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oDoUoSoKo
10-08-2006, 05:46 PM
shood u accept, it would be me and reign vs u and your partner, one of us, then one of u, than one of us, than lastly one of u...lets do this 16 lines each bring it

Lil' Ruger
10-09-2006, 12:49 AM
haha ninjustice shall be served!

oDoUoSoKo
10-09-2006, 01:58 PM
lets go pussies...man up

Lil' Ruger
10-09-2006, 06:33 PM
we shut em down.

oDoUoSoKo
10-11-2006, 09:17 PM
fuck this, someone close this

Lil' Ruger
10-11-2006, 10:40 PM
no1's up for battlin.

Lil' Ruger
03-29-2007, 09:31 AM
Bump!

oDoUoSoKo
03-29-2007, 07:47 PM
eloels..

The Ghost
04-01-2007, 01:41 AM
What if I battled the both of you? Would that be cool?

The Ghost
04-01-2007, 01:42 AM
Since this part of the forum seems dead lol

bloodyhookz
04-01-2007, 09:10 AM
aight me and Ghost against Reign and Dusk, tomorrow I'll post back, it's officially on!

The Ghost
04-01-2007, 09:18 PM
I got a partner, lets get this shit going!!!

oDoUoSoKo
04-01-2007, 09:27 PM
NNNOOOOOOOO!!!!! eloels....ok w/e

oDoUoSoKo
04-01-2007, 09:29 PM
reign, than hooks, than me than ghost...tomoro it begins....HAHAHA

oDoUoSoKo
04-02-2007, 11:07 AM
reign...drop a 16...(bars/lines..which ever u call it)

oDoUoSoKo
04-02-2007, 08:50 PM
assholes.

The Ghost
04-02-2007, 09:16 PM
lol I'm waiting my turn

oDoUoSoKo
04-02-2007, 09:43 PM
ya i kno, but this guy man...shit.

The Ghost
04-02-2007, 09:59 PM
Where is riegn or whatever he calls himself these days at?

oDoUoSoKo
04-02-2007, 10:13 PM
jasper's dungeon.

Lil' Ruger
04-02-2007, 10:38 PM
Ghost tried to get in ninjustice a while back
but he said he had to get his stacks by gettin fucked in da crack
he holds no shame he just lifts up his sack
and lets da dishounerable Dyke go at that i gat that
and ur rap skills cant even be classified as spittle
you get belittled and played classic like a fiddle
yo wheres white mouse johnny kage throw a rage on stage
and amaze those who stayed in dark i fade
while i plant raids on ya sectah like RZArectah
inspectah 10 decka mecca will wrecka setta
2 vs 2 but its like gazelles Vs. a nitro engorged lion
we slaughter you eat you without even trying
you Transexuals get played by the sensual intellectual
infect you will be laser tazered by my mentals at every syllable
i talk alotta shit but backing it is my number one priority
ninjustice a majority real street niggas is a minority.

oDoUoSoKo
04-03-2007, 06:09 PM
ok Don is up...hit it.

bloodyhookz
04-03-2007, 07:46 PM
aight i'm a post later on, just wanted to let y'all know I ain't forgot, busy now, be back later in the night, peace!

oDoUoSoKo
04-03-2007, 08:18 PM
ill prb. spit tomoro so...keep ur patience...juan.

oDoUoSoKo
04-05-2007, 08:33 PM
Yo DON lets get this done sone...juan.

oDoUoSoKo
04-06-2007, 11:32 PM
c'mon man.

The Ghost
04-06-2007, 11:38 PM
lol. Patience is the key

bloodyhookz
04-07-2007, 12:58 AM
the first time we battled Reign, you got owned by a landslide/
now you got some fuckin' nerve tryin' to redeem what you can't hide/
your lack of skills, and that's the real, don't fuck wit the mic/
now here's a sack of crills, instead of dicks, go suck on this pipe/
and your man Dusk, he's aight, but I know homie's a joke/
I'll choke him out and make his alter egos throw me a vote/
me and Ghost'll smash your set and loot ya crib without a trace of prints/
champion of the forum, bitch bow down and embrace a prince/
aiming at the top of your melon, I'm known to blaze the ninas/
battle me and end comin' up short....like an asian penis/
Juan you don't want it holmes, it's clearer than air/
you a bitch,.... you better hope your mascara don't smear/
catch you slippin' wit your ipod while you listen to tunes/
slice your throat from ear to ear and take a piss in the wound/
I'll fuck your bitch in her ass and spray my giz in her womb/
beat you bloody to the fuckin' point your vision's maroon!!

aight, that was a quick verse, sorry for the wait, Dusk u up homie, peace!

The Ghost
04-07-2007, 04:27 PM
Nice verse hookz. (looks for dusk)

oDoUoSoKo
04-07-2007, 07:20 PM
FINALLY, ok ill see what i cood do today....juan.

oDoUoSoKo
04-07-2007, 07:21 PM
we doing feeding or not..?

The Ghost
04-07-2007, 09:09 PM
Feeding yes, do it

oDoUoSoKo
04-07-2007, 09:39 PM
exlposion of lyrical trojans holdin like the boys in 'Nam
comin thru with bloody hooks like 1, and 2 in the poison clan
no shame fellas, blow like propane prepellers(sp?)
we dope cocaine sellers, u couldnt battle reign with an umbrella
keep tryin bitch we li'ble to switch and pry u with sticks
u wanna hang with BOM? leave yo ass tied to the wick
ill bang ya moms, and lie like a spick "she on jus for fun"
but i was caught by a judge, u were pronounced my dishonerable son
and fuck a ghost, if u tuck a toast u better bust and blast
cuz when dusk approach, u cood only fuckin hope ya luck will last
it wont i assure u ghost, im hype on DDD ritalin
ill chew ur soul, spit it in a body and kill it again
militant gentlemen, jab a blade in ur abs for play
and if u actin gay ill put the strap to ya face like a masqurade
makin sharp deposits of hardened darts spit, u quotin em
lathargic artist rippin Ghost ribs out to slash ya throat with em.


sorry for the wait...ghost u up.

The Ghost
04-07-2007, 10:26 PM
No Dusk, you don't know me. Honestly you owe me
So I'll kidnap you and make you watch me fuck your girl friend slowly
I'll beat you till your nose bleed and make you seek the crossroad
Tie you to a crusifix and wiegh you down with Tony Starks gold
Bloodyhookz cut open your throats, Mortal Kombat says finish them
You lost from the post, so what are we finishing?
No ones quoting your darts, we leave them stuck to the board
Furious bars open your heart, intense metaphors fuck up your pores
Can't beat a ghost son, a soul is forever
Didn't feel like scolding you or reign 1 on 1 so I scold you together
Don look at these amateur lines, lets watch the amateurs shine
Todays Saturday, Its showtime at the apollo, Its amateur time
The shit you do for free we do for a fee
Cocaine trafficers? I wonder what these goons will do for a plea
Dusk sucking, Reigns fucking, they praticed their routine
End of Discussion, yous nothing, we reign supreme

Bigot Hitman
04-07-2007, 11:02 PM
Is this one or two rounds?

Lil' Ruger
04-08-2007, 05:57 AM
i say two i like this battle.

oDoUoSoKo
04-08-2007, 12:52 PM
no, 1 round, it took years toget this one round poppin, imagine another...VOTES.

The Ghost
04-08-2007, 02:04 PM
lol I agree with Dusk

The Ghost
04-10-2007, 04:05 PM
Vote people

Bigot Hitman
04-10-2007, 08:21 PM
I'm bout too^^

Bigot Hitman
04-10-2007, 09:06 PM
Reign

Flow-2.5/5 stretched an uneven
Concepts/substance-1.5/5 basic an weak
Metaphors-1/5 basic an weak
Punches/personals-1/5 basic an weak
Originality-3/5- descent attempts still basic doe

Total-9/25

Dusk
Flow-4/5-even throughout, a couple stretched
Concepts/substance-4.5/5- line for line lyricism
Metaphors-3/5- better than basic-nothin speacial
Punches/Personals-3/5-verse lacked throro punchlines
Originality-4/5-no played out concepts cept the nam' line

Total-18.5/25

Team total-27.5/50

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DDD
Flow-5/5-all lines matched in rhythm
Concepts/substance-4.5/5-common topics used good
Metaphors-4/5-pretty good, but could be on a higher level
Punches/personals-4.5/5- direct an hard, flow helped'em land
Orginality-3.8/5-common topics like i said, u flipped'em good doe

Total-21.8/25

Ghost
Flow-3.5/5- a couple lines was uneven
Concepts/substance-4.3/5-fell off at the end, but pretty entertainin
Metaphors-absent-0/0- can't take off, or give, if u didn't attempt any
Punches/personal-3.5/5- sum were funny, sum were weak, sum were average
Originality-5/5-no played out concepts used, all orginal

Total- 16.3/20* ---not out of 25 cuz he used no metaphors IMO

Team total-38.1/45*--not 50 cuz^^^


DDD an gost take this IMO..uno

Bigot Hitman
04-10-2007, 09:09 PM
^^i gave yaw 47 minutes of my time, don't ask me to vote ever again

The Ghost
04-10-2007, 11:46 PM
^^i gave yaw 47 minutes of my time, don't ask me to vote ever again
Lol. thanks for voting though. But damn 47 minutes?

Bigot Hitman
04-11-2007, 06:41 AM
^^^yea but i was doin sumthin else while do this so it took alittle longer than he usual, plus i had to read 4 verses

bloodyhookz
04-13-2007, 08:39 AM
aight, 1-0 in our fav, let's git some more votes so we can close this thread!

oDoUoSoKo
04-13-2007, 09:36 PM
^^^yea but i was doin sumthin else while do this so it took alittle longer than he usual, plus i had to read 4 verses
than we will never vote for any of your battles from here on out, ok?

Bigot Hitman
04-14-2007, 01:45 AM
than we will never vote for any of your battles from here on out, ok?

Bra you always got sumthin to say, it was more of a joke, an i already said i was done battle'in on this site way back in like janurary. I did all i could to get people to vote and nobody would so i said fuck this site, now if i wanna rip somebody i go to rapbattles.com. You can get battles done in a day there. So u don't have stress over vote'in over any of my battles cuz their ain't gone be none on this site.

So no its not ok, its great.

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2007, 01:09 PM
than we're glad, also try www.hangyourselfwithacorspesintestines.com (http://www.hangyourselfwithacorspesintestines.com) u can get suicides done in a day there....juan.

Bigot Hitman
04-14-2007, 02:03 PM
^^
Lame

Classic
04-22-2007, 07:56 PM
Doctor :

Ghost tried to get in ninjustice a while back
but he said he had to get his stacks by gettin fucked in da crack
(mediocre man. played concept. still, a punchline.)
he holds no shame he just lifts up his sack
and lets da dishounerable Dyke go at that i gat that
(i "get" that, i assume. nice punchline.)
and ur rap skills cant even be classified as spittle
you get belittled and played classic like a fiddle
(....whaaaa? involvin' me? still, consistent with the punches.)
yo wheres white mouse johnny kage throw a rage on stage
and amaze those who stayed in dark i fade
(no punch here. what happened to the consistency?)
while i plant raids on ya sectah like RZArectah
inspectah 10 decka mecca will wrecka setta
(crazzzyyy multis, nice. decent punch though, didn't really get the concept behind this.)
2 vs 2 but its like gazelles Vs. a nitro engorged lion
we slaughter you eat you without even trying
(some nice wordplay. back w/ the punches.)
you Transexuals get played by the sensual intellectual
infect you will be laser tazered by my mentals at every syllable
(intellectual & syllable don't rhyme. at least, not to me. first bar was pretty good, packed some multis. 2nd line, ......aghhhh. could've worded it better.)
i talk alotta shit but backing it is my number one priority
ninjustice a majority real street niggas is a minority.
(bragging here. not a good closer. could've done better from what i'm seeing.)


DDD :
the first time we battled Reign, you got owned by a landslide/
now you got some fuckin' nerve tryin' to redeem what you can't hide/
(nice, good opener.)
your lack of skills, and that's the real, don't fuck wit the mic/
now here's a sack of crills, instead of dicks, go suck on this pipe/
(lmao. nice, multis too. likin' this.)
and your man Dusk, he's aight, but I know homie's a joke/
I'll choke him out and make his alter egos throw me a vote/
(lmaooooo. nice. multis & the wordplay. a personal @ dusk.)
me and Ghost'll smash your set and loot ya crib without a trace of prints/
champion of the forum, bitch bow down and embrace a prince/
(ehhhhh, worst bar from you i've seen so far.)
aiming at the top of your melon, I'm known to blaze the ninas/
battle me and end comin' up short....like an asian penis/
(you could do better. not that good.)
Juan you don't want it holmes, it's clearer than air/
you a bitch,.... you better hope your mascara don't smear/
(decent, i've seen a lot of "men 2 women" kinda bars from ya though.)
catch you slippin' wit your ipod while you listen to tunes/
slice your throat from ear to ear and take a piss in the wound/
(decent, again.)
I'll fuck your bitch in her ass and spray my giz in her womb/
beat you bloody to the fuckin' point your vision's maroon!!
(nice closer.)


Dusk:
exlposion of lyrical trojans holdin like the boys in 'Nam
comin thru with bloody hooks like 1, and 2 in the poison clan
(bad opener. you'd have to slur your words or have some pretty bad slang for "boys in 'Nam" & "poison clan" to rhyme. didn't get the punch concept behind this either.)
no shame fellas, blow like propane prepellers(sp?)
we dope cocaine sellers, u couldnt battle reign with an umbrella
(decent. lots of filler though.)
keep tryin bitch we li'ble to switch and pry u with sticks
u wanna hang with BOM? leave yo ass tied to the wick
(good, steppin' it up.)
ill bang ya moms, and lie like a spick "she on jus for fun"
but i was caught by a judge, u were pronounced my dishonerable son
(lol, nice wordplay on the name. gettin' personals here.)
and fuck a ghost, if u tuck a toast u better bust and blast
cuz when dusk approach, u cood only fuckin hope ya luck will last
(ehhhh, could be better Dusk)
it wont i assure u ghost, im hype on DDD ritalin
ill chew ur soul, spit it in a body and kill it again
(lmao, nice.)
militant gentlemen, jab a blade in ur abs for play
and if u actin gay ill put the strap to ya face like a masqurade
(pretty good.)
makin sharp deposits of hardened darts spit, u quotin em
lathargic artist rippin Ghost ribs out to slash ya throat with em.
(good closer.)

Ghost :
No Dusk, you don't know me. Honestly you owe me
So I'll kidnap you and make you watch me fuck your girl friend slowly
(stretched. and a VERY played concept. you can do better. decent opener.)
I'll beat you till your nose bleed and make you seek the crossroad
Tie you to a crusifix and wiegh you down with Tony Starks gold
(some filler, nice punch though.)
Bloodyhookz cut open your throats, Mortal Kombat says finish them
You lost from the post, so what are we finishing?
("finish them" & "finishing" don't rhyme. baddd. didn't like the concept behind this either.)
No ones quoting your darts, we leave them stuck to the board
Furious bars open your heart, intense metaphors fuck up your pores
(niceeeeee. likin' the wordplay n shit. best bar from you in this verse i've seen yet.)
Can't beat a ghost son, a soul is forever
Didn't feel like scolding you or reign 1 on 1 so I scold you together
(nice trying to incorporate a kind of "team" bar, but could've been executed better. it's mediocre.)
Don look at these amateur lines, lets watch the amateurs shine
Todays Saturday, Its showtime at the apollo, Its amateur time
(bad. nothing but bragging.)
The shit you do for free we do for a fee
Cocaine trafficers? I wonder what these goons will do for a plea
(okayyyy. 1st line = bad. 2nd line = good feedin, sort of.)
Dusk sucking, Reigns fucking, they praticed their routine
End of Discussion, yous nothing, we reign supreme
(nice closer.)


Vote - DDD & Ghost.
I felt an overall better consistency of punches & verses from these two.
Dusk & his partner seemed to let up in the punches occasionally, and I saw some bragging in there. (both sides)
I know I've seen better from Dusk.

Classic
04-22-2007, 08:00 PM
by the way, drop some battle links my way (via PM).
and i'll drop some more votes.

oDoUoSoKo
04-22-2007, 08:38 PM
o shit....welcome back dunny!!!

ya this was supposed to be my come back...its been so long since i really got down,...i kno its sux...jus so u kno...the poison clan line refers to the 5 deadly venoms where 1 and 2 kill duke wit a hook...juan.

oDoUoSoKo
04-22-2007, 08:40 PM
btw...it was confirmed that i only had 1 other account...and it got hacked....so i tol 36 to delete it....juan..(dope line tho...no doubt...eloels)

bloodyhookz
04-23-2007, 01:38 AM
2-0 in our fav, let's make this battle official and get the closing votes!

bloodyhookz
05-07-2007, 06:29 AM
more votes needed!

MX1
05-07-2007, 08:50 PM
ninjustice-
reign: 7/10-brought some good shit to the table
dusk: 8.5/10-i liked dusk's shit alot, i like his style, good shit

you and yours or wutver-
hookz: 9/10- had some real good punches in there, and the flow was nice to
ghost: 8/10- good punches but some were just whatever yuh know but still good

overall, i like hookz and ghost, real good battle though, even shit and all, they just came harder...could ya'll return the favor and vote in me and sid's battle or me and aded's, thanks

oDoUoSoKo
05-07-2007, 08:56 PM
thats a good vote..solid....don and ghost win....good battle yall...juan.