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08-30-2006, 06:58 AM
please give comments so I can improve myself.
http://www.soundclick.com/jajaphatmark (wrong judgement)
08-30-2006, 07:34 AM
lyrics gotta improve first . rest will follow....
08-30-2006, 07:52 AM
Not bad imo.. Is dat an immortal technique beat?? quality sounds straight to me... keep it up yo
08-31-2006, 06:21 AM
thnx, yes it's a beat of imortal technique :).
and euhm Pretty Toney, can you explain what you mean with my lyrics that have to improve.
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