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PsYkOsUs
09-16-2006, 11:02 PM
\\\::... DESPOTISM ...::///

these stories of wrath started and departed with treason
choreographed carnage in the garden of eden
force-fed religion, envision the despotism
more dead, enlistin’ in missions, or sent to prison
you punished ‘em, only their error is heritage
the government’s, only america’s terrorist
guns spillin’ blood on begotten, porous hands
sons fill the mud in forgotten, foreign lands
pity, they gave arms and sent them coffins
cities are graveyards of dead-men walkin’
sensible reverends who worship impaired vigils
chemical weapons and surface-to-air missiles
legislation, preservation, and fraud
levitation, revelations and god
lesser nation’s education dissolves
hesitation, separate and evolve
malice aided: evaluated your evolution
calculated, it calibrated the destitution
validated, if salivated your execution
allocated, my style had fated the revolution
revolutionaries, freedom forever
‘cause your resolution carried needless endeavors (tell me..)
what’s the truth and what the fuck is it worth
hundred troops, a hundred numbers at birth
whose vendetta’s worse, and who’s the concessioners
soon, barettas burst to loosen expenditures
you were never the only nation with contraband
your impressive association no longer stands
the excessive exfoliation of promised lands
as regressive as holy nations of honor damned
ailin’ peasants are slowly facin' the stronger hands
hail aggressive negotiations to conquer man

deep sleep, it’s here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression

the omen has risen, son, know your position
i’m the soulless foe that rewrote most of religion
you’re a hopeless soldier with scolded, broken ambition
hopin’ and wishin’, that this whole coalition
of boa-constriction won’t even go with the mission (it will..)
snakes and eagles with heavy tanks in cathedrals
face it’s evil, it’s then we face ’em as equals
cats are harmless to fascists, soulless and heartless
that’s a carcass who stabbed his ghost in the darkness
though half-heartedly, pacifists slashed arteries
we crashed monarchies, activists smashed armories
nothin’ reached? it’s combat to the death
we’ll flood the streets with bombs strapped to our chests
human sacrifice and the towers ‘ll disappear
zoom in satellites on these cowards who live in fear
afraid of politics, a new age of apocalypse
grave acropolis, troops raided the populace
(how swiftly) haliburton’s dreams come true in their lies
as sixty-caliber machine-guns ruin the skies
tracers above, run, duck, and brace for the scuds
face in the mud, blood fuckin’ wasted for slugs
flames burned best of kings and snatched off crowns
blast off rounds, you’ll never last off ground
caged bird spreads it’s wings, it’s black hawk down
where broken fists who vote to co-exist
open wrists to cope with hoplessness
spellbound, he gave his soul to a hell hound
bells sound from vacant homes in a shelled town
masses yield, passively with massive shields
that revealed, rapidly, we’re clappin’ steel
have ‘em kneel, apathy was mass appeal
half the field, tragically but that shit’s real

deep sleep, it’s here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression

deep sleep, it’s here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression

live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...
live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...
live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...
live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...


Copyright © 2006 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist

PsYkOsUs
09-16-2006, 11:06 PM
First track off the "War Machine EP", beats produced by spoken... audio will be up in a few days...

VernakuLa
09-16-2006, 11:12 PM
spoken told me the war machine ep would be cinematic, is this rapping or spoken word because you seem to some complex rhyme schemes in there

PsYkOsUs
09-16-2006, 11:21 PM
This is rap... the whole "War Machine EP" is rap... though i may throw in one spoken word track for an interlude...

PEACE

PSY

VernakuLa
09-16-2006, 11:31 PM
This is rap... the whole "War Machine EP" is rap... though i may throw in one spoken word track for an interlude...

PEACE

PSY

well i would think cuz spokens on it

PsYkOsUs
09-16-2006, 11:44 PM
LOL.. glad we had this talk.. stay in school, and remember to do your homework...

PEACE

PSY

noel411
09-18-2006, 06:27 AM
Solid as always. Still not into the content much at all, but probably your best political sort of song imo. I'd really like to see you write some different stuff, because you're so well structured, without using rhyme schemes cheaply, but I just find the content of most your stuff boring. I know that's just what you do though, which is cool. I really enjoyed the variation of rhyme schemes in this one.

This will come off nice in audio I think. Much more suited to recording than the old style you were on for a while. I'd like to hear a more up tempo beat and flow than the last rap I heard you do, but I imagine you'll probably keep it pretty slow for clarity. In any case, I'll be interested to check it out out when you post it up.

Good to see a new written from you.

Liquid Lines
09-18-2006, 09:16 AM
U are quality, god damn I hope to beable to write like u one day.
check mine out if u can see what u think, leave some contructive criticism,

Master P
09-18-2006, 10:42 AM
u gotta put more gangsta shit into ya shit so them killas gonna feel ya boy, if ya do that i got one of these no limit chains waitin for ya and that aint no joke

Liquid Lines
09-19-2006, 12:30 PM
umm why would master p have a picture of himself in his sig?

J.T.S.
09-19-2006, 02:35 PM
sickness felt this all the way through!

PsYkOsUs
09-19-2006, 07:09 PM
umm why would master p have a picture of himself in his sig?

easy dude... he's gonna sign me.. LOL

but for real, at the risk, of soundin' redundant: i appreciate the feedback from those who appreciate what i do... the song will be up soon.. i'm not gonna record this one at home, i'ma spend the money on studio time for this one...

PEACE

PSY

mashqauck
09-19-2006, 07:11 PM
ILL audio!

martyr
09-21-2006, 08:31 PM
shit my login still works... we used to run this site hahaha this shit is still running... i remember you used to diss all those cats and i would say some shit like "its okay just work on the words you use" that shit was great...

VernakuLa
09-21-2006, 08:32 PM
shit my login still works... we used to run this site hahaha this shit is still running...

was good martyr, you were lighting those wack herbs up

Lil' Ruger
09-21-2006, 08:35 PM
\\\::... DESPOTISM ...::///

these stories of wrath started and departed with treason
choreographed carnage in the garden of eden
force-fed religion, envision the despotism
more dead, enlistin’ in missions, or sent to prison
you punished ‘em, only their error is heritage
the government’s, only america’s terrorist
guns spillin’ blood on begotten, porous hands
sons fill the mud in forgotten, foreign lands
pity, they gave arms and sent them coffins
cities are graveyards of dead-men walkin’
sensible reverends who worship impaired vigils
chemical weapons and surface-to-air missiles
legislation, preservation, and fraud
levitation, revelations and god
lesser nation’s education dissolves
hesitation, separate and evolve
malice aided: evaluated your evolution
calculated, it calibrated the destitution
validated, if salivated your execution
allocated, my style had fated the revolution
revolutionaries, freedom forever
‘cause your resolution carried needless endeavors (tell me..)
what’s the truth and what the fuck is it worth
hundred troops, a hundred numbers at birth
whose vendetta’s worse, and who’s the concessioners
soon, barettas burst to loosen expenditures
you were never the only nation with contraband
your impressive association no longer stands
the excessive exfoliation of promised lands
as regressive as holy nations of honor damned
ailin’ peasants are slowly facin' the stronger hands
hail aggressive negotiations to conquer man

deep sleep, it’s here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression

the omen has risen, son, know your position
i’m the soulless foe that rewrote most of religion
you’re a hopeless soldier with scolded, broken ambition
hopin’ and wishin’, that this whole coalition
of boa-constriction won’t even go with the mission (it will..)
snakes and eagles with heavy tanks in cathedrals
face it’s evil, it’s then we face ’em as equals
cats are harmless to fascists, soulless and heartless
that’s a carcass who stabbed his ghost in the darkness
though half-heartedly, pacifists slashed arteries
we crashed monarchies, activists smashed armories
nothin’ reached? it’s combat to the death
we’ll flood the streets with bombs strapped to our chests
human sacrifice and the towers ‘ll disappear
zoom in satellites on these cowards who live in fear
afraid of politics, a new age of apocalypse
grave acropolis, troops raided the populace
(how swiftly) haliburton’s dreams come true in their lies
as sixty-caliber machine-guns ruin the skies
tracers above, run, duck, and brace for the scuds
face in the mud, blood fuckin’ wasted for slugs
flames burned best of kings and snatched off crowns
blast off rounds, you’ll never last off ground
caged bird spreads it’s wings, it’s black hawk down
where broken fists who vote to co-exist
open wrists to cope with hoplessness
spellbound, he gave his soul to a hell hound
bells sound from vacant homes in a shelled town
masses yield, passively with massive shields
that revealed, rapidly, we’re clappin’ steel
have ‘em kneel, apathy was mass appeal
half the field, tragically but that shit’s real

deep sleep, it’s here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression

deep sleep, it’s here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression

live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...
live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...
live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...
live for it... strive for it...
bleed for it... die for it...


Copyright © 2006 Psykosus, The Soulless Survivalist


ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

martyr
09-21-2006, 08:53 PM
was good martyr, you were lighting those wack herbs up


hmmm?

VernakuLa
09-21-2006, 08:54 PM
hmmm?

i remember you used to make disses about faggots on this site, then u got hated on and left

so WHAS GOOD?

martyr
09-21-2006, 08:59 PM
oh yes, this annoyed me to no end... i gave cats all kinds of constructive criticism repetitively and people still thought of themselves as ill and they weren't so one day i got mad... i used to battle rap for fun, really not a battler, and cats with their teams and reused punchlines would win cause of dick-rider votes and that pissed me off... yea, i remember that, so what's good? i dunno shit... broke as fuck... still writing, still dropping crazy beats... talking to some girl i'm fucking crazy about cause she's amazing... drink heineken or wild turkey with canada dry ginger ale, working and going to school...

Nexodus the Nth Entity
09-21-2006, 09:25 PM
"these stories of wrath started and departed with treason
choreographed carnage in the garden of eden
force-fed religion, envision the despotism
more dead, enlistin' in missions, or sent to prison
you punished '˜em, only their error is heritage
the government's, only america's terrorist
guns spillin' blood on begotten, porous hands
sons fill the mud in forgotten, foreign lands"

"you were never the only nation with contraband
your impressive association no longer stands
the excessive exfoliation of promised lands
as digressive as holy nations of honor damned
ailin' peasants are slowly facin' the stronger hands
hail aggressive negotiations to conquer man"

- serious excerpts right there, always shine with the political commentary, no question


"deep sleep, it's here we drowned in incompetence
keep peace, but fear surrounding acropolis
steep peaks, from here the mountains look ominous
grounded in politics, we found an apocalypse
watchful governments writhe in depression
toppled covenants, lies, and deception
hostile punishments, bribes, and obsession
timeless reflection, time to rise from oppression"

- hook is solid, could even insert that in a verse....haha, nice work still, never been the best hook writer....


"the omen has risen, son, know your position
i'm the soulless foe that rewrote most of religion"

- haha, one of those classic Psy one-two bar openers

"cats are harmless to fascists, soulless and heartless
that's a carcass who stabbed his ghost in the darkness
though half-heartedly, pacifists slashed arteries
we crashed monarchies, activists smashed armories"

- like this bit, the ghost in the darkness line especially, good shit bud

(how swiftly) "haliburton's dreams come true in their lies
as sixty-caliber machine-guns ruin the skies
tracers above, run, duck, and brace for the scuds
face in the mud, blood fuckin' wasted in tons"

"spellbound, he gave his soul to a hell hound
bells sound from vacant homes in a shelled town
masses yield, passively with massive shields
that revealed, rapidly, we're clappin' steel
have 'em kneel, apathy was mass appeal
half the field, tragically but that shit's real"

- beautifully concluded there Psy, impressive display of "how to fuckin' rhyme".....rather that's how you craft 'multi's'....and you're coming strong with the long ass verses too, as per usual....haha
i'll be waiting patiently for the audio, should get my ass in the studio too on some solo ish, we should bang out a collab real soon

on that note, be easy
keep scripting

piece

Dae Ja Nae
09-22-2006, 10:48 AM
I won't even bother highlighting anything because the entire piece is a very solid read from start to finish. Anytime you can cover a person with goose bumps on the strength of your words alone then you've done the damn thing!!! You know I'm definitely feeling the content because, as always, you stay on some real shit. For me, the topic never gets old because it is what it is.

Greatness goes without saying, because you ARE the SHYT, for real.

Definitely worth the read ... as always,
Peace

Sicka than aidZ
09-23-2006, 04:33 AM
u gotta put more gangsta shit into ya shit so them killas gonna feel ya boy, if ya do that i got one of these no limit chains waitin for ya and that aint no joke


Bwaahahahahaa^masterP, hey psykosus what u wrote is sick

BlaK FuRYaN
09-24-2006, 02:18 PM
psy this is good work....I hope this ep you working moves minds and hearts alike...
I didn't that you n spokes would be working together due to pass clashes....but i guess talented minds must connect one way or another....

Give me a shout when its complete....

peace

ElusiveFugitive
09-24-2006, 06:36 PM
I won't even bother highlighting anything because the entire piece is a very solid read from start to finish. Anytime you can cover a person with goose bumps on the strength of your words alone then you've done the damn thing!!! You know I'm definitely feeling the content because, as always, you stay on some real shit. For me, the topic never gets old because it is what it is.

Greatness goes without saying, because you ARE the SHYT, for real.

Definitely worth the read ... as always,
Peace

^ ^ Co-sign, great work Psy...I dig how you can take a topic and flip it effortlessly across multiple pieces and make it fresh each time like facets of a diamond. Technically one of the best I've seen from you. Cant wait to peep the audio. Peace ehoa...Elusive

ElusiveFugitive
09-24-2006, 07:27 PM
oh yes, this annoyed me to no end... i gave cats all kinds of constructive criticism repetitively and people still thought of themselves as ill and they weren't so one day i got mad... i used to battle rap for fun, really not a battler, and cats with their teams and reused punchlines would win cause of dick-rider votes and that pissed me off... yea, i remember that, so what's good? i dunno shit... broke as fuck... still writing, still dropping crazy beats... talking to some girl i'm fucking crazy about cause she's amazing... drink heineken or wild turkey with canada dry ginger ale, working and going to school...

What up Martyr, its been a minute! Good to see you up in here. I peeped a verse of yours on CC a while back, you've def been keeping your blade sharp...Hope lifes treating you well my friend. Peace

PsYkOsUs
09-27-2006, 08:17 PM
PEACE... i appreciate the responses.. i'll actually have a different song up sooner than this one, but this one is comin'... i got a collabo track comin' out first... we're hittin' the studio tonight, so sometime this week...

PEACE

PSY

oDoUoSoKo
09-27-2006, 09:18 PM
yo who draws all those duck down covers man,,,,dope