about was referring to Dusk.

just admitit that fact that u bite son it doesnt matter cause what u bit was wack anyways. dont lie sayin u got skills or dusk bit

Visionz
08-22-2006, 03:27 PM
Never said that Dusk bit, only that Nak said he sounded like Doom which isn't the same thing as biting, I thought he was given 'em props when he said it. ..btw WHAT did happen to the other 50 bars?

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 03:35 PM
read the titles

Visionz
08-22-2006, 03:37 PM
but you lost so you needed more than 50. Humble yourself. God don't like Ugly.

INF
08-22-2006, 05:24 PM
check the stats i wasnt the only one ex:you sound like df doom biter!


Who the fuck is DF Doom? I hearda MF but I aint hearda DF.:no:


I feel that this kid got shut up and pwned yesterday but what the fuck is he still doing here after what Eric did. That shit was ill E. 100 bars! I was just fuckin with him back and forth tryin to get him to shut up. I didnt even waste a full 16 on him, I dont think.

Visionz
08-22-2006, 05:31 PM
its funny though cuz instead of humblin himself and realizing his flaws, he instead talks mad shit so just he can get schooled by all of WTC. Dude has got to be a secondary account.

jallainINS
08-22-2006, 09:04 PM
wanna know a way to shut him up? ignore him. just dont respond to any of his future posts and he'll get tired of messin with us. for real.

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-22-2006, 11:20 PM
a better way to shut him up is to vote against him in any battle he gets into...lol...Imagine how annoyed this squirt'll get...

wanna know a way to shut him up? ignore him. just dont respond to any of his future posts and he'll get tired of messin with us. for real.

yall dont got any talents. just stick together and try to talk shit to anyone better than you! if it was so bad break it down line for line and tell me why!

jallainINS
08-22-2006, 11:23 PM
a better way to shut him up is to vote against him in any battle he gets into...lol...Imagine how annoyed this squirt'll get...


that would be regular voting anyways cuz its not like hes going to win a battle, ever.

VernakuLa
08-22-2006, 11:38 PM
this battle was horrible, Eric murked him though lol, naw, on the real, it was close, because Smoke tried to come at ou with your own shit E, and he had a couple of good lines, but nothing that stuck out. Eric just had you in the name play department, Unseen has maaaaaaaaaaaad potential to rip it up with lyrical skill

anyways

v-unseen

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-23-2006, 12:05 AM
just the same circle jerk crew talk nothings! where are the real fans, guess they dont come here just like the wu members cause dick licking faggots talk meaniongless nothings!

SMOKE BLUNTS
08-23-2006, 12:30 AM
in the depths of erics ass is where your found bitch!

INF
08-23-2006, 09:40 PM
On the real though, Ghost did use the hystarectamy line in Fishscale.

Visionz
08-24-2006, 08:45 AM
^Coincendence, I just say whatever comes to mind mayne, that shit is never intentional.

INF
08-24-2006, 06:54 PM
^Coincendence, I just say whatever comes to mind mayne, that shit is never intentional.


I know E. Many others used it before Ghost. I was just sayin. I've caught it myself. Somebody pointed out some lyrics that matched and were just common usage of the words but they was by an MC that I dont even listen to which was weird. I can see if you hear things alot then maybe you are bound to be in that mind frame at one time or another and repeat some shit. Then there are just common phrases as I said.

Peace.

SMOKE BLUNTS
09-11-2006, 02:11 PM
On the real though, Ghost did use the hystarectamy line in Fishscale.

^Coincendence, I just say whatever comes to mind mayne, that shit is never intentional.

even you own circle jerk crew told you youve been a biter. fucking your a fucking dick rider.

Da Dishonourable Don
09-12-2006, 07:48 AM
ever since I came with the hundred bars, the site became iller, yo Unseen you ripped homie over here most def, I just don't git how this dude feels himself that hard [literally, you jerkoff], this dude needs to play the humble and accept that he got ate 'cause 50 bars ain't doin' it, 100 is the bar, Eric raised it so you should be able to live upto it KID!

I'm a take it to 1000 one of these days, my fuckin' word!

SMOKE BLUNTS
09-12-2006, 10:16 PM
you could try and spit 1000 but every word that comes outta your mouth is wack. your like a guy that doesnt stop talking and showing me everything you own high on meth and crack. come back to earth and realize once a crackhead always a crackhead! theres no hope for you so just crawl under a brige and die.:fucku:

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
12-29-2006, 12:20 AM
Eric... SMOKE BLUNTS doesn't have the privledge to be ranked... VOID BATTLE