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Mak Nikova
09-07-2006, 08:17 AM
did a text battle and its been a minute....wanna see what folks think bout tha verses i got up.

FIRST!!!
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AT YOUNG KANNON

WHILE U COME WITH ANOTHER RAP COMMERCIAL HIT, I SNATCH U FROM THAT REALITY WITH MY DEADLY INFERNO FIST,

PUNCH U TIL UR MIST, U MUST BE HORNY OR SHIT,
CUZ THA ONLY NERVE U WORKIN IS THA CLIT ON UR LIPS

I SHIT TERDS WIT MORE FUNK THAN THA WORDS U DISPERSE
SO YOUR CONTRACT AND BONUS SHOULD JUS COME WITHA HEARSE

HOW U GOIN COMMERCIAL UNDER DIRT? U SUCKA MC,
YA LABELS JUST KICKED SOME GAS UP UR SKIRT

GETTIN OFF THA BALL NOW NIGGA U JUS FUMBLED
SO HIT THA SACK LIKE A RECIEVER OR GET CRUMBLED

A FANTASY IS THA ONLY TIME HE GOT BRAIN
THIS DUDE'LL PROBABLY SWURVE IN THA RANGE IF HE SAW RAIN.

THE ONLY THING BURNIN YA LIPS IS YA TONGUE TO MY FIST
U A DEATHREMENTAL OF THA MENTAL CUZ U THINK LIKE A bi**

U A HIPACRIT TO SAY IF U HERE TO HURT THA VICKS
CUZ MY KIDNEYS EVEN HIT HARDER SHIT SO QUIT

SO HOOD WRITE THIS TO UR NEXT ARTICLE TO HAND IN
SO JUS STAY CONSERVED CUZ YA GIRL TOLD ME U A "young kannon"

THA ONLY FANS U GOT COLLECT DUST, AND SPIN
COOLIN OFF TAPES THAT WRITTEN BY SIN

Mak Nikova
09-07-2006, 08:18 AM
at kannon....
U A FANATIC FOR MATICS WHEN U COULDNT BUILD ENOUGH STATIC
TO PULL BACK AND UNHATCH IT U A bi** AND THERE U HAVE IT

MAD CUZ I STUFFED UR KANNON AND U CAME BACK WIT THAT TRASH
SO THA ONLY THING U COULD MANAGE TO GET OUT OF IT WAS WHAT U FEEDIN YO ASS...STRAIGHT GAS

CRUSH A CUNT, U COULDN'T HIT A BLUNT MY SEMI "S" WILL END UR PM LIKE ITS THA OF MONTH CUTTIN LIFE STRINGS SO I HOPE U STUNT

I SPIT PLAGUES AS I WRITE UR WILL, EVEN U SAID I WAS ILL
SO FEEL MY VIRUS SPILL WHILE U SIT STILL WIT YA FACE ON THA SPEAKER GRILL

IF U REALLY HAD TWIN TECS ON UR INDEX, EVEN IF U HAD A VEST VEST
U WOULDA CAUGHT A SUPLEX CUZ U STALLED LIKE A SYNTEX TEXT

I'MMA NEEDA MOP, MASH OUT ON THIS FLOP, HE AINT DROP
COULDN'T RIDE A BEAT CUZ HE STILL ON THA KOC

I NEED NO THEORY U FEAR ME IN UR DREAMS HEAR ME
LEAVE VISIONS BLURRY LACIN KICKS WHERE UR EAR BE

ArcherPriest
09-07-2006, 12:29 PM
wasn't bad... but aint holdin' that much weight either