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NiceLady
09-10-2006, 09:37 AM
Internal Thoughts.......
My heart bleeds cause no one sees my needs. I cry as thoughts of you pass me by. My mind races are these my cases? Body trembles cries run freely. Drip,Drip the blood runs down. Mixed with tears brain full of fears. Darkness fills my eyes people look at me with sighs don't give me none of your lies. Days seem few you don't even have a clue. Internally dead these thoughts in my head.

Bigot Hitman
09-10-2006, 11:04 AM
weak

Battle 1
09-10-2006, 11:30 AM
No, not really weak especially if you a girl or lady like your name says NiceLady. Even the hardest male rapper will have a sympathetic soft song or joint on their album. Some people just don't ever get that rappers are real people like anybody else with feelings and all. Nobody is 100% hardcore 24/7 or all of the time. Everybody needs love too. No one can live without it. Hate and anger all the time just aint no way of living. Gotta laugh, enjoy life, or have fun too.

Battle 1
09-10-2006, 11:40 AM
See Below

Battle 1
09-10-2006, 11:43 AM
^^
If anything about that above verse from LadyNice it do sound a bit depressing if anything to be honest. But that's real cause life it aint always sunney or happy neither. You got alot of emotions in life. A real rapper can touch on all subjects or deal with all emotions like Pac did for example. Pac didn't only make songs about how hard he was but also alot of other songs as well. Basically you always gotta come from the heart with it that's the true meaning of keeping it real.

Bigot Hitman
09-10-2006, 12:17 PM
just weak lyrics, i didn't say anything about the concept.

Battle 1
09-10-2006, 01:14 PM
A yo check it I'm a get sentimental and drop some sh*t from the heart too.

A yo,
No girl could ever tear my heart apart or so I thought
One pointed the dart right from the start
With her cherry tart said where's my car so I can park
This feline cat pawed at me like a tree bark
First time it was like a crime
Layed eyes on her sublime heavenly shine
Had it going on like the sweetest rhyme
Wanted to take her to dine and pour some wine
No secret admirer set here on fire like Tony and Elvira
scarface movie empire
Electricity between us like wire
For her I could never grow tire
No not obscene she was like a dream
Had me going crazy for the cream
Damn near made me wanna scream
Do anything or everything
Gave her my ring
Though her soul to me more precious than any bling
Sweet songs to me her body would sing
The joy and pain she could bring
I used to think about her almost every blink
Can't let my heart sink
She gave me a wink
Connected to my heart forever like a chain link
I loved her more than life is what I think
Doesn't that maybe stink
I surely felt her sting
My existance to an end she almost did bring



:'(

J.T.S.
09-13-2006, 07:05 PM
This is my ex-girlfriend talking about me!