View Full Version : "Hear the Children's Laughter" new track by mouse

10-08-2006, 01:39 PM
Ay yo i just got done with a new track called "Hear the Children's Laughter" it's on a little darker note then the other one i did but it's more of a battle esque track. Tell me what u think.

it's at www.myspace.com/mousetheprodigy

click on "Hear the Children's....."

10-08-2006, 05:13 PM
Bassline is nice.

You've got skills on the mic and sound confident, only downside is your voice sounds like you're 10 part of its probably the mix though. You're writing skills are real though those lyrics were nice.

10-08-2006, 06:09 PM
hahaha true i do sound like i'm 10 and it is part of the mix. but thanks for at least recognizing my writing abilities. uppin for more opnions.

10-08-2006, 06:28 PM
got a good flow man. could be my computer but the vocals seemed to loud, couldnt hear the beat that well. like the lyrics and the hook was tight. way to put it down for nebraska man keep em comming.

Pretty Toney
10-09-2006, 01:20 AM
hm lyrics improved but still soundin too much like readin from a paper... flow is not good boi... work on your flow

Pretty Toney
10-09-2006, 03:10 AM
^btw fists of the white lotus named their last song "hear the childrenīs laughter " few months ago posted here on the forum

10-09-2006, 01:43 PM
yea the flow isn't too good on this one, it fits with the beat but it doesn't qite mesh. And i did n't know i was taking fists of white lotus's song name i havent even heard of fist's of white lotus i must be....zzzzzzzzz....

Pretty Toney
10-09-2006, 02:44 PM
^ no problem... song names are taken multiple times all through the last 60 years so... itīs kinda hard to give it a unique song title.. and it donīt matter anyways... ;-)

10-09-2006, 04:10 PM
Uppin for more opnions......

10-09-2006, 04:26 PM
not bad...def need new mic
need some bass in that voice
not to be rude or any but are u fem or male


but yea lyrics and hook are dope

def need new quilty


10-09-2006, 04:31 PM
hahaha everyone says i either sound like i'm 10 or a girl hahahha
it's cool though I AM A DUDE!!!!
and i'm getting soem new equipment (bu i been saying that for a LONG TIME...but this time FOR REAL!!!)

Ten Fold
10-09-2006, 05:45 PM
pretty dope man..my only qualm with this is that you sound mad young..maaaad young..but the words and shit were on point..


10-10-2006, 01:30 PM
Yessir i do sound MAAAAAD young but some peopel think it's part of my appeal some think it just annoying..hahahhahha

but i'm glad u liked it 10 fold that "ninja rap" was OFF THE HOOK!!!

uppin for more opnions

10-11-2006, 01:11 PM
uppin for more opinions

10-12-2006, 01:07 PM
still uppin

10-14-2006, 05:53 PM
leave links and i will reply to your thread if u reply to mine.