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snakeyd
08-30-2006, 05:58 AM
please give comments so I can improve myself.
http://www.soundclick.com/jajaphatmark (wrong judgement)

peace,

JAJA
Pretty Toney
08-30-2006, 06:34 AM
lyrics gotta improve first . rest will follow....
Complex
08-30-2006, 06:52 AM
Not bad imo.. Is dat an immortal technique beat?? quality sounds straight to me... keep it up yo

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snakeyd
08-31-2006, 05:21 AM
thnx, yes it's a beat of imortal technique :).
and euhm Pretty Toney, can you explain what you mean with my lyrics that have to improve.

peace,

JAJA