View Full Version : New Track........Heaven's Den.......Featuring "Me"
10-02-2006, 03:06 PM
here is a new one from your's truely, drop me some feed back, peace.........
10-02-2006, 03:15 PM
beat is hard, lyrics are dope. Only thing you need work on is delivery homie, everythign else is hot.
10-02-2006, 03:21 PM
sounds decent- the beat is ill. I agree with ^^
but I can't really speak on it, because I need to work on my delivery too.
10-02-2006, 03:26 PM
yo charging, peep that shit in my thread. We Stand Tall. im first, ak second.
10-03-2006, 10:24 AM
yo thanks for the feedback from all u out there, i didnt practice this rhyme enough but i wanted to spit it, bcuz i dont have much time, but im still loven it, anyone else got feedback?
10-03-2006, 11:38 AM
yea the beats dirty, rhymes are aight..keep goin at it yo u gonna nail it soon
10-11-2006, 07:33 AM
yo thanks ern dawg, i havent been on the site for a few days so sorry for the late response. I still want to get this track heard some more, so keep droppen some feedback, peace
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