View Full Version : who talkin out loud?

09-21-2006, 09:28 AM
who be da masta,when i drop my shit laudible
all u wankstas r stupid,u're so horrible
i could care about real shit.thats plausible
but when try 2 play god,then u're incorigidle
we need room for real men so dont take up space
we got room at the back so go find ur place
u exist on borrowed time so dont mess up ur grace
too much noise from ur mouth then i mess up ur face
why there got 2 be bad eggs among the good
why there got 2 be snitches up in the hood
we aint lookin for ur type son,u're the shook ones
a faggot ass bitch,they say u took turns
in doin ur mens,so we dont need u here
u be better in the woods with wolves n deers
when u see the souljah's logo in sky my son
u should go hide ur face cos i kill ur fun

11-13-2006, 08:59 AM
rep lyk a god when i step into d streets
i aint got no concerns cos u all is shit
am a man of my own dont waste no time
cos am hungry for meals plus i need to shyne

11-13-2006, 12:58 PM
You must have taken Pepto cuz you just forced out that piece of shit,
I suggest you cease and split and send me someone with decent wit.
I’m releasing this to prove that this guy can’t text,
Cuz his rhyme scheme was amateur like webcam sex.
Your style is prehistoric so you can say it belongs with apes,
And it doesn’t look like grammar is one of your stronger traits.
I hope I got this straight, I hope everyone here gets it,
This guy “reps lyk a god” but spells like a dyslexic.
Cue this guy’s exit cuz he just gripped his last mic,
Cuz the only way he’ll “shyne” is by gripping a flashlight.

11-13-2006, 01:36 PM
HAHAHHAHAHAHHA YESSS hold it down for the nieghbours up north

Edgar Erebus
11-13-2006, 03:30 PM
Step down kids, y'all off the point, unreal shit
No one saw ya no one heard ya, but now ya wanna spit,
Makin' beef threads sendin disses no one gon read,
And only I wasted my time readin yo fuckeed up things
You souljah, fuckin' newcomer - betta get outta here
You fuckin' WuCorp 50 Cent, no one reps yo whorin' beefs
And as for undissputed, you now crossed the line,
You look your brother's eye for sawdust with a plank in own eye?
You both wackest shit that ever dared to touch the keyboard
So again kids step out, before someone wrecks you both

11-13-2006, 06:26 PM
Dam, undisuputed ripped u up son, that was murder in 5 bars. rediculous

11-13-2006, 06:43 PM
check it homey i break all kinds a bones and legs/
puttin holes in heads cuz i done thrown stones for bread/
u culdnt spit a half decent verse even usin ur thesaurus/
no one says "incorigidle", nigga u a "clitoris"/
got u lookin like swiss cheese, callin u pourus/
when i spit hollow head darts got u coughin up bullshit like a taurus/
takes no skill to take out this unskilled so called lyricist/
so kill me for taken time to break em down rigurous/
wanna use big words, this battle to me is real frivelous/
only nigga that gonna give u a chance at rappin is st. nicholas/

had to drop 1 also, get at me

11-14-2006, 12:14 AM
thanks for the props adedwutang...I'm liking your verse too man, that last bar was MONEY

for anyone wanting to battle I'm still looking for someone!

Lil' Ruger
11-14-2006, 01:22 AM
UDP u neva dropped so we could battle...

11-22-2006, 05:31 AM
i dont need to hold a gat cos i got bullets in my mouth
hittin bullseye is all that am about,weaken you like guinness stout
when i come thru,u should take a different route or bend into a crouch
as the undisputed the reputed king of the punks
i suggest u switch styles to electro magnetic funk or rock
cos u got a loud mouth and it will definitely suit you
u standin on the edge of life and am about to push you
if i hold a flashlight,its cos am lookin for a fool
and u look like him,u done turned to my footstool
now slim T why they call u that,is it aids?
u aint eazy E but sorry that u got played
dont be playin 50cents how to rob shit
though he got nine bullets,u son wont be a hit
to adedwutang theres no space in the fam
but guaranteed men,u can be a life long fan
u break bones n legs,i know u mean ur baby dolls
just lookin for every means to be on the roll call
pussy ass muthafucka like that bitch ru paul